Bhai sorrywritter,maine aj he padna Suru Kiya aur Sara update padh Liya,apki story bhut ache,Apne story ka platform bhi bhut ache se sajaya hai, characters bhi sab ache hai, overall rating ? percent hai,Lakin aap ek bhut bure writter bhi hai, sorry to say this,agar capicity nahi hai likhne ki toh kyu chale aate ho apna or hamara time barbad karne ke liye,ek din me Premchand nahi ban jaoge,pehele ek story complete karo phir dusra Suru Kiya karo, isme sab khus rahenge.isliye aj se ek story pe dhayan do,and sorry agar mere baat bure Lage ho toh,lakin jo sach tha Wahi likh Raha hu. Kahani fadu lekin koi matlab nahi etani badi kahani chudai nahi to kuch bhi nahi