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Namaskar ap sabhe ko ek new love story mai likhne ja raha hu ap sabhe ka support chaiye is story aage leke jane kai liye
AgreeExcellent characters introduction. But the title and the theme of the story should be changed. The illicit and forbidden affairs of a conservative and faithful mom with a man of opposite majab is extremely hot and erotic. So the affairs of a conservative and faithful religious mom should not be revealed and it should be a top secret. It will be extremely hot and erotic if Surya seduces the mom slowly and steadily and finally the conservative mom falls into his evil trap and she will make illicit and forbidden affairs with Surya and she will cheat on her loving husband only when Surya will promise that he will keep their illicit and forbidden affairs a top secret. So there should not be any wedding between Nadia and Surya but only illicit and forbidden secret affairs because forbidden fruits are extremely tasty. So the title of this story may be: Nadia's secret affairs with Surya.
It is just my suggestion and please don't take it otherwise.
ekdom sahiExcellent characters introduction. But the title and the theme of the story should be changed. The illicit and forbidden affairs of a conservative and faithful mom with a man of opposite majab is extremely hot and erotic. So the affairs of a conservative and faithful religious mom should not be revealed and it should be a top secret. It will be extremely hot and erotic if Surya seduces the mom slowly and steadily and finally the conservative mom falls into his evil trap and she will make illicit and forbidden affairs with Surya and she will cheat on her loving husband only when Surya will promise that he will keep their illicit and forbidden affairs a top secret. So there should not be any wedding between Nadia and Surya but only illicit and forbidden secret affairs because forbidden fruits are extremely tasty. So the title of this story may be: Nadia's secret affairs with Surya.
It is just my suggestion and please don't take it otherwise.
agreeExcellent characters introduction. But the title and the theme of the story should be changed. The illicit and forbidden affairs of a conservative and faithful mom with a man of opposite majab is extremely hot and erotic. So the affairs of a conservative and faithful religious mom should not be revealed and it should be a top secret. It will be extremely hot and erotic if Surya seduces the mom slowly and steadily and finally the conservative mom falls into his evil trap and she will make illicit and forbidden affairs with Surya and she will cheat on her loving husband only when Surya will promise that he will keep their illicit and forbidden affairs a top secret. So there should not be any wedding between Nadia and Surya but only illicit and forbidden secret affairs because forbidden fruits are extremely tasty. So the title of this story may be: Nadia's secret affairs with Surya.
It is just my suggestion and please don't take it otherwise.
yes,agreeExcellent characters introduction. But the title and the theme of the story should be changed. The illicit and forbidden affairs of a conservative and faithful mom with a man of opposite majab is extremely hot and erotic. So the affairs of a conservative and faithful religious mom should not be revealed and it should be a top secret. It will be extremely hot and erotic if Surya seduces the mom slowly and steadily and finally the conservative mom falls into his evil trap and she will make illicit and forbidden affairs with Surya and she will cheat on her loving husband only when Surya will promise that he will keep their illicit and forbidden affairs a top secret. So there should not be any wedding between Nadia and Surya but only illicit and forbidden secret affairs because forbidden fruits are extremely tasty. So the title of this story may be: Nadia's secret affairs with Surya.
It is just my suggestion and please don't take it otherwise.
agreeExcellent characters introduction. But the title and the theme of the story should be changed. The illicit and forbidden affairs of a conservative and faithful mom with a man of opposite majab is extremely hot and erotic. So the affairs of a conservative and faithful religious mom should not be revealed and it should be a top secret. It will be extremely hot and erotic if Surya seduces the mom slowly and steadily and finally the conservative mom falls into his evil trap and she will make illicit and forbidden affairs with Surya and she will cheat on her loving husband only when Surya will promise that he will keep their illicit and forbidden affairs a top secret. So there should not be any wedding between Nadia and Surya but only illicit and forbidden secret affairs because forbidden fruits are extremely tasty. So the title of this story may be: Nadia's secret affairs with Surya.
It is just my suggestion and please don't take it otherwise.