yeh caller wala part thora lengthy hota jaa raha hain, inki identity kab revela hogi iska intjar hain, aur idhar shab seema ko baap se relate kar rahe hain.
aap kahani apne hisab se likhe, bas farmaish ke taur pe na chale jaye bhai, nahin toh phir khichhdi ho jayegi, aur chacha ne jo plotting karna shuru kiya tha sunny ke khilaf wo shab ruk gaya hai, sirf sex hi na likho bhai, kuchh updates mein kahani bhi badhao, kyunki aapne kahani lambi likhni hain toh bina real story ke sirf sex se story bore ho jaati hain.
Rest your story is great.