Update 5
6 Ghante pehle-
kisi jungle ki ek gufa me ek dil zameen ke niche se bahar aata hai aur wahan bikhri kuch haddiyaan us dil ke kareeb aane lagti hain phir achanak se woh dil dhadakne lagta hai aur un haddiyon par maans aane lagta hai aur phir maans par chamda aur chamde par baal aane lagte hain kuch hi pal me woh ek bhayanak sa aadmi ban jaata hai phir us aadmi ki peeth par ek ajeeb sa tattoo banne lagta hai
Ab aage-
Tabhi achanak se mausam karwat lene lagta hai chaand ki faili hui roshni andhere me badalne lagti hai aasmaan me bijli kadakne lagti hai aur hawa aandhiyon me badalne lagti hai phir woh bhayanak aadmi aasmaan ko dekhte hue pagalon ki tarah muskurane lagta hai....
50 saal pehle-
Aadmi 1- bas ab mujhse nahi chala jayega
Aadmi 2- woh police wale humein dhoondte hue aate honge
Aadmi 1- mujhse dard bilkul bhi bardasht nahi ho raha hai
Aadmi 2- kam se kam us ghane jungle tak toh chalne ki koshish karo taaki humein police se chhupne ke liye jagah mil sake
Phir woh dono aadmi ghane jungle ki taraf aane lagte hain toh unhein ek gufa me mashaal jalti hui dikhayi deti hai woh dono aadmi bina kuch soche samjhe gufa ki taraf jaane lagte hain un dono aadmiyon me se ek aadmi ke pair me goli lagi thi jiski wajah se woh aadmi dard se tadap raha tha unhone socha ki shayad is gufa me unhein kuch madad mil jaye
jaise hi woh dono aadmi gufa ke andar aate hain toh wahan unhein kuch haddiyon ke dhaanche bikhre dikhayi dete hain woh dono aadmi ekdam se dar jaate hain lekin phir himmat karte hue woh dono aadmi gufa me andar ki taraf aate hain toh unhein ek tantrik havan kund me bali dete hue dikhayi deta hai woh dono aadmi chhupkar us tantrik ko dekhne lagte hain
Tabhi woh tantrik ek mantra bolte hue un dono aadmiyon ko hawa me uda deta hai jisse woh dono aadmi seedhe us tantrik ke ke saamne girte hain woh dono aadmi samajh jaate hain ki ye koi sadharan tantrik nahi hai
Tantrik- jai chamunda, jai chamunda, jai chamunda,,,,,
Woh dono aadmi turant us tantrik ke pairon me gir jaate hain
Aadmi 1: baba ji humari madad kijiye.....
Aadmi 2: hum bahut badi mushkil me hain baba ji kripya humein maarg dikhayein.....
Tantrik- tum dono jail se bhaage ho aur police wale tumhare pichhe pade hain
Aadmi 1 (hairaani se dekhte hue): kaise pata aapko.....
Tantrik: tumhe kya lagta hai tum yahan khud aaye ho
Aadmi 2 (haklate hue): m mm mmmatlab kya hai aapka.....
Tantrik: tum dono yahan shaitaan ki marzi se aaye ho woh tumhare dwara kiye gaye paapon se bahut khush hai
Aadmi 1 (hadbadate hue): h hh hum toh bas chote mote chor hain
Aadmi 2 (kapkapate hue): c cc chori ki alawa humne koi paap nahi kiya
Woh dono aadmi bilkul dar jaate hai
Tantrik (muskurate hue)- asliyat me tum dono hawas ke bhookhe darinde ho , chinta mat karo aur jyada mat socho , police wale jungle me nahi aayenge aur main tumhari madad karunga lekin badle me jaisa main tumhe kahunga tumhe bilkul waisa hi karna padega
Woh dono aadmi turant us tantrik ke saamne dono haath jod ke khade ho jaate hain
Aadmi 1: baba ji hum sab kuch karne ke liye taiyaar hain
Aadmi 2: baba ji bas aap humein police se bacha lijiye phir aap jaisa kahenge hum waisa hi karenge
Tantrik: toh phir karoge shaitaan ki pooja ? Jaisa shaitaan bolega waisa karoge bolo! karoge shaitaan ki gulami ?
Aadmi 1: main karunga baba.....
Aadmi 2: main bhi karunga baba.....
Tantrik: shaitaan tumhe sab kuch dega , daulat se lekar aurat tak sab kuch milega lekin badle me waqt aane par shaitaan jab bhi tumse kuch maangega toh tum mana nahi karoge
Aadmi 1: hum kabhi mana nahi karenge.....
Aadmi 2: woh jo bhi maangega hum bina soche de denge.....
Tabhi woh tantrik havan kund ke saamne se khoon se bhara lota uthakar un dono aadmiyon ko peene ke liye deta hai
Tantrik (kuch mantra padhte hue): lo is lote me se khoon ko grahan karte hue shaitaan ko vachan do.....
Phir woh dono aadmi shaitaan ko vachan dete hain ki woh aaj ke baad uske gulam hain aur woh jaisa kahega woh dono waisa hi karenge badle me unhein jo bhi chahiye hoga woh unhein milega.....
Phir jaise hi woh dono aadmi lote se khoon peene lagte hain toh un dono aadmiyon ke shareer me ajeeb si takat aane lagti hai aur jis aadmi ke goli lagi thi uska dard bilkul theek ho jaata hai.....
Phir woh dono aadmi us tantrik baba ke saath kuch din jungle me hi rehte hain us jungle ke ek taraf gaon tha jahan kuch gaon wale rehte the toh dusri taraf ek jungali kabila tha jahan jungle ke aadivasi rehte the
Ek din woh tantrik gaon ke mukhiya aur jungli kabile ke mukhiya ko apne pariwar ke saath jungle ki gufa me aane ka nyota deta hai aur un dono aadmiyon ki shaadi us gaon ke mukhiya aur jungli kabile ke mukhiya ki eklauti betiyon ke saath karwa deta hai
Phir un dono aadmiyon ki shaadi ke kuch mahine baad gaon ke mukhiya aur jungli kabile ke mukhiya ki mrityu ho jaati hai uske baad woh dono aadmi gaon aur jungli kabile ke naye mukhiya ban jaate hain
Phir woh dono aadmi afeem ki kheti aur uski taskari ka dhandha shuru karte hain aur jungle me ek khufiya haveli banwate hain us haveli me ek gupt tahkhana banwate hain jahan woh dono aadmi apni zindagi bhar ki kaali kamai chhupakar rakhte hain.....
New intro-
Aadmi 1 - pyarelal (hero ke dada ji) , is duniya me nahi hain , inka bas past ya flashback me role hai , ek no. ke hawasi insaan, kisi ki chut pasand aa jaye phir kaise bhi karke chod dete hain
Aadmi 2 - ratanlal (hero ke nana ji), is duniya me nahi hain , Inka bhi bas past ya flashback me role hai , ye daulat ke bahut laalchi hain , paise ke liye kisi ki bhi jaan le sakte hain....
Jungali kabile ke mukhiya ki beti - urmila devi ( hero ki dadi ji) , inka koi role nahi hai
Gaon ke mukhiya ki beti - shanti devi (hero ki nani ji) , Inka bhi koi role nahi hai
Tantrik bichhoo - ek bahut khatarnaak tantrik jo hamesha ke liye amar hona chahta hai jiske liye woh kuch bhi kar sakta hai , brijesh aur rati iske shishya rahe hain iske baare me baaki baatein kahani me pata chalengi.....
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