Mega update 85
Vikram ka Razz part 1-
To pichle update main ( jo bhul chuke hai jakar dekh lo
ki kya hua) humne dekha ki raju ne kis tarah se apna dimag lagakar majdur aur vikram ko bahut badee dhoke se bacha liya, aur kalu ko vikram ne gaon se bahar nikla diya,
Par vikram ke is nirnya se gaon wale khush hue, par kalu ke dil mae vikram ke liya ek nafrat peda ho gai aur usne taan liya ki wo iska badla jarur lega( isko yaad rakhna ye kaam ayega aage update mae) .
Aur vikram ne sabhi majduro ke liye raat ke liye khane aur pine ka intjam kar liya ,
Par jese ki vikram ne raju ko ajj kyu apne pass bhulya iske liya hume toda piche jana hoga, jab dadi aur kamaya ki baat hui uske baad kya hu... Us samay raju ghar se bahar tha (update 82 ) tab
To chaliye suru karte hai ajj ka update 
To jab dadi aur kamaya ki baat puri hui aur call cut Jane ke baad kamaya kuch sochne lagi..
Kamaya (man mae) - dadi jo kuch bol rahi thi wo sab tik hi bol rahi thi akhari wahi to hai jinhone hame ye rasta dikhya hai (iska raaz pata chalega baad mae) ..
Par kahi na kahi mujhe bhi raj ko sab bata dena chahiye kya (fir soch kar) nahi - nahi main nahi bata sakti ho sakta hai Raj mujko hi galat samjhe, par batna to padega hi wo bhi jaldi nahi to kuch gadbad na ho jaye, par kese mee andar itni himmat nahi hai, kya karu main, kya karu, kuch soch kamaya kuch soch
Fir kamaya apnr room main hi idhar udhar chalen lagi sochne lagi ki kese wo raju( Raju aur raj ek hi hai confused mat hona) ko bole tabhi usko apne Diwal par lage apne pati vikram ki photo dikhi aur usko ek rasta nazar aa gaya aur turant kamaya ne vikram ko call kiya..
Ab call par vikram aur kamaya.. (Gaon mae toda Network slow hai to samjnaa
)
Vikram- hello -hello ha kamaya bolo kya hua, kya baat hai..
Kamaya - ha vikram apki awwaj kuch samjh nahi aa rahi hai, toda Network mae aa jaye to..
Vikram - ha tin hai tum phone kato main todi upper aur khul jagha par ja kar call karta hu tumko tik hai..
Kamaya - ha tik hai par yaad se abhi karo, bahut jaruri hai tik hai..
Aur call cut hua, par vikram samjh gaya ki baat bahut important hai tabhi kamaya ne call kiya hai , isliye vikram apne makan ke upper chat par gaya aur ass pass ache se nazar guma li ki koi hai to nahi ass pass, jab wo nishchint ho gaya tab usne kamaya ko call kiya..
Call par dobara..
Vikram- ha hello kamaya bolo kya baat hai, abb Network accha hai..
Kamaya - hai tik hai par app jaha ho waha koi aur to nahi hai na jo baat sun sake baat bahut jaruri hai app samjh rahe hai na..
Vikram- ha mene ass pass ache se fekh kar hi tumko call kiya hai, aur jesa ki tum bartav kar rahi lagta hai baat raju se judi hui hai..
Vikram ke yesa bolne par kamaya kuch der chup ho gai, aur fir
Vikram- hello hello kamaya awwaj ti aa rahi hai na hello..
Kamaya - ha apki awwaj ache se aa rahi wo bass mae kuch soch rahi thi isliye 
Vikram- main tumhari halta samjh raha hu kamaya, samjh raha hu..
Kamaya - nahi vikram app nahi samjh skate ki is wakt main kitni tenson mae hu, ab mujhe lagta hai ki ab samay aa gaya hai ki, hame raju ko sab sach bata dena chahiye vikram..
Vikram- accha par tumko yese acahnk iska kya khyal kyu aya kamaya kuch hua hai kya..
Fir kamaya ne dadi paro aur abhi tak jo kuch bhi hua wo sab vikram ko bata diya, vikram kamaya hi har baat ko acche se sun aur samjh raha tha aur ye bhi ki kamaya kyu intni tenson mae hai.. Baat puri hone ke baad kamaya boli..
Kamaya - ab app bhi boliye ki ab main kya karu, agar raju ko ye baat nahi pata chali to kahi der na ho jaye.. Aur dadi bhi yahi kah rahi thi..
Vikram- ha tum tik kahi ho, aur jab dadi khud ye bol rahi hai to mujhe lagata hai ye baat raju ko bata deni chahiye, to kya tum..
Kamaya ( bich mae hi ) - nahi vikram app ye sochiye ga bhi nahi ki main ye baat raj ko bata dungi, mere andar himmat nahi hai, aur raj ko main acche se nahi samjha saki aur kuch ulta ho gaya to main kese (aur kamaya chup ho gai)
Dono taraf santi thi kamaya kuch bol nahi rahi thi aur vikram soch mae duba hua tha fir kuch der baad vikram bola)
Vikram- tik hai kamaya main tumhari halata samjh chuka hu, sayada agar tumhari jagha main hota to itni himmat main bhi juta nahi pata ki, itni badi baat raju ko bol saku..
Kamaya - par vikram raj ko ye baat batnai to padegi hi wo bhi jaldi..
Vikram- todi der ruko main soch leta ho pahle..
Fir 5-10 minute tak vikram kuch nahi bola na hi kamaya ne kuch kaha wo bhi samjh gai ki vikram kuch bada karne wale ha fir..
Vikram- accha suno kamaya..
Kamaya- ha bolo vikram kya soch apne.
Vikram- to suno jese ki dadi ne bola agar raju apni aur paro ki baat tumko bata de to?
Kamaya - to, to kya vikram?
Vikram- usse sirf itna bolna ki mujhe tumhare aur uske bare mae, mujko sab kuch pata hai pahle se..
Kamaya - kya, ye app kya bol rahe ho vikram agar usne aur sawal kiye to main kese? .
Vikram- kamaya pahle puri baat sun lo agar raju tumse koi bhi aur sawal kare to usko bol dene ki wo mere pass aa jaye main usko sab kuch bata dunga ..
Kamaya- vikram app par..
Vikram- ha kamaya ye mujhe hi karna padega, mujhe hi tum bas raju ko mere pass bej dena itna hi kaam hai tumhara, baki sab kuch ane wale samay par chod do wahi nirnay lega kya hoga hamare saath tik hai..
Kamaya bhi samjh gai ki yahi tik hoga sab ke liye isliye usne sir hami bhari aur phone rakh diya..
Kamaya - Huf chalo accha hua, vikram se baat karne ka idea sahi raha mera, sayad vikram hi raj ko acche se samjha sakate hai, unki bat raj samjh jayenge, ab dekhte hai raj mujhe apne aur paro ke bare mae batate hai ki nahi
Ab kamaya tenson se mukat ho gai aur raju ke ane ka wait karne lagi ,
(Iske baad kya hua uske liye update 81 se 84 tak read kar lo sabhi log )
To ab chalte hai khet main jaha vikram ke kahne se khane ka intajama ho raha tha tabhi vikram ke pass ek kisan aa gaya jo bahut salo se vikram ke saath hi hai..
Kisan- are chote malik wo hum apse kuch kahna chahate hai, aur raam raam raju Babu..
Raju- raam raam kaka
Vikram- ha kyu nahi bolo kaka kya baat hai..
Kisan- wo hum aur sabhi kisan soch rahe the ki, agar - agar apki ijajat ho to, to
Vikram- are kya kya to to laga rakha hai kaka saff saff bolo kya baat hai..
Kisan- ab chote malik soch rahe the khana to milega hi agar toda pina bhi ho jaye tho, par app kahe to..
Vikram- are kaka tik hai par dhayn rahe itna hi milega ki sab hosh mae rahe kahi josh na kho de tik hai na.
Kisan - are chote malik apne ham kisano ki itni badi baat rakh li hum bhi apki baat jarur maneneng..
Kisan ke chahre par khushi saff nazar aa rahi thi aur jab usne ye baat baki sab ko bata di too sabhi ne vahi se vikram ka dhanyavaad kiya, fir vikram raju se..
Vikram- kya soch raha hai raju
Raju- nahi kuch nahi bhaiya wo yahi ki app man gaye itni jaldi se too 
Vikram- accha wo chal yaha bat batata hu tujko main kyu man li in sab ki baat ko..
Wahi dono ek khatiya (bed) par bat gaye fir vikram ne ek kaam wali ko awaj laga diya aur..
Kamwali- Ji chote malik boliye kya chahiye apko..
Vikram- ha bhabhi toda sarbat bana do 2 gilas dono ke liye
Aur kamwali jaldi se sarbat la li , dono ne sarbat pi liya fir vikram bola..
Vikram- ha to raju to yahi soch raha tha na ki mene inki baat itni asani se kese man li koi sawal kyu nahi kiya.
Raju - Ji bhaiya
Vikram- to sun raju ye jo jitne Kisan aur majdur dekh raha hai na tu, ye wo log hai Jinki kai puste hamare parivaar ke saath hamesa se judi hui hai,
Matalab ye Hamre kheto main hi kaam karte hai aur apni jindagi chalate hai, wese to ab samay badal chuka hai to kuch gaon ke ladke sahar (city ) chale gaye fir har ghar se 1 na 1 majdur aata hi hai, in logo ne ajj tak Hamre parivaar ke saath wafadar rahe hai, hamesa hi. Isliye inki kabhi - kabhi choti moti mango ko main khusi khusi man leta hu, saath main ek aur wajha hai raju..
Raju - aur wo dusri wajha kon si hai bhaiya..
Vikram- raju ye sab ek tarah se mera parivaar hi hai, kyuki main inhi ke saath to rahta hu subha se lekar sham tak kabhi - kabhi raat tak bhi, isliye inki baat man leta hu main, aur bata raju mene gaon walo se teri bahut charcha suni hai, par main tere mhu se sunana cahata hu, wese bhi abhi raat hone main toda samya hai chal bata
Fir raju apni sarri bate vikram ko batata gaya aur vikram bhi apne kheto ke bare mae aur fir vikram ne last mae bola..
Vikram- raju jo baat mene tujko yaha batane ke liye bulaaya hai na wo baat main yese nahi bata paunga..
Raju - hmn
to fir kese bhaiya..
Vikram- raat ko toda sa pine ke baad hi mere andar himmat aayegi ye baat batane ke liye.. Dekho bato hi bato main pata BHi nahi chala ki raat bhi chal todi party mana lete hai..
Idhar sabhi logo ne milkar bich mae aag jala li aur khana pina suru kar liya par usse pahle ek kisna khada hua aur bola,
Kisan- ha to bhaiya log ajj ki ye jaam hamare raju Babu ke naam Jinki wajha se ham dhoka khane se bhi bach gaye aur bahut dino baad khet mae jasan (party) manane ka muka bhi mil gaya to jay ho raju Babu ki..
Us kisan ki awaj mae awaj milate hue sabhi logo ne raju ki jay jaykar ki aur suru hui party sabhi log apne apne mae kho gaya aur vikram ne ishara karke raju ko room mae bhula liya aur darwaja band kar liya, raju ne dekha ki vikram bhaiya pi chuke hai aur tode se nase mae bhi aa gaye tab raju bolo..
Raju - bhaiya ap pi chuke hai aur mat pijiye apki tabyat kharaab ho jayegi nahi..
Vikram- ha ha ha (hasta hu) chote ye sarab meri kya tabyat kharaab karega, meri to kismat ne hi meri tabyat kharaab kar di hai, is ek botal se kuch nahi hoga chote kuch nahi..
Janta hai chote ye main kyu pi raha hu, taki jo dard mene ajj tak apne is dil mae daba kar rakha hai na wo bahar aa sake, chal aj main tujko batata hu wo razz jiske bare mae sir mujhe kamaya aur dadi (gaon ki wo aurat) ko pata hai to dhyaan se sun aur samjh ki akhir kya wajha rahi hogi ye, ye Thakur vikram sing itna majbur ho gaya ki apni patni ko apne se dur kar diya, tere dil mae bahut se khayl aa rahe honge chote to sun meri kahani sun..
Vikram ki ankho mae ab tode anshu dikh rahe the aur unko pochta hua khada hua aur Diwal par lage apne pita Ji ki photo par hath ferta hua bola...
Vikram- janta hai raju har bacche ki icha hoti hai ki uska pita uski har jarurat puri kare aur meri kisamat to dekh chote mujhe tere babuji jesa pita mila, jinke liya unki aulad ki khushi se bad kar aur kuch bhi nahi tha, kuch bhi nahi..
Par mene, ha mene uni pita ke visvas ke saath khelta raha, unke payar ka fayeda uthata raha
Raju - bhaiya app ye..
Vikram- bich mae mat rok chote, mat rok mujhe ajj is dard ko nikal jane de chote, nikal jane de..
Janta hai chote jab se mene hosh samhala na, mere pita meri kuch magne se pahle hi wo chij mujko de dete the kabhi kisi chij ki jarurat hi nahi padi Mujko, jo man karta wo karta tha mae, par bolte hai na chote ki jada lad payar bacche ko bigad deta hai tik mere saath bhi wesa hi hua chote, wesa hi hua..
Vikram- mujko bachpan se hi school se koi matlb nahi tha fir bhi 12 pass kar, for pita Ji se bol diya ki mae khet samhala lunga aur wo man gaye, tab tak mae 18 sal ko ho gaya tha aur meri jawani samhal nahi pai chote, dosti yaari bhi ki to kharb aur pese ki koi kaami hi nahi thi, fir aate din khet mae party kiya karte fir ye party kab daru baji mae badal gai aur fir is daru ki jagah ka ganja ne le li pata hi nahi chal..
Aur fir wo din bhi aa gaya jis din ko main kosta hu chote kosta hu ki kass us din mene UN logo ki baat nahi mani hoti to yesa nahi hota, sayad ajj ye din Mujko nahi dekhna padta, par sayad jis devta samna pita ke visvas ko mene toda tha uski saja mujhe ISI tarah se milni thi, ISI tarah se..
Raju - yesa kya hua tha bhaiya
Vikram- batata hu chote sab kuch batata hu main tujko ajj, to us din hamare gaon ke pass kuch kabile ke log aaye the kuch dir rukne ke liye aur mere kuch dost mere pass aye aur bole
Dost 1- kya vikram kya sir pita hi rahega ya pura mard bhi banana hai tujko bol.
Vikram- kya matalab hai re tere
Dost 2- abe vikram tujhe nahi pata kya ki gaon ke pass kuch kabile ke log aaye hue hai..
Vikram- ha janta hu to uska ky kya
Dost 1- abe baat yesi hai ki humko pata chala ki, wo dandhe wali hai
Vikram- kya matlb
Dost 2- abe tu bache ka bacha hi raha abe wo aurte peso ke badle sab kuch karne deti hai
Vikram- kya karne deti hai salo saff saff bol..
Dost 1- abe tu peso ke badle unke saath raat gujar sakta hai, hum log bhi kal gaya the yaar maa kasam kya mall thi sali raat bhar baja kar maja aa gyaa, tu bhi chal maja ayega pura mard ban jayega tu bhi
Raju aur vikram
Raju- fir, fir kya hua bhaiya..
Vikram- ha ha ha hona kya tha raju main bhi jawan tha aur kabhi kisi ke saath kiya nahi tha dosto ki wajha se chal diya main bhi raat mae aur fir..
To Be Continued
you continue the story after very long time.
i know mushkill hoti hai kuch naya sochne meine but kisi ko bhi kahani bich me nahi chaodni chahiye
wase update aacha hai
I wish ki aab aap ye story mid meine nahi leave karenge, and apke readers ka flow tutne se pehle story ke updates dete rahenge
ALL THE BEST.
Waiting for the next update.