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Incest Parivar Ka Chirag
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Arjun Singh 72
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awesome fabulous update
bhai aap ke aaj ke sayari ka collection jabardast the
keep posting jabardast like it
bhai aap ke aaj ke sayari ka collection jabardast the
keep posting jabardast like it
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Story bahut acha hai.
Story achi ja raha hai.
Magar kuch serious improvement ki jarurat hai.
¤Story me bahut zyada spelling mistake hai.Update dene ke pahle ek bar proof-reading ki jarurat hai. example: aapne "garden" spelling ko "gharden" likha.
¤Story bahut slow ja raha hai.Regular update dijiye ya jab update do ge tab 5000 word ki mega update diya koro.
¤Story pe shairy to acha hai magar regular update nahi de saathe to shairy zyada mat do.If possible shairy hi mat dia koro.Kiu ki ek to bahut der se update dite ho aur shairy asli kahani ko chota kor deta hai.
Aur regular update de nahi saathe to update na do ya hi behtar hai.Jab free ho jao ge tab hi update do.
Nice going....
Keep it up.....
Story achi ja raha hai.
Magar kuch serious improvement ki jarurat hai.
¤Story me bahut zyada spelling mistake hai.Update dene ke pahle ek bar proof-reading ki jarurat hai. example: aapne "garden" spelling ko "gharden" likha.
¤Story bahut slow ja raha hai.Regular update dijiye ya jab update do ge tab 5000 word ki mega update diya koro.
¤Story pe shairy to acha hai magar regular update nahi de saathe to shairy zyada mat do.If possible shairy hi mat dia koro.Kiu ki ek to bahut der se update dite ho aur shairy asli kahani ko chota kor deta hai.
Aur regular update de nahi saathe to update na do ya hi behtar hai.Jab free ho jao ge tab hi update do.
Nice going....
Keep it up.....
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Hmm abhi upar Friday ne comment kiya ( not comment shikayt ki) to unke mutabik chalu to story close kar deni chahiye muje
Matlab banda sirf story likhe
Family friends par dhyn hi na de sirf update de
Aur wese bhi y meri story ( king of darkness) dusre ke jese mein faltu ki bato par update nahi deta
Aur rahi bat shayari ki to syad mene sirf 2 update Mae shayari ki hai
To ab y bat ap members ki hai agar 6 ne y bol diya ki story tik nahi to mein y wada karta hu is thread ko lock kara dunga
Matlab banda sirf story likhe
Family friends par dhyn hi na de sirf update de
Aur wese bhi y meri story ( king of darkness) dusre ke jese mein faltu ki bato par update nahi deta
Aur rahi bat shayari ki to syad mene sirf 2 update Mae shayari ki hai
To ab y bat ap members ki hai agar 6 ne y bol diya ki story tik nahi to mein y wada karta hu is thread ko lock kara dunga
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Aur 20 ko mera exam hai fir bhi update diya hu
Ek update likhne se jada sochne Mae time lag jata hai
Ek update likhne se jada sochne Mae time lag jata hai
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FRIDAY
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Bhai maine kaha thread close korne ki bad ki.Maine aapke personal life ke barme kuch nahi kaha.Wo aapki matter hai.Xf pe writer khud ki iccha se story likhte hai.It is a passion.A writter should accept both postive and negative comments for improving his skill.
Maine kaha update regular de nahi saathe to mega update do ya na do.Jab free ho ga tab regular de na.
Comment to achi tara se pore liya koro bhai.
Be postive.
Maine kaha update regular de nahi saathe to mega update do ya na do.Jab free ho ga tab regular de na.
Comment to achi tara se pore liya koro bhai.
Be postive.
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