Horror Nirjala { ek varshon se tadpati hui aatma } (Completed)

[SultanTipu40]

Doston aap logon ne meri pahli story main bahut sath diya likhne main uske main aap logon ka shukriya karta huin

main ek horror story likhne ki koshish kar raha huin mujhe yekin hai aap log is story main bhi sath rahenge

to chaliye ek gaaon ke kuch shadiyan ke pichhe ki kuch raaj jaan lete hai



Ye kahani hai Rajasthan ki our us gaaon main nirjala naam ki aurat rahati thi jo ek thakurain thi

Nirjala ek ayesha naam hai jo ek waqt tha jab nirjala ke naam sun kar logon ke dil main pyar our mohabbat bas jati thi magar ek din nirjala ke sath aisa hua ke loog uske naam se Darne lage kuch din ke baad nirjala ke apne bhi wah gaaon chhode kar chale gaye magar nirjala ka dar is tarah baitha ki kuch din ke baad hi nirjala ke dar se sabhi gaaon wale bhi apna gaaon chhode kar bhagane lage our wah hasta khelta gaaon ek ek din main sunsan hone laga isi tarah kai shadiyan bit gayi magar is gaaon main koi bhi dubare aane ka naam nahi liye

kaun hai ye nirjala our kya hua tha nirjala ke sath q wah hasta khelta goon sunsan ho gaya sath bane rahiye janne ke liye

pahla updete jald hi dunga aap logon ka sath raha to

 

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[SultanTipu40]

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bhai log

 

[Naina]

for nawi story...
Lekin nirjala tadap kahe rahi hai barso se
Kahi ushe SultanTipu40 ki khoj to nahi.... par mil nahi raha hai tadap mitne ke liye

 

[Naina]

kaun hai ye nirjala our kya hua tha nirjala ke sath q wah hasta khelta goon sunsan ho gaya sath bane rahiye janne ke liye

well... ye to writer hi bata sakta hai na Readers ko thodi na pata hai ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

.nayi kahani ke liye ...

waiting for update ..

aur ye shadiyan matlab shaadi ya sadiyan ( jaise sadiya beet gayi type ).

 

[Moon Light]

Horror Story
Posto Posto...

 

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UPDATE _______ {1}




Abhi raat ke koi 11 : 45 ho raha tha our har tarf santta chhaya hua tha our aaj andheri raat bhi kuch pahle se kuch jayada thi har tarf kutte ki bhokhne ke sath our bhi aawaze aa rahi thi jaise lag raha tha aaj purnmanshi ki raat ho our is waqt india ke ek hospital main ek aurat dard se tadap rahi thi our nars bar bar bol rahi thi beti tumeh kuch nahi hoga bas thoda dard our bardasht kar ke zor lagao phir sab thik ho jayega

wahi hospital ke ek mandir main ek aurat hanth jude kar prarthana kar rahi thi aurat ke sath ek mard bhi tha wah bhi hanth jude khada tha aurat ke sath

he devi maa maine aap ki varshon se puja karti hui aai huin lekin kabhi aap se kuch nahi manga magar aaj mangti huin meri ghar main lakshmi de dijiye devi maa meri ghar main ek khubsurat gudiya ko de dijiye maa main aap ki apni bachi hui zindgi bhi aap ki puja main bita dungi meri kai nashal bit gayi magar ab tak is ghar main koi ladki ne janam nahi liya daya kare maa meri bahu ko ek beti de dijiye aurat ro ro kar hospital ke mandir main devi maa se ek beti ke liye tadpti hui prarthana kar rahi thi

our yehi hall america ke ek ghar main bhi tha us ghar ke mandir main bhi do aurat ro ro kar devi maa se beti mang rahi thi apni chhoti devrani ke liye wah dono bhi india main rahne wali aurat jitna pareshan nahi thi usse jyada ye america main rahne wali dono aurat dukhi our pareshan thi in dono ke aankhon se aansu nahi ruk rahi thi

Is sansar main har koi apne vansh ko aage badhane ke liye apne ghar main bhagwan se beta mangata hai magar yeha ye aurat apne liye pota nahi poti mang rahi thi devi maa se

wahi america main bhi dono aurat apne chhoti devarani liye beta nahi beti mang rahi thi

our iska bas ek hi karn tha is pariwar main kai salon se ek bhi ladki ne is ghar main janam nahi le pai thi our is pariwar ke log ek poti ko dekhne ka ichha liye hi is duniya se chale gaye magar is pariwar main sab se khash baat ye tha ke is aurat ke sas ne marte hua aurat ko ek naam bata kar mari thi our boli thi agar teri ya teri kisi bhi bahu ko ladki hui to yehi naam rakhna

magar afsos ab tak aurat ki kisi bhi bahu ko ladki nahi hui our aurat wah naam abhi tak nahi rakh pai thi ye silsila kai Sall se chal raha tha is aurat ke sas ki bhi sas ne yehi naam rakhne ko bol kar mari thi magar afsos ki ladki janam hi nahi le rahi thi magar naam ka silsila is tarah chalu tha ki ghar ke ek ke log marte gaye our apni bahu ko naam batati gayi magar naam to zinda raha lekin naam yaad rakhne wale badalte gaye ye aurat kai Sall se devi maa ki puja kar rahi thi our apni koi bhi bahu ke pregnant hone par beti mang rahi thi magar har baar ladka hi janam le rahe tha aurat ke do bahu our bhi thi our dono apne pati our bachhon ke sath america main rahti thi ye aurat ki Teesri our sabse choti bahu thi jo pahli baar hi pregnant hui thi

aurat mandir ke samane abhi devi maa se prarthana kar hi rahi thi ke bhagati hui uske pass ek nars aai badi Malkin mobark ho aap ke ghar main lakshmi aai hai

nars to bol gayi aurat se ki uske ghar main lakshmi ne janam le liya hai magar afsos ki aurat apni poti ki khushi nahi mana pai our wahi par mandir ke samane gir padi apni maa ko girte dekh waha jo uska beta khada tha jaldi se maa maa kahte hua utha kar Dr ke pass bhaga our apni maa ko I .C . O main bharti kiya magar kuch hi Der main Dr I. C . O se bahar bhi nikal gaya

sorry beta ham badi Malkin ko nahi bacha sake q ke badi Malkin pahle hi mar chuki thi sadme ki wajah se Dr ne us aurat ke bete se bola

Dr aunkal aap kya bol rahe hai aaj maa ko kaun si sadma lagi hai jo meri maa bina apni poti ko dekhe chali gayi aunkal aaj to maa itna khush hone wali thi ke kal gaaon kai garib parivar ko khush kar deti unko paison ki madad kar ke

beta sadma lagne hi yehi wajah hai jis poti ki naam sunane ke liye wah tadap rahi thi uneh vishwas bhi nahi tha ke unke ghar main beti hi hogi magar aachanak jab badi Malkin ko pata chala ke unke ghar main poti hai to unko itna khushi hui ke wah khushi bardasht nahi kar payi

wahi america main dono aurat ek dusre se mil kar khushi Zahir kar rahi thi magar phir apni sas ke bara main sun kar dukhi bhi hui our phir dono aurat apni pati our bachhon ko lekar india ke liye nikal gayi jo bas apni chhoti devarani ko beti hone ka wet kar rahi thi saman to pahle se pack kar ke rakhi hui thi

wahi abhi is waq raat ke andheri main 4 bandey abhi rajasthan ke ek hathama gaaon ke raste main the our dhire dhire gaaon ke tarf badh rahe the wah log jaise jaise aage ki tarf badhte jaa rahe the un charon ko ajib ajib si aawaze sunai de rahi thi

yaar John ye kaisi jagah hai na koi achha ghar dikh raha hai our na kahi par logon ka pata chal raha hai our sala aaj lagta hai puranmansi ki raat bhi hai suna hai is raat main bhut pret bhi bahut sakti Sali hokar ghumte hai john ham sab yehi kahi raat bhar ke liye ruk jate hai phir subah main apni manzil ki tarf badhte hai un charon main se ek ne kaha

tu sale kitna darda hai main tera baat manta huin our uper se aaj purnmanshi ka raat bhi hai magar ham sab ko Darne ki Zarurat nahi hai jab tak hameh se koi bhi kisi bhut ko nahi chahenge tab tak wah ham logon ko kuch nahi karenge maine ab tak kitne jagah jaa chuka huin magar aaj tak mujhe kuch bhi nahi hua meri baat mano to tum sab bhi bas apne kaam se kaam rakhna our kisi chij ke pichhe mat bhaga unke se ek ne kaha

in charon main do india ke the to do american the unme se ek ka naam to john tha jo aaj pahli baar hi kisi khoj ke liye nikala tha apne dost devid ke sath

john ko to ye bhi nahi pata tha ki akhir khoj kis chij ka karna hai bas apne dost ke kahne par yeha aa gaya amir hone ke liye our dono india main aane ke baad rama our bhima se mile our david ne rama our bhi se rajasthan ke ek mandir ke bara main puchh jo rama our bhima ko us mandir ke bara main achhe se pata tha to wah dono bhi paise ki lalach main david ke sath rajasthan ke liye chal diye ye jante hua ke wah jagah bahut khatarnak hai magar rama our bhima ko koi bhi dar nahi tha rama our bhima dono hi bahut kameene insan the ab tak bahut se khun kar chuke the paise ke liye jaha bhi jate dono sath jate dono bahut takatvar bhi the magar in dono ki ek hi kamjori thi wah thi ladki ladki dekh kar dono pagal ho jate the our koi ladki mil jati to dono us ladki ko behosh hone tak chodai karte the

David ek bahut bada khoji tha our jagah jagah jakar purane chij khoja karta tha kuch din pahle hi use pata chala tha rajasthan ke ek hathama gaaon main ek kiraadu mandir hai jo bahut purana hai our usi mandir main kahi sankar ji ki ek sone ki murti hai david sankar ji ki murti ko khojane ke liye india aaya tha our abhi rajasthan ke hathama gaaon main jaa raha tha

rama ye videshi kab se Darne lage mujhe to lag raha hai sale John ki paint gili ho gayi hai kahi mandir tak jane main iski pichhe se pili na ho jaye Bhima bol kar hasne laga wahi rama bhi hasne laga abhi

hathama gaaon se kuch duri par hi the ke charon ko kuch duri par ek insan ko apni taraf aate hua paya jo thodi ghutnon ke bal chal raha tha our uske hanth main ek lathi bhi tha charon idhar se jaa rahe the our wah insan inke taraf aa raha tha jo kuch hi waqt main wah insan inke pass aa gaya jaise wah bhag kar aaya ho waise charon ke pass akar harne lagi jab wah pass aai to wah ek budhiya aurat thi jo ek lathi ke sahare chal rahi thi wah dekhne main bahut darawani lag rahi thi uper se charon ke samane hi khadi ho gayi jisse charon our bhi dar gaye

kuch der ke liye charon hi dar gaye the our kuch bol bhi nahi rahe the bas ek tak budhiya ko dar kar dekh rahe the

tum sab kaun ho beta our is sunsan jagah par kya kar rahe ho kahi tum log rasta to nahi bhatak gaye ho tum sab ko Darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai main pass ke hi gaaon se huin aaj purnmanshi ki raat hai to main pass ke hi mandir se aa rahi huin jaha sab log puja kar rahe hai mujhe nind aane lagi thi main ghar jaa rahi huin budhiya ne apni sar ke aage aai bal ko hatate hua boli

nahi ham log rasta nahi bhatke amma ham sabhi hathama gaaon main jaa rahe hai kya yehi rasta jata hai is gaaon main david budhiya se bola

haa beta hathama gaaon main rasta to yehi jata hai magar tum logon ka apni jaan se pyar nahi hai kya jo tum log waha ja rrrrahe ho budhiya ne kuch jayada hi khich kar ye baat boli

kya kaha amma main kuch samjha nahi aap kya kahna chahati hai kya hamahara jaan ko kya khatra ho sakta hai us gaaon main jane se david ne kaha

nahi beta main ye kahna chahati huin us hathama gaaon main kai barson se koi raat main to chhodu din main bhi jane main darta hai our tum log raat main jaa rahe ho is liye boli tum chaho to mere sath mere ghar chal sakte ho phir subah hote chale jana tum logon ke liye bhi achha hoga budhiya boli

nahi amma ham chale jainge aap ghar jaiye apna david ne kaha our aage badh gaya abhi kuch dur chale hi the ke john aachanak gir gaya jo david ne john ko uthaya jab john utha our sabhi ne jab pichhe dekhe to budhiya unko dikhai nahi di

yaar david budhiya aammma kaha chali gayi abhi to yehi thi ham log to bas kuch kadam hi chale hai phir wah kaha chali gayi jab pichhe john ne budhiya ko nahi dekha to kaha john ko to dar kar bura hall hone laga

are yaar dekha nahi kitna tezi main chal rahi thi wah aage nikal gayi hogi chal hameh jaldi se jana hai

charon ab hathama gaaon ke bilkul karib hi pahunch gaye the magar raat ke andhere main ineh mandir nahi dikh raha tha magar uneh ek badi haveli zarur dikh gayi jo bahut purani thi our har taraf se tuti hui thi agar abhi barish ho jaaye to usne rahne wale log bhing jaye magar abhi barish ka mosham nahi tha to raat gujarne ke liye kabhi tha

chalo aaj raat yehi gujarate hai subah ham mandir ko dhundh lenge david ne kaha

wahi john ki to haveli dekh kar hi gaand phat gayi thi magar phir bhi use haveli main jana hi pada abhi charon haveli ke bahar hi the ke ek achanak hi ek

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nikal gayi chikh ki aawaz sun kar charon hi pichhe hat gaye wahi john to david ko puri tarah se pakad hi liya tha dar kar

are yaar john tu itana dar q raha hai raat main ayesi aawaze hoti rahti hi hai kahi dur bhi aawaz hogi to ayesa lagta hai aawaz pass main hi ho rahi hai chal bhi ab ander kuch nahi hai jo tu itana dar raha hai chal mujhe abhi nind bhi aa rahi hai david ne kaha our haveli main jane laga

yaar david please ham is haveli ke bahar hi aaram karte hai na please yaar please john darte hua bola

thik hai bhai chal yehi par sote hai bol kar david wahi haveli ke bahar hi let gaya tab john bhi david ke bagal main let gaya

sale mujhe lagata hai dono hi dar gaye hai bhima chal ham andar chalte hai mujhe thand bhi lag raha hai bahar rama ne kaha our andar jane laga uske sath hi bhima bhi ander chala gaya

dekh andar aane ke baad bhi kitna thand lag raha hai chal ab tu jaldi se garm karne wala chij nikal phir ham dono bhi garam hokar sote hai rama ne kaha

rama ke kahne par bhima ne apne beag se ek sharab ka botal nikala our dono baith gaye pine ke liye

abhi rama our bhima dono apne gilash ek dusre ke gilash lada kar chesh karte ki haveli se phir ek bar

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aaa ke sath haveli main zor zor se hawa chalne lagi haveli bahut purani thi to usme kahi kahi ped bhi nikal chuke the diwar par wah sabhi pede bhi hilne lage kuch der ke liye rama our bhima ka bhi halt kharab hone laga our dono dar kar ek dusre se lipat gaye the jo uneh pata bhi nahi chala

ye kaisi aawaze thi be our tu mujhe aise q pakda hai sale main koi ladki thode huin chal dur hat mere se rama bola jo abhi bhima use paked kar lipata tha

bhai mujhe nind aane rahi hai tuhi pile mujhe nahi pina main so raha huin bhima bola our rama ke bagal main so gaya

rama akele hi puri botal pine laga rama kuch hi waqt main puri botal pi gaya rama ab bilkul nashe main ho gaya tha our apne aap main hi bol bol kar kisi ko gali dene laga ki tabhi use kuch duri par ek ladki baithi hui nazer aati hai rama ab nashe main hone se our samne ladki dekh kar rama ke jisam main garmi hone lagi our rama uth kar hilte hua ladki ke pass pahuncha magar ladki ke pass jate hi ladki waha se kuch dur chali gayi rama phir ladki ki tarf badha magar ladki phir se dur chali gayi is tarah hi rama haveli ke dusri taraf chala gaya jab rama haveli ke dusri tarf gaya to use ladki wahi khadi mili rama jakar kar pichhe ki khadi ladki ko paked liya our uske kapde nikalne laga tabhi ladki palti our ladki ka chehara dekh kar rama ke sharaba ka sara nasha utar gaya our rama wahi dar kar kapne laga phir aachanak hi rama gir gaya

Next morning

David jab utha to dekha john uske pass nahi thi to david john ko pukarne laga david jaldi se haveli ke ander bhi bhaga ander bhi rama our bhima nahi the david haveli ke dusri taraf jakar dekha to use rama dikha jo gira pada tha to david ne rama ko uthaya david rama ko kuch der jagata raha phir aachanak hi rama chilla kar uth gaya our david ko dhakka dekar bhagane laga our bhagate hua bas ek hi baat Bolte jaa raha tha wah ek din yeha aayegi