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Ye konsi baaji hain .... par jo bhi hain Kamaal hain
Aap likhne wale te na es stori ko keya huwaYe konsi baaji hain .... par jo bhi hain Kamaal hain
Bhai ye story likjhan bahut badi zimmedaari hai ! Ismain itne saare characters hain aur pataa nahi ye story jitni acchi likhi hai to meri himmat nahi ho rahi .... ismain jitne Urdu ke shabd hain mujhe wo bhi nahi aate ....pataa nahi main iss story.ke saath nyaayaa kar paaungaa yaa nahi ?Aap likhne wale te na es stori ko keya huwa
Accha ek baat pooch raha hun agar main ye story shuru karun to pehale kon si behan kii chudaai se shuru karoon .....Please bataana to main sochta hun ....waise mera dil to Nimra baaji pe he.?Aap likhne wale te na es stori ko keya huwa
Jada se bhale kuch hi sahi aap ki stori maine padhi hai achha likhete ho aap kosis karne meya harja hai 1 bar kosi kar ke to dekhe ya firr estarah aap dusari likhe par kahani ke kirdar yahi ho aoor tarika bhi yahi ho ha beshak aap Urdu ki jagha Hindi likhe par likhe to sahiBhai ye story likjhan bahut badi zimmedaari hai ! Ismain itne saare characters hain aur pataa nahi ye story jitni acchi likhi hai to meri himmat nahi ho rahi .... ismain jitne Urdu ke shabd hain mujhe wo bhi nahi aate ....pataa nahi main iss story.ke saath nyaayaa kar paaungaa yaa nahi ?
Eske liye to stori firr se padni padegi fil hal etana bata sakti hu ki gala ke bad uski choti bahen ka nambar lagao firr jayese stori ki mang hogi wayese kirdar ko lanaAccha ek baat pooch raha hun agar main ye story shuru karun to pehale kon si behan kii chudaai se shuru karoon .....Please bataana to main sochta hun ....waise mera dil to Nimra baaji pe he.?
Stori hai hi damdar par likhne wale me dam nahi dubar bhi unhi ne Suri ki dusare I'd se par firr band kar diAbhi bhi yahi story dubaaraa se padh rahaa hun ...this is one of my favorite story