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Jabardast ab to dono bahno ka ak sath ho jaye
Super hot update...maa kaa backdoor "inaugurate" ho gaya
Ab sunidhi ki baari hain back door inauguration kaa...woh bhi gaon mein..
Yaar ye to gajjab ka hot update hai
Agree Bro...I think hero should make mom and all other women in the family pregnant...and prove that woh hi "ghar kaa asli mard" hain...
Akash bhai, pls look into this suggestion as well. Suggestion from Strange Love is very good.
Thanks brother...aapne suggestion accept kiya hain...ab to dhamaal machega...jab ghar ki sab auraton ko apna hero pregnant karegahaan mass bhai main yea suggestion mai gour kar ki kahani mai changes la raha hu jo ki jald dekhne ko milega
dost yea story maine 3rd person ki hisab sai nahi likha hai ( akash involved ho tab he kuch jagha likha hu), aur yea kahani first person ki view sai bataya hai to isme kabita aur dhirendra ki baathchit kaha sai aagaye?, wo dono baath kia honge ya nahi kia honge yea reader kai uper sai ,aagar mujhe batana hota to main 3rd person ki view ki hisab sai story likhta.
bhai sab kuch hone kai baadh khafa hona human character hai , ek ladka jab apna dil tudwa leta hai tab wo ya phir barbad ho jata hai ya phir us ladki ko dekhata hai ki wo kya bann sakta hai .. bhai yea human nature hai . . batchit sai sab sulajh jati to bhai dhirendra he ghar ka mard banta uska beta kai banne ki kya jaurat the , haha dhanyabad