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NAAG MANI
UPDATE- 23
Mera mann poori tarah se kafi vyakul aur ashant tha....ye ekant, nirjan aur sunsan sthan bhi meri iss vyakulta ko door nahi kar pa raha tha....shayad niyati kuch aur chahti thi, tabhi to main bina kuch soche samjhe aur bina koi vichar kiye vaha se uth kar aage ki oor badh chala.
Uske baad kisi ne mujhse kuch nahi pucha...shayad vo bhi meri halat ka andaza laga chuke the...chalte huye hum ek aise sthan par pahuch gaye jaha aas paas kuch bhi nahi tha.
Charo taraf meelo oonchi himalaya ki chotiya khadi thi, aas maan ko chunouti deti huyi…..kshitiz se kshitiz tak phaila hua durlabh pahadi elaka, jisko dekh kar mann me aatank ki anubhuti hoti thi.
Barf se aakshadit chotiya, jinki pristhabhumi me tha neela akash.....tez hawa ke karan unn chotiyo par har samay barf jami hi rahti thi.
Adbhut drishya tha...unn adbhut drishyo ko apalak niharte huye hum sabhi dhire dhire aage badh rahe the.... ki achanak tabhi.....
Ab Aage……..
Sabhi uss manoram prakratik soundarya ka avlokan karte huye aage badh hi rahe the ki tabhi hamare samne vahi vichitra prani na jane kaha se aa kar khada ho gaya.
Rastogi (cheekhte huye)—bhago..! ye to Yeti hai..
Usko dekhte hi sab bhaybheet ho kar bhagne lage…magar jaise hi sab cheekh kar bhagne ke liye palte to unhe apne samne aise hi teen jeev samne khade nazar aaye…
Kumar—kkk…koun ho tum aur kya chahte ho…?
Usne koi jawab diye bina hamari taraf badhne lage to Hum dusri disha me bhagne ko huye ki tabhi unhone hame pakad liya aur apne kandho par jabran utha kar ussi jagah le aaye jaha kal raat vo yeti pahuchne ke baad achanak gayab ho gaya tha..
Ye dekh kar maine uske kaan me jor se kaat liya jisne mujhe utha rakha rakha tha....vo dard se tilmilate huye apna kaan sahlane laga aur uski pakad kuch dheeli pad gayi.
Mouke ka fayda uthate huye maine jaldi se apni kamar me bandha chaku nikala aur jaldi jaldi teen chaar vaar uski gardan me kar diye jisse vo niche gir kar dard me chillane laga.
Uske niche girte hi maine khud ko uski pakad se azad kiya aur uski gardan se chaku nikal kar daud ke ek aur yeti ke pair me vo chaku ghusa diya jisne rastogi uncle ko pakad rakha tha…uske girte hi rastogi uncle ko uske kandhe se maine khich liya.
Kanchan (cheekhte huye)—jiju bachaooo..
Nandini (chilla kar)—bachaoooo
Dono ki cheekh sun kar main unki taraf bhaga magar tab tak rastogi uncle ne apni jeb se revolver nikal kar fire kar diya jisse vo dono bhi unki giraft se azad ho kar hamari taraf bhagi….aur aa kar hamare gale se lipat gayi.
Kumar—jitna jaldi ho sake, yaha se bhag chalo...ye sab ghayal huye hain ..mare nahi hain..chalo jaldi..
Main aur rastogi uncle kanchan aur nandini ka hath pakad kar vaha se tezi se ek disha me bhag chale…hame bhagte dekh kar vo charo yeti bhi dard me langdate huye hamare piche aane lage.
Bhagte bhagte hame ek gufa dikhayi di to hum charo uss gufa me ghus gaye…gufa me kafi andhera tha…lekin yeti se bachne ke chakkar me hum andar ghuste chale gaye kintu tabhi andar kisi ki jordar fufkar sunayi padi jaise ki koi bahut jahrila saanp ho aur yaha hame dekh kar behad gusse me aa gaya ho.
Agle hi pal vo fufkarne ki awaz hamare karib aane lagi to hum vapis bahar ki taraf palat kar bhagne lage…vo jo koi bhi tha lagatar gusse se fufkarte huye hamara picha kar raha tha.
Hum gufa ke dwar tak pahuche hi the ki tabhi kisi ne mere upar jump kiya…maine jaldi se usko ek hath se jhitak diya jisse vo kuch doori par gira….use dekhte hi hum sabhi chounk pade kyon ki vo ekdam kala bahut bada saanp hi tha…jo behad kroadhit tha…hum phir se bhagne lage.
Girte hi vo gusse me phir se hamla karne ke liye palta aur phir hamare upar jump karne hi wala tha ki tabhi maine bhagte huye ek bar piche palat kar dekha...aur phir daudne laga ...tabhi mujhe kuch sunayi diya...
“Arjunnnnnn”
Ye naam sunte hi mere pair thithak kar vahi ruk gaye…chounk kar maine piche dekha to uss naag ke alawa vaha koi nahi dikhayi diya jisne ye naam pukara ho…vo nag abhi bhi vaise hi ashcharya bhaav se meri taraf hi dekh raha tha.. tabhi phir se mujhe dard bhare gale se yahi shabd sunayi diye.
"Arjunnnn"
Dubara ye naam kisi ke muh se sun kar hum sabhi hairan ho kar apne charo taraf dekhne lage magar uss nag ke alawa koi nahi dikha.
Nandini (shocked)—ye kis ki awaz hai... ?
Kumar (hairan)—pata nahi…koi dikh bhi to nahi raha hai…main to khud hi hairan hu..
"Yaha vaha kya dekh rahe ho arjun…? Mujhe nahi pahchana…?" phir se kisi ne rundhe gale se kaha.
Kumar—koun hai... ?
"Udhar nahi iss taraf dekho arjun." Mere sawal ke pratyuttar me usne jawab diya.
Hamne chounk kar awaz ki disha me dekha, ye awaz uss taraf se hi aayi thi jidhar vo naag tha…kintu ab vaha koi naag nahi tha balki uske sthan par ek sundar sajila nau-jawan khada tha…uski ankhe bhigi huyi thi…hum sab usko dekhte hi chounk gaye.
Kumar (shocked)—koun ho tum…? Aur ye awaz kis ki thi…?
Ladka (nam ankhe)—ye meri hi awaz thi arjun…
Kumar (hairan)—arjun..! koun arjun..? main to kisi arjun ko nahi janta…mera naam kumar hai…tum kis arjun ki baat kar rahe ho…? Aur vo nag kaha gaya jo abhi abhi yaha tha…?
Ladka—kya apne dost ko bhi nahi pahchante tum arjun….? Main tumhara dost hu arjun..
Kumar (shocked)—mera dost..?
Ladka—haan arjun..main sunayan hu..tumhara dost sunayan..
Kumar (hairan)—sunayan..? lekin main to kisi sunayan ko nahi janta..
Ladka (sunayan)—kya tumhari yaad dast chali gayi hai jo tum mujhe nahi pahchan rahe…? Kya tumhe anjali bhi yaad nahi….?
Kumar (shocked)—a.n.j.a.l.i….! tum anjali ke baare me kya aur kaise jante ho….?
Uske muh se anjali ka naam sunte hi mujhe jhatka laga….yahi halat rastogi uncle, nandini aur kanchan ki huyi..vo bhi hairan the uski baate sun kar.
Sunayan (shocked)—kyaa tumhe kuch bhi yaad nahi hai…?
Kumar—nahii
Sunayan (chakit)—agar tum mere dost aur nag lok ke rajkumar arjun nahi ho to phir anjali ka naam sun kar chounk kyo gaye…?
Kumar—kyon ki main pahle bhi anjali ka naam kayi bar apne sapno me sun chuka hu….lekin tumne ye nahi bataya ki tum anjali ko kaise jante ho…?
Sunayan—agar tum janna hi chahte ho to suno….
Flash Back Start…
Prithvi ke niche ka lok naag lok, uski bhavyata ka varnan karna samundar ko hatheli me jal dikhane ke barabar tha.. nag lok bada hi manohar aur bahut vistarit tha..vaha ke stri aur purush jinke kamar ke niche ka hissa naag ki poochh ke roop me tha jabki kamar se upar ka hissa manusyo ke samaan tha…swarn ke dwar aur chaandi se bani uski deeware bade bade gharo jitne uske kamre the..sabhi vilasita ki vastuye uss lok me vidyaman thi…naag lok ke senapati bahut bahadur aur apne lok ke prati samarpan ki bhavna rakhte the.
Naag lok ke maharaj samuttar ke shadi ke kayi varsh beet jane ke baad bhi koi santaan nahi huyi thi…jisse maharani prabha vati bahut dukhi rahne lagi thi…samay ka pahiya apni gati se chalta raha aur samay ke sath santaan ki abhilasa badhti gayi.
Maharaj ke laakh samjhane par ki ‘santaan ka hona ya na hona bhagwan ke hath me hai’ par akhir aurat ka dil ye tark kaha manta hai…
Samuttar—maharani, aap ka dukhi hona to jayaz hai kintu santaan ka hona ya na hona eshwar ke hath me hai.
Prabha Vati (dukhi)—to kya naag lok ka kabhi koi warish nahi hoga…? Kya main santaan ka muh dekhe bina hi mar jaungi..? kya mujhe santaan ka sukh kabhi nahi milega…? Kya kabhi main apne liye maa shabd ka sambodhan sun paungi…?
Maharaj ne bahut samjhaya magar maharani kuch sunne ke liye taiyar hi nahi thi…yaha tak ki maharani ne khana pina tak chhod diya…maharaj ne jab yeh suna to vah bahut dukhi huye…vivash ho kar maharaj ne apne gurudev ka smaran kiya aur senapati ko bulaya.
Senapati—pranam maharaj, aapne mujhe yaad kiya…?
Samuttar—senapati, aap gurudev ke paas jaiye aur unse nivedan kar ke samman sahit apne sath mahal me le kar aaiye.
Senapati—jo agya maharaj.
Senapati ke jane ke pashchat maharaj gujarte din ke sath gurudev ke aane ki pratiksha karne lage…suryast ke baad gurudev rajmahal me upasthit huye to maharaj ne unhe apni raj gaddi par bitha kar unke pairo me apna mastak rakh diya…
Maharaj ki ankho se anshuo ki dhara phut padi…maharaj ko aise bilakhte dekh kar gurudev ne apni ankhe band kar ke dhyan lagaya aur phir unke bina kuch kahe hi maharaj ke mann ke vicharo ko samajh kar unhe putra prapti ka hal bataya.
Gurudev—suno putra, maharaj aapko putra yog nahi hai parantu ek upay se tum putra sukh le sakte ho..main tumhe vah upaay jarur bata sakta hu kintu usme thoda khatra avashya hai…
Samuttar (dukhi mann)—aap adesh kijiye gurudev…main pratyek khatre ka samna karne hetu taiyar hu.
Gurudev—tumhe purnima ki raat ko prithvi lok par jana hoga…aur vaha uttar disha me himalaya ki ek vishal kandra me ek bahut prachin shiv mandir hai…jise aaj tak kisi manav ne nahi dekha…uss shiv ling ki 108 parikrama karte huye aap ko shiv ling par jal abhishek karna hoga..aur parikrama ke baad ushi jal ko le kar aap ko aana hai…vo jal aapko apni patni ke sath pina hoga..mahadev ki kripa huyi to aap ko avashya hi putra sukh prapt hoga…kintu aap ko parikrama karte huye unn aatmao ka bhi samna karna hoga jo ye chahti hain ki uss shiv ling ka unke alawa aur koi bhi pujan na kare…unn aatmao ko khush kar ke tumhe unhi se ek patra (bartan) hasil karna hoga, ushi paatra me tumhe vo abhishek kiya hua jal lana hai…jo shiv ling ke abhishek hone ke uparant ek chote se kund me bhar gaya hoga…tumhe apni buddhi ka prayog kar ke unhe apne kaam ke liye taiyar karna hoga.
Gurudev maharaj ko ashirwad de kar apne ashram ko chale gaye…maharani ko jab yah samachar malum hua ki unke pati aur nag lok ke raja ko prithvi par jana hai to unhone putra prapti ki ichcha ka tyag kar diya aur maharaj ko prithvi lok par jane se mana karne lagi…kyon ki nag lok vaasi apne liye prithvi ko sabse adhik khatarnak sthan mante the..nag lok ke sabhi nag ye mante the ki prithvi lok par jana yani apni mout ko khud hi nimantran dena tha.
Kuch din to maharaj ne maharani ki baat maan li lekin purnima ke kuch din pahle hi maharaj apne varish aur bhavi raja ke liye vivash ho gaye aur maharani ko bina bataye hi prithvi par jane ka faisla kiya…apne senapati veer bahu ko raja ke samast adhikar de kar vah prithvi lok ke liye prasthan karne lage..tabhi unki nazar maharani par gayi jo hatho me thali liye, jisme deepak jal raha tha.
Prabhavati—maharaj, apna dhyan akhiyega agar aap ne jane ka faisla kar hi liya hai to..
Samuttar—maharani, aap chinta mat kijiye…mujhe poora vishwash hai ki main apne kaam ke jarur kamyab ho kar loutunga.
Kumkum, chandan, pusp se saja vah thaal dekh kar maharaj bahut anandit huye…maharani prabha vati ne unke mastak par chandan kumkum ka tilak laga kar arti utari aur phir maharaj ko vida kiya.
Maharaj ne prithvi lok par prasthan kiya…maharaj jo ki khud hiek nag the, unki gati bahut tez thi…vo iss gati se chal rahe the jaise ki bahut tez hawaye chalti hain…unhone jaldi hi apne lok ke suraksha dwar ko tod diya aur tez gati se prithvi ki taraf uttar disha me uss gufa ki taraf apni pooch se tedhe medhe hote huye rasta tay karne lage.
Maharaj ke sharir ka rang ekdam safed tha…aur uss par halke peele rang ki rekhaye bani huyi thi…nag lok ke maharaj hone ki yahi nishani thi..sabhi praja aur vaha ke senapati sahit vaha ke sabhi logo ka rang kala hota tha.. kamar se niche ka unka hissa gahre kale rang ka hota tha..pidhi dar pidhi raja ke bete ka rang ushi par jata aur vo aage hone wala raja mana jata.
Kuch din chalne ke baad hi purnima ki raat me jaldi hi maharaj prithvi lok par pahuch gaye…aur uss gufa ka pata lagane lage jiske baare me gurudev ne unhe bataya tha.
Maharaj samuttar ne jaldi hi apni naak ka upyog kiya aur shiv ling se aane wali sugandh ko soonghne ka prayas kiya. Unhe jaldi hi shiv ling se aane wali sugandh ki anubhuti huyi aur phir vo ussi disha me bahut tez gati se chalne lage..
Kayi choti, oonchi, nichi patharili gufao se hote huye vah uss gufa tak pahuch hi gaye…gufa dikhte hi unhone chain ki saans li…vah uss gufa me ghusne hi wale the ki tabhi….
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