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Ab hum ek achi position main the, char panch din to chot ke wajah se nursing room main hi rahna tha, aur woh safe bhi tha, Jogi aur baki sab bahar jate the, woh bhi ab nazar rahke howe the ki mahual kya hai sab traf, kyu ki humko malum tha ki Mantri ke Saale ki team konsi hai to kaam aasaan hogya tha, ab humko easy laga din katne main bhi, aise hi din nikalte rahe aur ek din woh aya jab mere court main date thi, mera ghav bhi thek hogya tha aur main bilkul normal feel kar raha tha, Papa aur Vineet Bhaiya aaye the, apne ek Wakil friend ke sath, judge sahib 12 baje hi chale gye, humko laga humari case file hi put up nahi howi hai, to Vineet Bhaiya jab reader se mile to usne kha the Judge sahib ne 89 days ki baad ki date dene ko bola hai, woh shyad isliye chale gye kyu ki unko bhi malum tha ki aaj Vineet Bhaiya jor dete unpe, Papa ko bhut sadma laga, mere ko to Sawan ne phele hi bol diya tha, ki asie hi ragdenge tere ko sadak pe, sahi baat thi uski, ab is open legal badmashi hi kahenge aur kya thi yeh, fir hum wapis aagye jail main, Sawan mere ko dekh raha tha, maine us ko kuch nhi bola, woh uth ke mere paas aya, - tareek di kya aap ko bhai? Maine haa main sir hilaya aur baitha raha, - main kehta hu is bhen ke lode judge ko hi khareed liya hai, aur mere ko ek aur baat ka shaq hai bhai, Maine uski aur dekha, - kya ?

Sawan - Bhai, yeh jo apna Jailor hai na, iska transfer bhi karega Mantri, yeh humari taraf hai isliye

Mere ko is angle ka idea hi nahi tha, yeh Jailor bhut important tha humare liye, agar yeh chala gya to humari shamat aajane wali thi pakka, yehi to woh ikka tha jis ke bharose hum game khel rahe the, aur kya tha humare paas, legal system to anti tha, maine nursing attendent se phone leke Nana Ji ko bataya is Jailor ki importance aur kyu yeh yehi rehna chahiye, unhone bole ki CM ne contact number diya hai, main abhi CM Sahib se is ke liya baat karta hu, fir baad main Nana ji ka phone aya ki, CM Sahib ne is baat pe agreed hai, iska transfer nhi hoga, chalo yeh bhi thek tha, kyu ki koi unka Jailor aata to woh sabse pahle humko nursing room se bahar barrack main patakta, ab din nikalte rahe aur mere ko che mahine hogye wahan, ab hum bhi thode open hogye the, lekin humare ko Bihari gut hamesha dara dara lagta tha, main ignore karta raha, woh roz ek nayi kahani leke aate the, ki woh bhayankar planning kar rahe hain, is time sab milke aayenge, fir mere ko lagta tha ki yeh chutiye jyada hi Hindi films ke prabhavit lagte hai, haa woh kar to sakte the bilkul lekin yeh bhi bahut jyada mirch masala laga ke pesh karte the, main bhi haa haa okay okay kar dete tha, aur kya karta, unko bhi na lage ki unki secret baatein main ignore kar raha hu,



ek din Sawan bahar baitha tha to ek bangladeshi, jo kafi bujurg tha, woh aake paas baith gya, - kaise ho Sawan bhai, Sawan chup raha, phele usne apne peeche nazar daali, kyu ki inka yeh style tha, ki ek peeche se aake maarega, - Sawan bhai nazar ho, baat nhi kar rahe aap

Sawan - kya baat karne hai

Bujurg - aadmi to humare mara na

Sawan - galat kaam karne nikla tha to marega hi

Bujurg - maine ladkon ko samjhya hai, woh log bado ki nahi sunte, unko sirf paisa dikhta hai, maine kaha ki yeh galat hai, humari kitab main bhi likha hai ki nirdosh ko nhi marna, nahi to jahannum main jaoge

Sawan - Agar woh nhi mante to aane do, aap hum kya kar sakte hain

Bujurg - agar woh sab ek sath ayenge to aap jhel loge ?

Sawan ne bujurg ko dekha, yeh alag naya locha tha, Bihari gut ki baat bilkul 100 aane sahi thi, Sawan seeda react nhi karna chahata tha, lekin samasya itni badi thi ki hum jhel nhi pate, yehi sach tha, nursing room ke bahar tenaat dono sipahi bhi ek round goli bhi nahi fire kar pate, yeh to hum sab jante the, police walon ki training kitni hoti hai, yeh bhi humko pata tha, woh dono phele bhagte agar humla hota to, yehi sach tha, hum ek jhooti suraksha ke ghere main baithe the, Sawan ne bujurg se fir kaha, - tere ko kya kehna hai

Bujurg ne idhar udhar dekha aur bola - in sab ka leader woh raseed kar ke hai, wohi Mantri ji ke aadmi se touch main hai, Mantri sab ko ek ek lakh dega to hogye 15 lakh, aur saja aur maaf kardega hum sab ki

Sawan - phele to tu yeh samjh le, achi tarah se samjh le, aur tere raseed ko bhi samjha dena, ki kisi ka baap bhi 15 logon ki saja maaf nhi kar sakta, haa 15 lakh jarur de sakta hai, lekin saja maaf kisi halat main nahi hogi, is baat ko pathar ke line maan lo tum, humare ko hi dekh le, hum teeno kitne time se yaha hain, humari maaf howi kya ?

Bujurg - Acha raseed ne mere ko jo aap ko kahne ke liye bheja hai woh to sun lo

Sawan - Kya hai bol

Bujurg - Aap us se mil lo ek baar wohi aap ko baat karna chahata hai

Sawan ko yeh theek laga, - chalo mil leta hu, kab aur kahan milna hai

Bujurg - Mess ke peeche, shyam ko

Sawan - Usko bolna akela aana aur mere sath koi chutiya harkat nahi honi chahiye

Bujurg - aare sawan bhaiya, aap logon se nahi hai uska kuch bhi, aap bhut ache log ho, aap ko kuch karne ki hum soch bhi nahi sakte, yeh keh ke hath jod ke woh chala gya

Sawan wapis nursing room main aya, sab the, do bhihari bhi the, woh koi special khabar leke aye the, ki humla hoga wagera wagera, yeh hamesha yehi karte the,

Hum ne decide kiya ki Sawan wahan jake raseed se milega aur kya kehta hai woh, woh bhi sun lega, lekin amandeep ko isme locha laga, ki kahi raseed ne Sawan ko sirf is liye bulaya hai ki woh baaton main ulja ke rakhe aur peeche se yahan humla hi jaye, dekho is case main humara ek main aadmi to game se bahar hogya na, fir decide kiya ki, hum sab chori chori mess main chup jayenge, uska fayada yeh hoga ki hum jarurat pade to Sawan ko support bhi kar sakte hain, aur hum wahan honge to humla kon karega humpe yahan, yehi plaan sab ko sahi laga, woh dono bihari bhi jid karne lage ki bhaiya hum hi chalenge, hum ne mana kiya, lekin woh nahi mane, bhaiya yehi mauka hai humari wafa dari dekhane ka, chalo un dono ko bhi le liya, aur hum chori chori mess main chupne lage, nursing attendent aur Hariram yehi the, inka koi role nahi tha, yeh sarkari aadmi the, yeh waise bhi koi loche main kyu padte

Hum mess ke phele door ke paas the, Sawan ko bhi bola door ke paas hi rahena, ab jab Sawan wahan pucha to woh bujurg aur paanch aadmi the, Sawan ne kha - tune kha yahan ek hi hoga

Bujurg un main se sabse bade ko dekhne laga

Fir woh aadmi jo raseed tha bola - kyu Sawan Bhai dar lagta hai kya ?

Sawan - Jo apni baat nhi rakhte main unse baat nhi karta, aur ab Sawan janta tha ki inko peth dikhane ka matalab hamla hai, so woh wahi khada raha, Raseed ne aage bad ke ek chota sa phone Sawan ko diya - lo baat kar lo

Sawan - kis se karu main baat ?

Raseed - Mantri Sahib ke Saale se, aur phone Sawan ke hath main rakh diya

Sawan ne phone kan se lagaya woh on tha

Saala - Sawan Bhai main aap se seede baat karna chahata hu, yeh jo hai na bangladeshi, in se kuch nhi hoga, aap paise bolo, kitne chahiye, aap paise leke hat jao beech se, aap bas paise bolo, shooter ho, paise kitne loge?

Sawan ne kaha - Saale sahib aap ne wrong number laga diya hai, hum dhoka nhi dete

Saala - acha koi baat nhi, phone do raseed ko

Sawan ne phone nahi diya, aur apne kaan pe laga ke raha, to Mantri ji ka Saala fir bola - Raseed Hello Raseed, Sawan ne -Haa, kha dheere se

Saala - Haa Raseed jo maine tere ko phele hi bola tha ,ki yeh bhen ka loda nhi manega, tune iska game baja de, ek to kaam hoga na,maar de isko

Sawan ne phone cut kiya aur Raseed ko de diya, aur dheere se mess ke door ke paas peth kar ke khada hogya, aur apni aedi se door to touch kiya,

Tab tak Mantri ke Saale ne wapis phone lagaya, aur Raseed phone pe dhyan se sun raha tha, jab uski puri baat hogyi, to usne phone ko jeb main dala aur Sawan ki taraf hath main chaku leke bada, Sawan ne jhat se mess ka door khola apni aedi se, jo phele hi lagi thi, aur hum sab uske samne the, Raseed ruk gya - dhoka

Sawan - Ja be chutiye, dhoka to tum dete ho, tere is bhen ke lode ne bola tha, ki tu akela aayega to yeh baki kya apni maa chudwane aaye hain, aur to bosdike buddhe, tu konsa kam dhokebaaz hai, tum sab planning karke aaye the na, ki ek ek karke sab ko khatam kardo, madarchodon, sun liya maine jo Mantri ke Saale ne tere ko bola tha, ab aaja aur lad le, buddhe ne bhi hath main chaku liya, hum ne kitchen se chaku aur palte the hi, mukabala barabar ka tha, bas ek fark tha, humare paas teen shooter the, aur teeno kalakar, hum khud pade unpe, Sawan alag hi Raseed ke peeche pad gya, - Deepu yeh bhen ka loda hi jad hai, isko nhi chodna, aur hum bakiyon ko darate howe Raseed pe concentrate kar rahe the, amandeep ke hath main palta tha teen foot lamba, mote lohe ka, aur Jogi ke paas bada chaku tha, size ka fark yahan bhi padta hai, unke paas chaku the, par chote the, unko humare paas aana padta, aur amandeep ne to fat se bujurg ko phele lapeta, diya palta ghuma ke kan patti pe, woh gir jaise truck se bori girti hai, dhadaam se, reverse swing main dusre ke sir ke contact Kiya, woh neeche gir, amandeep ne hi ground clear karne ki position le li thi aaj, usko koi chu nahi sakta tha, woh palte ko ghuma ghuma ke kabhi tango pe, kabhi pet pe, kabhi sir pe, usko to bas contact chaihye tha, Raseed ne dekha ki yeh galat hogya, woh meri aur lapka, aur dham se uski peth pe laga amandeep ka palta, Raseed uncle hogye flat, jab woh turant utne laga to dhaam, fir se peth pe laga palta, aawaz aisi thi jaise uski hadiyan toot gyi honge, Raseed fir jameen pe dher hogya, ab Sawan ne us se chaku liya aur do laat di uske sir pe, - tu bhen ke lode mere ko maarne chala tha, bosdike, aur de laat pe laat, tab tak maidan main baki khiladi peeche hat gye, aur dekh rahe the, Sawan - ab ladna hai to lado, bhen ke lodon, nahi to jao wapis, buddha aur ek aur jo pada tha, usko unhone uthaya aur chale gaye, Raseed jameen pe pad kah raha tha, uski peth ki chot sahi main spinal injury lag rahi thi, woh uth bhi nahi pa raha tha, uski taange bhi ajeeb position main thi, woh unko hila bhi nahi pa raha tha, sab uske charon aur khade the, woh humare samne neeche pada tha, agar aaj hum ne plan nhi kiya hota, to hum pade hote neeche, khair, Sawan ne us ko dekha, - Spinal injury hai, yeh jindagi bhar ke liye apahiz hi rahega, Raseed bhi sun raha tha, lekin pain main woh kya karta, bas dard main karaha raha tha, fir Jogi bola - Bhai aise kyu chodna aajad kardo isko, aur meri aur dekha, Sawan - Haa baat to sahi hain, yehi hai main aadmi, baki sab to fatu hain, kardo aajad isko, Raseed dard main chilaya - nahi, mujhe chod do, main abhi kabhi kuch nhi karunga, mere pao nahi hil rahe, daya karo mere pe,

Sawan - Chup bhen ke lode, ek to hum tere jindgi ka faisala kar rahe hain aur tu beech main apni maa chudwa raha hai, chup


Fir sab ne ek dusre ko dekha, phele Jogi ne haa main gardan hilaye, fir amandeep ne, dono bihari bhi josh main gardan hilane lage, maine Sawan ko dekha, aur hath aage kiya, usne jo chaku Raseed se liya tha wohi mere ko diya, main neeche howa, ek ghutna jameen pe teka aur Raseed ka sir apni god main liya, amandeep bahut ghor se humare bilkul paas aake dekh raha tha, Chaku fir chala, aur khoon ki dhaar seede amandeep ke muh pe gayi, - oye bhenchod, woh chilayke peeche hata, main hath pura chala ke lash ko neeche jameen pe rakh diya, aur khoon tapakta howa chaku Sawan ko de diya, dono bihari kuch nhi bole, na hile, bas khade rahe,
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Ab hum ek achi position main the, char panch din to chot ke wajah se nursing room main hi rahna tha, aur woh safe bhi tha, Jogi aur baki sab bahar jate the, woh bhi ab nazar rahke howe the ki mahual kya hai sab traf, kyu ki humko malum tha ki Mantri ke Saale ki team konsi hai to kaam aasaan hogya tha, ab humko easy laga din katne main bhi, aise hi din nikalte rahe aur ek din woh aya jab mere court main date thi, mera ghav bhi thek hogya tha aur main bilkul normal feel kar raha tha, Papa aur Vineet Bhaiya aaye the, apne ek Wakil friend ke sath, judge sahib 12 baje hi chale gye, humko laga humari case file hi put up nahi howi hai, to Vineet Bhaiya jab reader se mile to usne kha the Judge sahib ne 89 days ki baad ki date dene ko bola hai, woh shyad isliye chale gye kyu ki unko bhi malum tha ki aaj Vineet Bhaiya jor dete unpe, Papa ko bhut sadma laga, mere ko to Sawan ne phele hi bol diya tha, ki asie hi ragdenge tere ko sadak pe, sahi baat thi uski, ab is open legal badmashi hi kahenge aur kya thi yeh, fir hum wapis aagye jail main, Sawan mere ko dekh raha tha, maine us ko kuch nhi bola, woh uth ke mere paas aya, - tareek di kya aap ko bhai? Maine haa main sir hilaya aur baitha raha, - main kehta hu is bhen ke lode judge ko hi khareed liya hai, aur mere ko ek aur baat ka shaq hai bhai, Maine uski aur dekha, - kya ?

Sawan - Bhai, yeh jo apna Jailor hai na, iska transfer bhi karega Mantri, yeh humari taraf hai isliye

Mere ko is angle ka idea hi nahi tha, yeh Jailor bhut important tha humare liye, agar yeh chala gya to humari shamat aajane wali thi pakka, yehi to woh ikka tha jis ke bharose hum game khel rahe the, aur kya tha humare paas, legal system to anti tha, maine nursing attendent se phone leke Nana Ji ko bataya is Jailor ki importance aur kyu yeh yehi rehna chahiye, unhone bole ki CM ne contact number diya hai, main abhi CM Sahib se is ke liya baat karta hu, fir baad main Nana ji ka phone aya ki, CM Sahib ne is baat pe agreed hai, iska transfer nhi hoga, chalo yeh bhi thek tha, kyu ki koi unka Jailor aata to woh sabse pahle humko nursing room se bahar barrack main patakta, ab din nikalte rahe aur mere ko che mahine hogye wahan, ab hum bhi thode open hogye the, lekin humare ko Bihari gut hamesha dara dara lagta tha, main ignore karta raha, woh roz ek nayi kahani leke aate the, ki woh bhayankar planning kar rahe hain, is time sab milke aayenge, fir mere ko lagta tha ki yeh chutiye jyada hi Hindi films ke prabhavit lagte hai, haa woh kar to sakte the bilkul lekin yeh bhi bahut jyada mirch masala laga ke pesh karte the, main bhi haa haa okay okay kar dete tha, aur kya karta, unko bhi na lage ki unki secret baatein main ignore kar raha hu,



ek din Sawan bahar baitha tha to ek bangladeshi, jo kafi bujurg tha, woh aake paas baith gya, - kaise ho Sawan bhai, Sawan chup raha, phele usne apne peeche nazar daali, kyu ki inka yeh style tha, ki ek peeche se aake maarega, - Sawan bhai nazar ho, baat nhi kar rahe aap

Sawan - kya baat karne hai

Bujurg - aadmi to humare mara na

Sawan - galat kaam karne nikla tha to marega hi

Bujurg - maine ladkon ko samjhya hai, woh log bado ki nahi sunte, unko sirf paisa dikhta hai, maine kaha ki yeh galat hai, humari kitab main bhi likha hai ki nirdosh ko nhi marna, nahi to jahannum main jaoge

Sawan - Agar woh nhi mante to aane do, aap hum kya kar sakte hain

Bujurg - agar woh sab ek sath ayenge to aap jhel loge ?

Sawan ne bujurg ko dekha, yeh alag naya locha tha, Bihari gut ki baat bilkul 100 aane sahi thi, Sawan seeda react nhi karna chahata tha, lekin samasya itni badi thi ki hum jhel nhi pate, yehi sach tha, nursing room ke bahar tenaat dono sipahi bhi ek round goli bhi nahi fire kar pate, yeh to hum sab jante the, police walon ki training kitni hoti hai, yeh bhi humko pata tha, woh dono phele bhagte agar humla hota to, yehi sach tha, hum ek jhooti suraksha ke ghere main baithe the, Sawan ne bujurg se fir kaha, - tere ko kya kehna hai

Bujurg ne idhar udhar dekha aur bola - in sab ka leader woh raseed kar ke hai, wohi Mantri ji ke aadmi se touch main hai, Mantri sab ko ek ek lakh dega to hogye 15 lakh, aur saja aur maaf kardega hum sab ki

Sawan - phele to tu yeh samjh le, achi tarah se samjh le, aur tere raseed ko bhi samjha dena, ki kisi ka baap bhi 15 logon ki saja maaf nhi kar sakta, haa 15 lakh jarur de sakta hai, lekin saja maaf kisi halat main nahi hogi, is baat ko pathar ke line maan lo tum, humare ko hi dekh le, hum teeno kitne time se yaha hain, humari maaf howi kya ?

Bujurg - Acha raseed ne mere ko jo aap ko kahne ke liye bheja hai woh to sun lo

Sawan - Kya hai bol

Bujurg - Aap us se mil lo ek baar wohi aap ko baat karna chahata hai

Sawan ko yeh theek laga, - chalo mil leta hu, kab aur kahan milna hai

Bujurg - Mess ke peeche, shyam ko

Sawan - Usko bolna akela aana aur mere sath koi chutiya harkat nahi honi chahiye

Bujurg - aare sawan bhaiya, aap logon se nahi hai uska kuch bhi, aap bhut ache log ho, aap ko kuch karne ki hum soch bhi nahi sakte, yeh keh ke hath jod ke woh chala gya

Sawan wapis nursing room main aya, sab the, do bhihari bhi the, woh koi special khabar leke aye the, ki humla hoga wagera wagera, yeh hamesha yehi karte the,

Hum ne decide kiya ki Sawan wahan jake raseed se milega aur kya kehta hai woh, woh bhi sun lega, lekin amandeep ko isme locha laga, ki kahi raseed ne Sawan ko sirf is liye bulaya hai ki woh baaton main ulja ke rakhe aur peeche se yahan humla hi jaye, dekho is case main humara ek main aadmi to game se bahar hogya na, fir decide kiya ki, hum sab chori chori mess main chup jayenge, uska fayada yeh hoga ki hum jarurat pade to Sawan ko support bhi kar sakte hain, aur hum wahan honge to humla kon karega humpe yahan, yehi plaan sab ko sahi laga, woh dono bihari bhi jid karne lage ki bhaiya hum hi chalenge, hum ne mana kiya, lekin woh nahi mane, bhaiya yehi mauka hai humari wafa dari dekhane ka, chalo un dono ko bhi le liya, aur hum chori chori mess main chupne lage, nursing attendent aur Hariram yehi the, inka koi role nahi tha, yeh sarkari aadmi the, yeh waise bhi koi loche main kyu padte

Hum mess ke phele door ke paas the, Sawan ko bhi bola door ke paas hi rahena, ab jab Sawan wahan pucha to woh bujurg aur paanch aadmi the, Sawan ne kha - tune kha yahan ek hi hoga

Bujurg un main se sabse bade ko dekhne laga

Fir woh aadmi jo raseed tha bola - kyu Sawan Bhai dar lagta hai kya ?

Sawan - Jo apni baat nhi rakhte main unse baat nhi karta, aur ab Sawan janta tha ki inko peth dikhane ka matalab hamla hai, so woh wahi khada raha, Raseed ne aage bad ke ek chota sa phone Sawan ko diya - lo baat kar lo

Sawan - kis se karu main baat ?

Raseed - Mantri Sahib ke Saale se, aur phone Sawan ke hath main rakh diya

Sawan ne phone kan se lagaya woh on tha

Saala - Sawan Bhai main aap se seede baat karna chahata hu, yeh jo hai na bangladeshi, in se kuch nhi hoga, aap paise bolo, kitne chahiye, aap paise leke hat jao beech se, aap bas paise bolo, shooter ho, paise kitne loge?

Sawan ne kaha - Saale sahib aap ne wrong number laga diya hai, hum dhoka nhi dete

Saala - acha koi baat nhi, phone do raseed ko

Sawan ne phone nahi diya, aur apne kaan pe laga ke raha, to Mantri ji ka Saala fir bola - Raseed Hello Raseed, Sawan ne -Haa, kha dheere se

Saala - Haa Raseed jo maine tere ko phele hi bola tha ,ki yeh bhen ka loda nhi manega, tune iska game baja de, ek to kaam hoga na,maar de isko

Sawan ne phone cut kiya aur Raseed ko de diya, aur dheere se mess ke door ke paas peth kar ke khada hogya, aur apni aedi se door to touch kiya,

Tab tak Mantri ke Saale ne wapis phone lagaya, aur Raseed phone pe dhyan se sun raha tha, jab uski puri baat hogyi, to usne phone ko jeb main dala aur Sawan ki taraf hath main chaku leke bada, Sawan ne jhat se mess ka door khola apni aedi se, jo phele hi lagi thi, aur hum sab uske samne the, Raseed ruk gya - dhoka

Sawan - Ja be chutiye, dhoka to tum dete ho, tere is bhen ke lode ne bola tha, ki tu akela aayega to yeh baki kya apni maa chudwane aaye hain, aur to bosdike buddhe, tu konsa kam dhokebaaz hai, tum sab planning karke aaye the na, ki ek ek karke sab ko khatam kardo, madarchodon, sun liya maine jo Mantri ke Saale ne tere ko bola tha, ab aaja aur lad le, buddhe ne bhi hath main chaku liya, hum ne kitchen se chaku aur palte the hi, mukabala barabar ka tha, bas ek fark tha, humare paas teen shooter the, aur teeno kalakar, hum khud pade unpe, Sawan alag hi Raseed ke peeche pad gya, - Deepu yeh bhen ka loda hi jad hai, isko nhi chodna, aur hum bakiyon ko darate howe Raseed pe concentrate kar rahe the, amandeep ke hath main palta tha teen foot lamba, mote lohe ka, aur Jogi ke paas bada chaku tha, size ka fark yahan bhi padta hai, unke paas chaku the, par chote the, unko humare paas aana padta, aur amandeep ne to fat se bujurg ko phele lapeta, diya palta ghuma ke kan patti pe, woh gir jaise truck se bori girti hai, dhadaam se, reverse swing main dusre ke sir ke contact Kiya, woh neeche gir, amandeep ne hi ground clear karne ki position le li thi aaj, usko koi chu nahi sakta tha, woh palte ko ghuma ghuma ke kabhi tango pe, kabhi pet pe, kabhi sir pe, usko to bas contact chaihye tha, Raseed ne dekha ki yeh galat hogya, woh meri aur lapka, aur dham se uski peth pe laga amandeep ka palta, Raseed uncle hogye flat, jab woh turant utne laga to dhaam, fir se peth pe laga palta, aawaz aisi thi jaise uski hadiyan toot gyi honge, Raseed fir jameen pe dher hogya, ab Sawan ne us se chaku liya aur do laat di uske sir pe, - tu bhen ke lode mere ko maarne chala tha, bosdike, aur de laat pe laat, tab tak maidan main baki khiladi peeche hat gye, aur dekh rahe the, Sawan - ab ladna hai to lado, bhen ke lodon, nahi to jao wapis, buddha aur ek aur jo pada tha, usko unhone uthaya aur chale gaye, Raseed jameen pe pad kah raha tha, uski peth ki chot sahi main spinal injury lag rahi thi, woh uth bhi nahi pa raha tha, uski taange bhi ajeeb position main thi, woh unko hila bhi nahi pa raha tha, sab uske charon aur khade the, woh humare samne neeche pada tha, agar aaj hum ne plan nhi kiya hota, to hum pade hote neeche, khair, Sawan ne us ko dekha, - Spinal injury hai, yeh jindagi bhar ke liye apahiz hi rahega, Raseed bhi sun raha tha, lekin pain main woh kya karta, bas dard main karaha raha tha, fir Jogi bola - Bhai aise kyu chodna aajad kardo isko, aur meri aur dekha, Sawan - Haa baat to sahi hain, yehi hai main aadmi, baki sab to fatu hain, kardo aajad isko, Raseed dard main chilaya - nahi, mujhe chod do, main abhi kabhi kuch nhi karunga, mere pao nahi hil rahe, daya karo mere pe,

Sawan - Chup bhen ke lode, ek to hum tere jindgi ka faisala kar rahe hain aur tu beech main apni maa chudwa raha hai, chup


Fir sab ne ek dusre ko dekha, phele Jogi ne haa main gardan hilaye, fir amandeep ne, dono bihari bhi josh main gardan hilane lage, maine Sawan ko dekha, aur hath aage kiya, usne jo chaku Raseed se liya tha wohi mere ko diya, main neeche howa, ek ghutna jameen pe teka aur Raseed ka sir apni god main liya, amandeep bahut ghor se humare bilkul paas aake dekh raha tha, Chaku fir chala, aur khoon ki dhaar seede amandeep ke muh pe gayi, - oye bhenchod, woh chilayke peeche hata, main hath pura chala ke lash ko neeche jameen pe rakh diya, aur khoon tapakta howa chaku Sawan ko de diya, dono bihari kuch nhi bole, na hile, bas khade rahe,
अरे यार, अहलावत को तो पूरा कसाई बना डाला आपने।

लगता है मंत्री का काम भी तमाम अहलावत जी ही करेंगे
 

jatin thakur

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Sorry brother but not liking your plot of the story. Story was going excellent till the truck accident but now you have directed it to thriller. You should change the story tag. You are making hero as criminal. I was liking the way the innocent hero was seducing chachi and her mother. But it looks like story is going in other direction. Sorry bro but that's how I feel.
 

Gurgaon

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Sorry brother but not liking your plot of the story. Story was going excellent till the truck accident but now you have directed it to thriller. You should change the story tag. You are making hero as criminal. I was liking the way the innocent hero was seducing chachi and her mother. But it looks like story is going in other direction. Sorry bro but that's how I feel.
Relax bro, this is a phase in his life, he will be back to fucking, and you will be the first one to cheer his return, I hope
He is not becoming a criminal, its just aggressive phase of his life, he is no more the suppressed young boy now, let him bloom
I promise you he will be back !!!
 
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