Fantasy New Life : New journey : New World

[TheMysterious_Ng]

bahut hi awesome update hai...

prem ki new life ki suruaat par bas itna hi kahunga isme ab villain ki bhi entry ki jarurat hai... aur chote chote villain to story me late hi rahana....

keep update

but ek baat samaj nahi aai ki agar chotu prem ke sath rahega to isla ke logo ko dar nahi hoga ki kanhi chotu yani ek bhediya vo bhi bahut hi jyada khataranak aur sabse alag unhe chot na pahucha de. isliye shayad yaha sofia di ko apne magic se use thoda alag hi bana dena chahiye....

baki aapki marji dost..

waiting for next.....

Ab sab hoga Bhai.. aur chotu wali problem bi solve kardi Gai h so don't worry.. is update m Maine isi baat p focus Kia h..

So jarur bataiye kaisa laga ...

Stay along..

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Nice update bro. To school ja raha he apna hero. Dekhte he age kya Dhamal Machata he Prem school me.

Dhamal to hoga hi.. but m little confused Abt school activities..
Ab jyada focus school life p rakhu ya adventures wagrah par.... Well dekhte h Kya banta h..

Thanks n stay Along..

 

[Jaat boy]

Ab sab hoga Bhai.. aur chotu wali problem bi solve kardi Gai h so don't worry.. is update m Maine isi baat p focus Kia h..

So jarur bataiye kaisa laga ...

Stay along..

Waiting for update bhai

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Bro Your story is great. There is excitement in the mind to know what is going to happen in the story. You are writing a very good story and you continue to write like this. Today's update was as good as ever......

Thank u very much Bhai.. really good to hear that ..
Stay along.. new one is coming...

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Bhai bahut hi khubsurat update tha,

Update emotional ke sath start hua or happens ke sath end...

Hmm I tried my best to keep that emotions..

Thanks n stay along..

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Excellent writing bhai... superb update.... keep writing

Thank buddy...
Stay along...

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Awesome update bro...
Waiting for next

Thanks .. stay along..

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Waiting

waiting

Waiting for next update

Bhai waiting..,....

Waiting

Thanks everyone for waiting..

Stay along...

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Waiting for update bhai

Ya bro bs 5 min.. thoda edit krna tha aur replies bi..
Main update post karne s pehle old commmts k reply pehle karta hu Taki fresh update new page p dikhe..

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Good evening frnds..

Sorry to say but aaj bi school ni pahucha paya par ek jaruri kaam Kia h is update m..
I hope sabko ye scene acha laga.. isme kuch cheeze chupi Hui bi h to dekhte h agar koi notice karta h ya ni..


So here is new update...