Update 2
Jay....kya he msg me?????
Tanya.... Urgent... Bs itna Hi likha he....
Jay....thik he ...tum sab head quarter report kardo mai yahi se sidha ghar jaunga....
Ye kahke phone kat karte he....
Ab aage...
Mai car me aapne ghar1 ki taraf ja raha tha....
Tabhi mere mobile ring hua...
Aur mai Bluetooth ke zariye call risiv kiya..
Mai...ha bolo mrinal...
Mrinal.... Jay 1 garbad huyi vo sab Mar gaye...
Mai.....kya????? Lekin humare plan ke bare me kisiko pata nahi tha....
Mrinal.... Pata nahi....kese jese humare agents vaha pahunche to sab mare huye the....
(Aap soch rahe hoge ye kis bare me baat kar rahe he to chalo chalte thoda flashback me...)
1 ghante pahle...
Mai jungle se nikalkar aapne ghar2 gaya...
Aur vaha aapna saman pack kar raha tha ki mera cellphone ring hua...
Jise risive karke..
Mai...ha bol Tony....
Tony....bhai aaj tujpe attack hone vala he....
Mai....what...????
Tony....ha
Mai......lekin tumhe pata kese chala.....????
Tony.....jay abhi humare 1 agent 1 aadmi aresst kiya tha....to uske mobile me tumhari photo thi....
Mai.....meri photo....lekin kese mili meri photo?????
Tony.....nahi..usko ye nahi pata tu agent he...uski gang ko pese mile the tumhe Marne ke....
Mai...thik he..karne do humla.......UN logo ko trap karo....jaha vo humlakarne vale he...
Tony....OK Bhai....
Mai....be careful Bhai????OK
Fir phone cut kar diya....
Present time....
Mai....mrinal unke paas kus mila....jisse pata chale....
Mrinal.... Nahi....unke paas nahi koi Id thi aur nahi koi aur proof aur nahi phone....
(Mai kus der sochta raha fir...)
Mai.....mrinal unhe kis tarah Mara gaya he...????
Mrinal..... Is tarah unpe vaar kiye he ki vo turant to nahi lekin fir bhi jaldi lekin tadap-tadap kar mare is tarah Mara gaya he...
Mai....OK mrinal.... Tum aage ki inquiry karo....fir baat karte he....
Mrinal.... OK....
(Call cut karne ke baad me soch Hi raha tha ki is tarah kaun Marta he...??? Tabhi 1 aavaz aati jise sunkar me chunk jata hu...)
Avaz....aur kaun hoga...???? Vahi darinda....
Jisse mai thoda dar jata hu side sit ki taraf dekhta hu...aur relex ho jata hu....
Mai.....yaar Charles aese mat aaya kar....
Note:- mai abhi baat kar raha hu vo Charles ki spirit he...yani aatma....aur iska raaz aage chalke pata chalega...
Charles.....q dar gaya....????(aur vo hasne lagta he...)
Mai.....insan hu yaar dar to lagega Hi.....aur tu aese pragat hota he ki n darne vala insan bhi dar jata he...
Charles..... Chal koi baat nahi us darinde se baat kar pata chal jayega....
Mai....lekin vo q UN sabko marega...?????
Charles.... Teri jaan bachane ke liye... Baki tu khud usse pusle....
Mai fir turant phone book me se dinu Dracula likhe naam pe call karta hu...
Jisse vo risive karta he...(mai short form dinu Hi likhunga)
Dinu....ha bol.....to tuje pata chal gaya....
Mai.....ha muje pata chal gaya lekin....
Mai kus bolta usse pahle meri baat kaat ke....
Dinu....vo kal me aapne Hi case ke silsile ke liye gaya tha...vahi 1 aadmi Teri photo dikhakar dusre aadmi Teri sopari de raha tha....fir mene us aadmi ka Pisa kiya jisne tere photo diya tha....
Mai....lekin tune Mara q ..????kus pata to chalta....
Dinu....dekh mene sab pata kar liya he...ye Teri kisi dusmani ka kaam nahi balki tere khandan ki kisi purani dusmani ki vajah se vo tuje marna chah rahe the....
Mai....ha vo to he...humare khandan ke dusman to bhot he....pata chala ki vo kaun he...????
Dinu......nahi yaar....us aadmi ko pata bhi nahi tha...
Mai....vo mai dekh lunga....lekin tu unhe is tarah q Mara...??? Jese kisi darinde ne Mara ho....
Dinu.....(ye sunke hasne lagta he... Fir jese Hi kus yaad aaya ho...) Vo tere side me Hi betha he n????
Note:-dinu ki 1 alag kahani he vo kahani baad me likhunga... Pahle dinu ki kahani likhna chahta tha...lekin thoda Hi soch paya tha plot...aage ka plot nahi mil raha tha....lekin uska bhi soch raha hu....aur ha vo kahani bhi zarur likhunga....
(Dinu ko kese pata uske baju me koi he???? Ye raj aage khulega)
Mai.... Ha
Dinu.....yaar Charles tuje aur koi naam nahi mila jo tu hamesha muje darinda kahta he...
Charles.... Mene kya juth bola...tu khud ko kya kahta he...????
Dinu.....dinu Dracula....
Charles.... To fir...Dracula ka kaam hota he khun pina...khun pine vale ko darinda Hi kahte he....
Dinu....ha yaar tune sahi kaha....1 tarah se me darinda Hi to hu....aesa darinda jo logo ko tadapa-tadapa kar marte he...(ye bolte huye dinu aankhe nam ho jati he...)
Jisse Charles ko pata chal jata he...
Charles.... Ye kya tu ro raha he...
Mai bhi sunke paresan ho jata hu....
Mai....bhai tu ro q raha he....???? Tuje to pata he n Charles ko mazak karne ki aadat he....uski baat ko dil pe le liya....
Charles.... Ha Bhai muje maaf karde....mera irada tuje chot pahchana ka nahi tha....I am sorry...
Dinu....are ye kya yaar....muje koi bhi baat buri nahi lagi....muje nahi pata Charles Teri aadat ka...me tum dono se naraj nahi rah sakta....
Uski bato se muje uspe daut hota he....
Mai.....dinu tune sarab pi he...????
Dinu.....nahi to yaar....
Charles.... To fir humari dosti ki kasam kha....
Dinu....ha...aur tum dono ko pata he mene q pi he....
Mai....yaar to tu vo kaam karta Hi q he...????jisse tuje lagta he ki tune uske sath dhoka kiya....fir itni pita he ki khud ka hosh nahi rahta....
Dinu.... Nahi Bhai aaj jyada nahi pi....aur tu janta he ki ye mera personal case he..aur uske liye chahe kisi bhi ladki ke sath sona pade ya kus bhi karna pade vo me jarur kahunga.... Qki usi ki vajah se me aapne pyar se dur hu...mere astitv bhi kho chuka hu..kaun hu.kya hu..aur jisse pyar karta hu vo mujse nafrat karti he....
Charles.... Ye tu kya kah raha he....vo tujse nafrat nahi karti...sirf naraj he... Jab sach pata chalega tab dekhna tu...
Dinu....janta hu...lekin yaar is dil ka kya karu....
Mai....yaar vo ek din dekhna vo khud tujse baat karegi....bharosha rakh aapne pyar par....
Charles.... Vese mere paas 1 idea he jisse Teri vali man jaye...
Mai....aur vo kya he mahasay...????
Dinu....yaar jay tu kiski baat sun raha he....iske idea hamesha marvate he...
(Ye kahke dinu aur mai hasne lagte he..)
Charles.... Haslo betu...fir mujse mat kahna....
Mai....(haste huye) acha chal bata kya baat he...???
Charles..... Tum jay aesa karo ki...tum dinu vali ko manane jao......bolo kesa laga idea....???
Mai....ye kesa bakwas idea he....
Dina....tu hum dono ko q marvana chahta he....
Charles.... Aesa kus nahi hoga...
Dinu....meri vali to jay ko janse maar degi...qki jesa Hi mera naam lega vo Jo bhi hath me hoga vo Mar degi..
Charles.... Vo kese...???
Dinu....vo Jo kus hua uska jimmedar muje manti he..
(Ye sab bate karte hum has rahe the... Ye baat sun hasna band kar dete he..dinu pirse sad ho jate he ..)
Mai....mere paas isse bhi acha idea he...
Jisse kisi bhi maut bhi nahi hogi aur koi jail bhi nahi jayega....
Dinu....vo kya he...???
Mai....yaar hum Charles ko bejte he Teri vali ke paas....hahahahaha
Dinu....hahahaha idea acha he...lekin yaar ye kese baat karega...ye to bhut he...are nahi yaar bhut bhi nahi aadhi aatma he ye to....
Is baat mai aur dinu jor jor se has rahe the...
Aur isse Charles ka chahera gusse se lal ho jata he...
Charles.... Jis din puri tarah se me....
Uski baat ko bich me Hi katte huye....
Mai....yaar plz isse aage kus mat bolna....
Dinu....ha tu nahi janta.... Hum tuje gale lagane chahte he aur jab tu samne hote huye bhi nahi laga pate...tab humpe kya bitti he....
Mai.....tuj 6u bhi nahi pate.... Tab kya haal hota he Humara....
Charles..... Yaar sorry... Maaf kar do...me janta hu...qki ye sab me bhi to mahsus kar raha hu....
Acha chalo ab tum dono haso to...varna tum dono ko yahi maar dunga....
Dinu....tu Hume marega...hahahaha
Isi baat pe hum tino has dete he...
Tabhi mera ghar Aa jata he....
(Dosto is waqt hum England me he...mai 1 city se dusri city ja raha tha... Jaha meri Chachi rahti he...)
Mai....acha chal ghar Aa gaya he....
Dinu....acha Chachi ko yaad dena meri....
Mai.....ha chal bye....aapna khyal rakhna.....
Dinu....bye...bye Charles.... Tum dono bhi aapna khyal rakhna....
Vo ye bolta he uske baad mai phone rakh deta hu....
Aur Charles bhi gayab ho jata he....
Mai car ko 1 banglo me enter karta hu...car park karke mai ghar gate ke paas Jake bell bajata hu....
Bell sunkar koi darvaza khulta he...to samne dekhta hu ghar ka naukar tha...
Jiski muje umid nahi thi....
Mai....(under jate huye)....kaka Chachi maa kaha he...????
Kaka....beta vo to aapne room me aaram kar rahi he....
Jese Hi mai ye sunta hu daudte huye unke kamre ki aur chal deta hu...
Note....is ghar mai sirf mai aur Chachi Hi rahte he...baki ka parivar kaha he vo pata chal jayega...
Mai car ko 1 banglo me enter karta hu...car park karke mai ghar gate ke paas Jake bell bajata hu....
Bell sunkar koi darvaza khulta he...to samne dekhta hu ghar ka naukar tha...
Jiski muje umid nahi thi....
Mai....(under jate huye)....kaka Chachi maa kaha he...????
Kaka....beta vo to aapne room me aaram kar rahi he....
Jese Hi mai ye sunta hu daudte huye unke kamre ki aur chal deta hu...
Note....is ghar mai sirf mai aur Chachi Hi rahte he...baki ka parivar kaha he vo pata chal jayega...
Aaj ke liye itna Hi...
(Kya hua he Chachi ko...????ya fir koi aur baat he....?)
Ab Aage
Mai bhagta hua Chachi ke kamre ke paas Jake nock karta hu...
Thodi der baad Chachi darvaza khulti he...
Mai....Chachi kya hua he aapko?????
Chachi....kus nahi hua he mere bacche hum bilkul thik he...ha lekin tumse Milne koi aaya he.....
Mai Chachi ki aankho ko padhne ki kosis karta hu... Unki aankho me aaj khushi dekh rahi thi....
Mai.....kaun aaya he?????
Tabhi 1 aavaz aati he....
Aavaz.....1 baar idhar dekh kar gale mil jao pata chal jayega.....
Jese aavaz aayi hui disha me dekhta hu... To unko dekhkar meri aankho me aanshu Aa jate he....
Aur turant khada hokar unke gale lag jata hu....
Unki aur Chachi dono ki aankho me aanshu the....
Hum bhi gale lage huye the...aakhrikar unhone bola....
Aavaz.... Bs kar mere bache...aur kitna royega...aap to vero ke vansh ka varish he...vaha Rona shobha nahi deta aapko.....
Mai...kya karu chacha ji(ji ye hero ke Chacha he)jab bhi Chachi maa ko dekhta aapki yaad aati thi...aur aapne meri vajah se salo dur rahe...kese bhul jau vo sab...bhale real me mere koi aur maa-baap ho lekin mere asli maa-baap aap Hi ho..jinhone mere liye itni kurbaniya di he ki sochta hu ye sab mai kese chuka paunga...yaha tak ki aapne meri khtir aapne bare me bhi nahi socha...aur nahi kabhi maa-baap bane...kese bhul jau me ye sab...
Chacha ji.... Kya kaha aapne...???? Humne jo bhi kiya humare bete ke liye aur is duniya ki Raksha ke liye kiya he... Qki 1 aap Hi jo vo uski Raksha kar sakte he... Humne kurbaniya di lekin sabki bhalayi ke liye... Acha ab ye sodo aap Jane ki taiyari karo... Hum aaj India aapne ghar ja rahe he...
Mai.....1 baat pusni thi aapse...???
Chacha ji.... Hume pata he....ab hum aapko jo bateye vo dhyan se suniye....
Mai...ji
Chacha ji.... Aap vaha kisi pe bhi viswas nahi karenge chahe vo koi bhi...yaha tak ke hum pe bhi....
Mai....(unki baat kaat kar)ye kya kah rahe he aap...aapno bhi sak...aur aap par sak hum kese kare...jinhone Hume bachane ke liye aapni patni se itne salo se dur rahe...
(Aage mai kus bolta usse pahle chacha ji ne baat kaat kar)
Chacha ji... Pahle aap humari baat suniye...jiski Raksha ka jimma aap pe uske liye pahle bhi bhut ladayiya ho chuki he... Kai baar aapno ne bhi dhoka diya he...isliye ye jaruri he ki aap satark rahe...hum aapko kisi pe sak karne ko nahi kah rahe he.. Hum sirf ye chahte he aap satark rahe... Ye jaruri he...ye jo humla aap pe hua tha...vo isi ki aur ishara kar rahe he ki koi humara aapna he jo usko pana chahta he... Varna humne aapki tasvir kus Hi din pahle sabko dikhayi thi...usse pahle kisiko nahi dikhayi....to fir aapki tasvir aapke dusmano tak kese pahunchi...
Bs hum ye kahna chahte ki aap har waqt satark rahe... Aur ha aapki teem bhi ja rahi he....
Mai....thik he jesa aap chahe....Hume kab niklna he...
Chacha ji.... Hum aaj saam ko niklenge.. Aap taiyari kar lijiye....
Uske baad mai aapne room me aake taiyari karne lagta hu...
Aur udar chacha-chachi baat karne lagte he...
Chachi.... Aapne usko q nahi bataya....????
Chacha ji.... Vo hum abhi nahi bata sakte...
Chachi...lekin waqt kaha he jyada humare pass...
Chacha ji... Vo unko pitaji batayenge.... Aur ha jyada nahi lekin abhi 6 mahine he humare paas....
Chachi....aap jante he...agar vo nahi hua to kya ho sakta he...bhot bada anarth ho jayega....
Chacha ji... Aap chinta mat kijiye... Sab thik hoga...baki bhagvan shiv pe sod dijiye....
Chachi...lekin....
Unki baat katte huye...
Chacha ji... Aappko hum pa bharosha he.?????
Chachi.... Ye kesi baat kar rahe he aap...Hume aap par pura bharosha he....
Chacha ji... To fir chinta mat kijiye.... Smj gayi aap????
Chachi....ji
Chacha ji.....vese 1 baat kahe aapse...(aankho me sararat liye)
Chachi.... (Unki aankho me dekhte huye..)ji
Chacha ji... Aap pahle se jyada khubsurat ho gayi he...
Chachi... Dhat....ye aap kesi baat kar rahe he....
Chacha ji.... Ab isme aesa kya kah diya...hum to aapni bibi ki tarif kar rahe he... Chalo aaj vahi purane din yaad karte he...
Chachi....nahi abhi jay ghar pe he...
Chacha ji.... Ghar pe he lekin humare room me nahi..chinta mat kijiye vo nahi aayega abhi...
Aesa kahkar chacha ji Chachi ke najdik jakar unke aankho me dekhte he aur Chachi bhi unki aankho me dekhne lagti he aur kab dono hoth aapas me mil jate he unhe bhi pata nahi chalta aur vaha pyar ek toofan aata he jinme itne salo ki judayipuri hoti he..
(Note.... Sorry dosto ye sex scene nahi likh raha hu...qki ye kahani me aapko adult nahi milega...agar fir bhi aap log chahenge to mai adult likhunga kisi aur ke scene me...aap log raay jarur de...)
Chalo tab tak chalte he aapne hero ke paas....
Jese Hi mai kamre me to dekha ki Charles mere bed betha hua tha....
Charles.... Kya baat he paresan lag raha he...
Mai....kus nahi bs chacha ji ki bato ke bare me soch raha tha....
Charles.... Jyada mat soch...sab uparvale pe sod de....aur satark rahna jaruri he....
Mai...yaar UN sab logo se itne Saal dur raha hu...lekin pyar bhot karta hu UN sabse....
Charles.... Mene kahana sab bhul ke aapne aapko fresh kar...
Mai....tu mere sath he n?????
Charles.... Ye kisi baat kar raha he...me hamesha tere sath rahunga.... Jab bhi tu muje bulayega me tere paas Aa jaunga...
Mai....hmmmm...
Aese kusder bate karte he meri packing bhi ho jati he...
Aur fir hall me Aa jate he...thodi der me chacha-chachi bhi Aa jate he...
Aaj Chachi ke chahere me barso baad sukun dekh raha tha...
Aapne pyar ke sath rahne ka sukun aapne pyar pane ka sukun...
Aese hum sab Bethe baat karte he ...
Aur saam bhi ho jati he...
Tabhi chacha phone bajta he...
Chacha ji call risiv karte he... Thodi der baat karte he..fir call kat karke ..
Chacha ji.... Chale..humara plane ready he...
Fir hum sab airport ki aur niklte he..30 minutes me hum airport runway pe pahunch jate he... Jaha humara plane ready tha...aur meri teem bhi vaha maujud thi...
Mai sabse gale milta hu fir hum plane me Aa jate he...
Chacha ji bahar aankhe band kar kus bol rahe the... Fir unke hatho se 1 rosni niklti he plane ke Charo aur mandrake gayab ho jati ye mere sivay koi dekh nahi paya tha....
Fir chacha ji bhi aandar Aa jate he...
Mai unke bagal me baith jata hu...
Fir plane take off kar leta he...
Mai chacha ji se pusna chah raha tha ki...
Chacha ji.... Hum jante he..aap kya pusna chahte he... To vo 1 Raksha kavach he...
Ab koi bhi sakti chahe achi ho ya buri koi bhi iska kus nahi bigad sakti...smj gaye....
Mai....ji...
Fir mai vaha se uthkar aapni team ke paas pahunch jata hu...
Unse thodi der baat karta huye kab aank lag jati he pata Hi nahi chalta...
Aur aapni purani yado me kho jata hu...
Flashback.. (Charles special...)
Ek din mai aur Charles Bethe baat kar rahe the...
Charles....yaar ye tere hath me kya nishan he....
Mai.....are vo kus nahi he...(hath pe 1 naag ka cinh tha aur gardan Surya ka nishan tha)
Charles.... Nahi batana to mat bata bs juth mat bol...
Mai....nahi aesi baat nahi he....
Charles..... Dekh Bhai me smj sakta hu...tere gardan me Surya ka nishan he uska mtlb tum suryvanshi ho...iske bare me me janta hu...lekin is nishan ke bare me nahi janta ...us kitab me ye nishan jarur he..
(Note:-Charles jis kitab ki baat kar raha he vo suryvanshi ke itihash ki book he...)
Mai....dekh muje tujpe bharosha isliye bata raha hu....ye 1 rakshak ka cinh he jise nagmani ki Raksha ke liye chuna jata he....
Charles.... Mtlb us kitab me nagmani ke bare me likha tha...mtlb nagmani sachme he....
Mai...ha ..aur bhot se log ise pana chahte he...taki nagmani ki shaktiyao se vo puri duniya me Raj kar sake....
Charles.... Magar vo nagmani he kaha....
Mai....ye to kisiko pata nahi he...nagmani mere janam ke kus sal baad kaha chali gayi koi nahi janta... Lekin vo mahapurnima ke din aapne aap pragat hogi...bs itna Hi me janta hu...
Charles.... Mtlb us tak pahunchne ka yahi 1 rasta he...
Mai....nahi 1 aur rasta bhi he...is duniya alag alag jagah jo 8 stone he agar UN sabko 1 sath milaya jaye to nagmani jaha he vaha rasta vo stone batayenge..
Charles.... Ye tumhe kese pata....
Mai....ye dadaji ne muje bataya tha...aur hum abhi UN sab stone ki Raksha kar rahe he...
Charles.... Hmmm...vese tune jo kaha vo bhi us book me nahi tha...to fir UN logo ko kese pata chala ki nagmani ko is tarah bhi dhundha ja sakta he...
Mai....pura yakin to nahi lekin ye baat 1 aesi kitab me likhe ye sare raaj...vo kitab kaha he koi nahi janta...plz Charles ye baat kisiko mat batana...
Charles.... Chinta mat kar mere dost...me ye bate kisiko nahi bataunga...
Aese kus din hashi-khushi bit gaye pata Hi nahi chala...aur hum duniya UN nayab antics ki Raksha karte the....
(Ab kahani third person ki taraf se likhunga... Sirf yahi part)
Charles kus dino ki chutti lekar aapne ghar gaya..uske ghar me uski maa,Bhai he...aur Charles ki 1 gf thi Katy...
Charles mom....Martha... (Inka koi jyada role nahi he..)
Charles brother... Jack...(iska he lekin isi part me uske baad koi rol nahi he)
Charles girlfriend.... Katy...(iska bhi isi part me rol he uske baad koi nahi rol nahi...)
Aapne ghar jakar pahle aapni mom aur uske Bhai se mila...
Tino beth ke baat kar rahe the...
C mom.....ab kitne din ki chutti lekar aaye ho...
Charles... Mom is baar bhi 10 din ki chutti lekar aaya hu...
C mom....beta aesi naukri to ya bhi mil jayegi kisi bhi company me(Charles 1 agent he ye koi nahi janta...)
Charles... Mom vaha mene contract sign kiya hua he...nahi sod sakta...
C mom...ha bs haar baar tu yahi 1 bahana banata he...
Ye bolkar uthkar chali gayi...
Charles pukrta raha lekin vo unsuna karte huye chali gayi...
Aapne Bhai ki aur dekhkar...
Charles.... Aur jack tumhari job kesi chal rahi he...
Jack...achi he....
Charles.... Koi problem to nahi he...????
Jack....nahi...
Charles.... Achi baat he....
Aese Hi dono thodi der baat karte he... Jack bs sort me jawab de raha tha...
Fir Charles ghar se nikalkar katy se Milne nikal jata he uske ghar ki aur...
Thodi der me katy ke ghar pahuch jata he...
Uski ghar ki bell bajata he....
Thodi Hi der darvaza khulta he.. Lekin jese Hi darvaze khula vese Hi turant band hota dekh Charles aapni tange bich me rakh deta he....
Charles.... Plaz love ...esa mat karo...dekho..
Katy...(uski baat kaat kar)..kaun ho tum..???? Tum niklo yaha se..!!!
Charles..... Plz sorry ...I am very very sorry... Maaf kardo aaina aesa nahi karunga...
Katy....sorry...aap ja sakte he...muje aap se koi baat nahi karni....
Charles... Plz baby maan jao...is baar maaf kardo aaina hamesha tumhe phone karunga.... Plz dekho aaj Hi aaya Hi aur tumse Milne Aa gaya...
Katy...aap jate ho ki nahi...varna muje police ko phone karna padega....
Charles... Aapne honevale pati ko jail me bhejogi...
Baat karte huye vo aandar aa jata he...
Katy....tum...
Katy iske aage kus bolti ki Charles ne katy ko aapni baho me lekar uske hotho ko raspan karne laga...
Thodi der to katy ne aapne aapko sudane ki kosis ki lekin baad me vo bhi uska sath dene lagi....
Aaj ke liye itna Hi...
(Dosto agar aap chahenge to me sex scene aad karunga...koi muje batayega ki photo kese edit karte he update me...)
Recap...
Kya hua tha is chutti me Charles ke sath??????
Kese Charles ki maut hui ya abhi bhi zinda he Charles..??????
In sawalo ke jawab milenge agle update me....
Padhte rahe nagmani....