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Glad to see u back prince. Hope to see panjabi section flourish again. All the Best for thread
Thank you so much zaspreet brother. Thank you again for always supporting me.
Erotica Navi Viahi Naar
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Thank you so much zaspreet brother. Thank you again for always supporting me.
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Awesome start prince brother . The story looks promising and entertaining. Btw thanks for coming back.
Thank you dost for always appreciating and loving me. You are great motivator for me.
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Well done for the first update. Your skills are really amazing. I seldom read stories here but your story is looking exceptional. The newly wed wife is struck in a strange situation where her husband asks her to do some sexual acts which seem little odd for her. But she still do it for him . Lot of questions pop up in her mind regarding these situations.
The way you create environment and atmosphere with right characterisation. Hats off to you man.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for such a lovely and wonderful review of my story and skills. Love you so much for carefully reading my story and pointing out the colors.
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NAVI VIAHI NAAR (PART-2)
Main nakli jeha hassa hassya par mainu pata nahi kyun eh gallan atpatian lagg rahian c. Mainu eh samaj nahi aayundi c kaun husband chahunda ki usdi wife nu koi galat nigah nal dekhe ? Kon chahuga ki koi usdi wife te line maare? Kaun apni newly wed wife nu dujje hi din tight kapdeya ch cinema dikhaan laike ayunda? Kite main galat bande nal viah tan nahin karva leya? Mainu kuch samaj nahi aa reha c. Sawaal bahut c par jawaab koi v nahi mil reha c.
Khair asi cinema hall pahunch gaye and car park karke andar chale gaye.
" Tu aage chal jaan..ticket counter tak"
Kehke unha mere lakk te hath rakheya te zor nal agge nu halka jeha dhakka mareya.
" Ji kyun? Tusi vi mere barabar challo naa. " Mai vapis piche ghumde hoya jawaab ditta.
" Mai tera hilda hoya lakk dekhna jaan" Is baar unha ne pyaar nal dobara dhakka maarya . " Meri gall nahin mannuge?"
Mera rang tamatar vang laal ho gaya. Mainu samaj nahin aa rahi c ki mere husband ajeha kyun karva rahe mere kolo. Phir mainu lagya shayad inha di vi koi khawashiyan hon . Mai chup chap agge tur payi. Oh holi kadma nal mere piche-piche chal paye.
Tang jeans payi hon karke mera wadda lak tightly andar faseya hoya c. Kadam puttdi tan dono hisse khabbe sajje hunde. Mainu bahut sharam aa rahi c par apne parhone di gall kiven taaldi?
Ticket counter kol pahunch ke main ruk ke piche dekhya tan unha lukven tarike nal meri back te unglian feriyan. Uthe Sade to ilawa 3-4 munde and 1-2 families vi ticket len lyi khadian sn.
"Haye . Koi dekh lauga?"
" Dekh len de jaan. Agle vi swaad le lyuge"
Main sharam nal mooh thalle kar leya. Unha tickets purchase kitiyan te asin cinema hall andar apni seats te aake baith gaye. Andar bahut hanera c. Haje ads chal rahian c and Movie bas shuru hon wali c.
Jithe sadi seat c usde ale dwale sabh seats occupied sn. Ik paase Munde baithe hoye c te dujje passe ik couple . Oh dekhan toh Girlfriend- boyfriend lag rahe c , choti age de dikh rahe c. Mere husband pehla baithe te main unha toh baad. Meri side te couple baitha c. Munde diya bahan bilkul mere nal touch hoian tan mai ikdum parha nu kar lyian.
"Is movie de songs vi bahut sohne hain" main apne parhone da dhyaan todan layi boli kyunki oh mere val dekhi ja rahe c.
" Movie ya songs kehne dekhne? "
Unha da jawaab sun main hairaan hundi boli.
" Asi movie dekhan hi aaye aa?"
" Main tan bas tainu dekhan aaya jaan" kehndeya hoya mere mode te baahn rakh ke mainu apne val khich leya te mere kann ch pyaar nal keha . " Public place ch hanere ch hath feran da swaad hi alag aa jaan"
" Haye rabba. Keho jian gallan kar rahe ho" Mai unha da matlab samaj gayi c. " Sharam nahin aayugi tuhanu?"
" Tu dekhdi jaa bass"
Sunke mere andar halchal mach gayi. Mainu yakeen ho gaya kuch alag jeha hon wala hai . Is kashmaksh ch mainu thand kuch jyada lagni shuru ho gayi te mere shareer kambb peya.
Akhir film shuru hoyi. Bahut log mobile kaddke snapchat/Insta stories banan lagge. Achanak mere nange modde utte oh halki halki ungliyan firaun lagge. Main unha wal hairat di nigah nal vekhya jive jhutthi mutthi da nakhra kardi hovan. Phir oh mere kareeb aaye te kann kol aake fusfusaya " Haye meri jaan de modde kinne gore hain.."
Kehke unha ne apne bull mode nal jorh laye. Uff mere shareer ch current daud gaya. Jeeb de gillepan de ehsaas ne mere garam bhakhde jism ch jive hor agg vada ditti. Phir oh nange hisse utte poori jeeb ferde hoye bole. " Loon vi fikka pai jave tere namkeen jism moohre jaan"
Mere saah tezi nal upar thalle hoye. Apne jism baare aida dian gallan sun mainu kuch ho reha c. Modde toh hunde hoya fir oh meri gardan te pahunch gaye. Kiss te kiss de rahe c. Phir jeeb kaddke poori gardan chattan lagge. Main paagal hon laggi c.
"Jaan…agg di bharthi aa tun…uff"
Mere doven kannan ch unha di aawaz goonj rahi c. Mere shareer vich vi kuch ajeeb jehi halchal honi shuru ho gayi. Poore 2-3 minutes unha ne meri gardan diya doven sides apne thukk nal bhar dittian. Us jagah te gillepan c jiskarke uthe hawa hor v thandi laggan laggi.
Phir unha ne mere face nu dove hathan nal farheya te apne face kol leyandea keha " Lagda asmaan da chann dharti te aa gaya." Kehke merian doven gallan nu baari baari sir chumman lagge.
Movie poore jor shor nal chal rahi c. Par sada bilkul v dhyaan nahin c. Bas movie di aawaz kanna ch pai rahi c. Mere saah hor v tez hunde gaye. Phir unha ne mainu apne val thoda hor ghumaya te fauran mere bullan te apne bull rakh ditte.
Uff. Eh sadi pehli kiss c. Main is layi bilkul v tayaar nahin c. Main darr de maare bull band rakhe . Oh apni jeeb naal mere bullan ch jagah banan di koshish karan lagge. " Jaanu khol na mooh….jeeb naal jeeb laa yaar.."
Eh sunne di der c ki meri jism ch jawalamukhi fatt geya. Mainu doven shaatiyan ch kasavat mehsoos hoi te nippes achanak sakht ho gaye. Meri pishaab wali jagah andron halki gilli hon laggi. Eh sabh hundeya mainu maza tan bahut aaya.
"Khol na jaan…poora khol. Jeeb nal jeeb fasa …"
Oh mere bullan nu apna poora mooh kholke jabardast tarike nal choos rahe c. Jiven mere bull koi stick wali mango icecream hon jinha da mittha rass oh apni jeeb te bullan di pakad nal nichor ke kaddna chah rahe hon.
Mainu bahut maaza aayun lagga. Main v fir holi holi mooh khol ditta te jiven hi kholeya unha ne jeeb andar dhakk ditti jo meri jeeb nal takrayi. Ufff main tan bas us samay de samundar ch dubkiya maaran lagg payi. Mainu koi hosh na reha ki main kithe haan. Koi dekh reha hai ya nahin. Mai tan bas obedient bacche vaang apni jeeb unha de mooh andar paayi rakhi te oh usda saare da saara rass peende rahe. 2 minute ho gaye, phir 2 ton 4 minute , fir 6 minute…fir pata nahin . Asi ik dujje nu chadd nahin rahe c. Dova ne inj apne mooh ikduje nal jode hoye c jive kundian de singg fasse hon.
Mainu hosh v na reha ki main kado main unha nu ghutt je jaffi paa layi. Achanak unha ne mainu thoda upar chakkeya te apna hath mere lakk de chaaro taraf feran lagge. Then hathan nal backside di dove sides nu farhya te bullan nu mere nalo alag kita.
" Haye . Kine vadde chitadd meri jaan de. Love you jaan"
Kehke fir toh mere mooh ch mooh fasa ke jeeb chusni shuru kar ditti. Haye . Jo cheezan sanu band kamre ch karnia chahidian c, oh asi ithe public place ch kar rahe c. Achanak mere man ch khayal aya ki oh mere nal baithe Munde nu mere husband da hath meri back te ghumda saaf dikh reha hona. Main jhat mooh chudayunde keha.
" Nahin. Nahin ruk jao. Oh piche sabh dikhda hona munde nu"
Par mere husband ne jo jawaab ditta oh sun meri ankhan fattan nu aa gayian.
" Oh tan kadon tan tainu jhaak reha. Tainu dekh ke usne v apni gf di chummia lenia shuru kartian c. Hun tan tere vadde vadde chitadd dikha reha usnu main"
Kehnde hoya unha ne mere piche de dono hisseyan nu fir toh hathan ch ghutya. Mera piccha bhara hon karke unha de hattan ch nahi aa reha c.
Mainu samaj nahin aa rahi c ki mere husband kehre khayalan de c? Uven tan je kise di wife nu koi normal v jhaake tan husband maaran tak jande hai. Te mere husband khud apni wife di private things dikha rahe loka nu. Mainu hun thoda ajeeb lag reha c fir toh. Par main darr te sharam de maare bas inna ku bol paayi.
" Mainu sharam aa rahi …plz hatjo…"
" Haye oh tan teri vaddi bund nu yaad kar mutth maaru pakka jaan…usdi gf di vi aiddi vaddi nahin honi.."
"Haye rabba. Keho jehe words use kar rahe ho." Aapne baare gande words sunke mere shareer ch fir toh bhanbar mach gaya. "Acha chalo hun. Baaki ghar jaake. Hun movie dekhde haan"
Meri gal nu ansuna kardeya unha fir toh mere bullan nu mooh ch paa leya. Saari lipstick oh khaa chukke sn.Hun tan lagda c ki bullan da bacheya hoya laal rang v peena chahunde sn. Mere bull chungdeya hoya unha ne hath naal meri jeans thalle karni shuru kar ditti. Kyunki mere bullan te unha fevicol di tarah bull fasate hoye sn. , mai tutte lafza nal hi bol saki.
" Eh ki kar rahe ho ji?"
" Teri bund nu nanga kar reha jaan. Zara us munde nu v pata lagge tun laal kacchi paayi hoyi aa …"
" Haye rabba. Tusi kyun kar rahe ho aida ji?"
"Bahut maaza aayunda mainu jaan. Bahut jyaada…"
Main unha da jawaab sun dhang reh gayi. Is Uttar ne mainu hor bambalbhoose ch paa ditta. Haje main soch hi rahi c ki unha meri jeans di hook khol ditti. Is toh pehla ki main jeans nu fardi unha ne mainu halka jeha chakk jeans thalle khiska ditti.
" Hayee . Hun usnu dikhe hone tere adh nange chitad te vich fasi hoyi laal kacchi ."
To be continued
Main nakli jeha hassa hassya par mainu pata nahi kyun eh gallan atpatian lagg rahian c. Mainu eh samaj nahi aayundi c kaun husband chahunda ki usdi wife nu koi galat nigah nal dekhe ? Kon chahuga ki koi usdi wife te line maare? Kaun apni newly wed wife nu dujje hi din tight kapdeya ch cinema dikhaan laike ayunda? Kite main galat bande nal viah tan nahin karva leya? Mainu kuch samaj nahi aa reha c. Sawaal bahut c par jawaab koi v nahi mil reha c.
Khair asi cinema hall pahunch gaye and car park karke andar chale gaye.
" Tu aage chal jaan..ticket counter tak"
Kehke unha mere lakk te hath rakheya te zor nal agge nu halka jeha dhakka mareya.
" Ji kyun? Tusi vi mere barabar challo naa. " Mai vapis piche ghumde hoya jawaab ditta.
" Mai tera hilda hoya lakk dekhna jaan" Is baar unha ne pyaar nal dobara dhakka maarya . " Meri gall nahin mannuge?"
Mera rang tamatar vang laal ho gaya. Mainu samaj nahin aa rahi c ki mere husband ajeha kyun karva rahe mere kolo. Phir mainu lagya shayad inha di vi koi khawashiyan hon . Mai chup chap agge tur payi. Oh holi kadma nal mere piche-piche chal paye.
Tang jeans payi hon karke mera wadda lak tightly andar faseya hoya c. Kadam puttdi tan dono hisse khabbe sajje hunde. Mainu bahut sharam aa rahi c par apne parhone di gall kiven taaldi?
Ticket counter kol pahunch ke main ruk ke piche dekhya tan unha lukven tarike nal meri back te unglian feriyan. Uthe Sade to ilawa 3-4 munde and 1-2 families vi ticket len lyi khadian sn.
"Haye . Koi dekh lauga?"
" Dekh len de jaan. Agle vi swaad le lyuge"
Main sharam nal mooh thalle kar leya. Unha tickets purchase kitiyan te asin cinema hall andar apni seats te aake baith gaye. Andar bahut hanera c. Haje ads chal rahian c and Movie bas shuru hon wali c.
Jithe sadi seat c usde ale dwale sabh seats occupied sn. Ik paase Munde baithe hoye c te dujje passe ik couple . Oh dekhan toh Girlfriend- boyfriend lag rahe c , choti age de dikh rahe c. Mere husband pehla baithe te main unha toh baad. Meri side te couple baitha c. Munde diya bahan bilkul mere nal touch hoian tan mai ikdum parha nu kar lyian.
"Is movie de songs vi bahut sohne hain" main apne parhone da dhyaan todan layi boli kyunki oh mere val dekhi ja rahe c.
" Movie ya songs kehne dekhne? "
Unha da jawaab sun main hairaan hundi boli.
" Asi movie dekhan hi aaye aa?"
" Main tan bas tainu dekhan aaya jaan" kehndeya hoya mere mode te baahn rakh ke mainu apne val khich leya te mere kann ch pyaar nal keha . " Public place ch hanere ch hath feran da swaad hi alag aa jaan"
" Haye rabba. Keho jian gallan kar rahe ho" Mai unha da matlab samaj gayi c. " Sharam nahin aayugi tuhanu?"
" Tu dekhdi jaa bass"
Sunke mere andar halchal mach gayi. Mainu yakeen ho gaya kuch alag jeha hon wala hai . Is kashmaksh ch mainu thand kuch jyada lagni shuru ho gayi te mere shareer kambb peya.
Akhir film shuru hoyi. Bahut log mobile kaddke snapchat/Insta stories banan lagge. Achanak mere nange modde utte oh halki halki ungliyan firaun lagge. Main unha wal hairat di nigah nal vekhya jive jhutthi mutthi da nakhra kardi hovan. Phir oh mere kareeb aaye te kann kol aake fusfusaya " Haye meri jaan de modde kinne gore hain.."
Kehke unha ne apne bull mode nal jorh laye. Uff mere shareer ch current daud gaya. Jeeb de gillepan de ehsaas ne mere garam bhakhde jism ch jive hor agg vada ditti. Phir oh nange hisse utte poori jeeb ferde hoye bole. " Loon vi fikka pai jave tere namkeen jism moohre jaan"
Mere saah tezi nal upar thalle hoye. Apne jism baare aida dian gallan sun mainu kuch ho reha c. Modde toh hunde hoya fir oh meri gardan te pahunch gaye. Kiss te kiss de rahe c. Phir jeeb kaddke poori gardan chattan lagge. Main paagal hon laggi c.
"Jaan…agg di bharthi aa tun…uff"
Mere doven kannan ch unha di aawaz goonj rahi c. Mere shareer vich vi kuch ajeeb jehi halchal honi shuru ho gayi. Poore 2-3 minutes unha ne meri gardan diya doven sides apne thukk nal bhar dittian. Us jagah te gillepan c jiskarke uthe hawa hor v thandi laggan laggi.
Phir unha ne mere face nu dove hathan nal farheya te apne face kol leyandea keha " Lagda asmaan da chann dharti te aa gaya." Kehke merian doven gallan nu baari baari sir chumman lagge.
Movie poore jor shor nal chal rahi c. Par sada bilkul v dhyaan nahin c. Bas movie di aawaz kanna ch pai rahi c. Mere saah hor v tez hunde gaye. Phir unha ne mainu apne val thoda hor ghumaya te fauran mere bullan te apne bull rakh ditte.
Uff. Eh sadi pehli kiss c. Main is layi bilkul v tayaar nahin c. Main darr de maare bull band rakhe . Oh apni jeeb naal mere bullan ch jagah banan di koshish karan lagge. " Jaanu khol na mooh….jeeb naal jeeb laa yaar.."
Eh sunne di der c ki meri jism ch jawalamukhi fatt geya. Mainu doven shaatiyan ch kasavat mehsoos hoi te nippes achanak sakht ho gaye. Meri pishaab wali jagah andron halki gilli hon laggi. Eh sabh hundeya mainu maza tan bahut aaya.
"Khol na jaan…poora khol. Jeeb nal jeeb fasa …"
Oh mere bullan nu apna poora mooh kholke jabardast tarike nal choos rahe c. Jiven mere bull koi stick wali mango icecream hon jinha da mittha rass oh apni jeeb te bullan di pakad nal nichor ke kaddna chah rahe hon.
Mainu bahut maaza aayun lagga. Main v fir holi holi mooh khol ditta te jiven hi kholeya unha ne jeeb andar dhakk ditti jo meri jeeb nal takrayi. Ufff main tan bas us samay de samundar ch dubkiya maaran lagg payi. Mainu koi hosh na reha ki main kithe haan. Koi dekh reha hai ya nahin. Mai tan bas obedient bacche vaang apni jeeb unha de mooh andar paayi rakhi te oh usda saare da saara rass peende rahe. 2 minute ho gaye, phir 2 ton 4 minute , fir 6 minute…fir pata nahin . Asi ik dujje nu chadd nahin rahe c. Dova ne inj apne mooh ikduje nal jode hoye c jive kundian de singg fasse hon.
Mainu hosh v na reha ki main kado main unha nu ghutt je jaffi paa layi. Achanak unha ne mainu thoda upar chakkeya te apna hath mere lakk de chaaro taraf feran lagge. Then hathan nal backside di dove sides nu farhya te bullan nu mere nalo alag kita.
" Haye . Kine vadde chitadd meri jaan de. Love you jaan"
Kehke fir toh mere mooh ch mooh fasa ke jeeb chusni shuru kar ditti. Haye . Jo cheezan sanu band kamre ch karnia chahidian c, oh asi ithe public place ch kar rahe c. Achanak mere man ch khayal aya ki oh mere nal baithe Munde nu mere husband da hath meri back te ghumda saaf dikh reha hona. Main jhat mooh chudayunde keha.
" Nahin. Nahin ruk jao. Oh piche sabh dikhda hona munde nu"
Par mere husband ne jo jawaab ditta oh sun meri ankhan fattan nu aa gayian.
" Oh tan kadon tan tainu jhaak reha. Tainu dekh ke usne v apni gf di chummia lenia shuru kartian c. Hun tan tere vadde vadde chitadd dikha reha usnu main"
Kehnde hoya unha ne mere piche de dono hisseyan nu fir toh hathan ch ghutya. Mera piccha bhara hon karke unha de hattan ch nahi aa reha c.
Mainu samaj nahin aa rahi c ki mere husband kehre khayalan de c? Uven tan je kise di wife nu koi normal v jhaake tan husband maaran tak jande hai. Te mere husband khud apni wife di private things dikha rahe loka nu. Mainu hun thoda ajeeb lag reha c fir toh. Par main darr te sharam de maare bas inna ku bol paayi.
" Mainu sharam aa rahi …plz hatjo…"
" Haye oh tan teri vaddi bund nu yaad kar mutth maaru pakka jaan…usdi gf di vi aiddi vaddi nahin honi.."
"Haye rabba. Keho jehe words use kar rahe ho." Aapne baare gande words sunke mere shareer ch fir toh bhanbar mach gaya. "Acha chalo hun. Baaki ghar jaake. Hun movie dekhde haan"
Meri gal nu ansuna kardeya unha fir toh mere bullan nu mooh ch paa leya. Saari lipstick oh khaa chukke sn.Hun tan lagda c ki bullan da bacheya hoya laal rang v peena chahunde sn. Mere bull chungdeya hoya unha ne hath naal meri jeans thalle karni shuru kar ditti. Kyunki mere bullan te unha fevicol di tarah bull fasate hoye sn. , mai tutte lafza nal hi bol saki.
" Eh ki kar rahe ho ji?"
" Teri bund nu nanga kar reha jaan. Zara us munde nu v pata lagge tun laal kacchi paayi hoyi aa …"
" Haye rabba. Tusi kyun kar rahe ho aida ji?"
"Bahut maaza aayunda mainu jaan. Bahut jyaada…"
Main unha da jawaab sun dhang reh gayi. Is Uttar ne mainu hor bambalbhoose ch paa ditta. Haje main soch hi rahi c ki unha meri jeans di hook khol ditti. Is toh pehla ki main jeans nu fardi unha ne mainu halka jeha chakk jeans thalle khiska ditti.
" Hayee . Hun usnu dikhe hone tere adh nange chitad te vich fasi hoyi laal kacchi ."
To be continued
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Wow wow wow. 
I am reading this cuckold type concept of story in punjabi for the very first time. The second update is atom bomb.
You are legend for a reason.
Story is super sexy and erotic with little bit of suspense (your signature) Expectations raised for the next update now.
I am reading this cuckold type concept of story in punjabi for the very first time. The second update is atom bomb.
You are legend for a reason.
Story is super sexy and erotic with little bit of suspense (your signature) Expectations raised for the next update now.
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Wakhra concept te wakhra andaaz bahut mzaa aa reha padhke te kahani bilkil reality de nede jaapdi a....khichk ke rakho kmm all the best
Lekhk saab mai tuda fan ho gea. Jo jadu tuc bhekerde o sama bn lende o. Sarote tuadi lekhni ch gwach jnde hn. Dilo fan lekhk saab.