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Thanx a lot for appreciation... I hope I will deliver everything which is required in this story according characters ..your updates are confusing......as with update 7 you fast forward the story straight to suhagraat (though i expected more, as your built was so great. cause i think the way focused light on naina, should also have done for gabbar. could have happen more in wedding events). But again, it's writer choice, it is just your plot is awesome, i mean you have created outstanding back story that mean to require some great sex stimuli (hardcore).
your dialogue writing is awesome, no doubt about it and your story direction is also great.
i am just worried that with all the gems you have, if you will deliver the story upto the mark, cause as they say "with great power comes great responsibilities".
but as your update 9 goes, it was prompted perfectly, everything was appropriate. update Length was great,
And I want to inform u the update is ready if u r agree to read in english fonts