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Bahut he alg aur unique concept ko present kiya h,,, kam padhi likhi sidhi sadhi ghr parivar me he zindagi gujar dene wali aam mahila jisne kbhi zindagi me koi nirnay nhi liya,, woo Aaj isi bebasi k kaaran apni zindagi me khudse kuchh nahi smjh paa rhi h aur na kr paa rhi h,,,,Adhyaaye 18
Sunita ke man mein us gadhey ke khade ling ne ek azeeb c kasak jaga d thi par weh chah kr bhi kuch nhi kar sakti thi, iskiye usney jaldi se us gadhey ke paas se chale jane ka faisla kiya. Aur weh fir se us vishraam sthal ke bheetar aa gyi aur weh gadha fir se bageechey mein jakr charne laga.
Sunita ko apney aap se ghreena ho rahi thi ki kaisey weh ek janwar ki is parkar ki kriya se utezit mehsoos kar sakti thi.
Pata nahi kuch toh adhbhut (wonderful) tha is ekaant aur prakriti ki god mein , yha par tino maa, beta aur beti maano dunia ki bheed bhaad aur samaaj ke taaney - baane ko bhoolkar apney man , dil ,dimaag aur sabsey molik (fundamental) apney shareer ki mool parvirtio (natural instincts) ki awaaz sun rahe they.
Sunita apni antr atama (conscience) ke sath tark kartey hue swaym se hi swaal jawaab kar rahi thi kiya kaya us gadhey ke gupt ang ko dekhkar uska utezit hona svabhavik tha ya nahi , paap tha ya punya.
Aksar hamari zindagi mein bhi aisa hi ho jata hai punya ke chakr mein log paap kar baithtey hai, aur ya yun kahiye ki kuch cheezo ko log paap samjhtey hai kuch ko punya, kya aisa nahi hai ki jo karya kisi ke liye punya ho kisi dusrey ke liye weh paap ho skta hai.
Asal mein sare ke sare manushya ke itihas mein yehi dwand (conflict) hai ki yeh pakka kaun karega ki kaya punya hai aur kaya paap. Aur issi sheershak (title) par yeh upnayas adhaarit hai.
Sangeeta devi jaisi istri jo pati ko parmeshwar maan kar pooja karti hai agr toh sab kuch ek bejaan moorti ki tarh sehti rahey toh pativarta aur punya krne wali istri, aur agr Akash ko kuch palo ke liye bhog le toh paap ki bhagidaar.
Kya Akash ne bachpan mein uskey stano ko chus - chus kar dudh nahi piya tha, aur kya weh ussi ki yoni se is dharti par nahi aaya tha. Toh kya weh paap nahi tha. Par Smaaj aur Sanskriti ke banaye gaye niyamo se kon ladai ladey. Issi liye Akash ko sabki ki naak ke nichey yeh sab karna pad raha tha.
Jaha Sunita is paap punya ke vishya mein apne hi aap se baatein kar rahi thi wahi par Akash ki maa Sangeeta devi bhi kahin na kahin issi khicha tani mein uljhi hui thi.
Akash ka bewaak rawayiya usse kuch palo ke liye azad toh karta par itney warsho ke purvagreh (conditioning) se shutkara pana mushkil kaam tha jisme Sangeeta devi kisi hadd tak safalta paa chukki thi. Usney iss adher umar mein aakar pehli waar apney shareer ki sunni thi na ki samaaj aur naitik mulyon ki.
" Maa! Mein boht khush hu ki meine aap ko poori tarh se hasil kar liya hai, par jab hum ghar laut jayenge toh us khadoos ! (Rajneesh Rathod) ke sath mera aapko dekhna boht mushkil hoga" - Akash ne kuttia (hut) mein baithi Sangeeta devi ke kandhey par hath rakhtey hue kaha jo ki acharya g dwara uss gadhey ki madad se bhejey gaye smaan se un wastro ko alg kar rahi thi jinhey weh pehn sakti thi kyunki teeno maa , beta aur beti ke paas pehnney ke liye ikka dukka wastr hi they.
"Akash teri zid , shaitaani aur khushi ke liye beta! Meine apney aap ko bhi daao pe laga diya, par tere pita g ki jageh tumhe bhi pata hai koi nahi le sakta , hamarey rishtey ka adhaar kewal aur kewal kaam wasna hai , isko gupt rakhne mein hi sabki bhalayi hai warna anarth ho jayega beta ! " - Sangeeta devi
"Maa! Mein aapse payar karta hu aur aap bhi mere se sneh rakhti hai ! hamare is gupt rishtey ka zaroori pehlu kaam wasna ho sakti hai par pure ka pura adhaar kaam wasna kaise ho sakta hai maa" - Akash ne badi chaturai se Sangeeta devi ke samne shabdo ka jaal buntey huye tark diya. Halanki usse bhi pata tha ki baat toh uski maa Sangeeta devi thik keh rahi thi.
Par Akash Sangeeta devi ko kewal sambhog tak hi seemit nhi rakhna chahta tha weh ussey apney shabdo ke maya jaal mein fasakar weh sab krwana chahta tha jiski usney kamna ki thi.
" Kya aapko meri aankho mein apne liye prem nazr nhi aata ? " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ke kandhe se hath sarka kr uppr gardan ke pichle hisse pr kar diya.
"Beta! Pyar aur sneh toh hai par jo tujhey chahiye tha woh toh sab tumhe mil gya hai , ab issey jayda mein kya kar sakti hu" - Sangeeta devi ne Akash ki tarf palt tey hue kaha.
" Maa! Bachpann mein pita g ne mujhe boarding school bhejkar jo cheena tha uski bharpayi hone mein abhi boht samya lagega" - Akash ki aankho mein mano Rajneesh Rathod ke prati ek ghreena aur gussa uttar aya tha.
"Maa! Mein chahta hu ke agley janam mein tu toh meri maa bane par baap koi aur ho " - Akash ne jaan bhujhkr baap shabd ka paryog kiya kyunki weh Rajneesh Rathod ko kewal upri man se pita g! kehta tha par bheetar hi bheetar unsey ghreena aur irshya karta tha.
"Chal badmash! Aisa nhi bolte beta! tere pita g! ne bhi tera bhala hi chaha tha tujhey ghar se door bhejkar , tu bhi toh sara din ghar mein reh kar awara ho gya tha " - Sangeeta devi Akash ki bachkaana baat par hans padi thi.
" Maa! Kabhi kabhi mera man karta hai ki mein tumse shadi kar lu aur tumhe uss khadoos se hamesha ke liye kahi door kekr chala jaau. " - Akash ne dhoti ke nichey se apney lund ko sehlate hue kaha.
"Beta! Abhi bhi kya tu mujhey patni se kam rakhta hai , sara din pichey pichey ! " - Sangeeta devi ne muskurate hue kaha
"Maa! Abhi toh aap sirf ek rakhail ho , jo bas pita g ki gair haziri mein mera bistar garm kar rahi ho aur ghar jakr us khadoos ke bistar mein let jaogi , patni toh tab banogi jab us khadoos (R.R.) se kissi tarh hamesha ke kiye picha churwaogi " - Akash ne jaanbujhkar rakhail aur bistar garm karney wale shabado ka pryog kiya kyon ki weh Sangeeta devi ko sharmsaar krna chahta tha. Aur apartyaksh (indirectly) roop se batana chahta tha ki uski aukaat iss mard pardhan pariwaar aur samaaj mein kaya thi. Kewal ek rakhail ki.
Akash ki yeh sab baatein sunkr Sangeeta devi ko man hi man mehsoos ho raha tha ki Akash ki baat bilkul saaf aur sach thi. Kya weh apney pariwaarik rishton ko bachane aur smaaj ke dar se Akash ka bistar garm nhi kar rahi thi?
" Toh beta! Ab tu chahta kya hai ki mein tere pita g ko chor kr kahin aur chali jaao " - Sangeeta devi ne Akash ko thoda gussa kartey hue bola kyunki weh samjh nahi pa rahi thi ki Akash akhir - kaar chahta kaya tha.
" Arey maa! Chorne ki baat kaha keh raha hu , aur aap iss umar mein chorna chaho bhi toh chor nahi sakti , mein toh bas aapko puri tarh se apna banana chahta hu " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ke dono gaalo par apni dono hathelia rakh Sangeeta devi ka jhuka muh apni aur kartey hue kaha.
"Beta! Mein kaha bhagi ja rahi hu , tumhari hi toh hu , teri zid aur khushi ke liye hi toh yeh sab tere sath kiya hai " - Sangeeta devi ki ankhon mein karuna, putr prem ke sath sath Akash ki baat na smjh pane ka sandeh bhi tha.
"Acha! Toh meri zid aur khushi ke liye sab kiya hai ke nichey wali ki khujli mitaaney ke kiye kiya hai " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ko chirhate hue kamuk swar mein kaha.
Sangeeta devi ek baar fir lajja ke maare , na jawaab ho gayi thi.
"Thik hai maa! Agr aap meri hi ho toh fir iska parmaan (evidence) aapko dena padega, puri tarh se meri hokar , bolo aap puri tarh se meri ban ne ko taiyaar ho " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ki ankhon mein ankhey daalte hue pucha.
Sangeeta devi beshq Akash ke aagey puran smarpan kar chukki thi par fir bhi uskey dil ke kisi kone mein kahi thoda sa sandeh bacha hua tha ki ab is shaitaan ke dimaag mein kaya chal raha tha.
Par fir bhi Sangeeta devi ne himmat karke haan mein sir hilate hue kaha - " beta ! Sab kuch toh tune kar liya hai ab issey jayda parmaan kaya du ! , acha! thik hai mein puri tarh se tumhey pana chahti hu bolo kaya parmaan chahiye" - yeh kehte hue Sangeeta devi ki aankhey ek baar fir sharm se jhuk gayi aur Akash ke chehre pr ek shaitani muskurahat aa gyi thi.
"Bachan deti ho maa! Puri tarh se meri honey ke liye sab purane bandhan todne honge ; Maa! Ache se soch lo " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ki savdhaan kartey huye kaha.
"Beta ! Bas jab tak kisi ko kaano - kaan khabar nhi hogi, tab tak mein jo tu kahega sab karne ke liye taiyaar hu" - Sangeeta devi ne bhi chetawani ke swar mein hi uttar diya.
" Maa! han! Jo hoga ek parde ke pichey , samaaj aur pariwaar ki sab mariyadaon ko nibhatey hue hoga , mein aapko bachan deta hu" - Akash ne uttar dete hue kaha.
"Fir thik hai beta! Bolo kaya parmaan cahiye tujhey" - Sangeeta devi
" Thik hai maa! Toh bachan do" - Akash
" Han! Baba ! Bachan deti hu " - Sangeeta devi
"Thik hai maa toh yeh pakka karo aur tod de in churio ko , ponch de apni maang se yeh jhoota sindoor, khol de apne baal aur safed sari pehn kr vidhwa ban ka roop dharan kar , jaise ki tere pati parmeshwar Rajneesh Rathod ki mritu (death) ho gayi ho. " - Yeh sab kehte hue Akash ki ankho mein azeeb shaitaani aur wasna jhalak thi.
Akash ki yeh baat Sangeeta devi ke uppr so bijlia lekr gir padi thi.
" Na! Na!! Hey! Bhagwan beta! Yeh kaisa anarth apney muh se bol raha hai beta! , shubh shubh bolo beta! " - Sangeeta devi ne ram ram ! Karte hue Akash ke hatho se apna hath churate hue bola.
Sangeeta devi ko Akash ki yeh baat foonti aankh na suhayi thi (bahut buri laggi thi). Aur usney baat badltey hue gusse se kaha - " ab yeh larki bhi na pata nahi itni der se kaha gum ho gayi hai , gadha dekhne gayi hai ya taiyaar karney ! "
Par idhar Sunita toh wahi par us gadhey ka akarshit kar dene wala lund shup shup kar dekh rahi thi, yeh chotey kad ka gadha wahi bageechey mein mand mand hinkarta aur apney mote honto ko funkarta hua alag hi aawesh mein tha. Uska lumba lund jo nichey latka hua tha , reh - reh kar tan jata aur uskey gol pet se 90 degree ke kon (angle) par ja lagta aur fir nichey latak jata. Punch ko hawa mein uthayey alg hi masti mein tha. Aur Sunita us jhrokhey (window) se kisi parkhu ki tarh is gadhey ke lund ka gehnta se muyaina kar utezitt ho rahi thi.
Kaam ne kisi ko nahi baksha na devta na insaan na janwar is baat ke parmaan ki sakshi is samya Sunita bani hui thi jo halki - halki lagataar barish se bachne ke liye vishraam sthal ke khule hall se yeh sab nazara bahr bageechey mein dekh rahi thi.
Aur idhr Sunita ki gair haziri mein Akash ne ek nayi hi gaaj Sangeeta devi ke upar gira d thi.
"Maa! Dekha! Tum abhi bhi puri tarh se meri nhi ho , pita g ke liye ab bhi aapkey man mein wahi prem , karuna, sneh aur ussi tayag ewam samrpan ki bhavna hai " - Akash ne ek haarey hue insaan ki bhanti kaha.
"Beta! Mein kya karu mein tumse bhi bahut payaar karti hu aur tumhare pita g se bhi , mein aisey ek jhatke mein unhey kaise bhula du, unhone kitna kiya hai hamare kiye" - yeh kehtey hue Sangeeta devi ki aankhey aansuo se chalak uthi.
" Maa! Meine pehle hi apko savdhaan kiya tha, ki agr puri tarh se meri hona hai toh apney puran smarpan ka parmaan dena hoga " - Akash ne thoda gussa dikhate hue kaha.
"Par beta! Yeh sab galt hai , aisey kyun bol rahe ho apne pita g ke baare mein, kya tum unka mara muh dekh kr hi khush ho " - Sangeeta devi ki aankho mein ab bhi aansu they.
Akash ko man hi man apni maa Sangeeta devi ko aisey gidgeedaatey dekh bahut anand aa raha tha par usney bahri taur pr ek ziddi , hatti aur gusse wala aavran banaya hua tha. Man hi man toh weh Sangeeta devi ki bey-basi dekh kar muskura raha tha.
"Maa! Sahi galt ki baat mat kar , ab hum sahi galt ke sawalo se bahut aagey aa chuke hai, waise bhi mere sath sambhog karke tuney us khadoos (Rajneesh Rathod) ko jeete g ! maar hi diya hai , ab is baat ko partikaraatmak (symbolic) roop se maan ne se inkaar kyun kar rahi ho " - Akash ne thoda gussa dikhate hue dhridhta (determination) se kaha.
Akash ne jaan bujhkar jeete g! maar dene wali baat kahi thi kyunk ki weh Sangeeta devi ko nicha dikha kar usey doshi hone ka ehsaas karwa uskey dimaag par haawi hona chahta tha. Jaisa ki weh pehle bhi karte aaya tha.
Itna keh kar Akash ne kuttia ke darwaaze ko band kr andr se chitkuni laga d aur issey pehley ki Sangeeta devi samjh pati ki achanak ek, CHAPAAAKKKKK!!!!!!!!! Ki awaz se sari kuttia (hut) gunj uthi.
Akash ka tamacha itna zordaar tha ki Sangeeta devi ki ankho ke samne kuch palo je liye andhera cha gya tha , abhi weh pehley ke tamachey se sambh nahi payi thi ke Akash ne uskey dusrey gaal par bhi zordaar tamaacha de mara.
"Chal sali ! Raand! Itni der se samjha raha hu ! Sali! Rakhail ! " - Yeh kehte hue Akash ne Sangeeta devi ko dono hatho se pakd zor laga kr khincha aur uski dono kalayion (wrists) ko diwal par de maara jissey ki Sangeeta devi ki saari ki saari churia ek jhatkey mein tutt kr zameen par bikhar gayi, kuch churia tutt kar uski mansal moti kalayion mein ghus gyi aur dekhte hi dekhte Sangeeta devi ke hath lahu luhaan ho gaye.
"Ahhhhhh. Ummmmm. Maa! Mar gyi!!!! Akash ! Kya hua hai tujhe beta! Chor darwaaza khol , Kahin Sunita ne dekh liya toh anarth ho jayega" - Akash ka aisa roop dekh kr weh bhochakki reh gyi thi aur usse samjh nhi aa rahi thi ki weh pehle kya krti , kalayion se beh rahey khoon ko saaf karti ya ansuo ko ponchti ya Akash ko shant krti , kyunki usko lag raha tha ki agle hi pal shayd andr ki uthal - puthal sun kar Sunita waha aa jayegi aur ghor anarth ho ayega.
Par Sangeeta devi shayd bhool gyi ki bahr barish aur hawa ki awaaz mein band kuttia mein kaya ho raha tha weh sab kissi ke liye sunn pana toh samne ke 30 meter door Galiyaare se bhi mishkil tha aur Sunita toh ussey bhi koi 50 meter door us vishraam sthal mein thi.
Akash yeh sab baat janta tha ki band kuttia (hut) ke bahr awaz jana bilkul namumkin tha, aur agr Sunita waha aati bhi toh weh chitkuni toh laga hi chukka tha.
" Koi baat nhi uss raand ! ko bhi pata chal jane de aaj ke uski sati Savitri maa kya gul khila rahi hai sali ! Rakhail ! " - itna kehtey hue Akash ne paglo jaisa weyvahaar (behaviour) krte hue Sangeeta devi ko us single bed par patak diya.
"Beta! tu jaisa bolega mein karne ko taiyaar hu! par abhi in sab baaton ka samya nhi hai , tu jaldi se darwaaza khol de mein tere hath jorti hu beta! " - Sangeeta devi ko apna dard toh bhool hi gaya tha ussey toh chinta thi kewal Sunita ke waha aane ki.
" Chal apney baal khol ! Sali Raaand! " Akash ne kisi tanashah ki tareh adesh diya aur Sangeeta devi ne bhi kisi dasi ki bhanti jhat se apney baalo ke joode ko bikher kar apney baalo ko asth - waysth kar diya.
"Ahhhh! Ab lag rahi hai Rajneesh Rathod ki vidhwa ! " - Akash
" Aur ab iss sindoor ka kya kaam hai meri rakhail ! " - Akash ne lund ko dhoti ke niche se hi sehlate hue kha.
Akash ke iss adesh ka anusaran kartey hue , Sangeeta devi ki dono aankhey jinme aansuo ke sath sath bebasi bhi bhari hui thi, is mansik aur sharirik peeda ke chalte band ho gayi aur usney eh ahhhh... bhartey hue apney daaye hath ki hatheli se apni maang ke sindoor ko ponch dala.
To be continued ......
Iske bad se shyd Sangeeta Devi ki puri life he change hone wali h
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wah!wah!wah!kya ek jabardast kahaani hai yah! ekdom jackass aur mast update!Adhyaaye 18
Sunita ke man mein us gadhey ke khade ling ne ek azeeb c kasak jaga d thi par weh chah kr bhi kuch nhi kar sakti thi, iskiye usney jaldi se us gadhey ke paas se chale jane ka faisla kiya. Aur weh fir se us vishraam sthal ke bheetar aa gyi aur weh gadha fir se bageechey mein jakr charne laga.
Sunita ko apney aap se ghreena ho rahi thi ki kaisey weh ek janwar ki is parkar ki kriya se utezit mehsoos kar sakti thi.
Pata nahi kuch toh adhbhut (wonderful) tha is ekaant aur prakriti ki god mein , yha par tino maa, beta aur beti maano dunia ki bheed bhaad aur samaaj ke taaney - baane ko bhoolkar apney man , dil ,dimaag aur sabsey molik (fundamental) apney shareer ki mool parvirtio (natural instincts) ki awaaz sun rahe they.
Sunita apni antr atama (conscience) ke sath tark kartey hue swaym se hi swaal jawaab kar rahi thi kiya kaya us gadhey ke gupt ang ko dekhkar uska utezit hona svabhavik tha ya nahi , paap tha ya punya.
Aksar hamari zindagi mein bhi aisa hi ho jata hai punya ke chakr mein log paap kar baithtey hai, aur ya yun kahiye ki kuch cheezo ko log paap samjhtey hai kuch ko punya, kya aisa nahi hai ki jo karya kisi ke liye punya ho kisi dusrey ke liye weh paap ho skta hai.
Asal mein sare ke sare manushya ke itihas mein yehi dwand (conflict) hai ki yeh pakka kaun karega ki kaya punya hai aur kaya paap. Aur issi sheershak (title) par yeh upnayas adhaarit hai.
Sangeeta devi jaisi istri jo pati ko parmeshwar maan kar pooja karti hai agr toh sab kuch ek bejaan moorti ki tarh sehti rahey toh pativarta aur punya krne wali istri, aur agr Akash ko kuch palo ke liye bhog le toh paap ki bhagidaar.
Kya Akash ne bachpan mein uskey stano ko chus - chus kar dudh nahi piya tha, aur kya weh ussi ki yoni se is dharti par nahi aaya tha. Toh kya weh paap nahi tha. Par Smaaj aur Sanskriti ke banaye gaye niyamo se kon ladai ladey. Issi liye Akash ko sabki ki naak ke nichey yeh sab karna pad raha tha.
Jaha Sunita is paap punya ke vishya mein apne hi aap se baatein kar rahi thi wahi par Akash ki maa Sangeeta devi bhi kahin na kahin issi khicha tani mein uljhi hui thi.
Akash ka bewaak rawayiya usse kuch palo ke liye azad toh karta par itney warsho ke purvagreh (conditioning) se shutkara pana mushkil kaam tha jisme Sangeeta devi kisi hadd tak safalta paa chukki thi. Usney iss adher umar mein aakar pehli waar apney shareer ki sunni thi na ki samaaj aur naitik mulyon ki.
" Maa! Mein boht khush hu ki meine aap ko poori tarh se hasil kar liya hai, par jab hum ghar laut jayenge toh us khadoos ! (Rajneesh Rathod) ke sath mera aapko dekhna boht mushkil hoga" - Akash ne kuttia (hut) mein baithi Sangeeta devi ke kandhey par hath rakhtey hue kaha jo ki acharya g dwara uss gadhey ki madad se bhejey gaye smaan se un wastro ko alg kar rahi thi jinhey weh pehn sakti thi kyunki teeno maa , beta aur beti ke paas pehnney ke liye ikka dukka wastr hi they.
"Akash teri zid , shaitaani aur khushi ke liye beta! Meine apney aap ko bhi daao pe laga diya, par tere pita g ki jageh tumhe bhi pata hai koi nahi le sakta , hamarey rishtey ka adhaar kewal aur kewal kaam wasna hai , isko gupt rakhne mein hi sabki bhalayi hai warna anarth ho jayega beta ! " - Sangeeta devi
"Maa! Mein aapse payar karta hu aur aap bhi mere se sneh rakhti hai ! hamare is gupt rishtey ka zaroori pehlu kaam wasna ho sakti hai par pure ka pura adhaar kaam wasna kaise ho sakta hai maa" - Akash ne badi chaturai se Sangeeta devi ke samne shabdo ka jaal buntey huye tark diya. Halanki usse bhi pata tha ki baat toh uski maa Sangeeta devi thik keh rahi thi.
Par Akash Sangeeta devi ko kewal sambhog tak hi seemit nhi rakhna chahta tha weh ussey apney shabdo ke maya jaal mein fasakar weh sab krwana chahta tha jiski usney kamna ki thi.
" Kya aapko meri aankho mein apne liye prem nazr nhi aata ? " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ke kandhe se hath sarka kr uppr gardan ke pichle hisse pr kar diya.
"Beta! Pyar aur sneh toh hai par jo tujhey chahiye tha woh toh sab tumhe mil gya hai , ab issey jayda mein kya kar sakti hu" - Sangeeta devi ne Akash ki tarf palt tey hue kaha.
" Maa! Bachpann mein pita g ne mujhe boarding school bhejkar jo cheena tha uski bharpayi hone mein abhi boht samya lagega" - Akash ki aankho mein mano Rajneesh Rathod ke prati ek ghreena aur gussa uttar aya tha.
"Maa! Mein chahta hu ke agley janam mein tu toh meri maa bane par baap koi aur ho " - Akash ne jaan bhujhkr baap shabd ka paryog kiya kyunki weh Rajneesh Rathod ko kewal upri man se pita g! kehta tha par bheetar hi bheetar unsey ghreena aur irshya karta tha.
"Chal badmash! Aisa nhi bolte beta! tere pita g! ne bhi tera bhala hi chaha tha tujhey ghar se door bhejkar , tu bhi toh sara din ghar mein reh kar awara ho gya tha " - Sangeeta devi Akash ki bachkaana baat par hans padi thi.
" Maa! Kabhi kabhi mera man karta hai ki mein tumse shadi kar lu aur tumhe uss khadoos se hamesha ke liye kahi door kekr chala jaau. " - Akash ne dhoti ke nichey se apney lund ko sehlate hue kaha.
"Beta! Abhi bhi kya tu mujhey patni se kam rakhta hai , sara din pichey pichey ! " - Sangeeta devi ne muskurate hue kaha
"Maa! Abhi toh aap sirf ek rakhail ho , jo bas pita g ki gair haziri mein mera bistar garm kar rahi ho aur ghar jakr us khadoos ke bistar mein let jaogi , patni toh tab banogi jab us khadoos (R.R.) se kissi tarh hamesha ke kiye picha churwaogi " - Akash ne jaanbujhkar rakhail aur bistar garm karney wale shabado ka pryog kiya kyon ki weh Sangeeta devi ko sharmsaar krna chahta tha. Aur apartyaksh (indirectly) roop se batana chahta tha ki uski aukaat iss mard pardhan pariwaar aur samaaj mein kaya thi. Kewal ek rakhail ki.
Akash ki yeh sab baatein sunkr Sangeeta devi ko man hi man mehsoos ho raha tha ki Akash ki baat bilkul saaf aur sach thi. Kya weh apney pariwaarik rishton ko bachane aur smaaj ke dar se Akash ka bistar garm nhi kar rahi thi?
" Toh beta! Ab tu chahta kya hai ki mein tere pita g ko chor kr kahin aur chali jaao " - Sangeeta devi ne Akash ko thoda gussa kartey hue bola kyunki weh samjh nahi pa rahi thi ki Akash akhir - kaar chahta kaya tha.
" Arey maa! Chorne ki baat kaha keh raha hu , aur aap iss umar mein chorna chaho bhi toh chor nahi sakti , mein toh bas aapko puri tarh se apna banana chahta hu " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ke dono gaalo par apni dono hathelia rakh Sangeeta devi ka jhuka muh apni aur kartey hue kaha.
"Beta! Mein kaha bhagi ja rahi hu , tumhari hi toh hu , teri zid aur khushi ke liye hi toh yeh sab tere sath kiya hai " - Sangeeta devi ki ankhon mein karuna, putr prem ke sath sath Akash ki baat na smjh pane ka sandeh bhi tha.
"Acha! Toh meri zid aur khushi ke liye sab kiya hai ke nichey wali ki khujli mitaaney ke kiye kiya hai " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ko chirhate hue kamuk swar mein kaha.
Sangeeta devi ek baar fir lajja ke maare , na jawaab ho gayi thi.
"Thik hai maa! Agr aap meri hi ho toh fir iska parmaan (evidence) aapko dena padega, puri tarh se meri hokar , bolo aap puri tarh se meri ban ne ko taiyaar ho " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ki ankhon mein ankhey daalte hue pucha.
Sangeeta devi beshq Akash ke aagey puran smarpan kar chukki thi par fir bhi uskey dil ke kisi kone mein kahi thoda sa sandeh bacha hua tha ki ab is shaitaan ke dimaag mein kaya chal raha tha.
Par fir bhi Sangeeta devi ne himmat karke haan mein sir hilate hue kaha - " beta ! Sab kuch toh tune kar liya hai ab issey jayda parmaan kaya du ! , acha! thik hai mein puri tarh se tumhey pana chahti hu bolo kaya parmaan chahiye" - yeh kehte hue Sangeeta devi ki aankhey ek baar fir sharm se jhuk gayi aur Akash ke chehre pr ek shaitani muskurahat aa gyi thi.
"Bachan deti ho maa! Puri tarh se meri honey ke liye sab purane bandhan todne honge ; Maa! Ache se soch lo " - Akash ne Sangeeta devi ki savdhaan kartey huye kaha.
"Beta ! Bas jab tak kisi ko kaano - kaan khabar nhi hogi, tab tak mein jo tu kahega sab karne ke liye taiyaar hu" - Sangeeta devi ne bhi chetawani ke swar mein hi uttar diya.
" Maa! han! Jo hoga ek parde ke pichey , samaaj aur pariwaar ki sab mariyadaon ko nibhatey hue hoga , mein aapko bachan deta hu" - Akash ne uttar dete hue kaha.
"Fir thik hai beta! Bolo kaya parmaan cahiye tujhey" - Sangeeta devi
" Thik hai maa! Toh bachan do" - Akash
" Han! Baba ! Bachan deti hu " - Sangeeta devi
"Thik hai maa toh yeh pakka karo aur tod de in churio ko , ponch de apni maang se yeh jhoota sindoor, khol de apne baal aur safed sari pehn kr vidhwa ban ka roop dharan kar , jaise ki tere pati parmeshwar Rajneesh Rathod ki mritu (death) ho gayi ho. " - Yeh sab kehte hue Akash ki ankho mein azeeb shaitaani aur wasna jhalak thi.
Akash ki yeh baat Sangeeta devi ke uppr so bijlia lekr gir padi thi.
" Na! Na!! Hey! Bhagwan beta! Yeh kaisa anarth apney muh se bol raha hai beta! , shubh shubh bolo beta! " - Sangeeta devi ne ram ram ! Karte hue Akash ke hatho se apna hath churate hue bola.
Sangeeta devi ko Akash ki yeh baat foonti aankh na suhayi thi (bahut buri laggi thi). Aur usney baat badltey hue gusse se kaha - " ab yeh larki bhi na pata nahi itni der se kaha gum ho gayi hai , gadha dekhne gayi hai ya taiyaar karney ! "
Par idhar Sunita toh wahi par us gadhey ka akarshit kar dene wala lund shup shup kar dekh rahi thi, yeh chotey kad ka gadha wahi bageechey mein mand mand hinkarta aur apney mote honto ko funkarta hua alag hi aawesh mein tha. Uska lumba lund jo nichey latka hua tha , reh - reh kar tan jata aur uskey gol pet se 90 degree ke kon (angle) par ja lagta aur fir nichey latak jata. Punch ko hawa mein uthayey alg hi masti mein tha. Aur Sunita us jhrokhey (window) se kisi parkhu ki tarh is gadhey ke lund ka gehnta se muyaina kar utezitt ho rahi thi.
Kaam ne kisi ko nahi baksha na devta na insaan na janwar is baat ke parmaan ki sakshi is samya Sunita bani hui thi jo halki - halki lagataar barish se bachne ke liye vishraam sthal ke khule hall se yeh sab nazara bahr bageechey mein dekh rahi thi.
Aur idhr Sunita ki gair haziri mein Akash ne ek nayi hi gaaj Sangeeta devi ke upar gira d thi.
"Maa! Dekha! Tum abhi bhi puri tarh se meri nhi ho , pita g ke liye ab bhi aapkey man mein wahi prem , karuna, sneh aur ussi tayag ewam samrpan ki bhavna hai " - Akash ne ek haarey hue insaan ki bhanti kaha.
"Beta! Mein kya karu mein tumse bhi bahut payaar karti hu aur tumhare pita g se bhi , mein aisey ek jhatke mein unhey kaise bhula du, unhone kitna kiya hai hamare kiye" - yeh kehtey hue Sangeeta devi ki aankhey aansuo se chalak uthi.
" Maa! Meine pehle hi apko savdhaan kiya tha, ki agr puri tarh se meri hona hai toh apney puran smarpan ka parmaan dena hoga " - Akash ne thoda gussa dikhate hue kaha.
"Par beta! Yeh sab galt hai , aisey kyun bol rahe ho apne pita g ke baare mein, kya tum unka mara muh dekh kr hi khush ho " - Sangeeta devi ki aankho mein ab bhi aansu they.
Akash ko man hi man apni maa Sangeeta devi ko aisey gidgeedaatey dekh bahut anand aa raha tha par usney bahri taur pr ek ziddi , hatti aur gusse wala aavran banaya hua tha. Man hi man toh weh Sangeeta devi ki bey-basi dekh kar muskura raha tha.
"Maa! Sahi galt ki baat mat kar , ab hum sahi galt ke sawalo se bahut aagey aa chuke hai, waise bhi mere sath sambhog karke tuney us khadoos (Rajneesh Rathod) ko jeete g ! maar hi diya hai , ab is baat ko partikaraatmak (symbolic) roop se maan ne se inkaar kyun kar rahi ho " - Akash ne thoda gussa dikhate hue dhridhta (determination) se kaha.
Akash ne jaan bujhkar jeete g! maar dene wali baat kahi thi kyunk ki weh Sangeeta devi ko nicha dikha kar usey doshi hone ka ehsaas karwa uskey dimaag par haawi hona chahta tha. Jaisa ki weh pehle bhi karte aaya tha.
Itna keh kar Akash ne kuttia ke darwaaze ko band kr andr se chitkuni laga d aur issey pehley ki Sangeeta devi samjh pati ki achanak ek, CHAPAAAKKKKK!!!!!!!!! Ki awaz se sari kuttia (hut) gunj uthi.
Akash ka tamacha itna zordaar tha ki Sangeeta devi ki ankho ke samne kuch palo je liye andhera cha gya tha , abhi weh pehley ke tamachey se sambh nahi payi thi ke Akash ne uskey dusrey gaal par bhi zordaar tamaacha de mara.
"Chal sali ! Raand! Itni der se samjha raha hu ! Sali! Rakhail ! " - Yeh kehte hue Akash ne Sangeeta devi ko dono hatho se pakd zor laga kr khincha aur uski dono kalayion (wrists) ko diwal par de maara jissey ki Sangeeta devi ki saari ki saari churia ek jhatkey mein tutt kr zameen par bikhar gayi, kuch churia tutt kar uski mansal moti kalayion mein ghus gyi aur dekhte hi dekhte Sangeeta devi ke hath lahu luhaan ho gaye.
"Ahhhhhh. Ummmmm. Maa! Mar gyi!!!! Akash ! Kya hua hai tujhe beta! Chor darwaaza khol , Kahin Sunita ne dekh liya toh anarth ho jayega" - Akash ka aisa roop dekh kr weh bhochakki reh gyi thi aur usse samjh nhi aa rahi thi ki weh pehle kya krti , kalayion se beh rahey khoon ko saaf karti ya ansuo ko ponchti ya Akash ko shant krti , kyunki usko lag raha tha ki agle hi pal shayd andr ki uthal - puthal sun kar Sunita waha aa jayegi aur ghor anarth ho ayega.
Par Sangeeta devi shayd bhool gyi ki bahr barish aur hawa ki awaaz mein band kuttia mein kaya ho raha tha weh sab kissi ke liye sunn pana toh samne ke 30 meter door Galiyaare se bhi mishkil tha aur Sunita toh ussey bhi koi 50 meter door us vishraam sthal mein thi.
Akash yeh sab baat janta tha ki band kuttia (hut) ke bahr awaz jana bilkul namumkin tha, aur agr Sunita waha aati bhi toh weh chitkuni toh laga hi chukka tha.
" Koi baat nhi uss raand ! ko bhi pata chal jane de aaj ke uski sati Savitri maa kya gul khila rahi hai sali ! Rakhail ! " - itna kehtey hue Akash ne paglo jaisa weyvahaar (behaviour) krte hue Sangeeta devi ko us single bed par patak diya.
"Beta! tu jaisa bolega mein karne ko taiyaar hu! par abhi in sab baaton ka samya nhi hai , tu jaldi se darwaaza khol de mein tere hath jorti hu beta! " - Sangeeta devi ko apna dard toh bhool hi gaya tha ussey toh chinta thi kewal Sunita ke waha aane ki.
" Chal apney baal khol ! Sali Raaand! " Akash ne kisi tanashah ki tareh adesh diya aur Sangeeta devi ne bhi kisi dasi ki bhanti jhat se apney baalo ke joode ko bikher kar apney baalo ko asth - waysth kar diya.
"Ahhhh! Ab lag rahi hai Rajneesh Rathod ki vidhwa ! " - Akash
" Aur ab iss sindoor ka kya kaam hai meri rakhail ! " - Akash ne lund ko dhoti ke niche se hi sehlate hue kha.
Akash ke iss adesh ka anusaran kartey hue , Sangeeta devi ki dono aankhey jinme aansuo ke sath sath bebasi bhi bhari hui thi, is mansik aur sharirik peeda ke chalte band ho gayi aur usney eh ahhhh... bhartey hue apney daaye hath ki hatheli se apni maang ke sindoor ko ponch dala.
To be continued ......
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Sangeeta devi ek kuleen pariwar se aati hai jinki prarambhik shiksha achey se hui hai western education ka unhe kam gyan hai par unhe kam padhi likhi kehna galat hoga.Bahut he alg aur unique concept ko present kiya h,,, kam padhi likhi sidhi sadhi ghr parivar me he zindagi gujar dene wali aam mahila jisne kbhi zindagi me koi nirnay nhi liya,, woo Aaj isi bebasi k kaaran apni zindagi me khudse kuchh nahi smjh paa rhi h aur na kr paa rhi h,,,,
Iske bad se shyd Sangeeta Devi ki puri life he change hone wali h
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Antrdharmik se apka kaya tatparya hai, kripya aisey misleading comments na de. Is upnayas ko sehjta se chalne de, dhanyawaad!यह बहुत ही बढ़िया और सबसे अच्छी अंतरधार्मिक वयस्क कहानी है जो मैंने कभी पढ़ी है।
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Interfaith i dont get it , its just fictional work for the sake of entertainment , i want you to not comment mindlessly. Just google what does interfaith mean.Just awesome,amazing,fantastic and simply the best interfaith adult story I have ever read.
Interfaith - where there are people from different religions.
This work has nothing to do with religion , caste, gender etc! Its a pure work for the sake of entertainment, donot try to tag it with your narrow approach.
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Haaa ye glt bol gya me,,, unke andar female ki qualities kuchh jyda he h,Sangeeta devi ek kuleen pariwar se aati hai jinki prarambhik shiksha achey se hui hai western education ka unhe kam gyan hai par unhe kam padhi likhi kehna galat hoga.
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maakaLover
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Mene bhi ye he reply krne ka socha tha, but I thought leave himInterfaith i dont get it , its just fictional work for the sake of entertainment , i want you to not comment mindlessly. Just google what does interfaith mean.
Interfaith - where there are people from different religions.
This work has nothing to do with religion , caste, gender etc! Its a pure work for the sake of entertainment, donot try to tag it with your narrow approach.
Thanks
