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Hum is waqt baggi m bhaithe city ghumne ja rahe the . Main aur chotu to kafi excited the city dekhne k liye kyuKi hum dono k liye ye pehli baar tha ..


Wahi baggi m mere samne Bhai aur di bhaithe the aur apas m baat karte hue ja rahe the. Waise to dono hamesa kisi na kisi baat p behas karte rehte the par is waqt dono bade Shanti s baat Kar rahe the .. well main to Bahar k nazare dekhne m vyast tha isliye Maine bi unse kuch Ni kaha..




Now little more Abt Isla …

Isla waise bi bahut khoobsurat desh hai aur yahan nature ko kafi samman dia jata hai. Haa kuch anti-social (असामाजिक तत्व ) element jarur hai Jo apne fayde k liye kuch na kuch karte rehte the par phir bi ye Isla m har jagah Ni hota tha..


Independent hone k baad Isla m ab 2 capital thi. Ek to North m Jo Asiana country s karib thi aur dusri capital ko South Isla m banaya Gaya tha. Isla ka South part 3 taraf s samandar s ghira hua tha - as hamara IND) .

Hum is waqt South Isla m hi rehne aaye the kyuki Isla School bi yahi tha capital city m.

Capital city kafi khoobsurat aur develop thi. Aur saaf safai k sath sath Prakriti sudarta bi kafi thi capital city k aaspaas





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Ab hum capital city k karib pahuchne wale the to Maine socha ki Bhai aur di ko Bata deta hu par jaise hi Maine apni nazar unki taraf ghumai to main thoda shock hogaya..


Is waqt Bhai aur di ek dusre k kafi Karib bhaithe the aur dono ek dusre ka hath pakde hue the. Waise to hamesa Sofia di ki naak p gussa rehta tha jab bi wo Kurt Bhai k aaspaas hoti thi par aaj unke gaal gulabi hue pade the jaise sharam ki wajah s ho … wahi Bhai ka bi kuch haal di k jaisa tha. Wo bi koi mauka Ni chodte the par is waqt wo bi dii ka hath pakde bade pyar s unhe nihaar rahe the.


Mujhe is baat s problem ni thi ki Bhai aur dii agar ek dusre ko pasand karte ho kyuki ye baat to main bi thoda samajhta tha par dono mere samne aisa karenge is baat s shocked tha..


Mera Mann to ni tha ki main unke is pyare moments ko kharab karu par ab City pahuchne hi wale the isliye.. Maine thoda khasne ka bahana Kia Par Meri awaaz to dono ko jaise sunai hi ni di to Maine dobara thoda jor a khasaa tab Jake dono ko thoda hosh aaya aur dono n jhatke s apne hath chuda lie aur idhar udhare dekhne lage.. waise is waqt dono k chehre dekhne layak the jaise unki chori pakdi gai ho par dono mujhse bade hi isliye Maine taang kheechna sahi Ni samjja aur bola -


Me- Bhai...dii.. dekhiye shayad hum city pahuchne wale h..

Kurt ( khud ko sambhalte hue ) ha ..haa Prem bs aa hi gae hai.….


Me- hmmm.. uske baad main wapas anjan bankar Bahar dekhne laga Taki dono ko sharminda na hona pade ..


Kuch der baad hum city aagae.. Bhai n baggi rukwa di aur hum teeno baggi s utar gae. Is waqt hum city k market ki shururat m the ..


City market kafi ache aur proper order s bana hua tha . Sadak bi kafi badi badi thi isliye bheed bhad Wala scene Ni tha aur log araam s ghum rahe the..


Main to pehle yahan k logo ko hi dekhne m busy hogaya . Alag alag tarah k insan the , unke dresses bi alag alag tarah k the. Mujhe insan k sath sath kuch Demi-Humans bi dikhe Jo mostly Insano jaise hi dikh rahe the bs kisi ki pooch hoti to kisi k kaan bade hote the ( etc. means aur bi alag alag tarah k the )



Main Chotu k sath araam s idhar udhar dekhte hue chal rahaa tha wahi mere just aage Bhai aur di the . Kuch der market dekhne k baad hum ek restaurant jaisi jagah p ruk gae Jahan hamne kuch khaya. Yahan ki dish bi kafi alag aur tasty thi..


Uske baad kuch der hum wahi bhaithe rahe aur main aate jate logo ko dekhta Raha , kuch log to mujhe aur chotu ko bi dekhte hue jaa rahe the aur aise dekh rahe the jaise hum dono alag ho par koi ruka ya bola ni.. . Shayad Bhai aur dii ki wajah s kyuki wo dono proper dress m the wahi main bilkul normal kapdo m tha...



Itne der m Maine jitne bi apne jaise mtlb Insano ko dekha to Maine ek baat notice Kari ki wo log kuch jyada hi Gore the ya brown /black par unke hairs colourful the like light brown, golden, white , aur kuch ladies k to pink , blue , green is tarah s the .. ( like in cartoons ) Maine jab Sofia di s is baare m Pucha to unhone bataya ki ye to yaha normal h ... inme s kch log wo honge Jo duniya k alag alag hisso s yahan aake rehne lage honge ya phir Isla ghumne aaye honge ..


((( Isla sirf school ki wajah s Ni balki ek acha tourist place bi tha specially South Isla kyuki yahan samundar aur Beaches the )))


Ab Maine to sirf kuch logo ko hi dekha tha abtk jindgi m jinme Kurt Bhai aur master Darwin dono k brown hairs the aur Uncle August n Sofia dii k white Jo ki mere liye normal baat thi wahi MAA baba k hamesa s thode golden aur white the Jo shayad unki age ki wajah s the .. par main..


Filahal to main hi alag lag Raha tha kyuki main to mostly same waisa tha jaise pichle jindgi m mtlb thoda gora + sanwala aur mere hairs bi bilkul black bs agar kuch change tha to wo thi Meri body shape n appearance Jo ki bachpan s hi mujhe jo training wagrah di gai uska natija thi …


Kher , Maine bi iske bare m jyada Ni socha . Ab sirf hairs colour k liye kyu dimag chalaya jae par ha abtk Maine kisi k bi total black hairs Ni dekhe the …



Uske baad hum phir s market ghumne lage . city m aaye hue ab kafi samay hogaya tha . Phir Maine bhai s school k bare m pucha ki wo kaha aur kis taraf h to Bhai n school Jane ka decide Kia Aur hum log wapas baggi m bhaith gae aur school ki taraf Jane lage..



School market area s kafi Durr tha shayad bheed bhad wali jagah ki wajah s school ko capital city m hi thoda alag banaya Gaya tha..



(( NOW … Isla capital city ko main 4 parts m divide Kar Raha hu North , East , West , South. Sirf City ko divide Kia h na ki pure Isla ko..


North Part:- King Palace and other Senior officials residence + offices..

West Part :- ye residential area hai logo k rehne ka . Ye part Baki parts s kafi bada tha sath m Hotels wagrah bi yahi hai..

East Part:- ISLa school ka hissa . Ye area school k liye reserved tha sirf..

South Part: - Market ( Jahan ghumne gae the )

Sare parts proper tarike s divided the Jiski wajah s Capital City aur bi achi dikhti thi....

Aur jis jagah Prem n family rehne aayi h wo h South East Part Jo ki main city s Bahar Wala hissa h )))



Hum kuch der m hi school ki taraf aagae yani East Part of city k. Durr s hi school dekha ja sakta tha kyuki school kafi bada tha. School k aaspaas diware bani Hui thi shayad security ki wajah s aur ek bada gate tha . Hum us gate s andar gae to main pura shocked Raha Gaya..


School kafi bada to tha hi sath m kafi Sundar bi tha . Bilkul jaise koi Dreamland ho . School Buildings kafi alag tarike ki thi jaise koi chothe chothe palaces ho , Charo taraf hariyali aur Sundar gardens the ... sath m bade bade grounds bi .. school kafi bade area m faila hua tha aur bilkul east side Jane p ek chotha sa jungle aur phir samandar padta tha…



Hum is waqt entrance s andar aa chuke the aur dono log mujhe school k bare m batate ja rahe the. School k entrance k samne ek bada garden tha ar uske aage ek badi building thi..

Ye school ki administrative (प्रशासनिक) building thi Jahan sare official kaam Hote the school k . Sath m is building m hi Principal / Headmaster ka office tha aur staff office bi par filahal hum wahan Ni Jane wale the..


in dino school ki chutti thi isliye koi students wagrah Ni mile . Ab 2 din baad new admission hone k baad new term shuru hone Wala tha isliye school m bs wahan ki dekhbhal karne wale the aur kuch jaruri log...

Bhai n phir mujhe school ghumaya aur yaha k system k bare m bataya. Yahan classes ko 3 hisso m divide Kia Gaya thA..


    • Junior classes
    • Mid-term classes
    • Senior classes

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    • Junior school m 5 classes thi 1A , 1B , 1C, 1D, 1E
yahan bacho ko basics knowledge di jati thi jaise padhna likhna wagrah aur phir kuch subjects ki basics knowledge….






    • Mid-term classes m bacho ko 2 parts m divide kardia jata tha. MAGICIANS and WARRIORS
MAGICIANS students wo hote the Jo magic m interested the aur Jinme atleast 1 elemental powers active ho aur Jo magic use bi Kar sakte ho. In students ko magics k sare basics knowledge dijati thi aur unko padhaya aur sikhaya jata tha .


WARRIORS students wo the jinhe yudh kala m interest h aur Jo army wagrah m Jana chahte the.. inhe yudh kala , yudh nitiyo k sath alag alag arts k bare m padhaya jata tha .


But midterm m sirf padhai hoti thi aur thoda sikhaya bi jata tha .. par indono k alawa kuch other subjects bi padhaye jate the jaise History , geography , economics , politics .. ye other subjects bi jyada heavy Ni the bs sirf isliye Taki bacho ko apne desh k bare m sab pata ho .. In classes m MAGICIAN aur WARRIORS dono students bi sath m hote the kyuki ye sabke liye thi..

Midterm m 4 classes thi . 2A , 2B , 2C , 2D




    • Last m Senior classes.. in classes m aake students already apna carrier decide kr lete the isliye ya to wo proper MAGICIANs banne ki training lete the ya phir WARRIORS ki ..
ISLA School m sirf MAGICIANs aur WARRIORs ki training hoti thi isliye sirf ye 2 tarah k students hi Senior classes m rehte the Baki sab chale Jate the.. senior classes advance classes hoti thi aur yahan practically sab karaya jata tha sath m students ko adventures p bi bheja jata tha practical experience k liye …..


Senior classes 3 Saal ki hoti thi 3A , 3B ,3C .. aur uske sath hi school khathm hojata tha..



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Pura system Janne k baad main thoda confuse hogaya ki ab main kisme admission lu kyuki main to already kitna kuch janta tha. To Maine Bhai s puchne ka socha..


Me- Bhai , apne itna kuch Bata Kar to mujhe confuse kardia h..

Kurt - Kya chote isme confuse hone jaisa Kya h..?


Me- Bhai confusion ye h ki ab main konsi class m admission lu kyuki jaisa apne bataya h us hisab s to mujhe ya to Mid-term m hona chaiye ya usse upar..

( Magics k bare m prem n apne baba s sikha tha , other subjects k bare m apni MAA s , aur warrior ki Training Master Darwin s )


Kurt - ohhh haaa. Maine to is baat p dhayn hi ni dia .. tumne to already magics aur warrior training le rakhi h Master Raj aur Uncle Darwin s…

Hamari baat sunkar Sofia di bi soch m pad gayi phir..


Sofia Di- ye to sach m problem h… ( sochte hue )...... Ek kaam karte h ..main na Headmaster s baat karti hu is bare m. Agar possible hua to hum tumhare admission k baad alag s test karwa lenge Jiske pass karne par tum next class m promote hojaoge ..


Me- haa ye acha rahega par Kya ye mumkin hoga ??


Sofia - ye to ab headmaster hi bata paenge. Aisa Karo tum dono abhi aaspaas ghumo tb tak main Jake Headmaster s baat karleti hu. Wo shayad abhi yahi honge…


Me- thek h di…


Uske baad di chali gai aur hum dono piche rah gae..



Me- ab hum log kya Kare Bhai....


Kurt - hmm Chalo jabtk Sofia wapas aati h tabtk main tumhe apne warriors class k training ground ko dikhata hu..


Me- thek h Bhai ..ye acha rahega…


Uske baad Bhai mujhe ek taraf leke chale gae..Jahan Bahar hi likha tha WARRIORs classes.


(( Yahan ek aur baat Bata du ki Senior Class m aane k baad MAGICIANS aur WARRIORS students ki classes alag hoti thi. Aur dono k hi alag alag buildings thi .. unke bare m jab story m aaega tab hi details m jaenge filhal k liye bs ghumenge))



Bhai k sath puri WARRIORS class building ghumne k baad hum wapas aane lage administrative building k paas Jahan Sofia di Milne wali thi ..


Yahan waise to koi ni tha siwaye kaam karne wale logo k par jab hum wapas aaye to mujhe 2 baggiya dikhi jisme ek to dekhne s hi kuch alag lag rahi thi. Puri white aur uske ghode ( horses ) bi white. Shyad hamare Jane k bad aayi hogi..



Abhi hum intzar hi Kar rahe the ki Sofia di bi aagai . Wo kafi khush lag rahi thi. Unhone aaake hame bataya ki headmaster maan gae..


Sofia Di- Prem , tumhe permission to mil gai h par tumhe pehle admission Mid-term m Lena hoga. Uske baad tumhare extra test honge aur agar tum unme pass hogae the tum aage ki class m promote hojaoge ..


Me- wow … ye to bahut acha h..Chalo Mera ek chinta to khathm hogai..


Sofia- mtlb...tumhe aur kis baat ki chinta thi..


Mere kuch bolne s pehle hi Bhai n bola..


Kurt - aree Sofia , Prem ye soch k pareshan tha ki kahi usse apne s chote bacho k sath class m na bhaithna pad jae.. hahaha
Bhai ki baat sunkar di bi hasne lagi ...

Me ( rutthe hue) Kya bhai...maine apko mana Kia tha na ...aap bi na hamesa mazak karte rehte h. Aur dekho ye Sofia di bi Haas rahi h mujh par..


Sofia - alle alle mela pyara chota Bhai.. acha hum Ni haste ab khush ..


Uske baad hum aise hi hum baat Kar rahe the ki Maine dekha ki administrative building s kuch log Bahar nikale aur us safeed baggi ki taraf Jane lage… wo sab kisi ko gher k chal rahe the par mujhe wo shaks dikha Ni..



Uske baad jaise hi sab safeed baggi k pass aaye to turant ek aadmi n aage aakar baggi ka darwaza khola to unke beech s koi nikal Kar baggi m chadne laga . Ab Jake mjje wo shaks dikha tha jisse sab gher k chal rahe the..


Maine jaise hi usko dekha to jaise main usme hi kho gaya . Mere Dil ki dhadkan bi achanak s badh gai thi aur najane kyu pehli baar mujhe is tarah ka eshahsh ho Raha tha.

Is waqt Meri nazare bs us shaks par tiki Hui thi Jo us baggi m Chadi thii Jo ki ek Ladki thi. Usko dekh Kar lag Raha tha jaise koi pari ho . Isse Sundar
ladki to shayad is duniya m hi ni hogi ( from Prem point of view and Prem ki duniya h hi kitni badi ) Main to bs usko dekhta hi ja Raha tha aur wo baggi m Chad Kar khidki ki taraf bhaith gai Jahan s ab main usko aur ache s dekh paa raha tha ...


Us ladki k chadne k baad koi aur bi us baggi m chada aur uske paas Jake bhaith Gaya par Mera dhayan to bs usi ladki p tha . Abi m usko dekh hi Raha tha ki achanak kisi baat p wo ladki muskura di aur apne bagal wale shaks s baat karne lagi .. main to uski muskurahat dekh Kar dobara ghayal hogaya… pehle uska Roop aur ab uski pyari si muskaan hayeeeeeeeeeeeeee…


Mere to Kadam hi uske taraf badhne lage the aur shayad main dhere dhere uske karib pahuch bi jata ki achank s mujhe chotu n hosh m laa dia..


Chotu Jo ki pure waqt mere sath ghum Raha tha par jb main us ladki ko dekhne m kho Gaya to main bhul Gaya ki mere piche Bhai aur dii bi h . hame kafi der ho chuki thi isliye dono n ab Ghar Jane ki baat kahi aur unhone mujhe Ghar chalne ka bola aur Bahar baggi ki taraf Jane lage the par maine to jaise kuch suna hi ni tha aur usi jagah khada Raha . Jab bhai aur di aage badh gae to mujhe ruka hua dekh Kar chotu n mujhe bulaya par maine ni suna tab Jake chotu n mujhe jor s bulaya jisse main hosh m aagya..


Maine chotu ko dekha to wo mujhe ghur Raha tha

Me - Kya hua Chotu , aise Kyu ghur rahe ho ( main abi bi jaise khoya hua tha APneaap m )

Chotu- Prem main tumhe kabse bula Raha hu par tum ho ki sun hi ni rahe .. najane Kahan khoye hue ho ....


Me- haaa…..wo main. .. woBass
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Abhi main aage bolta ki Meri nazar wapas baggi ki taraf Chali gai aur main bolte bolte ruk gAya...


Main phir s us ladki ki taraf dekhne laga par tabtk wo ladki us baggi k sath school s Bahar Jane lagi thi aur main usse jaate hue dekhta Raha aur jabtk wo Meri nazaro s ojhal Ni Hui , tabtk Meri bi nazar Ni hatti usss..

Is pure waqt m mere chehre p ek badi pyari si smile thi aur baggi k Jane k baad jb Maine palat k piche dekha to main thoda darr gaya......

Pehle to sirf chotu tha par ab Bhai aur dii dono hi wahan aagaye the aur mujhe yu khudse muskurata hue dekh Kar ghurr rahe the....



Unko is tarah ghurta pakar maine bi normally bola pura anjan bante hue ....

Me- aree kyaa hua.. aap log aise kyu dekh rahe h .. chaliye hame bi ab Ghar chalna chahiye . Kafi der ho chuki h...


Sofia - wo to hum chalenge hi beta. Pehle ye batao tum yahan Kya Kar rahe the….


Me - kuch bi to ni ... Aaap bi na..

Aur main bina unki baat sune whana s turant nikal Gaya baggi ki taraf aur piche teeno mujhe jate hue dekhte rahe... ...


Kurt- kamal h....Hum kabse Ghar Jane ka kah rahe the tab to yahan khada Raha pata Ni kyu aur ab dekho kaise jaldbazi Kar Raha h..


Sofia ( muskurate hue ) ye prem bi na.. huh...Chalo chalte h waise bi kafi late ho chuka h...


Uske baad hum Sab wapas baggi m aagae Jahan Bhai aur dii dono mujhe chedte rahe par main kuch Ni bola aur bahar dekhne laga…..



Ye pehli baar tha jab mere Dil m is tarah ka ehshash jaaga tha. Kuch alag kuch khas.. par Jo bi tha acha tha. Ab bas yahi chahat thi ki uss pari ko dobara dekh pau... Agar wo aaj school aayi thi to uska mtlb h ki shayad wo bi admission lene aayi ho.. Kya pata hum dobara mile...


Yahi sochte hue hum Ghar pahuch has ..aur aaj ka din Mera yuhi nikal Gaya.



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TheMysterious_Ng

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bahut hi jabardast update hai...

ab chotu bhi badal gaya but bhai chotu ka naam bhi badal do kyuki chotu naam vese to sahi hai but kuch aur hi naam hona chahiye .....

ab dekhana ye hai ki isla capital me kya hota hai but sath me knight bhai hai is liye koi badi baat nahi hogi...
Naam badalne s koi change to hoga Ni aur chotu naam bachpan m rakha tha aur jaise Nick name aur pet name hote h waise hi chotu h Jo Prem n bade pyar s rakha tha to yahan wo pyar wali feelings important h na ki naam... I hope u will agree..

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Awesome as always bro

Chlo mera ek point clear ho gya ki chotu ko vapas chota kr ke hi PREM aaram se enjoy kr skega uske sath aur ab ORACLE bhi bta degi ki CHOTU apne real size mai kaise aa skta hai well dono ki power use hui hain toh logically PREM ki permission se CHOTU apne aap ko apne asli roop mai la skta hai but magically anything can happen

new place hai issliye ORB apni power new place se connect kr rha ho probably isliye vo alag tarah ki ray nikli ho

Well dekhte hai city mai kya hota hai

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