MYSTIKOS

[mistyvixen]

...So, this will be basically my hideout here. Anything I like to do extra stuff I'll post here. Reserved posts are for upcoming stories. All my extra art and creations will be here.

Under a sky so dark, we talk louder
our voices reaching places the moon can’t illuminate

 

[mistyvixen]

of course brother,

So ye picture kish liye hai 2nd story ke liye hai ye something else....
Ek shayari in 4 moments ke liye 4 lines arz hai....

🪻Shayari🪻

Ayse kya dekhti hai nazare tumhari,
Padh na sakengi isqh mera ye nazre tumhari,
Yun na dekha karo mujhko tum hansh ke ayse
Jaan nikal jati hai dekhke bas muskurahat tumhari.

Written by.......@Mrxr(original)
mistyvixen​

Second story ke characters beech mein bana dungi vapas aake. Iss baar pehle hi bata dena kisi ka face acha nhi Lage toh. Beech mein change karne se fir flow kharab hota hai...but don't expect chapters like birthday, weddings in this one too I just can't do that...story ke beech mein hi mellow moments dikha dungi...kyuki maine chapter wise pure story plot ke hai toh bahut dikkat hote hai fir kuch bhi change karne mein.

 

[Rudra Roy]

Whi karungi wapas aake ek week mein 2 updates ka hi schedule rhege har story ek year mein complete hone ke hisab se hi plan kar rhe hoon. 50 week matlab 100 ke aas paas updates. Aur bahut hai itna 5 books ke barabar ho jata hai 4-5k ka update ek.

think about completing the first one instead of keeping your mind busy by thinking another story which you probably won't even start this year...kab se nandani ke liye hath me lekar baitha hun......."Arman" uss wale sequence ke

 

[Mrxr]

2o77: Ashes of Tomorrow
(~110 chapters)



The world ended in ice but humanity didn’t die with it. It crawled from the ruins, scarred and desperate . In this new age of dust and ruin survival belongs to those who can fight or adapt.

Nice...

Hrithik was built for war. A soldier before the fall, Code Name Viper, a weapon after it, he is faster, stronger, and deadlier than any man should be.

Viper name is good, powers like robotic technology...good

But he is not alone. His mother, Dr. Anjali, once a leading scientist, now searches for the answers that should her divorced husband hid from her.

Hrithik's elder sister Akshara, a hardened survivalist knows how to outlast the wasteland’s horrors better than anyone.

Like bear grylls....

And then there’s Nancy, the youngest the quietest, and the strangest.
Nancy's power is an anomaly something that should not exist something that men would kill to control.

Deadly weapon.....

The factions and the gangs that rule the wasteland—the raiders and the scavenger kings—all want her. Some see her as a weapon...and some see her as their rise to power.

Hrithik sees only one thing: a little sister who must be protected at all costs.

But as old and hidden monsters rise and the world’s last great secret is uncovered, Hrithik will be forced to confront the truth of what he is—what he was made to be.

Because in the ashes of tomorrow, the line between man and monster is razor-thin… and crossing it might be the only way to save what remains.

So this story based on futuristic technology, devil monsters a mystery and deadly weapons,I'm right or wrong....

 

[mistyvixen]

think about completing the first one instead of keeping your mind busy by thinking another story which you probably won't even start this year...kab se nandani ke liye hath me lekar baitha hun......."Arman" uss wale sequence ke

Whi pure hogi pehle... planning toh bahut saare stories ke kar rkhe hai aage. Iska matlab yeh thodi ke unpe kood jaun ab? Agar hum 2 updates per week leke chale toh agle saal jaake complete ho skte hai story

Aur pehle story hai toh ek fact yeh bhi hai ke maine sabse jayda samay mein usko socha tha 2-3 mahine baith kar woh waste thodi karungi

 

[Mrxr]

Second story ke characters beech mein bana dungi vapas aake. Iss baar pehle hi bata dena kisi ka face acha nhi Lage toh.Beech mein change karne se fir flow kharab hota hai....

Ye opinion mang rahi ho ya kuch aur kahna chah rahi ho sister...samajh nahi aaya,,,,

but don't expect chapters like birthday, weddings in this one too I just can't do that...story ke beech mein hi mellow moments dikha dungi...kyuki maine chapter wise pure story plot ke hai toh bahut dikkat hote hai fir kuch bhi change karne mein.

what do you mean sister birthday wedding etc....
Janha tak mujhe yaad hai main ne tum se sirf 1 ya 2 baar story me bola hai.....1st...payal ka koi loveable scene dene ko and 2nd....payal aur Nandini ka mother and daughter loveable scene.....
Agar tum ishko story changing samjhi toh galat hai ye sirf suggestion tha.....

 

[Rudra Roy]

Whi pure hogi pehle... planning toh bahut saare stories ke kar rkhe hai aage. Iska matlab yeh thodi ke unpe kood jaun ab? Agar hum 2 updates per week leke chale toh agle saal jaake complete ho skte hai story

Aur pehle story hai toh ek fact yeh bhi hai ke maine sabse jayda samay mein usko socha tha 2-3 mahine baith kar woh waste thodi karungi

Don't know about your mood ....and also don't think about long term targets keep thinks short term ....for now just think about what you're going to put in next update instead of what will happen in next story next year, because then it will start to feel like a commitment a job which will make you feel heavy.

 

[Mrxr]

mistyvixen
And one thing..... maybe you need to change names in story.....viper is sounds nice, baki ke names futuristic nahi lag rahe hai mere hisab se toh aysa hi hai baki kisi aur se bhi puch sakti ho....mere pe hi mat jaana main toh kuch bhi bolta hu...

Don't know about your mood ....and also don't think about long term targets keep thinks short term ....for now just think about what you're going to put in next update instead of what will happen in next story next year, because then it will start to feel like a commitment a job which will make you feel heavy.

Bhai sister ne story ke plots set kiye hai nahi story ki summary...... aur wo ek short me likhi hogi ki kab kanha pe kya hoga,kayse hoga ,aur kab hoga...etc...

 

[mistyvixen]

Are bola toh karungi lekin free mein apne diary mein aise plot karne mein maza aata hai..ab toh hobby bhi ban chuke hai yeh dw
Usko pura karna is on top of my priorities

Don't know about your mood ....and also don't think about long term targets keep thinks short term ....for now just think about what you're going to put in next update instead of what will happen in next story next year, because then it will start to feel like a commitment a job which will make you feel heavy.

 

[Mrxr]

again this time.....

 

[Rudra Roy]

Bhai sister ne story ke plots set kiye hai nahi story ki summary...... aur wo ek short me likhi hogi ki kab kanha pe kya hoga,kayse hoga ,aur kab hoga...etc...

bhai last time jo mood swing huya tha inka uske baad se hi dar ka mahol hai....ye kahi keju ki tarah barde barde sapne dikhake kahi bich me na nikalale