Fantasy NAAG MANI

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CONGRATULATIONS AANAND BHAI FOR NEW THREAD.
KYA KAHU IS KAHANI KE BARE ME ISKA ABHI SIRF EK UPDATE HI AAYA HAI LEKIN DIL ME ABHI SE KHALBALI MACH GAYI HAI KI YE LADKA KOUN HAI KYA HAI.AISA LAGTA HAI BAHUT SE RAZ HAIN USME EK KHICHAW SA HAI IS KAHANI KE PAHALE UPDATE ME HI .
AUR JAB KAHANI AAGE BADHEGI TOH KYA HOGA.
BAHUT HI KHOOBSOORAT SURUWAAT KI HAI BHAI


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NAAG MANI

UPDATE*2

Alka kumar ke kamre ki safayi kar rahi thi...har taraf room me paintings bikhri padi thi...to usne unhe samet kar ek jagah rakhne lagi

Achanak uski nazar ek paintings par jakar ruk gayi.....badi hi manmohak painting thi vo.....alka use dono hatho se pakad kar bade gaur se dekhne lagi....tabhi kumar fresh hokar room me aa gaya

Kumar—tumne to sabhi tasveere samet kar rakh di.....aur aise kya dekh rahi ho usme…..?

Alka—meri samajh me ek baat nahi aa rahi hai….?

Kumar—vo kya….?

Alka—mujhe yaha kaam karte huye six month se upar ho gaye hain……lekin mai ye dekhti aa rahi hu ki ye tasveer aap daily banate hain……vo bhi itni khubsurat….ise dekh kar hi lagta hai jaise abhi jeevant ho uthegi….koun hai ye…?

Kumar—pata nahi….?..jab se maine hosh sambhala hai tab se main tasveer bana raha hu....lekin na jane kyo apne aap hi har roj pahli tasveer iski hi ban jati hai jabki main banana kisi aur ki chahta hu

Alka (shocked)—kya apne aap hi…? But ye kaise possible hai……?

Kumar—yahi soch soch kar to main khud bhi hairan hu

Alka—kya aap ise jante hain…? Ya ho sakta hai kabhi kahi dekha ho..

Kumar—nahi...maine ise kabhi nahi dekha.....mai to ise janta tak nahi

Alka—ajib ittefaq hai...har roj aapke hatho se pahli tasveer is ladki ki ban jati hai…na chahte huye bhi....vo bhi itni khubsurat.....




Kumar—kayi baar to aisa bhi hua hai ki mai kisi client ko samne baitha kar uski painting banata hu...use dekhte huye.....paintings bante tak to sab theek rahta hai lekin complete hone ke baad pahli painting iski ban jati hai..

Alka—aapne doctor ko nahi dikhaya.... ?

Kumar—doctor ko dikhane jaunga to vo mujhe pagal karar dega

Alka—akhir kya vajah ho sakti hai…?

Kumar—kya pata…?

Alka—coffee pina hai…?

Kumar—ha le aao

Alka coffee banane chali gayi….kumar ke sath ye ghatna tab se niymit tour par ho rahi hai jab se usne tasveer banana chalu kiya hai…har roj uske hatho se pahli painting usi ladki ki banti hai….

Bhale hi vo na banana chahe kintu jab bhi daily ki pahli painting banata hai to uske dilo dimag par ye ladki apna kabza jama leti hai….jise vo janta tak nahi hai

Alka—ye lijiye coffee….phir breakfast lati hu

Kumar—good

Alka—kuch kitchen ka saman kharidna tha

Kumar—theek hai…list bana do..mai bahar hi ja raha hu…loutne time leta aunga

Alka—ready hai…ye lijiye

Kumar—ok…ab nasta de do

Alka nasta lakar kumar ko serve karne lagi….tab tak kumar bhi ready hoke nasta karne laga…ye daily routine tha.. alka subah aakar saf safayi karne ke baad coffee bana ke deti phir nasta…alka ek anath ladki thi…..badi hone tak anath ashram me rahi

Jawan hone ke baad usne hostel join kar liya….study me achchi thi to schlorship mil gayi…padhayi complete hone ke baad use bache kuch paiso se kiraye se paas me hi ek room le liya

Ye ek pahadi ilaka hai…..jungle se laga hua….alka naukri ki talash me dar dar bhatak rahi thi…kayi din to usne kewal pani pikar hi gujare

Jaha bhi vo naukri ke liye jati…to logo ki hawas bhari nazare us akeli anath besahara ladki ko naukri dene ke badle unka bistar garam karne ki shart pahle samne aa jati

Kintu usne kabhi apni izzat ka sauda nahi kiya….ek baar vo aise hi bhatakte huye bhukh pyas se behal garmi ki chil chilati dhoop me beech sadak par gir kar behosh ho gayi

Sanyog se usi time kumar ka udhar se gujarna ho gaya…jab usne kisi ko aise behosh dekha to use utha ke hospital le gaya…doctors ne behoshi ka karan kamjor hona bataya

Kumar ne alka ke hosh me aane par jab uske bare me pucha to usne sab kuch bata diya….jise sun kar use bahut dukh hua….aur usne alka ko apne yaha assistant ke tour par rakh liya

Dhire dhire alka kumar ke prabhav shali vyaktitva se prabhavit huye bina na rah saki aur mann hi mann me kumar ko pyar karne lagi kintu usne apne dil ki baat juban tak nahi layi shayad apni garibi dekh kar

Nasta karne ke baad kumar bahar chala gaya aur alka phir se us painting ko utha kar dekhne lagi

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[shahnaz123]

Superbb update
Is update se story kuch samajh aa rahi hai
Alka ki kahani bahut sad hai
Kumar ki family me koun koun hai...?
Vo ladki koun hai...?
Jiski painting apne aap banti hai
behad interesting turn with suspense
Marvelous writing skills
waiting next eagerly

 

[John Cena]

Nice

 

[Zas23]

Nice update

 

[sonukale]

Lajawab update