Bro. Hope you are doing well..!!!
Story is really awesome. The way you have wrote this.. its totally full of excitement.
But have to mention one more thing.. the most bad part is... Update!. It is ruining excitement.
So bro.. either you update all the part of story in one shot or close this forum. Genuinely people are waiting for ur next update from long time. So its better, update all rest part in one shot. And go for next story.
Sorry if i being rude. But i just wanted to tell you that dont let us wait for ur next update everytime. So pls.
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