Fantasy NAAG MANI

[Naina]

Oh... to boh naagin hi boh abla aurat thi.. aur boh Kumar ki maa hai... yaani Kumar bhi ek naag hai.. jishke saktiya abhi jagrit nahi huyi hai... aur to aur ushe pata bhi nahi..
Humm to sasu maa ko apni bahu se isliye problem hai kyunki boh ek biswashghati ki beti hain...
Khair let's see kya samay rahte Kumar apni premika anjali ko bacha pata hai ki nahi ush aghori se?
Brilliant update Anand ji... Great going..

 

[Naina]

for completed 100 pages

 

[sonukale]

Congratulations for completing 100 pages

 

[Riyansh]

Mast update he bhai.. Fantastic

 

[FRIDAY]

What a twist!
Awesome update....
Nagin hi Kumar ka maa nikla.
kumar ka baap kon hai?
Kumar ke paas naag mani kaha se aya?
Naag ne to bata diya ki Alka aab safe hai.Magar kia kumar alka ko aapne maa se bacha paye ga.
Anjali ko pane ke liye nahi Kumar se naag moni hasil korne ke liye Aghori ne ye sab kor raha hai.Use bhi kumar ki lotne ki protiksha hai.Kumar kaise Aghori ko pora jit kore ga?
Kia kumar ko bhi koi supernatural power hai?
In sab ki uttar to aane wale updates me hi pata chale ga.
Tab tak ki liye....
Bye bye....
Milte hai next update me....
Nice update...
Keep it up....
Take care...

 

[FRIDAY]

Congratulations for completing 100 pages in this thread....
Bhai aaj Is khushi me ek mega update to banta hai.

 

[Rohan008]

NAAG MANI
UPDATE- 22​

Ye scene dekh kar meri ankhe bhar aayi…..gala rundh sa gaya…kuch bola hi nahi ja raha tha….drishya khatam hone ke kuch der tak main aise hi baitha raha.

Naag—dekh liya ki kyo usne inn logo ko mara…?

Kumar—hmmmm…..lekin alka se uski kya dushmani hai…..?

Mere prashn ke uttar me naag ne kuch aisa kaha ki jise sun kar main buri tarah se chounk gaya....

Ab aage......

Naag—Kyon ki Alka uss admi ki eklouti ladki hai jisne tumhari uss aurat ki jindagi barbad ki shadi ka jhutha vada kar ke.....alka ko uske baap ke dushmano ne bachpan me hi kidnap kar ke anathalay me daal diya tha....usne bahut talash kiya lekin vo nahi mili......aur dusri sabse badi baat ye hai ki vo marne wali aurat, jiske sath ye vahashiyana harkat huyi vo aur koi nahi balki tumhari apni maa thi.....alka ka tumhari jindagi me aana shayad usko pasand nahi aaya.....ab to tumhe samajh aa hi gaya hoga ki uss nagin ki alka se kya dushmani hai..... ?

Naag ne jaise hi ye bataya ki vo aurat meri maa thi....mujhe bahut bada jhatka laga.....ye sunte hi mere hath pair sunn pad gaye jaise ki unme koi jaan hi na bachi ho.....main dhamm se niche ghutno par baith gaya....ankho ke samne andhera chhane laga aur hriday me apaar dard uthne laga.

Aur ye dard pani ban kar meri ankho se bahne laga....aaj jitni taklif mujhe apne seene me mahsoos ho rahi thi utni to tab bhi nahi huyi thi jab duniya wale mujhe harami aur na jane kya kya gaaliya dekar dutkar dete the...

Naag—Ye rone ka samay nahi hai putra.....ye mat bhulo ki tumhe anjali ko bhi bachana hai....vo bechari na jane kab se tumhare vapis aane ki raah dekh rahi hai.

Kumar (dard)—Meri kismat to dekhiye.....main aaj tak kabhi sapera to kabhi aghori ko bulata raha kise maarne ke liye.... ? apni hi maa ko..... ? laanat hai, dhikkar hai aise bete par....main aaj tak usko hi doshi samajhta raha sabki mout ka...kintu aaj mujhe pata chala ki uske andar kitna dard chhupa hai....aaj mujhe apne aap par kroadh aa raha hai.

Naag—shant ho jao putra.....abhi ye sab sochne ka waqt nahi hai...anjali ko bachane ke liye tumhare paas sirf aaj raat ka hi samay hai aur manzil tak pahuchne ke raste me khatre anginat hain.

Kumar (anshu bahate huye)—Jab ye hadsa hua tab main kaha tha....vo admi koun hai jisne meri maa ke sath chhal kiya...... ? kya vo jinda hai.... ?

Naag—vo ek bahut bada admi hai…aur jinda bhi hai ...baki sab baate waqt aane par tumhari maa khud hi bata degi.

Kumar—alka ko maarne ke to kayi mouke the unke paas, phir kyo nahi mara unhone..... ? vaise bhi alka ka to inn sab me koi hath nahi tha, vo to bekasoor hi hai.

Naag—Alka ko maarne ki usne kayi baar koshish ki lekin har baar tum beech me aa gaye....tumne usko alka ko chhodne ko kah diya, vo tumhari baat nahi taal payi.....aur dusra tum alka ko chahne lage the...isliye vo alka ki jaan lene ki jagah kewal usko tumhari zindagi se door karna chahti hai.

Kumar—kya main unse mil sakta hu.... ?

Naag—tumhe dekhne to vo roj hi aati hai.....ab ki baar jab aaye to khud hi mil lena....lekin abhi apne kartavya path par aage badho....chinta mat karo, alka ki jaan abhi nahi legi vo.....usne alka ko tumse door isliye kiya taaki tum anjali ke paas ja sako usko bachane, jo ki alka ke tumhare paas rahte tum kabhi nahi karne wale the.

Kumar—theek hai...agar maa ki yahi ichcha hai ki main anjali ko bachane jau to nishchit hi jaunga....vo aghori anjali se uski koun si shaktiya hasil karna chahta hai.... ?

Naag—vo anjali ko hasil to karna chahta hai…..kintu uska lakshya to tum ho arjun....

Kumar (shocked)—mainnnn... ? par kyo.... ?

Naag—Naag Mani ke liye….jo ki tumhare paas hai….baki aaj raat tum khud hi samajh jaoge….theek hai ab main chalta hu…apna dhyan rakhna.

Vo naag vaha se chala gaya….mujhe niche baith kar aise rote dekh sabhi ghabra gaye the….sab baar baar mujhe awaz laga rahe the lekin main to kisi dusri hi duniya me tha….

Rastogi—kumarrr..beta kya hua…?

Kanchan—jiju what’s happened…aap ro kyo rahe ho….?

Nandini—beta, kya hua….?

Lekin mujhe kisi ki awaz sunayi hi nahi de rahi thi…abhi bhi meri ankho ke samne vahi darindgi bhara drishya ghum raha tha…meri ankhe dard se tadap rahi thi…achanak hi iss dard ne akroash ka bhaav umadne laga aur meri ankhe gusse se jalne lagi….

Rastogi—kumar beta..akhir baat kya hai….?

Kanchan—Jiju…ankhe kholiye…mummy dekho na kya hua hai jiju ko…? Ye kuch bol kyo nahi rahe hain…?

Unke baar baar hilane dulane se badi mushkil se mujhe hosh aaya…kintu mera hriday abhi bhi ashant tha…usme uthal puthal machi huyi thi…chah kar bhi main apne dard ko chhupa nahi pa raha tha, aur ye ankhe mere dard ko chhupne bhi nahi de rahi thi.

Maine dhire dhire ankhe khol di…jo ki dard me ufante anshu aur gusse se lal ho chuki thi….mujhe ankhe kholte dekh sab ki jaan me jaan aayi par unke mann me kayi sawal bhi paida ho chuke the.

Kumar (ankhe khol kar)—chaliye hame aage chalna hai.

Kanchan—jiju aap ro kyo rahe the aur kuch bol bhi nahi rahe the…?

Kumar—kuch nahi..sab theek hai

Nandini—kya baat hai beta…hame bhi nahi bataoge….batane se dard halka hota hai….kya hum tumhare kuch nahi lagte….?

Kumar—aisa mat kahiye aunty…aap dono ne mujhe kabhi anath hone ka ehsaas tak nahi hone diya.

Nandini—khabardar jo dubara apne aap ko phir anath kaha to.

Kumar—sorry aunty galti ho gayi

Rastogi—ab batao kya baat hai….? Kuch baat huyi uss naag se….? alka safe to hai na….?

Kumar—ji uncle vo surakshit hai.

Rastogi—to phir baat kya hai…?

Kumar—vo asal me baat ye hai ki….(sab batate huye)

Poori baat sun kar unko bhi bahut bada shock laga…..unki ankhe bhi nam ho aayi…jabki meri to pahle se hi thi.. sab ne mujhe dhadas bandhane ki koshish ki.

Mera mann poori tarah se kafi vyakul aur ashant tha....ye ekant, nirjan aur sunsan sthan bhi meri iss vyakulta ko door nahi kar pa raha tha....shayad niyati kuch aur chahti thi, tabhi to main bina kuch soche samjhe aur bina koi vichar kiye vaha se uth kar aage ki oor badh chala.

Uske baad kisi ne mujhse kuch nahi pucha...shayad vo bhi meri halat ka andaza laga chuke the...chalte huye hum ek aise sthan par pahuch gaye jaha aas paas kuch bhi nahi tha.

Charo taraf meelo oonchi himalaya ki chotiya khadi thi, aas maan ko chunouti deti huyi…..kshitiz se kshitiz tak phaila hua durlabh pahadi elaka, jisko dekh kar mann me aatank ki anubhuti hoti thi.

Barf se aakshadit chotiya, jinki prithabhumi me tha neela akash.....tez hawa ke karan unn chotiyo par har samay barf jami hi rahti thi.

Adbhut drishya tha...unn adbhut drishyo ko apalak niharte huye hum sabhi dhire dhire aage badh rahe the.... ki achanak tabhi.....

bht badhiya bhai
mazza aagya
kumar ko hila hi daala sach bta k dekhte h ab vo
khud ko or sabko bacha paata h ya nhi

brilliant update
keep rocking bhai

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Raj]

FIRST TOH CONGRATULATIONS FOR COMPLETE PAGES


BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR FANTASTIC AWESOME AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI.
TOH AKHIR OS NAGINKA RAJ PATA CHAL HI GAYA KI WOH KUMAAR KI MAA HAI .BAHUT KHUSHI HUYI YE JAAN KAR .
BUT USSE KAHI JYADA DUKH HUA UNKE SATH JO HUA WOH JAANKAR.
NAGIN ALKA KO KYUN MARNA CHAHTI THI YE BHI SAMAJH AA GYA .
AB DEKHATE HAIN KUMAR KYA KARTA HAI .ANJALI KO BACHANE KE LIYE NAAG KE BATAANE KE ANUSAAR BAS EK RAAT KA SAMAY HAI KUMAAR KE PAAS .D KHATE HAIN KAISE KYA HOTA HAI

 

[sonukale]

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