Incest Nafrat Veer Ki

[Chulbul Pandey]

Intro​

 

[Chulbul Pandey]

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varun ek ek ka chahra dekh raha tha. sab varun ko na dekh kar ek dusre ko dekhne laga. nisha ne varun ko dekha. par nisha ki ankhon mein varun ko veer ke liye tadap dikhai di. nisha apne mayke parivar aa kar unhi ke jaisi ho gai thi. varun ko aisa laga. jaise nisha ki nazar mein uski value to bepanah hai. par nisha parivar wale ek zanjeer ke samman hain.. aur zanjeer ki judi ek ek kadi ka jaise apas mein rishta hota hai. waise rishta kisi aur se nahi ho sakta.. varun ko laga, woh nisha ke shareer ka maalik bankar bhi woh sthan prapt nahi kar paya jo pati ko patni ke sath fere lete hi prapt ho jata hai.

yahan varun ko andaza hua.. nisha aur uska parivar uske apne parivar se kahin badhkar mahaan hai. sabki ekta dekh kar varun pahli baar surprised rah gaya tha.

varun utha aur apni saas ke qadmon mein ja betha..

varun: maa........ achanak se dil mein ek ichha uthi hai. mujhe jamai na bana kar aap apna beta bana len

saas jo veer ki maa thi. varun ke shabd sunkar machal uthi.. uska hath utha aur varun ke sir par ja tika.. sir ko sahlati veer ki maa ne apne pati ko dekha. aur veer ke papa jo behad ghambir bhav liye bethe hue the. aise hi bhav ke sath woh bass "haan" mein sir hila gaye.

veer ki maa: varun beta, tum mere bete tab hi ban gaye the. jab maine apni nisha ka hath tumhare hath mein dene ka nirnay liya tha. tum is layak na hote to nisha se tumhara vivah sambhav hi nahi tha.

varun ne veer ki maa ka hath thaam kar chum liya: fir mujhse sachhai ka chhupana kaisa maa.. mujhe bhi sab bata dijiye.. kya pata main kuch kar guzaron

veer ki maa ne nisha ko dekha

nisha: theek hai maa, main varun ko sab bata dungi. par maa--

veer ke papa bole: koi chinta na karo.. ab aar ya paar.. ab kisi baat ki koi parwa baki nahi rahi.

veer ke dada jo sabse alag hi shahi type chair par bethe hue the. unke hathun mein ek chhadi thi. jiska dasta shudh gold ka bana hua tha. kuch heere chhadi par jaga jaga lage hue the. chhadi dekh kar andaza hota tha, veer ka parivar kitna ameer tha.. dada ki apni personality bhi chhadi ke hone se araam se jani pahchani ja sakti thi

dada: varun beta.... is parivar ka ek ek shabd amanat hai. aur hum thakur log, kahan khoon mein milawat pasand nahi karte... wahin ye bhi pasand nahi karte, hamara koi raaz kabhi khule.. hamare kisi bhi jamai ko veer ki kahani malum nahi hai. keval tum hi ho.. wo bhi jungle mein nisha beti ke rahte tum veer se mil liye.. veer ko bhi dekh lia tumne.. aur veer ke andr ki aag aur nafrat ko bhi.. bass youn samjh lo.. is aag ki chingari jahan veer ko barson se jalaye hue hai.. yahan hum sab bhi jal rahe hain. tum bhi jaloge. kabhi bhul kar bhi kisi ke saamne raaz khol bethe.. to jis jis tak ye raaz pohnchega.. uski har aane wali pusht jal kar raakh hone lagegi.. soch lo, sach jaanna chahte ho ya fir raakh mein badalna chahte ho.

dada chup hue to dadi boli: nisha tumhari patni ban chuki hai varun beta.. par kuch baaten aisi hoti hain.. patni pati se prem karte hue bhi mayke ko nahi chhod sakti.. ho sakta hai, sach jaan kar tum aur nisha dono ek dusre se alag ho jaao.. hone ko ye bhi ho sakta hai. hamare parivar se juda har jamai hi humen chhod jaaye.

varun kanp utha tha.. usay andaza nahi tha.. baat is kadar khatarnak bhi ho sakti hai

veer ki maa: tum darr rahe ho beta.. darrna hi chahiye.. hum thakur log.. jo kabhi nahi dare the.. pichhle kuch saalon se har pal darr darr kar ji rahe hain.

veer ke papa: darr kya hota ha... aaj bhi main 10 20 30 kitne bhi mardon se akela lad sakta hon.. par darr maut ka darr hi asal darr nahi hota.. tum shayad maut ko saamne dekh kar darr jaao.. par hum mein se koi bhi maut ko dekh kar nahi darr sakta..... kyun nisha kyaa veer ne jungle mein maut ka jo nanga naach tum sab ko dikhaya tha. kyaa tum woh maut ka tamasha dekh kar darr gai thi

nisha: no papa... main to veer ki haivaniyat dekh kar darr gai thi

veer ke papa ne varun ko dekha: veer se hum sab darrte hain.. uske liye tadap rahe hain. uske prem ke liye machal rahe hain... har insaan se galtiyan hoti hain.. par kuch galatiyan aisi hoti hain.. jinki saza ka ahsaas samay ke nikal jane ke bad hota hai

dada: ek galti tumne bhi kar di varun beta.. tumne khud ko hamare parivar ka beta bol kar sach jaanne ki baat kah daali.. dusri galati mat karo... yahi se wapis palat jaao.. saza se bach jaaoge.. nahi to hamare jaisa bankar jeena padega..

varun ko ab paseena aane laga tha.. usay andaza bhi nahi tha, veer ki kahani sunne se pahle aag ke darya se guzarna hoga..

nisha uth khadi hui: varun aap sach jaanna hi chahte hain to aaiye mere sath.. par fir aap ko har pal apni aur apne parivar ki maut ko dhayan mein rakhna hoga.. veer kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar sakta hai. jungle mein to veer ka haivani roop dekh hi chuke hain.. soch len aap.. abhi main aap ko do option deti hon.. No 1 aap is ghar ke jamai na bankar bete ban jaaiye.. aur sach jaan lijiye... jitna aage aap badh chuke hain.. uske liye ab No 2 zaruri ho gaya hai varun..

varun thuk nigalta hua hakla kar bola: N-No 2.......Option 2 kyaa hai.

nisha ne apni ek cousin ko dekha: romal la ke do mujhe.

wo apna bag khol rumal nikaal kar nisha ko thama gai.. nisha rumal liye veer ki maa ke pairon mein bethe varun ke pass gai aur boli

nisha: varun ye lijiye rumal.. apne chahre par paseena pooch lijiye. aap abhi se kitna ghabra rahe hain. sach jaanne se pahle aap ka ye haal hai. sach jaan liya to aap ke andr ka sara pani hi bah niklega..

varun ab halke se kanpne laga tha.. khud ko thakur kahta tha. bohut se karname uske naam ke sath jude the. par veer ki haivaniyat aur yahan aaj ek ek sadasy ke chahre par maut se bhi bhayankar sannata.... varun ka dil zor zor se dhadakne laga tha..

rumal leke varun ne apne chahre ko poocha.. nisha ko dekha

nisha: Option No 2 ye hai varun.. aap ko aaj abhi aur isi samay mujhe divorce deni hogi..

aur varun ko laga.. woh betha nahi rah paayega.. woh buri tarah se bethe bethe ladkhada gaya..

varun ke hont buri trah se sookh gaye the. gale mein kante pad gaye the. khaufzada nazron se nisha ko dekhne laga. fir ek ek ko dekhne laga.. har chahre par ghambirta thi. jaise nisha ke kahe gaye option 2 par unhe koi aitraz na ho

nisha: ek option aap ko choose karna hoga varun.. sach jaan kar apni aur apne parivar ki maut ko riks par daalna.. option 2 tumhe har kisam ke jhanjhat se bacha jaayega..

nisha itna bol kar apni jaga par ja bethi.

ab sab varun ko dekh rahe the. aur varun zindagi mein pahli baar itna puzzle hua ja raha tha.. uski life mein aisa bhayankar turn bhi aayega.. usne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha..

der tak varun chup raha.. sab usay ghoorte rahe.. aur ekdum se varun ko ahsas hua.. ye haveli to ek bhootiya haveli hai.. yahan raha raha ek ek sadasy jeevit nahi mara hua hai.. sab ke face expresssion dekh varun hallucination ke chakkar mein ulajhne laga.. varun ko sab chahre badalte dikhai dene lage..

tabhi varun ne dekha.. khoon mein lat pat veer ek hath mein khooni khanjar aur dusre hath bombs se bhara hua bag liye khada hai.. veer ke dono kandhon se machine gun latki hui thi.. lambi pairon tak aati bullets se bhari magazines dekh varun ek jhatka se utha.. aur cheekhne chillane laga..

varun: nahi nahi.. tum mujhe nahi maar sakte.. mere parivar ko nahi maar sakte. maine, mere parivar ne tumhara kuch nahi bigada.. nai jaanna mujhe sach.. nahi marna mujhe... nahi banna mujhe is parivar ka beta.....

varun ulte seedhe shabd bolne laga. aur varun ki halat dekh koi hairan nahi hua. koi kuch nahi bola... sab ghambir bhav liye varun ko dekh rahe the..

nisha: varun.. aap to sach jaanne se pahle hi adhe mar gaye

nisha boli to varun jaise hosh mein aa gya. varun ka rang ud gaya

varun bina koi bhi aur baat bole ek hi baat bola: No 2... No 2.. mujhse ek galti hui.. main dusri koi aur galti nahi karna chahta nisha..

nisha ko koi dukh nahi hua.. veer ko dekh lene se pahle varun aisi baat kahta to shayad nisha dukh se pagal ho jaati. par ab nahi

nisha: divorce paper par sign kar ke bhej dena.. aur haan wahan mera jo samaan hai

varun jaldi se bola: sab bhej dunga.. kuch bhi.. sab kuch

veer ki maa: apne parivar se kyaa kahoge..

varun: main sab ko handle kar lunga

varun chala gaya. wahan woh aur nahi ruk sakta tha..

nisha dada ji ko dekh kar boli: dada jaan.. 4 din guzar chuke hain. pata nahi veer ab bhi uski jungle mein aas pass kahin hoga.. nahi janti... par veer ko talash karna hoga..

dada jaan is baar pashchataap ki aag mein jalte hue bole: barson se veer bete ko talash kar rahe hain.. ab puri jaan lada denge.. waise bhi humen hint mil chuka hai. veer beta kaisi life ji raha hai. ab usay talash karna mushkil to hoga, namumkin nahi..

veer ki maa ki ankhon mein ab ansu the. wo veer ke papa ko dekhne lagi.. dukh, ghusse, sharmindgi, pashchtap ke gahre bhav ab uski ankhon mein bhi the.

veer ki maa: kyaa marne se pahle mujhe mere bete se shama mangne ka avsar bhi nahi milega

veer ke papa: aisi hi ichha mann mein liye to main bhi ji raha hon. warna ab jeevan ka koi matlab nahi raha.. dhitkaar hai mujhpar... mai insaan kahlaye jaane ke layak nahi raha..

nisha roti hui boli: sab meri galati hai

koi aur bola: galti kiski nahi hai..

dadi boli: hum sab se bohut badi galti hui hai..

chacha bola: galti nahi.. paap hua hai humse maa.. maha paap.. paapi hain hum sab.. maha paapi.. par humen narg ki aag mein nahi jalna.. humen shama ka avsar milna chahiye.... insaan hain.. insaan hi galti karta hai.

veer ki maa cheekhti chillati hui uth khadi hui: insaan...huh.. galti.... paap.. dhitkaar hai mujhpar... lanat hai mujhpar... galti nahi hui mujhse, paap nahi hua mujhse... bhagwan par vishwas khoya hai humne.. bhagwan hi tha hamara veer...

phoot phoot kar rone lagi veer ki maa... dekhte hi dekhte sab phoot phoot kar rone lage.. dada dadi, veer ke papa, chacha chachi.. nisha to wahin farsh par ghunton ke bal giri farsh par sir marti hui roye ja rahi thi..

aisa lag raha tha. jaise abhi abhi is parivar ka koi payara mar gaya ho.....



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bomb dhamake karke veer jungle mein daudta chala gaya tha. uske pure shareer se khun bahta ja raha tha.

veer buri tarah se ghayal tha. shareer se khoon jaise khatam hota ja raha tha. par veer ke andr nafrat ki aag is kadar badhi hui thi. veer ke shareer mein para sa bharta ja raha tha. wahi para veer ko himmat daan kiye hue the..

kuch ghanto ke safar ke bad veer ek gufa tak ja pohncha.. gufa mein andr hathun se bane ek kamre ke andr ek baba tapasya mein leen pathy maare betha hua tha.. veer baba ke karib ja kar chup chap let gya... let te hi veer ki himmat jawab de gai. veer behosh gaya tha..



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veer ko hosh aaya. par veer hilne layak nahi raha tha.

veer ne dekha. baba uske shareer ke sath kuch kar raha tha.

veer haivani lahje mein hasta hua bola: baba tum is hisab se mere bade kaam ke ho... mere shareer ko marne nahi dete.. jeevan mein ab kuch baki nahi bacha.. par main marna nahi chahta.... hazaron saalon tak aise hi tadap tadap kar jeena chahta hon... aisa hi jeevan mere bhagy mein likh dia gaya hai.. par tum baba... mere lakh cheekhne chillane galiyan dene par bhi mera sabse bada kaam nahi karte ho.. nafrat hai mujhe tumse bhi budhhe shaitan papi.. kaash main tujhe maar sakta.. hadiyon ka dhancha ban gaya hai tu.. par tere andr badi jaan hai.. mere hathun marta nahi hai tu.. kitni baar paryas kar chuka hon.. par tere andr sach mein shaitan ki aatma ghusi hui hai

baba veer ko prem bhari nigah se dekh bola: shaitan to papiyon ke andr hota hai putra.. main manshy hon. mitti ka bana putla.. parantu bhagwan ki kripa hai mujhpar.. meri aatma shaitani hai putra.. tum jo galiyan mujhe dete ho na.. mere liye wo bhi phool hain putra. mujhe tumhari kisi gali par, kisi bhi bure shabd kar gussa nahi aata. mai kyu karun tumpar gussa. tumne mera bigada bhi kya hai.. kuch di hi hai mujhe

veer: ho gaye tum shuru... wahi purana bhashan tumahra.. tum batao.. mera kaam karte ho ke nahi

baba veer ke ghavo par dawa laga rahe the: tum khud kyun nahi kar lete

veer ghuse mein aaya baba ko firse galiyan dene laga: ye sab tere hi shaitani karam hai buddhe.. galti hui mujhse.. mujhe tere pass aane se pahle hi apne lund ko kaat daalna chahiye tha. par nahi janta tha. tu kitna bada shaitan hai.. sab samjh gaya. aur apne shaitani mantron se mere laudon ko pathar ka bana dia.. kuch fark nahi padta mere laude par

baba ab hasne laga tha

veer: has le.. jitna tujhe hasna hai has shaitan budhhe.. kabhi to mera dav chalega tujhpar.. tu to mera lauda nahi kaat saka. par mai tera lauda hi nahi katunga.. pahle teri gand marunga. fir tera lauda kaatunga.. fir ek ek karke tere shareer ke angon ko alag karunga..

baba veer ki baat ko pura karte hue bole: fir tu mere khoon ka ek ek katra mere shareer se bahayega.. jab sara shareer khoon se khali ho jaayega. tab tu mere khoon se kuliyan karega... gufa ki deewaren mere khoon se rang dega.. mere boodhe kate hue shareer ke ek ek tukde ko jungle mein jagah jagah bikher dega.

veer daant peesta hua baba ko dekhne laga: chal ab bata.. kab tak mere ghav bhar jayenge.. ghin aati hai mujhe teri surat dekh kar. teri baat sunkar mera dimag kharab hone lagta hai. kash mai tera moh tod sakta.. kash main teri ye hasti ankhen noch sakta.....

baba veer ki baaten sunkar hasne lage the. aur veer par firse galiyon ka daura pad gaya

baba haste haste chup kar gaye.. ghambir swar mein bole: to batao.. dono papi giroh ka ant kar aaye tum

veer baba ko ek aur gali deta hua bola: nafrat hai mujhe tujhse.. nafrat hai mujhe har manushy se, har jeev prani se.. mujhe kisi se kuch nahi lena dena.. koi mare ya jiye... mujhe kyaaaa.. tu kyun mere peeche pada hua hai buddhe

baba pyaar se veer ke sir ko sahlane lage. aur veer paralize tha.. chah kar bhi baba ka hath apne sir se jhatak nahi saka.. bass baba ko ghoorta raha

fir veer ekdum se ghambir hota hua bola: baba, meri is zindagi ka koi ant bhi hai.. ya main sadaiv aise hi tadapta rahunga

baba is baar alag hi prem bhare swar mein bole: upaay main tujhe bata chuka hon putra.. yahi niyati dawara racha shadyatr bhi hai..

veer ka gussa seema langne laga: mujhe nahi sunni tumhari ye bakwas baaten buddhe.. jab kabhi tujhse aram se baaten karne ka mann karta hai.. tujhse mann ki shanti ke liye raste ka poochhta hon to kutte ki tarah tu bhokne lagta hai.. mat bhonka kar mere aage..

baba ko ab bhi gusa nahi aya veer par.. baba ko to kabhi gusaa aata hi nahi tha. veer aksar bebas ho jaya karta tha.

der tak veer cheeckhta chillata raha.. baba ko anab shanab bolta raha

baba: pata hai mujhe gussa kyun nahi aata tumhari baaton par

veer firse chilla utha: kaaran janta hon main... kyunki barson pahle tak mujhe bhi kisi baat par gusa nahi aaya karta tha. prem.. prem.. bass.. iske siva mujhe kuch soojhta hi nahi tha.. ab maine nafrat karna seekha hai aur tu hai ke mujhse prem ki bhasha ke siva koi aur bhasha bolta hi nahi hai.. nafrat hai mujhse tujhse... bepanah nafrat

baba: saalon se tu yahi to kahta a raha hai. par tu mujhse nafrat nahi kar paya hai.. tere moh se bure shabd nikalte hain.. par dil se ek bhi nahi nikla kabhi

veer jal kar bola: haan tu to sab jaanega hi. tu dil ke bhed jo jaan leta hai

baba: bhagwan ne mujhe door ki nazar bhi di hai veer putra.. aur meri door ki nazar kahti hai.. sab acha ho jaayega.. bass tu apna siddhant badal de

veer ki ankhon mein firse khoon utar aaya: kyun badlun.. nahi badalna mujhe khud ko.. kuch bhi nahi badalna mujhe mere andr.. jasia hon. waisa hi rahunga..

baba: par ab samay chakra firne wala hai putra

veer baba ko ghoorne laga

baba: ab sab ne jaan lia hai. tum kaha ho. ab tum kahin bhi raho. kaise bhi raho. apnu ki nazron se bach kar nahi rah sakte. saara dhan daulat tumhari talash mein jhonk denge.. senkdon hazaron lakhon loog ko bhi tumhari talash ke liye bhejna pade to bhejenge..

veer chillaya: mai sab ko maar dunga.. ek ek ko maar dunga.. kisi ko zinda nahi chhodunga.. koi mere pass to aaye

baba: fir nisha bitya ko kyun zinda chhod aaye

aur veer bebas nigah se baba ko dekhne laga

baba: mai sab janta hon. wahan jungle mein jo hua.. kuch bhi mujhse chhupa hua nahi hai

veer: iska matlab ye hua. tumne mujhe jaan boojh kar wahan bheja tha.. nisha mujhe wahan mil jaye

baba muskura pade aur veer ek baar firse daant pees kar rah gaya

veer kahyali hath masalta hua bola: kash.... kash.. budhe tu mere hath mar sakta

baba hasne laga

baba: tu kisi ko nahi maar sakta putra..

veer: janta hon. sab ke sab khud se kat marne ko tayar rahte hai 24 ghante..

baba: tabhi tum khud ko maar dene ki dhamki dekar nisha ko khud se door kar gaye. aur tumhe koi bhi marte hue nahi dekh sakta

veer: mujhe fark nahi padta.. tum kyun aisi baaten mujhse kar rahe ho. koi aur baat tere pass hai karne ko to kar.. nahi to kahin ja ke mar..

baba: koi bhi samay se pahle nahi mara karta veer putra.. kai bar ki kahi baat ek bar firse main tumse kahunga.. bhagwan prem ka dusra naam hai. bhagwan hamari badi se badi galati par humen shama kar deta hai. tum bhi----

veer: chup karrrr jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.. chupppppp karrrrr jaaaaaaaaaaaa

veer andr se bar bar uthne ki koshish kar raha tha.. par hil bhi nahi paya

baba: aur ab mere jane ka samay ho chuka hai putra

aur veer jo ab tak cheekh chilla raha tha. baba ko galiyan deta ja raha tha. baba ke jaane ki baat sunkar chuank gaya..

veer: kahan jane ka samay ho gaya hai tumhara

baba ne upar gufa ki chhat ko dekha.. matlab saaf tha. baba ka ishara aakash ki orr tha

veer barson bad pahli baar kanp utha

veer ke dil mein kuch kuch hone laga. par apne andaz mein hi bola

veer: to ja jaaa ke kahin mar ja.. yahi mar.. ya kahin aur marr.. mujhe kyaaa... shukar mana is gandi dunya se teri jaan chhoot rahi hai... tujhse kabhi nahi kaha.. aaj kahta hon.. teri prarthna bhagwan turant sun leta hai. bhagwan se bol.. mujhe bhi uthaa le

baba: kyaa tu sach mein jeevan haarna chahta hai

aur veer ki ankhon ke saamne kai manzar lahrane lage.. kai haste muskurate, usse ladte, usay galiyan dete, dhitkarte, maarte peet te, uske chahre par thukte dikhai dene lage.. fir ek chahra veer ki ankhon mein lahraya

aur veer puri jaan se chilllaaaaaaaaaaaa uthaaaaaaaaaa

veer: naaaaaaaaaaaaliiiiiniiiiiiiiiii

veer buri tarah se tadapne laga..

veer: kash tum mujhpar aitbar kar sakti nalini.. ek tumhare mujhpar vishwas karne se main nafrat karna bhul jaata. sab ko shama kar deta.. par tu mujhpar vishwas nahi kar payi.. kash kash kash

baba: ab tujhe tumhare kam ki ek baat batao veer putra.. bhagwan ki ichha se hi main tujhe batane ja raha hon

veer ne baba ko prashn bhari nazron se dekha. is samay veer nalini ki yaad mein buri tarah se tadap raha tha.

baba: nalini ki aatma is dunya se nahi gai thi. wo ek aur hi shareer mein ja samai thi.

veer ka shareer paraliza tha.. par baba ki baat sunkar aisa jhatka laga tha veer ko. veer ka pura badan hil kar rah gaya. veer ke chahre par aneko rang ekdum se bikhar gaye the

baba veer ke gaal par hath ferte hue bade prem se bole: bhagwan ki bhi yahi ichha thi veer putra.. tumhara prem amar rahe.. tumhari premika tumhe firse mil jaaye

veer ko ajib si khushi mili thi. par woh bola to ajib se lahje mein bola

veer: mujhe ab usse kyaa lena dena baba.. usay to mujhpar vishwas hi nahi tha..
kitna kaha maine, mai doshi nahi hon. mai papi nahi hon. maine koi paap nahi kia.. par woh bhi sab ke jaise mujhpar vishwas haar bethi. mere andr nafrat ka beej bo bethi.. khud aatma hatya kar gai. aur mujhe pal pal marne ke liye chhod gai.



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[Chulbul Pandey]

Supper fantastic update janab

Congratulations for new thread bro
Awesome update bro

Ye dusri kaha bhi badi mazedar hai veer ne shayad bachpan se apne hi pariwar walo se zulm saha hai jisse wo ek masum se haiwan ho gaya hai...
Bas bhai aisi achi story mai bohot wakt ke bad pad raha hu pehle bhi aisi padi thi jismai se bas ek had hi complete hue hoge tum zarur ise complete karna philhal agle update ka intezar

Great start
perfect storyline

Gajab Bhai start jabardast hai aise story bhut Kam hai Jo hai bhi wo adhuri hai pls regular update de na Bhai love your writing skill

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Super story bhai

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Super story bhai

dhannyvad bhai

 

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update post kar dia hai bhai

 

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dhannyvad bhai

 

[Chulbul Pandey]

Gajab Bhai start jabardast hai aise story bhut Kam hai Jo hai bhi wo adhuri hai pls regular update de na Bhai love your writing skill

dhannyvad bhai
ji bhai koshish pure rahegi, story ko pura karne ki. baki upar wala jane

 

[Chulbul Pandey]

Great start
perfect storyline

dhannyvad bhai

 

[Chulbul Pandey]

Congratulations for new thread bro
Awesome update bro

dhannyvad bhai

 

[Chulbul Pandey]

Supper fantastic update janab

dhannyvad bhai

 

[Chulbul Pandey]

Ye dusri kaha bhi badi mazedar hai veer ne shayad bachpan se apne hi pariwar walo se zulm saha hai jisse wo ek masum se haiwan ho gaya hai...
Bas bhai aisi achi story mai bohot wakt ke bad pad raha hu pehle bhi aisi padi thi jismai se bas ek had hi complete hue hoge tum zarur ise complete karna philhal agle update ka intezar

sukriya vai

kuch aisa ho jaya karta hai. jo bohut galt hota ha. wahi se janam leti hai aisi kahani