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[Vats77]

Superb update

 

[shamik]

Nyc update

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

SUPERB UPDATE BHAI
BUT HERO KA ROLE KUCH BHI NAHI THA IS UPDATE ME
BUT DETAILING FABULOUS
HARRY KA BHOT AHEM ROLE LGTA HE STORY ME
FANTASTIC STORY

KEEP POSTING....

Bhai apne notice Ni Kia but ye teeo scenes ek hi raat k h isliye hero ka kuch Ni aaya .. wo to Soo raha h na..

I hope u understand... Stay along

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

apne heroin aur uske dost ki baatchit mast thi....................waise apne heroin ko aisa kounsa sapna aaya hoga aur 2 saal pehle aisa kya hua hai jo apni heroin ki dost baat kar rahi thi.........apni heroin ne bhi prem ko notice kar liya hai..............harry aur Emma ka relation bhi interesting hai........sabhi states ke prince yaha kya kar rahe honge vo sirf information nikalne ke liye toh nahi aaye honge................lagta hai baki ke countries kuch bada karne ki soch rahi hai tabhi isla mein itne saare apne prince aur bakiyon ko bheja hai.....ab dekhna yeh hai harry aur team kaise in sab ko handle karti hai..............apna hero bhi involve kaise hoga is sab mein yeh bhi dekhne layak hoga.............well let's see what happens next.
PEACE.

Thank h very much... Apne ek sath short m sab Bata dia..
Ha kafi sare cheeze h Jo ab aage aaengi...aur maze bi honge...

Is story m sirf ek love story Ni h aur asabne ab dekh hi Lia hoga .. ek to hamara Prem h aur dusri hamare Emma+ Harry...

So stay along...have fun

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Aree koi baat Ni... Thank u very much..
Stay along....

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
और क्षमा करिएगा मै बड़ा कॉमेंट नही कर पाता बस पढ़ता हूं और आनन्द लेता हूं ।

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Awesome update. Ab tak saare updates padh lie hai .story is fabulous. Hero Ka character kaffi shandar hai . Uski qualities ,the way he talk and present things is good.

Raj aur Nandani ke past Ka jab tak pata ni chalta I guess tab tak unke past me kie hue kaam aur unki actually personality reveal Nahi pata chal paeegi but I believe they both have done really great works in past jiski wajah SE inka character abhi tak mysterious rakha hai.

Ab school me entrance hua hai hero Ka to I believe isme Sab Kuch dekhne ko milega like any teen-ager. So it will be fun .

For the writer --
I really appreciate ki ap apni life SE time Nikal Kar hum sabhi logo ke lie itni mehnat karte hai .so you really deserve applauds and best wishes from my heart . Baaki I will suggest ki Jaise ap apni life me sabhi chije chahte hai ki Jo ho fictionally .ap bas use feel feel Kar ke likte jaiye . We will be here for your support .

Thank you very much for your appreciation and kind words.. really motivating ...
Apko Prem ka character acha laga ye acha laga...

Raj aur Nandini ka bi kuch hi updates m aane Wala h.. aur mysterious kuch jyada bada Ni h bas shuru n suspense banane k liye Kia tha but uske baad mauka Ni Mila reveal karne ka.. but ab aaega jald hi...

Kher main koshish karta rahunga ki story achi chale aage bi.. sty along...

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Awesome update. Ab tak saare updates padh lie hai .story is fabulous. Hero Ka character kaffi shandar hai . Uski qualities ,the way he talk and present things is good.

Raj aur Nandani ke past Ka jab tak pata ni chalta I guess tab tak unke past me kie hue kaam aur unki actually personality reveal Nahi pata chal paeegi but I believe they both have done really great works in past jiski wajah SE inka character abhi tak mysterious rakha hai.

Ab school me entrance hua hai hero Ka to I believe isme Sab Kuch dekhne ko milega like any teen-ager. So it will be fun .

For the writer --
I really appreciate ki ap apni life SE time Nikal Kar hum sabhi logo ke lie itni mehnat karte hai .so you really deserve applauds and best wishes from my heart . Baaki I will suggest ki Jaise ap apni life me sabhi chije chahte hai ki Jo ho fictionally .ap bas use feel feel Kar ke likte jaiye . We will be here for your support .

Thank you very much for your appreciation and kind words.. really motivating ...
Apko Prem ka character acha laga ye acha laga...

Raj aur Nandini ka bi kuch hi updates m aane Wala h.. aur mysterious kuch jyada bada Ni h bas shuru n suspense banane k liye Kia tha but uske baad mauka Ni Mila reveal karne ka.. but ab aaega jald hi...

Kher main koshish karta rahunga ki story achi chale aage bi.. sty along...

 

[Reza]

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

 

[Avir]

Kya baat h ...abtk sare one liner cmmnt h..
Acha Ni laga Kya update ???

Frnds ab kahani ache s start hochuki h .. buildup Sara ho chuka h kahani ka... Ab to maze honge..

Aesi koi baat nhi hai NG bhai
Tumhari story mast jaari but tum bhi janto ho hamse behtar ye update me tumne thoda introduction and other activities dikhayi hai jo zaruri bhi hai story ki line ko samjhne k liye.
or ye update khaas nhi tha aisa nhi keh sakte but tumko pata hai jab tum koi dhamal karte ho to apne aap hi
Comments k level hai hota hai
But hame bhi pata hai har baar ek jesa update nhi de sakte bcoz story ko story k jesa hi chalana padta hai.


So comments dekhke preshan n ho, regarding story.

 

[Super lovely]

Brother update acha tha
No doubt
But story apanay2 point of view say
Or mayra point of view yay hai k aj say yay story un storys may shamil ho gi hai
Jin k hiros ko may sirf ek bayvquf character say zada kuch ni samajta

Qk reader's ki feeling hiro say juri hoti hain na k kisi side character say

Hiro ka character dabang hona chahiay wahi hiro ka character kisi Indian drama k masoom pati ke tarhan hota hai jis ko pata he nahi hota k us k ghr may chal kya raha hai
Q na2 ap praym ko choro hary ko hiro bana doh
Kuch bhe hai na??
Sorry bura lagay the
.
Agar agaay bhe aysa hona hai toh mujay bata dayna may story read he nahi karu ga
Thanks