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Nice update
Mkapil bhai, aapki samaya dekar ise kahani ko pasand karne kai liyea dhanyabad aur aapne bichar rakhne kai liyea bahut bahut dhanyabad ...G zamindar pahele baar gun pakad raha hai bhai aur yea baath likha bhi hai update mai aur pakadte he wo aachanak sai iska expert nahi ho sakta . aur thoda alag tarike sai dekhayunga tabhi toh kuch alag lagega barna serious gun fight har story main hote hai aur movie main bhi aasa karta hu ki aap samajh paye honge . dhanyabad Mkapil bhai ... aap koi bhi sawal pooch sakte hai , aur kisi baat ka bura math maniyea ga aur main bhi manta nahi . aap aapne dil ki baath ise tarha bata sakte hai .. dhanayabadbhai story acchi h par thoda hero pe dhayan doo agr ho sake to qki sirf chudai me accha hone se kuch ni hota ab zamidar bna h to thoda jamidaro ki trh lge fight ya gun to bilkul nhi kr pata
Nice update...
akashx11 bhai aapki story abhi abhi complete padhi hai jitna aapne update diye hai. Kasam se maza aagaya ek dum faadu story hai bhai aur story ka concept bhi baki incest stories se bilkul alag hai.....
Aur jis tarah se aap likh rahe ho aisa kahi bhi nahi lagta hai ki kuch missing hai ya kuch boriyat feel ho rahi hai. Aapne story se bilkul bandh ke rakha hai.........
Bas ek baat kehna chahunga agar aap bura na mano to woh ye hai ki story mein sex bar bar sabhi ke saath likhne ki wajah aap skip bhi kar sakte hai.......
bhai, ravi ki basic minimum ichha hai ki wo kamini ko kisi se sex karte hue dekhe. fir aap aisa kyu bol rahe hai ki ravi kamini se sex karna chaahta hai.
aakash aur kamini ki chudai dekhne se bhi ravi ka kaam chal sakta hai.
waise bohot din ho gaye hai, aakash ko kisi se chudai kiye hue. kya aap ek scene daal sakte hai?
Superb update
Wonderful update bhai wasa Puri story ak side pr or jo update(102) fight scene wala tha wo ak side pa kamal ka update brilliant tha ab lag rha ha chudai ka alava bhi kuch ha story main asa hi likhta rho keep it up wasa sach main wo update bhut acha laga muja
Akoo7 aapko update pasand aaya yea sun kar bahut khusi huye.... stay tunedShandar update p
hmmm daadi ne aakhir kal raj khol he di bhaiDamdar bhai akhir dadi ne sunidhi ke bare mai mbata hi diya ki pratap use kyu pana chata hai
ji bhai aagla update aaj raath he post hoga ... dhanyabadWating for next update
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