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Sandy307

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Hello dosto meri NG bhai se baat huyi thi
Unki tabiyat thik nahi hai jis vaja se vo yaha nahi aa pa rahe hai
Tabiyat thik hotey hi vo vapis aye gaye aur story ko continue kare gaye, bs apna sath banaye rakhiyea ga aur bhagwan se dua kijeya ki vo jaldi thik ho jaye
Stay tuned
 

Reza

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Hello dosto meri NG bhai se baat huyi thi
Unki tabiyat thik nahi hai jis vaja se vo yaha nahi aa pa rahe hai
Tabiyat thik hotey hi vo vapis aye gaye aur story ko continue kare gaye, bs apna sath banaye rakhiyea ga aur bhagwan se dua kijeya ki vo jaldi thik ho jaye
Stay tuned
Get well soon vai
 

TheMysterious_Ng

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Hello dosto meri NG bhai se baat huyi thi
Unki tabiyat thik nahi hai jis vaja se vo yaha nahi aa pa rahe hai
Tabiyat thik hotey hi vo vapis aye gaye aur story ko continue kare gaye, bs apna sath banaye rakhiyea ga aur bhagwan se dua kijeya ki vo jaldi thik ho jaye
Stay tuned
Thanks bro for putting msg on my behalf..

As Sandy said..Meri Tabiyat thek ni thi aur Sach kahu to mentally bi main thek ni hu .. last update aap sabne padha hi hoga . Maien usme Kya likha aur kaise likha ye main hi janta hu .. pichle 2 hafto s main aage likhne ki koshish Kar Raha hu par literally aisa feel ho Raha tha ki jaise Meri sari creativity hi kahi gayab hogai ho ekdum s..

Main last update post karne k baad office work m busy hogaya .. baad m phir a thodi Tabiyat kharab hogai but jyada ni. Maine us time likhne ki koshish Kari par mere s ek paragraph bi ni likha gaya..

Aaj main Jo update post Kar Raha hu wo main pichle 4-5 dino s try Kar Raha tha. Aaj Jake khathm hua h Jo Maine Socha tha.. abhi bi isme party Wala part ni likha kyuki usse pehle kuch cheeze clear karne thi Jo ab Kari h..

Maine socha tha ki wapas update k sth hi aaunga par itna time lag jaega ni Socha tha .

Kher , it's time for update but m not sure next kab likh paunga . Jo aaj final update tayyar kia h h wo bi 4-5 din k baad hi kia h.. so agar kuch samajh na aaye to puch sakte h..

Thanks for waiting..
 

TheMysterious_Ng

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Little Introduction….
  • Alimda King
Name : Arthur Philips
Age: 51
Power: Fire & Dark element
Children: Martin & ________


  • Lord Unknown
Name: Lord Vargas ( one of 7 Devil )
Age : unknown
Power : Evil ( negative ) powers + others
Appearance: no face , hamesa black dhuan rehta h face ki jagah but baki kapde black colour k





Is waqt Almida king apne ship par Unknown Lord jiska naam Lord Vargas hai , usse baat Kar rahe the. Lord Vargas k aane par Arthur Martin ko Bahar bhej deta h aur usko pranam karta h ..



Arthur : Lord Vargas ko mera pranam… main abhi apko hi yaad Kar raha tha my Lord ...


Lord Vargas: main janta hu isliye hi to main yahan aaya hu ...kaho Kya baat h ..?



Arthur : my Lord , aap Sach m antaryami h… my Lord aapne jiss Chez ko pane ko kaha tha , wo ab Captial city aa chuki h… pehle to wo cheez Isla school m thi tab pana usko asaan ni tha par ab wo cheez palace m aachuki h to ab usko pana kaise mumkin hoga my Lord ???


Lord V: hahaha ….king Arthur chaho to pura Jahan tumhara ho sakta h to phir wo cheez Kya h.. par har cheez ko pane k liye mehnat bi karni padti h jo shayad tum ab karna ni chahte …
(Serious hote hue ) Maine tumhe aaj tak kitne hi shaktiyo ko pane ka raaj bataya jinhe tumne paya bi par maine tumhara sath isliye ni dia tha ki tum khud ki kabiliyat hi bhul jao aur kamjor kayar ban jao ……. Shayad Maine tumhe aakne m bhul ki hai , tum meri shakitya aur sahayta pane k kabil ni ho Ab….


Arthur ( ghabrate hue ) : ni ni my lord aap aisa na kahe .. mujhe maaf kardijiye , Mera aisa koi mtlb ni tha my Lord ...



Lord V ( bhari awaaz m ) : King Arthur .. agar tum har cheez k liye meri sahyata mangte rahoge to is duniya k mahaan raja banane k tumhare sapne ko tum bhul jao kyuki ye tumse ni hoga..



Arthur ( apne ghutno p bhaithe hue ) : mujhe maaf kardijiye my great Lord .. mujhse galti hogayi . Mujhe apse apne hi kaamo k liye apse madad mangni ni chahiye thi.. kripya karke apna krodh shant kare my Lord..


Lord V ( shant hote hue ) : hmmm King Arthur main tumhe is baar maaf Kar Raha hu par ye tumhari akhiri galti honi chahiye yaad rakhna ..


Arthur ( sir jhukaye hue apne ghutno p hi ) : jii my Lord..


Lord V : hmmm…. ( Apne haath ko aage karta h to uske haath m ek cone shape ka black stone aajta h Jo Lord Vargas ki hatheli k upar Hawa m tha .. )


Lord V: ab jab tum samajh hi gae ho to ye lo.. tumhare karye m ye tumhari madad karega.. ( us conical stone ko Arthur ki taraf karte hue )


Arthur ( apne hath aage karte hue ) : dhanyawaad my Lord. Aap Sach m mahaan h my Lord..


Lord V : King Arthur , tumhare andar is duniya k mahaan raja ( emperor ) banne ki kabiliyat h par uske liye tumhe apne apko majbut banana hoga. Sahi waqt par sahi faisla lekar hi tum aage badh sakte ho . Yaad rahe tumhari manjil k raste m aneko badhaye aa sakti h par agar tumhe apni manjil tak pahuchna h to har badha ko raste s hatana hoga phir chahe uske liye tumhe koi bi balidaan dena pade to wo bi karna hoga samjhe ..


Arthur : Main samajh gaya my Lord.. apne hamesa Mera margdarshan kia h par badle m kabi kuch ni manga .. waise to aap itne shaktishali h aur apke liye kch bhi namumkin ni h par agar kabi apko mujhse kuch chahiye ho to aap sirf ek aadesh dedena my Lord.. apka ye shisye apke liye apni jaan bi haazir krdega my Lord..


Lord V ( haste hue ): hahahaha …. King Arthur tum bs wo karo Jo tum chahte ho . Tumhara guru hone k naate tumhari safalta hi meri gurudakshina hogi . Waise bi mujhe Jo chahiye wo main paa hi leta hu aur jo mujhe chahiye wo tum to Kya koi ni de sakta mujhe isliye tum bs apne karm par dhyan do..


Arthur: ji my Lord.. main kabi apko shikayat ka mauka ni dunga …



Uske baad Dono k beech next plan ko leke thodi aur baat hoti h phir Lord Vargas wahan s gayab ho jata h aur yahan Kign Arthur apne planning k baare m sochne lagta h.. thodi der baad Arthur apne ek sevak s kuch logo ko bulane ka aadesh deta h jiske kuch der bad wo log aajate h aur ek band kamre m unsab ki meeting hone lagti h jahan aage unhe Kya karna h uske bare m charcha hone lagti h..




Wahi Lord Vargas king Arthur s Milne k baad gayab hokar ek aise jagah aata h jahan bs andhera tha aur wahan ka tapmaan bi ek dum thanda tha .. wahan ek shaks pure kaale libas m dhyan m bhaitha hota h ki tabi wahan kaala dhuaan udta hua aata h aur wahan bhaithe hue shaks k samne insani Roop m aajata h Jo ki koi aur ni Lord Vargas hi tha.. Lord Vargas wahan bhaithe hue shaks ko dekh Kar usse pranam karta h



Lord Vargas : is sevak ka pranam swikar kare the Great Lord VARGAS ...


((Sahi suna , samne bhaitha shaks koi aur ni balki asli Lord Vargas tha aur Jo King Arthur s Milne gaya tha asal m wo bs is asli Lord Vargas ki Shakti ka ek roop tha like SHADOW of LORD VARGAS Jo hamesa king Arthur s Milne jata tha aur vaki kaam bi wahi karta tha jabki asli Lord Vargas hamesa isi jagah dhyan m rehta tha aur apni shaktiya badhata rehta tha ...))



Real Lord Vargas ( dhyan s Bahar aate hue ) : bolo Kya samachar lekar aaye ho..


Fake Lord Vargas ( shadow ) : My Lord , apne jaisa aadesh dia tha maine waisa kardia h. Kal ki Mahasabha k dauran King Arthur apna kaam shuru krdega .. mere khayal s wo apni yojana m safal hoga aur us SOUL STONE ko bi paane m safal hojaega ..


Lord Vargas: hahahaha ....…tumko Kya lagta h ki mujhe iss baat s farq padta h ki wo apni yojana m kamyaab hoga ya ni….. ye sab cheeze un insano k liye badi baat hogi par hamare liye ni… hum bs un insano ki madad sirf isliye Kar rahe hai taki wo hamare karye ko asaan Kar sake… hamara maqsad bs in insano par raaj karke is duniya ki sari shaktio ko apne adheen karna h… ye insan to bs hamare is khel m satranj k mohre ki tarah h. Unhe lagta h ki wo sirf ek duniya par raaj karke mahaan ban sakta h par hamare maalik ka maqsad pure brahmand par raaj karna h …

(( Yahan Lord Vargas ka insano s mtlb King Arthur aur unn logo s h jiski wo madad karta h .. king Arthur akela ni h jiski madad Lord Vargas Kar Raha h.. aage bi wo log milenge story m ))



Shadow : main samajh gaya my Lord.. my Lord agar apki agya ho to ek prashn puch sakta hu..?

Lord Vargas: hmm pucho


Shadow : my Lord , agar King Arthur ko kisi tarah ki badha Hui to kya mujhe uski sahayta k liye Jana hoga ???


Lord Vargas: niiii… uski koi jarurat ni h kyuki tumhe Kal usse bi bada ek karya karna h..


Shadow : kaisa karya my Lord …??


Uske baad Lord apna asli plan batate h jisse sunkar dono hasne lagte h...


Lord Vargas : Kal aag sirf Isla m hi ni kahi aur bi lagegi.. hahahahhahh









Now back to Isla ….

( King Arthur + Raj + Prof Albus + Melromac king + Kandhar king + Sabrina Pm ….ye sab ek hall m gaye the Jahan Puri capital city ka 3d map available tha.. ye map Prof Albus n tayyar kia tha city ki surkasha k liye)


Abhi sab hall s bahar aajate h phir Melromac king , Kandhar king aur Sabrina PM teeno apne apne room ki taraf chale jate h kyuki sabko tayyari bi karna tha par usse bi jyada sab apne bacho s bi milna chahte the to wo teeno chale jate h aur ab bas King August , Master Raj aur Prof Albus bachte h..


Abi teeno wapas main hall m aaye hi the ki wahan 2 log aate h ( 1 ladka 1 ladki ) jo aake pehle king August ko wish karte h aur phir jab wo sath m Raj aur Prof Albus ko dekhte h dono bahut Khush hojate h..


Ladki ( excited hote hue ) : daadduuuu.. aap kab aaye .. apne bataya kyu ni .. mujhe pata hota to main pehle hi Asiana s wpaas aajati....


Prof Albus- aahhaa Sofia beta .. agar tumhe Bata deta to tum apna kaam kaise karti isliye ni bataya aur daddu ki bachi ye Kya bachpana h tumhara hmmm.. samne tumhare King hai phir bi unke samne tum aise behave Kar rahe ho….


Sofia - ohoo dadduu ….uncle August Baki sabke liye king h par akele m wo bi mere uncle hi h aur hum unke Bacho jaise h to sab chalta h ( aur phir Sofia khilkhila Kar hasti Hui Prof Albus ko dobara Gale laga leti h )


Ladka - Good morning Professor .. good morning Master ( Raj s ) aap kb aaye capital aur apke sath Prem aaya h Kya …? Wo Kahan h ??


Raj- aree araam s Kurt beta.. ek sath itne sare sawal...


Kurt- sorry master….


Raj- hahaha koi ni.. aakhir itne Dino baad mil rahe h to tumhara khush hona banta h.. waise Prem bi aaya hua h hamare sath...


Sofia - Prem bi aaya hua h.. Kahan h wo , main abhi usse mil Kar aati hu..


Itna kah kar Sofia jaldi s wahan s uth Kar Chali jati h aur ab piche Kurt bachta h..


Prof Albus- maaf kijiega king August Sofia ki harqat k liye...abhi bi usme kafi bachpana h...


August- aree ni ni Professor, in dono k hote hue Mera bi Mann laga rehta h apne kaam m. Sofia aur Kurt k jitna masti karte h utne hi ache s apni jimmedariya bi nibhate h..


Prof Albus- hmm phir thek h..


August- acha Kurt , jis kaam k liye bheja tha uska Kya hua ..?


Kurt- yes my king... , kaam to hogaya h aur hame sari jankari bi mil gai h . Hame jis cheez ka shak tha wahi ho Raha h.. pichle kuch dino s kafi unknown log hamare border cross karke Isla m enter hue h aur badi baat ye h ki itne suraksha vivashta hone k bawjud wo badi asaani s aisa Kar pa rahe h.. wo koi aam log ni h...


August- hmmm iska mtlb Mera andaza sahi tha…


Prof Albus- Kya baat h king August aur aap kis cheez ki baat Kar rahe h..


August- Prof ( Albus ), master ( Raj ) kuch dino pehle hame khabar mili thi ki kuch log secretly Isla m enter Kar rahe h alag alag jagah s . Hamari Sena n kuch logo ko pakda bi tha aur puchtach Karne par pata Chala ki wo hamare padosi mitr desh k hi niwasi h aur unhe yahan kisi bade kaam ko anjam dene k liye bulaya gaya h....


Raj- kaisa kaam aur unhe kisne bulawaya h ??


August- kis kaam k liye bulaya h ye to unhe bi ni pata.. unke mutabik unhe Isla capital m aane k baad hi sari jankari Milne wali thi . Aur jisne unhe bulaya h wo koi ek shaks ni hai balki ek संगठन ( organisation) hai ..


Raj- kaissa sangthan ??


August- League of villains .. wo apne sangthan ko isi naam s bulate hai par aaj tk us sangthan k bare m kisi ko koi jankari ni h ki wo Kya h aur Kon usse chalata h ...


Prof Albus- ye to chinta ki Baat h. Waise to ye saaf jahir h ki isss samay unka yahan aana mtlb unke irade sahi ni h.. ho sakta h unka maqsad MAHAsabha m gadbadi karna ho ya aaj ki party m bi ...


Raj- yes Prof.. isliye hi Maine apse yahan Mahasabha s itne din pehle aake suraksha vivashta dekhne k liye bulaya tha.. mujhe darr h ki kahi kuch gadbad na ho...


Prof Albus- koi Baat ni king August… aap chinta na kijiye ..ye hamare desh ki surkasha ka sawaal h isliye ye Mera farz bi h....


Raj- sahi kaha Prof Albus n.. King August aap chinta na kare .. agar kuch gadbad hoti h to hum bi apka sath denge ....


August ( Khush hote hue ) - thank you professor , thank you master ..



Uske baad Kurt King August ko ek file jaisa deta h jisme sari information thi..phir Kurt bi Prem s Milne k liye nikal jata h aur piche teeno security ko leke apas m baat karte rehte h..








Ab chalte h thoda Prem mandli ki taraf…

Mrng m sabse Milne k baad sab apne apne rooms ki taraf nikal Gaye the rest karne , aakhir Puri raat journey Jo ki thi.. AAnshi bi juli k sath apne guestroom jaa chuki thi . Abhi Prem apne room m rest Kar hi Raha tha ki achanak Prem ki kuch mehshush hota h...


( Ye wo time h jab Martin apne pitaji s mila tha aur Lord Vargas ki shodow king Alfred s Milne aaya tha )


Me ( uththe hue, Mann m ) - ye to wahi negative energy h.. main isse yahan capital m kaise Mehshush Kar pa Raha hu.. kahi phir s koi demonoid capital m to ni aagya…


(Phir Prem Mann m Oracle ko yaad karta h )


Me - Oracle , Maine uss negative energy ko dobara feel kia h.. mujhe Janna h ki wo Kahan s aarahi h aur Kon h


Oracle- yes master ….


Uske baad Oracle search magic ka use karte hue Charo taraf s pata lagane ki koshish karne lagti h..


Oracle- master Maine har jagah search kia h par mujhe kahi bi neagtive energy ki presence ni mil rahi ..


Me- par aisa kaise ho sakta h.. Mujhe ab bi mehshush ho raha h . Tum dobara search Karo..


Oracle - ok master …….


( After some time )


Oracle- same result master.


Me- hmmm …

Me ( Mann m ) - aisa kaise ho sakta h.. shayad mujhe kuch brahm hua hoga… yahan room m bi Mann ni lag Raha hai , Chalo palace hi dekh leta hu tabtk..


Uske baad main apne room s Bahar aajata hu jo palace m 2nd floor p tha . Uske upar ek floor aur tha aur phir chhat thi.. palace bhale hi 3 manjila tha par kafi bada tha aur behad Sundar bi.. palace city k mutabik kafi uchai m bi bana tha isliye palace Durr s bi saaf dikhai dejata tha .


Aise hi palace ghumte ghumte main chhat p aagya kyuki yahan s city lagbhag dikh rahi thi sath m aaspaas ka nazara bi.. main phir aise hi chhat p ghumne laga . Ab palace itna bada tha to chhat bi utni hi hogi isliye kafi jagah thi..


Abhi main ghum hi Raha tha ki mujhe feel hua ki koi upar aaraha hai par Maine ye Soch Kar chod dia ki koi brahm hoga aur wapas ghumne laga...






Ye wo time h jab Sofia Prem ko dhudnne k liye Nikli thi par jab Prem ko apne room m ni pati to wo Nandini s puchti h to Nandini bolti h ki Prem apne room m hi tha kuch der pehle.. uske baad Sofia waps Bahar aati h to usko Kurt dikhta h Jo khud bi Prem s Milne ja raha tha .. Kurt jab Sofia s Prem k bare m puchta h to Sofia batati h ki usko wo ni mil Raha to wo dhudnne lagte h aur phir chhat ki taraf chale jate h


Chatt p aake Kurt Sofia ko Prem chatt k dusre hisse m dikhai deta h to Kurt kuch shararat karne ka sochta h..


Kurt- Sofia , Prem s hum kafi dino baad mil rahe h .. Chalo dekhte h ki Prem n itne Dino m kch sikha bi h ya ni..


Sofia - mtlb ...tum Kya Karne Wale ho ab .. dekho kuch Ulta sidha karne ka sochna bi mat wo Mera Bhai h samjhe..


Kurt- ohoooo kuch ni hota.. bhul gai kaise usne hame Amazon m haraya tha.. chal na thodi masti karte h ..


Sofia ( sochte hue )- hmmm thek h but jyada ni..


Kurt - done…


Uske baad Kurt Sofia k kaan m kuch bolta h aur phir dono chupke s upar aajate h alag alag direction m chale jate h ..




Abhi mera dhyan palace garden ki taraf tha Jo front side m tha palace ki .. garden kafi khoobsurat aur kafi bada bi tha isliye main abhi wahi dekh Raha tha ki achanak mujhe phir s kuch feel hua . Kuch mili-second to mujhe laga ki kahi koi brahm to ni par achanak s apneaap hi Meri body ka upper part piche ki taraf hogaya aur aisa hone k just baad hi Maine dekha ki mere just samne s ek nukla chaku jaisa nikla Jo shayad agar main na hatta to mujhe lag sakta tha ..



Jaise hi Maine us cheez ko dekha to confirm hogaya ki ye koi brahm ni h aur maine jis taraf s wo aaya tha wahan dekha but wahna to koi ni tha ..maien Charo taraf dekha but koi ni tha wahan..


Main abhi charo taraf dekh hi Raha tha ki iss baar left side s mujh par hamla hua.. ye WATER MAGIC s create kia gaya Water Blade tha .. ab main khud bi water magic user hu isliye ye sab cheeze mujhe pata thi to main turant pgir s Bach gaya par iss baat ek par hi kahani ni ruki..


Ab lagatar ek k baad ek water blades Meri taraf aane lage sath m alag alag direction s aane lage.. Maine badi mushkil s dotch Karne ki koshish Kari par jab direction badali to Maine turant apne samne SHIELD bana li..


(( Ye shield pure water magic s bani thi Jo halki blue but transparent color ki thi. ))


Main shield s apneaap ko cover krke samne dekhne ki koshish karne laga par wo Jo bi tha mujhe dikhai ni dia.. abhi main usi taraf dhyan de Raha tha ki mujhe feel hua ki wahan koi aur bi h aur wo right side s mujhe par hamla Karne Wala h..


Aisa feel hote hi Maine dusre hath m FIRE magic ki yaad kia jisse mera left hand main aag jalne lagi par Maine usse apni water shield par hi attack kardia jiske baad Charo taraf भाप ban gai aur main turant wahna s gayab hogaya mtlb full speed s Chala gaya aur chatt k dusri taraf chala gaya..



Is waqt m us jagah s kafi Durr tha aur dekhne ki koshish Kar Raha tha ki koi Puri speed a Meri taraf aata hua mehshush hua ..


Me- oralce , Kon h ye aur Kahan h wo ..


Oracle- master , wahan 2 log h Jo invisible h but main unki magic powers ko detect Kar pa rahi hu..

Aur ye apke dushman ni balki apke dost h..


Me- bhala ye kaise dost h Jo mujh par hamla kiye ja rahe h..


Oracle- master ,ye to aapko khud hi pata lagana padega


Me- wah oracle , tumko Meri help karna chahiye na ki mujhe suspense m dalna chahiye



Abhi main Oracle s baat Kar hi Raha tha ki


Oracle - attention master , aap par hamla hone Wala h


Me- mere dost h to thoda hum bi masti karlete h ..


Maine feel kia ki koi bahut tezi s Meri taraf aaraha h aur mujhpar vaar Karne Wala h par ain time par main phir s Puri speed s us jagah s hatt gaya. Is hamle k baad main samajh gaya ki aisa Kon Kar sakta h ..


Me ( Mann m ) - ohhh to ye Kurt Bhai h Jo apni swordsmanship dikha rahe h . Aur dusri to pakka Sofia dii hi hongi.. ab aaega Maza ahahhahaha



Phir maine bi Mann m ek sword ko yaad kia Jo mujhe master Darvin n di thi Amazon m . Waise ye koi special sword ni thi par abhi k liye kafi thi ..

Sword hath m aate hi Main bi ab full speed s idhar udhar bhagne laga aur Kurt Bhai ko dhudhne laga kyuki wo abhi bi kahi gayab the ..


((( Frnds yahan gayab hone ka mtlb h ki dono is tarh bhaag rahe h ki dikhai ni de rahe jaise Ninja log karte h na .. same waisa hi )))


Abhi main ek jagah ruk gaya aur agle attack ka wait karne laga wahi dusri taraf Kurt aur Sofia ek jagah chup Kar khade the..


Sofia - Kurt , tum mazak mazak m itne khatarnak hamle kaise Kar sakte ho .. agar Prem ko kuch ho jata too..


Kurt- aree wo hamara Prem h koi aam insan ni .. don't worry kuch Ni hoga aur ab dekho Prem bi tayyar h to ab Darne ki jarurat ni samjhe



Sofia - Kurt mujhe darr hai ki kahi tumhare Surprise k chakkar m hame hi na kch hojaye..


Kurt- Kya yaar… tum Prem s kabss Darne lagi..


Sofia - us test k baad s hi.. yaad h na kya hua tha tab..


Kurt- ohoooo wo tab ki baat thi ...ab jaldi Karo Chalo



Uske baad Kurt is jagah s gayab hokar chatt k ek corner s dusre corner pahuch jata h aur phir Prem ki taraf apni sword leke bhadhne lagta h.. abhi Kurt Prem k Karib pahucha hi tha ki iss baar Prem ki talwar aage aagai aur Kurt Bhai k hamle ko rok lia . Is baar Prem n bachne ki ni balki hamla Karne ki Sochi thi aur phir Kya tha.. pure chatt p kahi ek conrnr s dusre phir teesre aise karke jagah jagah s bas tann tann ki awaaz sunai de rahi thi Baki Prem aur Kurt dikhai ni de rahe the..


Kafi der tak dono ki takware apas m takarati rahi aur is baar talwar ek baar ni balki continuously takra rahi thi sath m dono full speed s bhaag bi rahe the.. jab kafi der tak aisa hi chalta Raha to Prem ek jordar hamla karke piche ki taraf jump karke khada hojata h ..


Me- Kurt Bhai aur kitne ladna h apko.. mujhe pata h ki ye aap hi ho. Itne dino baad mile ho aur milte hi ladai shuru ..bhala ye Kya baat Hui haaaa




((( Ek aur baat.. jab chatt p ye sab ho raaha tha to hamari Prem mandli m s hamare Harry bhau jinka apne room m Mann ni lag Raha tha ( jahir h Emma ko leke ) wo Bahar aajate h aur Bahar aate hi jab usse kch awaaz sunai deti h to wo uss taraf Jane lagta h.. raste m usse Geroge aur JOHN James bi mil jate h kyuki unhe ye to pata chal hi gaya tha ki ye awaazin talwaro k takrane ki h isliye pgir Charo chatt ki taraf aane lagte h.. )))


Chatt ki taraf aate waqt Harry is baat ko leke bi chawk jata h ki itni awazein hone k baad bi koi sipahi wagrah kyu nib aaya check Karne but phir Charo chatt par aajate h aur samne chal rahe nazare ko dekhne lagte h Jahan unhe bs tann-tann ki awaz aur talwaro k takrane s nikalti chingari hi dikh rahi thi Baki to jaise toofan macha hua tha . Sab shockingly ye sab dekhe ja rahe the ki tabi Prem unhe ek taraf dikahi deta h jiske hatho m sword thi par in Charo ki Prem ki baat sunai bi deti h to wo samajh ni pate ki Prem yaha Kya Kar Raha h aur sword liye hue kyu h ..



Abhi Harry n party Prem ki taraf Jane hi wali thi ki unke samne Sofia aajati h..


Sofia - prince Harry , aap abhi uss taraf mat jao


Harry- Sofia.. aap yahan .. Kya ho raha h yahan aur ye Prem sword liye kisse Ladd Raha h aur aap kuch Kar kyu ni rahi.. Kon h yahan par


Sofia - ohooo koi chinta wali baat ni h Prince Harry aur na Prem kisi khatre m h ..


Harry- mtlb .. samne saaf dikh Raha h ki Prem kiisi s Ladd Raha tha phir aap


Sofia ( Mann m )- ohoo fass Gaye na.. bola tha Maine Kurt ko ki aise drame na kare par ni.. ab Kya karu main… Sach hi bol deti hu waise bi mujhe koi shauk ni Prem s ladne ka ..


Sofia - prince Harry wo koi aur ni Kurt h aur dono bs apas m sowrd practice Kar rahe h..


Harry- ohhhh…. To ye sab Kurt ka kia dhara h


Sofia - haa .. usse Prem ko kuch surprise Dena tha to surprise attack hi kardia .


Harry - hahaha phir to Darne ki baat ni.. Maine suna tha unse ki aap dono n ek baar Prem s kisi test m fight ki thi .. aaj to live dekhne ko milega..


Harry ( vaki sab s ) - aao bhaio .. live action dekhte h ..

Phir Charo + Sofia ek corner par bhaith jate h aur samne dekhne lagte h Jahan is waqt Prem k samne Kurt khada tha..



Back to Prem..


Prem n jab bola ki usse pata h ki samne Kurt h to Kurt bi samne aake khada hojata h Aur dono apas m baat karne lagte h..


Me- Kya Bhai…. Ye sab Kya tha ( muh banate hue )


Kurt- aree ek yodha dusre yodha s aise hi to milte h tumko pata ni..


Me- ni..


Kurt- to ab jaan lo aur tayyar hojao kyuki ab hame dekhne k liye bheed jama hogai h..


Tab Prem ki nazar Harry n party k sath Sofia di par jati h Jo ek taraf unhe hi dekh rahe the..


Me- Iska mtlb wo water blades attack Sofia di n kia tha .. mtlb aap dono hi Meri bajane wale the wo bi ek sath


Kurt- hihihihi.. ( muskurate hue )


Me- thek h phir.. baad m mujhse mat kehna kuch


Kurt- ohoo dhamki.. lagta h school m bahut kuch sikhaya gaya h itne dino m


Me- wo to apko mujhse ladne k baad hi pata chalega .




Uske baad Dono ki phir a fight shuru hojati h aur is baar to speed pehle s bi jyada tha .. phir a awaazein aur tez hawaiye chalne lagi par dono hi ni dikh rahe the.. ek jagah s dusri jagah jump karte to kahi move karte karte hi ek dusre p attack karte .. kuch der baad Dono phir s kuch seconds ka pause leke ruk jate h aur ek dusre ko dekhne lagte h.. waise to ye frndly fight thi but ab thodi intensity badh chuki thi mtlb frndly + serious fight ..



Kurt- bahut ache Prem.. pehle s tumhari swordsmanship ( talwarbazi ) m kafi improvement aaya h…


Me- thanks Bhai..


Kurt- to phir ek level aur badhate h ..


Me- as u wish Bhai.. ( muskurate hue )


Kurt- then get ready.. DOUBLE SWORDS ..

Ab Kurt k dono hatho m ek ek sowrd thi .


Kurt- DOUBLE BLAZING SWORD

Aisa bolte hi Kurt Bhai ki dono sword Lal rang ki hone lagti h jaise unhe aag ki bhatti m garam kia gaya ho.. aur phir wo muskurate hue hamle k liye ready hojate h…


Me- wah.. very nice Bhai… .main bi kch try karta hu phir.. ( Mann m ) DOUBLE EDEGED SWORD , FIRE MAGIC ACTIVATE , BLAZING FIRE SWORD


Abi Prem k hath m ek hi sword thi par ab dodhari thi mtlb sword k dono hi taraf s hamla kia ja sakta tha , sath m fire magic hone s ab prem ki sword bi garam ho chuki thi par Prem ki sword m ab blue colour ki halki halki aag uth rahi thi Jo dhyan dene p hi dikh rahi thi..



Aur phir dono apni apni jagah s full speed s move karte h aur phir 2 baar awaz hoti h tann-tann ki aur uske agle hi second dono log ab opposite position m the. Jahan pehle Kurt Bhai the ab waha prem tha aur same Prem ki jagah p Kurt Bhai…


Samne s dekh rahe Harry n party ye sab dkh Kar shock hojate h kyuki unhe iss baar bi kch dikhai ni dia par iss baar ba ek hi attack hua tha aur wo bi pehle s tez ..


Abi koi kch samajhta ki kurt Bhai k hatho ki dono talware beech s cut Kar gir jati h jisse dekh Kar sab chawk jate h…khud Kurt bhi…



Kurt Bhai pehle to shock hojate h ki unki sword kaise cut gai par phir wo palat k Prem kk dekhne lagte h Jahan Prem bi same unhe dekh Kar Muskura Raha tha sath m apni sword bi dikha Raha ta Jo ek dum sahi thi..



Kurt- Kya yaar Prem.. is baar bi Hara dia mujhe ..huh…


Me- Maine to apko bola tha .. aapko hi fight karni thi to ab bhugto


Kurt - ha ha thek h ….chal idhar aaa


Uske baad Kurt Prem ko apne paas bulate h aur phir usse joro s gale laga lete h..


Kurt- kaisa h Mera Bhai..


Me- main to bilkul thek hu par apko ni lagta ye pehle puchna chahiye tha ..


Kurt- aree bataya to .. ham yodha aise hi haal chal puchte h …


Me- acha ….


Kurt- haaa


Uske baad Dono hasne lagte h aur Harry Sofia ki taraf chal dete h...


Sofia - Prem…( hug karte hue ) kaisa h Mera chotu Bhai..


Me- main bilkul thek hu dii par apne acha ni kia mere sath..


Sofia - aree betu isme Meri galti ni h.. ye tere Kurt bhaia hi h jinhe tumhe surprise dena tha.. Maine to Mana bi kia tha pucho isse par isne suni ni..


Kurt- heey tumne kab Mana kia tha.. tum khud bi Prem k sath shararat karna chahti thi.. Prem ye na tumse apni haar ka badla Lena chahti thi aur ab dekho kaise jhoot bol rahi h..


Sofia ( chawkte hue )- kyaa …itna jhoot… Maine aisa kab bola ...jhoote

Phir Sofia di Kurt Bhai par baras padti h aur last ghuso s pitai karne lagti h ( not seriously )


Me- aree ab bs bi Karo.. aapka ye hamesa s h..jab dekho ladne jagadhne lagte ho.. Pyar mohabbat s bi rah Lia Karo kabi..


Sofia - pyar mohabbat s .. aur wo bi iske sath.. never


Kurt- ha ha same here …

Aur dono ek dusre ki taraf peeth karke khade hojate h aur dono ki harqat dekh Kar Baki sab hasne lagte h…



Geroge - wow Prem.. mujhe ni pata tha ki tum itni achi sword Chala lete ho..


John - ha Prem...tum to isme master ho..


James- ha Bhai.. Jo Kurt ko takkar de sake wo to koi master hi ho sakta h.. tumne pehle kabi kyu ni batyaa


Me- aree bas bas aisa kuch Ni h.. main master waster ni hu bs bachpan m sikha tha bs wahi h..


Harry- bachpan m sikhna kafi ni h.. kisne sikhaya ye bi to mayne rakhta h..


John- aree ha.. ye to puchna bhul hi gaya.. ( Prem s ) Prem tumhe ye sab kisne sikhaya


Me- wo ….mujhe ye sab mere Master , Master Darvin n sikhaya hai….


George- ohhh tab to samajh aata h.. master darvin to swordsmanship ki duniya k sabse mahaan yodha h.. Prem tum bahut lucky ho ..


Me- hmmm shayad.. acha ab niche chale ..kafi der hogai h aur sab haamra intzar bi Kar rahe honge..




Uske baad sab niche aajate h aur apas m baato m lag jate h… Kurt Sofia to kafi time s King August k sath the Isliye unki Harry s bi vanti thi par Harry prince tha Isliye wo itna frndly ni the jitna dono prem k sath the..




Aise hi kuch time baat krne k baad Kurt Sofia sham ko party m Milne ka bol Kar chalne lagte h to Prem unke sth hi Bahar aajata h aur unse baat karne lagta h chalte chalte...



Me- Kurt Bhai, Sofia di .. mujhe apse kuch baat karni h..


Kurt- ha bolo .. Kya hua..


Me- Bhai , main jabse yahan aaya hu mujhe kuch ajeeb si feeling aarahi h jaise kuch gadbad h .. Maine pata Karne ki koshish bi Kari par mujhe kuch samajh ni aa Raha..


Kurt- aree to isme chinta karne wali Kya baat h.. shayad tum mere surprise ki wajah s aisa feel Kar rahe honge .


Me- ni Bhai.. wo to mujhe aaj subah s hi feel ho Raha tha.. asal m baat ye h ki ( phir Prem 2 din pehle samandar m hue hadse k bare n Bata deta h ki kaise usne negative energy ko feel Kai tha aur same usne captiay city m bi feel kia h jisse sunne k baad Kurt Sofia bi Soch m pad Jaate h )


Sofia - are u sure Prem...bcoz agar aisa h to ye hamare secury k liye bahut badi problem ho sakti h..


Me- Sofia di.. pakke taur s to ni par Maine abhi kuch der pehle phir s waisi hi energy ko feel kia h wo bi kafi Matra m ..

(( Prem n Jo feel kia wo tha Lord Vargas ka dia hua wo conical stone Jo Vargas n king Arthur ko dia tha. Prem n ye cheez fight k dauran feel ki thi par tab usne jyada dhyan ni dia tha ))


Kurt- hmmm ye to sochne wali baat h..

( Kuch sochte hue ) - hum ek kaam Kar sakte h


Me- Kya ...kaisa kaam


Kurt- aao jara mere sath



Uske baad Kurt Prem ko us room m le jate h Jahan capital city ka 3D map bana hua tha.. Kurt ko is bare m king August n bataya tha .. Prem aur Sofia n ye pehli baar dekha tha ..



Me- woww… it's amazing..


Sofia - haa.. ye to bahut shandar h.. isme to hum puri city p nazar rakh sakte h..


Kurt- haaa ...isse khas Prof albus n tayyar kia h.. ( prem s ) Prem hum isme jariye city m ho rahi halchal ko araam s dekh sakte h ..


Me- haa sahi kaha … ( dhyan s dekhte hue ) par isme hum us negative energy wale logo ko kaise dekh paenge ..?


Kurt ( sochte hue ) - hmmmmm ye to problem h kyuki isme hum sirf fire , water , wind , Earth , dark , light element wale magic user ko hi dekh sakte h aur tumhare hisab s wo negative powers inse alag h to wo shyad isme na dikhe…


Sofia - to phir ab Kya kare… aise to koi fayda Ni hoga ..


Kurt- hmm ek kaam karte h Prof Albus ko iss bare m batate h..


Me- ha but abhi ni.. hamare paas jyada time ni h. Main kuch karta hu



Uske baad Maine map k pass Jake khada hogaya apni aankhein band karke..


Me- oracle, analyse Karo sav kch.


Oracle- yes Master … ANALYSIS Begins ….

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Oracle- Analysis complete.. master , is map ko tayyar karne m ek khas magic power ka use kia gaya h . Isme 6 elements ki powers s bana ek Magic stone h Jo bahut hi powerful h.


Me- okay.. phir to ye bahut hi rare aur special stone malum padta h kyuki mostly magic stone m sirf ek hi magic power hota h …


Oracle- yes master .. ye ek rare magic artifiact h..


Me- hmm but abhi isme ek kami h.. agar hum isme negative energy ko bi include Kar de to shyaad ye bi usse pehchan le aur phir ye map m bi usko dikhane lage..


Oracle- it's possible master ..


Me - great.. let's try ..

Uske baad Prem apna hath aage kardeta h aur Oracle Prem ki body s negative energy ko channelised karke us magic stone m transfer krdeti h thodi si . Aisa hota hi wo magic stone pehle to accept ni karta but baad m absorb karleta h aur aisa hote hi pura 3D map ek baar band hojata h Aur phir apneaap hi shuru bi hojata h…


Me ( aankhein khol Kar ) - Maine isme negative energy daal di h ...ab ye usko bi detect Kar sakegi..


Kurt/ Sofia - wow.. great Prem..


Me ( muskurate hue ) - hmmmm.. but abhi kaam khathm ni hua h..


Uske baad Kurt aur Prem dobara s scan Karne lagte h aur aisa hote hi us map m dikhta h ki kaise us hall s ek power circle palace k Charo aur s nikalte hue pure city m failne laga h aur phir s jitne bi lgo the sab dikhne lagte h apne apne power attribute k sath .. ( yaad rahe logo ki shakal ni bs ek symbol dikhta h ) after scanning


Kurt- Prem, scan Karne k baad bi Jo tumne kaha tha wo ni dikh Raha .. kahi Sach m ye tumhara brahm to ni h..


Me ( sochte hue , Mann m )- aisa kaise possible h.. kahi Sach m to mujhe brahm ni ho Raha ..


Kurt ( Prem ko hilate hue ) - Kya hua Prem.. tum thek to ho na ..


Me- ha... Haa main thek hu...shayad mujhe hi brahm hua h..


Sofia - dont worry Prem.. agar kuch gadbad bi hoti h to Kign August k stah mere dadu Prof to h hi.. unhone pehle hi sare suraksha k intzam Kar rakhe h..


Me- hmmmn …


Sofia - ohoo ab jyada socho mat.. Jake araam karo..sham ko party bi h na . Ab jyada samay ni h to Jake araam karlo ok.


Me- hmm oke di.. main phir baad m milta hu aap dono s…



Kurt / Sofia - oke….




Uske bad Prem wahan s Chala jata h aur piche Kurt Sofia map m Puri city ka jayza lene lagte h..









(( Next Update - Party ))
 
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Chinturocky

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Great update,
Bhai apni sehat ka dhyan rakho achchhe se aaj kal mausam theek nahi chal raha ha.
Waiting for party.
Mujhe lag raha hai ki AAP to pura ek univers taiyaar kar sakte ho.
Yaha ek villain vargis aur dusari jagah dusra Hero aur villain.
 

Black water

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Super fantastic update bhai.kya ye wohi stone hai Jo martin dhund rahatha.ab party me kya hoga wo dekhna hoga . waiting for next
 

krish1152

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Super update
 
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