Bro mujhe lag Raha hai aap log ko khani pasand nahi aa rahi hai ...agar pasand nahi aa Rahi hai to bol sakte ho .
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Good story ... keep going .. waiting for updateBadi maa apne man mai : hayee daiya ye kya hai jo meri chut ke aas pass takra raha hai .kahi woo..to nahi jo mai soch Rahi hu . Nahi nahi wo nahi ho sakta bhala itna bada kisi ko nahi hota per ye iske lower ke ander hai kya bhala .Jo itna gram hai ....ahhh kahi iska land to nahi
Per jab unse ye bardasht na hua to wo mujhese alag ho kar boli.
Badi maa : beta kha bato mai ulajh jaya hai chal bet aur nashta kar ...
Mai : ha badi maa chalo waise bhi badi joor ki bhookh lagi hai.aaplog nashta kiye ki nahi .
Badi maa aur maa dono saath mai : nahi.
Mai : q.
Badi maa : mai aur tumhari maa tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the .
Mai : ye kya baat hu aaplog ki Maine bola hai na Mera intezaar mat Kiya Karo aap log nashta kar liya karo.
Maa : ab chal bate mat bana chal ke nashta kar bas bate banwaolo isse agar itna hi khyal rahta hai hamlog ka subha jaldi q nahi soo ker jaagta hai ..
Mai : accha baba kal se jaldi uthunga ab khus .
Phir maa ne mere aur badi maa ke liye nashta lagaya aur mere bagal mai baith jayi . Scene ye tha mai bich mai baitha hua tha aur mere right side mai mere maa aur left side mai meri badi maa.aur mai dono ko apne haath se nashta Kara raha tha ...jab mai unko apne haath se khila raha tha to badi maa ke aakho se aasoo aajaye ..ye dekh ke Maine pucha.
Mai : badi maa aaap ro q Rahi hai kya mere se galti Hui hai .
Badi maa rote hue boli
Badi maa : na Munna tere se koi galti nahi hui balki mujhe tere upar naaz hai ki tu Mera beta hai bhale hi tu mere pet se na janmaa ho per Maine tujhe hamesha beta hi mana hai .
Aur ye bolke badi maa rone lagi
Maa : ye kya didi aap ro q Rahi hai pratik jitna Mera beta hai usse Kai Jayda to aapka beta hai . Mujhe jayada to isper aapka hak hai .
Badi maa: lalla tu hame padh likh kar hame chodh kar nahi jaayega dekh agar tu Aisa Kiya to tumhari dono maa jitegi mar jayegi .ak tuhi hai hamara akela shara.. .
Mere badi maa ke aakh se aaso dekh kar mera bhi dil ro Diya q ki mai mere badi maa se bahut pyaar karta tha .mai badi maa aaso poche aur khaha.
Mai : mai aap dono kabhi chodh kar nahi jaunga balki mai aap dono itna pyaar karunga ki aap apne ghum bhula kar mere ho jaogi.
Badi maa : iska mtlb tu apne baap ka jagah lega aur is Ghar ko shambhalega .
Mai : ha q nhai agar aap dono chaho to mai unki jagah le sakta hu ..waise bhi papa aapko pyaar nahi karte isse majbooran mujhe ye kadam uthna padega aur has diyaa...
Maa : badmash chal nashta kar .
Phir ham teno milkar nashta Kiya aur mai nashta karne ke baad apne kamre mai padai karne chala jaya aur maa aur badi maa saaf safai karne mai lag gayi.
(Dosto yaha se mai batunga mere family ke baare q mere baap ne dusri shadi ki aur mere dada dadi kaha hai aur wo q hamre saath nahi rahte.)
Iske baad chudai ka program start hogi wo bhi gandi wali
To Bane rahe aagle update ke liye comments karte rahai.
Bhai story bhot achii ha ap likoBro mujhe lag Raha hai aap log ko khani pasand nahi aa rahi hai ...agar pasand nahi aa Rahi hai to bol sakte ho .
Bhai story to abhi start huvi hai.Bro mujhe lag Raha hai aap log ko khani pasand nahi aa rahi hai ...agar pasand nahi aa Rahi hai to bol sakte ho .
Bhai story to Puri karunga hi . response aaye chahe na aaye but ak man mai rahta he ki kya pata readers ko aachi lag Rahi hogi ya nahi issiliye maine ye bola.Bhai story to abhi start huvi hai.
Our aap ko response chahiye .
Wah bhi milega .
Per apko sabar rakhana hoga . apka contain bhi hit hoga.apan prayas na chode.
Kabhi kabhi writer ki lagta hai. Usaki story nahi padha raha san forum wale pahate hai. Kuch response dete. Ya hidden lover bhi hote hai.
Yeh aap pe nirbhar hota hai. Aap kya soch te ho.
Yeh soch shayad age jaker wajah banegi jis se yeh story apne form main anese pahle band . ho wah bhi. Writer ki galtfahmi.se.
Reader ko time to do.
Story achi hai.Bhai story to Puri karunga hi . response aaye chahe na aaye but ak man mai rahta he ki kya pata readers ko aachi lag Rahi hogi ya nahi issiliye maine ye bola.
Thanks for comments koshis karunga jaldi update Dene ki .