Writer saab aur nahi to yeh soch lao yo log is story se jude hai unka support kis ko hai 73% vote only priya ko fir v aapko nahi samaj ata log kya cahte hai
Adultery Nakara
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Bhai tumhein priya itni pasand hai to woh baat alag hai ... Or 1 se 1/5 mahi mai update ... 53 update de chuka hun ... Nov 27 ko story start hui thi uss hi se ho 10 update bhi nahi hone chahiye the
.. Writter bussy ho sakta hai yeh manna kitna mushkil hai aapke liye ... Or yash chopra hota to 3 mahine mahine mai ekk update deta... Story bakwas lag rahi hai to bhai iss forum pe or bhi story hai woh padho aap ... Yeh story chodd do
.. Bass yahi kahunga
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Bhai ji me comment ke dauran hi mafi maang liya tha bura lgne ke liye or ek baar fir se maafi chahunga galat word ke liye but aapko agar Vanshika ko divorce hi dilvana tha to shadi wala situation hi nahi Lana tha or agar la rahe ho to usko ek baar apni baat rakhne ka moka bhi dena chahiye ki wo kya chahti hai iske alawa aapne Maa ko sex drug addict dikhaya hai or sath hi lagbhag daily sex hona jaruri bataya tha but kahani ke anusar kafi din ho chuke hain maa ke sath sex kiye so abhi tak to usko pagal ho jana chahiye tha lekin iss taraf dhyan hi nahi diya gaya or Annu apne hero se ek nahi 10 kadam aage chal rahi hai hero ki situation confused jaise lag rahi hai ki kya kare kya na kare or bhi kai mudde hain jo dhyan dene yogya hain or rahi baat updates jaldi mangne ki to bhai ji ye to insaan ka swabhav hai ki jitna bhi milta hai kam hi lgta hai kyuki ye dil mange More...... Waiting for next
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Bhai apke har point ko.manta hun
. lekin agar aisehi har mudde ko jaldi hi solve kar diya to story jaldi khatam ho jayegi .. Or real life mai bhi itni jaldi problem solve nahi hoti ... Baat karein vanshika ki to uss time situation ke hisab se shadi hui thi hero ko koi pyaar nahi tha usse .. Kewal ekk baar dekha tha to pasand aa gai thi ... Abb vanshika kissi orse pyaar karti hai yeh to jatin bhi nahi janta tha na
.. Dusri baat maa ki .. To woh sex addict hai .. Lekin sath mai woh jatin ki maa bhi hai .. Jab usse nahi malum tha ki jatin uska beta hai .. Tab sunai khulla sex kiya tha .. Lekin jab patta challa to usne manna kiya but jatin nai khud se kiya kyunki uss time uski condition waisi thi ... Abhi dubara haveli aaye maa ko 3 din bhi nahi hue hain ... Theek se ... Or jatin nai bola tha maa se ki jab woh bolengi tab hi sex hoga
.. Rahi baat annu ki to woh to bachpan se plan kar rahi hai jatin ko hatane ki ... Lekin har baar fail hui .. Or jatin ko itna deply to pehle patta bhi nahi tha usse bass yeh lagta tha ki annu usse nafrat karti hai .. Lekin iss had tak karti hai yeh usse abb patta chala hai ... Annu aaage hai kyunki jatin nai usse ignore kiya ...
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Anu ka jatin se nafrat karna yeh to abhi tak patta hi nahi hai kyun hai ... Koi behen apne hi bhai se itni nafrat kyun karegi .. Yeh bhi to ekk fact hai ...
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Agar reader yahi chahenge hai to theek hai agle 15- 20 update mai har cheez clear karke story end kar deta hun mai ... Kyunki jo mai likhna chahta hun woh to ho nahi paa raha ..
Paglo ki vato ko serious mat lo bhai tumhe jo accha Lage vo likho bass ap I abhi tak kd naresition se ye samjh aya hai ki Priya se jyada kisi bhi female character me dum nahi jatin ko handle karne ka