Coolraj839
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Nice update....Update 8
Agle mahine main rohan ke saath dusre sheher me chala gaya phir sab kuch theek ho gaya lekin us kaand ke baad se rimjhim didi aur pankhuri didi be mujhse baat karna bilkul band kar diya unhein aisa lagta tha ki us waqt jo kuch bhi hua uska zimmedar bas main tha jabki maine toh bas apni dosti ka farz nibha raha tha toh ye thi meri hostel jaane ke pichhe ki poori ki poori kahani halanki main khud bhi apne aap ko kahin na kahin zimmedar maanta tha isliye main rimjhim didi aur pankhuri didi se nazarein nahi mila paata hoon.....
Ab aage-
Cricket khelne ke baad main, Rohan, Rohit bhaiya aur rahul park me ek baith gaye aur baatein karne lage waise main bata doon Rohit bhaiya meri mausi ke bete hain aur rahul mere chacha ka beta hai woh dono sheher me hi rehte hain kyunki Rohit bhaiya software engineer hai woh job karta hai aur rahul engineering ki padhai kar raha hai
Rohit- yaar mere office ka time ho gaya hai main chalta hoon
Rahul- mujhe bhi college jaana hai main bhi nikal raha hoon
Me- okay toh phir shaam ko party me milenge....
Phir Rohit bhaiya aur rahul chale gaye....
Rohan- waise tu itna chup chup sa kyu tha woh toh bas prank tha yaar itna serious kyu ho gaya tu.....
Me- nahi yaar main bas woh hi purani baatein sochne laga tha khair chhodo na waise tu toh ab fatima ko poori tarah bhool gaya hoga
Rohan- kaisi baatein kar raha hai woh mera pehla pyaar thi usko kaise bhool sakta hoon but ab mera uske saath koi lena dena nahi hai
Me- phir theek hai aur dobara baat karne ki jarurat bhi nahi hai uske chalte itna kaand hua aur aakhir me usne tera haalchaal tak nahi poochha
Rohan- meri chhod tu apni aur hansika ki baatein bata.....
Me- main kya bataun mere se acchhi toh woh teri dost hai ek tarah se teri family friend hai main toh bas itna hi kahunga ki jab bhi main usko dekhta hoon meri toh dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hai koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho sakta hai
Rohan- tu bol toh uske saath teri date fix karwaun?
Me- kya ? Date ? Tu pagal hai kya ?
Rohan- uska kal message aaya tha tum dono ne mujhe kabootar bana rakha hai khud kyu nahi karte ho ek dusre se baat.....
Me- sach me kya bol rahi thi woh toh London jaane wali thi aage ki padhai ke liye.....
Rohan- usne cancel kar diya philhaal toh woh bata rahi thi ki uski mom ki tabiyat theek nahi hai isliye woh agle mahine jayegi poore time bas tera hi haalchaal poochhti rehti hai
Me- acchha.....
Rohan- acchha nahi, sahi mauka hai pat jayegi ladki bahut acchhi hai tujhe pasand nahi hoti toh main line jaroor maarta
Me- saale kitna kamina hai tu bhabhi hai woh teri waise bhi school ke baad meri usse itni baat nahi hui ek do baar messaging par baat hui hai ab pata nahi woh dikhti kaisi hogi
Rohan- hehe main toh mazaak kar raha hoon meri life me ek dusri ladki already entry le chuki hai
Me- kaun? Madarchod tune mujhe nahi bataya.....
Rohan- bataunga par abhi nahi thoda time de
Me- tujhe kya lagta hai tu batayega nahi toh mujhe pata nahi chalega main pata laga lunga.....
Rohan- tu soch bhi nahi sakta ki woh ladki kaun hai
Me- main tujhe bachpan se jaanta hoon kutte main pata laga lunga.....
Rohan- main bhi dekhta hoon waise tune bataya nahi hansika ke saath teri date fix karun?
Me- yaar Holi ke baad dekhta hoon , Holi aane wali hai phir hi main kuch bata sakta hoon.....
Rohan- chal theek hai ab ghar chalte hain.....
Phir main apne ghar aa gaya
Writer ki zubani-
Jaise hi satyam apne ghar ki taraf jaata hai waise hi Rohan hansika ko phone call karta hai
Rohan- hansika.....
Hansika- bata kya bol raha tha woh.....
Rohan- yaar woh Holi ke baad bol raha hai
Hansika- uffff pagal ladka aur kitna wait karwayega ye.....
Rohan- ab itna wait kiya hai toh thoda aur kar le.....
Hansika- bol bhi kaun raha hai tere se ek kaam bhi nahi hota theek se tere liye maine kitne papad bele hain tujhe pata bhi hai kitni mushkil se sonali tere liye maani hai
Rohan- yaar mujhe pata hai teri wajah se hi toh woh itni open minded hui hai pehle toh woh mujhse theek se chatting bhi nahi karti thi par ab toh phone call par hum duniya bhar ki baatein kar lete hain
Hansika- rohan please yaar meri date fix karwa satyam ke saath jaldi se mujhse wait nahi ho raha.....
Rohan- don't worry yaar bas Holi tak wait kar le.....
Hansika- acchha theek hai main tujhse baad me baat karti hoon mujhe college ke liye ready hona hai.....
Phir phone cut ho jaata hai
New introduction-
Hansika- height 5'7 weight 65 kg , satyam ki school time ki lover , mbbs ki padhai kar rahi hai , sonali ke college me uski senior hai
Savita aunty- height 5'7 weight 80 kg , hansika ki mom , ye doctor hain , sheher ke sabse bade hospital me job karti hain.....
Satyam ki zubani-
Ghar aane ke baad main sabse pehle toh fresh hua phir breakfast kiya tabhi tent wale aa gaye toh maine ghar ke pichhe wale garden me chala gaya aur shaam ki party ke liye arrangements dekhne laga phir kaam khatam karwane ke baad jab main ghar aaya toh sab log ja chuke the aur ab ghar par bas main aur mummy hi reh gaye the
Nice update....Update 9
Ghar aane ke baad main sabse pehle toh fresh hua phir breakfast kiya tabhi tent wale aa gaye toh maine ghar ke pichhe wale garden me chala gaya aur shaam ki party ke liye arrangements dekhne laga phir kaam khatam karwane ke baad jab main ghar aaya toh sab log ja chuke the aur ab ghar par bas main aur mummy hi reh gaye the
Ab aage-
main living hall me sofe par baithkar time pass karne ke liye tv dekhne dekh raha tha.....
Kuch der baad mummy apne room se bahar aayi unhone jis ada me saree pehen rakhi thi aisa lag raha tha jaise woh kahin ja rahi hain unhone saree apni naabhi se niche baandhi thi jisse unka pet aur kamar wala hissa dikhayi de raha tha jo ki behad kamuk lag raha tha ek pal ke liye toh main sochne laga ki mummy aise taiyaar hokar kahan ja raha hongi.....
Mummy- beta main kaisi lag rahi hoon ?
Me- ekdam hot lag rahi ho.....
Mummy- badmash kahin ka kuch bhi bolta hai.....
Me- mummy waise aap kahin ja rahi ho kya ?
Mummy- beta woh main gaon ja rahi hoon mujhe tumhari mausi ji aur chachi se thoda sa kaam hai
Me- main bhi chalun kya aapko chhodne ke liye.....
Mummy- tum pareshaan mat ho main scooty se chali jaungi.....
Me- isme pareshaani kaisi! main bhi gaon me ramu (mera dost) se mil lunga waise aapko mausi ji aur chachi se achanak se kya kaam aa gaya?
Mummy- woh beta darasal mujhe tumhari mausi ji se facial karwana hai aur tumhari chachi se blouse bhi silwana tha.....
Me- toh bas facial karwane aur blouse silwane ke liye gaon jaane ki kya jarurat hai woh toh sheher me bhi ho jayega
Mummy- beta meri skin bahut sensitive hai isliye main kisi dusri jagah nahi jaati hoon aur blouse silwane ke liye sheher me darji ki dukaan par jaana mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai
Me- woh toh theek hai main samajh gaya lekin ghar aate waqt shaam ho jayegi aur gaon ka raasta surakshit nahi hai toh main bhi aapke saath hi chalunga......
Phir main jaldi se gaon jaane ke liye ready ho gaya aur ghar ka door lock karke mummy ki scooty ki pichhe wali seat par baith gaya.....
waise toh sheher se gaon mushkil se 10 km tha yani ki car ya bike se lagbhag 1 ghanta ka raasta tha woh bhi isliye kyunki sheher ke bus stand se gaon ke bus stand tak raasta kacchi sadak se hokar jaata tha toh double ya phir triple time lagta tha, 20 minutes me hum sheher ke bus stand pahunch gaye phir mummy ne scooty bus stand se gaon ki puliya ki taraf ghuma di.....
Tabhi achanak se speed breaker aa gaya toh mummy ne bina break maare hi accelerator daba diya jiski wajah se main mummy ki peeth se halka sa chipak gaya jo ki mummy ko bhi mehsoos hua lekin unhone koi pratikriya nahi di
Me- mummy main chala loon kya ?
Mummy- kyu? tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe scooty chalane nahi aati!
Me- woh raasta theek nahi hai na isliye bol raha hoon mujhe scooty chalane dijiye.....
Mummy- toh kya hua! tum mujhe kas ke pakad kar baith jao aage bhi aisa hi raasta hai.....
Maine bhi thodi himmat dikhayi aur mummy ki chaudi kamar dono taraf se kas kar pakad liya aur unhein apne seene se chipka toh maine pehle se hi rakha tha toh mera lund bhi mummy ki moti gaand se halka sa touch ho raha tha jisse woh apni aukaat me aane laga.....
Tabhi achanak se phir se speed breaker aa gaya aur pehle ki tarah mummy ne phir se bina break maare hi accelerator daba diya jiski wajah se main poori tarah mummy se chipak gaya aur mera khada lund unki moti gaand ki darar me ghus gaya toh ek pal ke liye mummy thoda sa aage ho gayi lekin dusre hi pal wapas se pichhe aa gayi shayad main thoda sa aage aa gaya tha isliye main thoda sa pichhe ho gaya toh mummy dobara se thoda pichhe aane lagi aur jaise hi unhein mere khade lund ka sparsh apni moti gaand par hua toh woh ruk gayi
Kuch der baad gaon ke bus stand pahunch gaye.....
Me- mummy mujhe peshaab lag rahi hai......
Mummy- acchha.....
Tabhi mummy ne gaon ke bus stand wali public toilet ke saamne road ki dusri taraf scooty rok di aur main jaldi se public toilet me peshaab karke wapas aa gaya
mummy- beta ab tum scooty chala lo main pichhe baith jaati hoon.....
Me- theek hai.....
Bahit hi shaandar update diya hai RASCAL420 bhai....Update 8
Agle mahine main rohan ke saath dusre sheher me chala gaya phir sab kuch theek ho gaya lekin us kaand ke baad se rimjhim didi aur pankhuri didi be mujhse baat karna bilkul band kar diya unhein aisa lagta tha ki us waqt jo kuch bhi hua uska zimmedar bas main tha jabki maine toh bas apni dosti ka farz nibha raha tha toh ye thi meri hostel jaane ke pichhe ki poori ki poori kahani halanki main khud bhi apne aap ko kahin na kahin zimmedar maanta tha isliye main rimjhim didi aur pankhuri didi se nazarein nahi mila paata hoon.....
Ab aage-
Cricket khelne ke baad main, Rohan, Rohit bhaiya aur rahul park me ek baith gaye aur baatein karne lage waise main bata doon Rohit bhaiya meri mausi ke bete hain aur rahul mere chacha ka beta hai woh dono sheher me hi rehte hain kyunki Rohit bhaiya software engineer hai woh job karta hai aur rahul engineering ki padhai kar raha hai
Rohit- yaar mere office ka time ho gaya hai main chalta hoon
Rahul- mujhe bhi college jaana hai main bhi nikal raha hoon
Me- okay toh phir shaam ko party me milenge....
Phir Rohit bhaiya aur rahul chale gaye....
Rohan- waise tu itna chup chup sa kyu tha woh toh bas prank tha yaar itna serious kyu ho gaya tu.....
Me- nahi yaar main bas woh hi purani baatein sochne laga tha khair chhodo na waise tu toh ab fatima ko poori tarah bhool gaya hoga
Rohan- kaisi baatein kar raha hai woh mera pehla pyaar thi usko kaise bhool sakta hoon but ab mera uske saath koi lena dena nahi hai
Me- phir theek hai aur dobara baat karne ki jarurat bhi nahi hai uske chalte itna kaand hua aur aakhir me usne tera haalchaal tak nahi poochha
Rohan- meri chhod tu apni aur hansika ki baatein bata.....
Me- main kya bataun mere se acchhi toh woh teri dost hai ek tarah se teri family friend hai main toh bas itna hi kahunga ki jab bhi main usko dekhta hoon meri toh dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hai koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho sakta hai
Rohan- tu bol toh uske saath teri date fix karwaun?
Me- kya ? Date ? Tu pagal hai kya ?
Rohan- uska kal message aaya tha tum dono ne mujhe kabootar bana rakha hai khud kyu nahi karte ho ek dusre se baat.....
Me- sach me kya bol rahi thi woh toh London jaane wali thi aage ki padhai ke liye.....
Rohan- usne cancel kar diya philhaal toh woh bata rahi thi ki uski mom ki tabiyat theek nahi hai isliye woh agle mahine jayegi poore time bas tera hi haalchaal poochhti rehti hai
Me- acchha.....
Rohan- acchha nahi, sahi mauka hai pat jayegi ladki bahut acchhi hai tujhe pasand nahi hoti toh main line jaroor maarta
Me- saale kitna kamina hai tu bhabhi hai woh teri waise bhi school ke baad meri usse itni baat nahi hui ek do baar messaging par baat hui hai ab pata nahi woh dikhti kaisi hogi
Rohan- hehe main toh mazaak kar raha hoon meri life me ek dusri ladki already entry le chuki hai
Me- kaun? Madarchod tune mujhe nahi bataya.....
Rohan- bataunga par abhi nahi thoda time de
Me- tujhe kya lagta hai tu batayega nahi toh mujhe pata nahi chalega main pata laga lunga.....
Rohan- tu soch bhi nahi sakta ki woh ladki kaun hai
Me- main tujhe bachpan se jaanta hoon kutte main pata laga lunga.....
Rohan- main bhi dekhta hoon waise tune bataya nahi hansika ke saath teri date fix karun?
Me- yaar Holi ke baad dekhta hoon , Holi aane wali hai phir hi main kuch bata sakta hoon.....
Rohan- chal theek hai ab ghar chalte hain.....
Phir main apne ghar aa gaya
Writer ki zubani-
Jaise hi satyam apne ghar ki taraf jaata hai waise hi Rohan hansika ko phone call karta hai
Rohan- hansika.....
Hansika- bata kya bol raha tha woh.....
Rohan- yaar woh Holi ke baad bol raha hai
Hansika- uffff pagal ladka aur kitna wait karwayega ye.....
Rohan- ab itna wait kiya hai toh thoda aur kar le.....
Hansika- bol bhi kaun raha hai tere se ek kaam bhi nahi hota theek se tere liye maine kitne papad bele hain tujhe pata bhi hai kitni mushkil se sonali tere liye maani hai
Rohan- yaar mujhe pata hai teri wajah se hi toh woh itni open minded hui hai pehle toh woh mujhse theek se chatting bhi nahi karti thi par ab toh phone call par hum duniya bhar ki baatein kar lete hain
Hansika- rohan please yaar meri date fix karwa satyam ke saath jaldi se mujhse wait nahi ho raha.....
Rohan- don't worry yaar bas Holi tak wait kar le.....
Hansika- acchha theek hai main tujhse baad me baat karti hoon mujhe college ke liye ready hona hai.....
Phir phone cut ho jaata hai
New introduction-
Hansika- height 5'7 weight 65 kg , satyam ki school time ki lover , mbbs ki padhai kar rahi hai , sonali ke college me uski senior hai
Savita aunty- height 5'7 weight 80 kg , hansika ki mom , ye doctor hain , sheher ke sabse bade hospital me job karti hain.....
Satyam ki zubani-
Ghar aane ke baad main sabse pehle toh fresh hua phir breakfast kiya tabhi tent wale aa gaye toh maine ghar ke pichhe wale garden me chala gaya aur shaam ki party ke liye arrangements dekhne laga phir kaam khatam karwane ke baad jab main ghar aaya toh sab log ja chuke the aur ab ghar par bas main aur mummy hi reh gaye the
Let see aage kya hota haiIdhar to mamla thoda pechida lagta ha idhar satyam ne rohan ke liye itna kuchh kiya idhar rohan ne uske ghar me hi daka dal kiya kher dekhte han ki satyam ko jab pata chalta ha to kya hota ha lekin ye bat bhi sach ha mi ye bat pata padne per satyam khush to nahi hoga pehle hi gusse wala ha kuchh kand na kar de or isme to iski lover ka bhi hath ha fir bhi aapki purani kahani se experience ha satyam sabke sath dhamachokdijarur karega filhal dekhte han ki is party me kya kya hota ha or kya raj pata padte han satyam ko
Don't worry aap kahani padhte raho kuch na kuch jaroor hogaBro is story me baap aur beti relationship thoda jyada rakhna. Plz
Is story ke 1 season wasbut baap beti ka role thoda kam tha, Jaise pahle 1 season me (sunny) main hero tha, usi tarah 2 season me bhi main hero (satyam) ko hi rakho but baap beti ka relationship thoda jyada rakhna please it's request. Baki aap behtarin likhate Ho, ho sake to meri baat per Gaur karna please.
Ye mummy jarur ganv dhamachokdi karne jaa rahi haor lagta ha udhar mosi chachi bhi sab shamil ha isme ab lagta ha hero ko or raj pata padenge or jaise maa apne bete ke maje le rahi ha lagta ha hero ki shuruat maa se hi hogi
Chalo ye family drama to chalta rahega but mujhe lagta ha isme jo satyam ke past me abdul or uska bap karim tha wo villain ke role me lag rahe han mujhe or lagta ha age bhi aa sakte hanHero ki shuruaat kaise hogi usme bhi ek twist hai baaki dekhte hain kaun shaamil hai or kaun nahi