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han bhai report kar kar dia hu us story ko , mujhe admin ki permission milte he jald sai jald sare update post kar dunga aur story ko running karunga. dhanyabad ...Akash bhai, if you are the original writer of this story, contact the administrator and close the other one running. Also, request you to start from where the story is currently upto..i think kaafi readers ne yeh introduction and initial part padh liya hoga..thanks.
Dear mene jo story ek or site per parhi hai, wo shayad Ap ne likhi hai. Wahan Hero ki shadi uski Khala se hui hai. Jab k yahan Daadi se pehli shadi hui hai. Is liye Ap pehle kahani ko parhain or phir claim karain to behtar hai.han bhai report kar kar dia hu us story ko , mujhe admin ki permission milte he jald sai jald sare update post kar dunga aur story ko running karunga. dhanyabad ...
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ji maine yea story 20-12-2020 main suru kia tha . aur mere story ko copy karki beech beech mai modify kia gaya hai aur aapbhi yea baath samajh sakte ho. main report nahi kia to readers yahe kahenge ki maine story copy kar ki paste kar raha hu, haire kismatDear mene jo story ek or site per parhi hai, wo shayad Ap ne likhi hai. Wahan Hero ki shadi uski Khala se hui hai. Jab k yahan Daadi se pehli shadi hui hai. Is liye Ap pehle kahani ko parhain or phir claim karain to behtar hai.
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Ap sahi keh rahay hain. Me janti hoon is baat ko. Mene Apki story ko parha hai. Is lie Ap fikar naa karain. Apki story ka Credit Apko Zaroor mile ga.ji maine yea story 20-12-2020 main suru kia tha . aur mere story ko copy karki beech beech mai modify kia gaya hai aur aapbhi yea baath samajh sakte ho. main report nahi kia to readers yahe kahenge ki maine story copy kar ki paste kar raha hu, haire kismat
dekhte hai baki sab admin ki hato main hai .
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Congratulations for new storyHello dosto Maira naam akash hai.(Maximumx11)
yea mere story jisko main likh raha hu , yea story dushre site par continued hai jisko kisine copy kar kai baadh mai story ulat palat kar di hai. ise liyea main ise site hai apne original story post karna chahata hu aasa karta hu ki aap sahiyog karenge aur mujhe copy paste wala nahi samjhenge .
aapka sahiyog milega to main apne story ko ise site main continued kar payunga.
spelling mai koi galti ho to maf karna .
yea kahani ka suruwat 3 jano sai hote hai
main- akash
maa- kabita
papa-dhirendra
kahani mai aur bhi log hai jin ko mai aane wali update mai introduce karunga.
Nice startUpdate-1
dadaji kai maut ki baadh papa thode tanab mai chal rahe the, papa ki tanab ka karan to mujhe pata nahi tha lakin bo kafe khamosh the, mano jayse
kuch sooch rahe ho yahe mujko feel hota raheta tha, aur kafe shal ho gaye papa humesha kaam mai he busy rahete hai, baise humara paribar khus to tha lakin pata nahi kyu maa papa ko dekh kar lagta tha ki kuch to kami hai.
papa ki umar 49 hai, bo ek company mai aache post par hai.
maa-aare aap chinta math kare sab thik ho jayega, apka decision jo bhi ho mai usko manne kai liyea tayar hu
papa-thik hai
main kuch samajh nahi paya ki yea kya baate kar rahe hai?, kon se decision? kya thik ho jayega?
tabhi maa papa ko akela chod kar maire kamre ki aur aaye
main-kya huya maa?,kya baath hai?, papa itne pareshan kyu hai?
maa-tu bo sab chod aur apna packing kar jaldi sai sham ko train hai humara
main-thik hai ,thik hai
humare yea packing gaanv jane ki tayari mai ho rahe the.
dadaji kai maut kai 6 mahene poore ho rahe the jis kai karan daadi ne hum sab ko gaanv mai bula lia tha, mai socha ki sayad kuch rasm rahe gaya hai sayad ise liyea
sab ko bulaya hai.
hum teeno sham kai train mai baith kar gaanv kai liyea rabana ho gaye. papa apne he sooch mai dube huye the aur maa maire saath baate kar rahe thee, hum jis saheer mai rahete the waha sai kafe dur hai humara gaanv.
maa ka naam kabita hai bo jayda padhe likhe aurat to nahi hai lakin papa gaanv sai pahele sai bahar rahene kai karan maa thodi modern ho gaye hai.
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maa ki umar 42 ki hai lakin aabhi bhi chamak barkarar hai unki, gora rang ,sakal kafe cute se hai,rang gora bhara poora sareer aabhi bhi kayan hai unki, unko dekh kar unke umar ka andaza nahi lagaya ja sakta,
mai akash unka eklota beta, umar 23, ek company mai employee hu .
ek din baadh humara train ka safar poora ho gaya aur hum train sai utar kar ek gadi mai baith kar ganv ki aur rabana ho gaye-
me-papa hum itne jaldwaji mai ganv kyu ja rahe hai
papa-kuch kaam hai
papa ne aur kuch nahi bola
maa-kuch jaruri kaam aapadi hai, jiski karan jana pad raha hai
me-lakin kyu ja rahe hai batayo, aap dono kuch bata nahi rahe ho
maa- daadi ko teri papa sai kuch jaruri kaam hai ise liyea
yea baath bol kar bo maa bhi chup ho gaye aur dushri taraf papa aur kuch bole he nahi aur sooch mai pad gaye..
Nice updateUpdate- 2
Ganv mai jab pahuche to waha daadi ki aalaba naani,naana bhi maujud the mai sooch mai padd gaya ki baath kya hai, baise maa aur papa ki ganv mai jayda duri nahi hai , lakin naana aur naani daadi ek jagha baith kar baate kar rahe the mujko yea baath kuch hajam nahi huya.
mai,maa aur papa ja kar daadi,naana, naani ki pair chu ki aasirbad le lia aur sab hum 3 ko dekh kar bahut khus ho gaye
naana-aur akash tumhari job kayse chal rahe hai
main-aachaa chal raha hai naanaji
naana-achaa, aachaa bahut aacha
daadi-tum log thak gaye hoge ja kar aaram karo
papa,maa aur main jane he wale the ki daadi ne papa ko rok lia aur maa aur mujhe waha sai jane ki liyea bole
daadi-aur kya soocha tumne
papa-bo mai, shal ko baath karunga
daadi-thik hai ja kar saaf ho ja
hum aandar ja kar fresh ho gaye aur khana khane baith gaye jaha laga ki aaj ghar kai aurate yani mere 2 bua papa sai kuch sarma rahe the jo ki aayse pahele nahi sarmati the ise tarha, baise to ganv mai papa bade baite hai aur unki 2 bahen hai jinki shadi ho gaye hai uske he ganv mai, maire dono bua padhe likhe nahi hai.
badi bua jin ka naam kamini hai , unka ek beta hai bo kuch ise tarha dekhte hai
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choti bua ka naam sulochana, unke ek beti hai
khana khane kai baadh mai kamre mai aaram karne chala gaya aur maa papa dushre kamre mai chale gaye , maire aankhe bas lagne he wali the ki waha dadi bua kamini aagaye
kamini bua-are akash aabhi sab aakh lagg gaye hai teri
me-aare nahi bua thoda bor ho raha tha to aankh lagg gaye
bua maire paas aakar baith gaye aur baath karne lagg gaye
bua-poora change ho gaya hai re tu, bada bhi ho gaya hai itna aur patla bhi khana thik sai nahi khata kya
main-kya karu job kai karan time nahi milta
bua-yaha rah ja tere liyea khana bana ki dungi
main-jarur bua, baise ek baath poochu bua
bua-han pooch, tu be jhijhak pooch sakta hai mujhe jo bhi poochna hai
main- hume daadi ni itne jald baji mai kyu bulaya
bua- tere papa sai kaam hai ise liyea
main-to naana,naani kya kar rahe hai aur
bua sooch mai padh gaye thode der
bua-aaj tere daadaji ki saare zayadat ka malik tere papa banne wali hai na ise liyea
main-ohhh yea baath hai
bua mujse baate karne lagg gaye, lakin mai aabhi bhi samajh nahi pa raha tha ki isse papa itne pareshan kyu hai .
kyu ki zayadat ka malik banna to aache baath hai aur ispar pareshani kaysa?
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