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Bro mai kabhi nahi chahunga ki jo story mere dil ke sabse zyada kareeb jo use band karna
Lekin shayad logo ko ye story pasand nahi a rahi hai
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kahani to damdar likh rhe ho... chuki ye kahani Badla ki spin off hai....aur purane ke sath bahut se new characters bhi ek sath aa gaye hai... isliye readers ko adjust karne me thoda time lagega... yu lagta hai ki kahani badi dilchasap hai... pehle do update to mujhe bhi adjust karne me laga... kyuki Badla pehle se padh rakhi hai... aur jin halaton ke hawale se ye suruwat sui hai... pehle wahi sajhne me lag gaya... per mera to ab sab clear ho gaya hai... baki logon ka bhi 2-3 update me pura mamla saaf ho jayega..... waise likhte rho... kahani dilchasap lag rhi hai... maza ayega padh ke...
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"seriously??apne rehne ka intezam khud karna hai??"raj apne sar par haath rakhkar bola
"Bas chutiya banaye ja rahe hai BC"kyle bola
"Isme koun si badi baat hai choti jagah hai kuch na kuch intezam.to ho hi jayega"krish bola
"Hmm"ankan bola
"He bhagwan kaise katenge do saal??"vivek bola
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WESLEY COLLEGE
"Tum teeno ko yahan isliye bulaya hai kyunki mai nahi chahti ki tumhari wajah se mere baaki students par asar pade,chupchap apna bachelors complete karo aur chalte bano"principal nirmala yadav boli
"Hame bhi koi shouk nahi is fatichar college me padhne ka,wo to hame saza hui isliye padh rahe hai "kyle ulte muh bola
"Kyle please"ankan ne sthiti sambhalne ki koshish ki
"Dekhiye madam,hum din raat ek kar denge,aur ache students bankar hi college se nikalenge,hamari wajah se koi takleef nahi hogi aapko"ankan bola
"Yahi acha hota tum teeno ke liye,now go back to your classes"bol principal madam ne kyle ki aur nazar daudai
Adiyal hai lekin use dekh apne din yaad a gaye nirmala madam ko aur wo muskuraye bina nahi reh saki
Wesley college me teeno ka admission to ho gaya.aur principal ne teeno ka jurm chupa bhi liya
"Wow Ayushi lagta hai tere takkar ka koi bhi nahi hai is college me"jennifer boli
"Ek union member se aisi tareef Patna kam hai kya"aayushi jate hue boli
"School me bhi topper thi"jennifer ne yaad dilaya
Ayushi ne don't care attitude to dikha diya lekin ander hi ander garv se gadgad ho rahi thi tabhi
"Are ye naya student ankan aaya hai jo highest marks lagaya hai"ek student ne doosre se kaha
"Haan bhai suna hai ki aayushi se bhi top me hai"doosre student ne kaha
"Huh acha hua.bohut udd rahi thi kamini"pehle student ne bola aur dono student khilkhilakar has pade
Ayushi ka gussa saatve aasman ke paar pohunch gaya
Is naye student ki to...
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DAHLIA HIGH SCHOOL
vivek dheere dheere class me aaya .
Sab khusur fusur karne lage use dekhkar
Tabhi ek awaz aayi uske kaan me
"Oye jhingur idhar a"roma apne pair ke upar pair rakhte hue ek chashmish ladke ko dekhte hue apne paas bulati hai
"J j jh jh jhingur??"vivek darte hue poochta hai
"Haan jhingur jo tu hai,ab bol teetar ke do aage teetar ,teetar ke do peeche teetar,teetar ke do oopar Teetar,teetar ke do neeche teetar ,bata kitne teetar"roma apne haatho ko masalte hue poochta hai
"P p pata nahi ji"vivek darte hue bolta hai
" marungi abhi"bol jaise hi roma apne haath uthati hai vivek darte hue aankhen band kar leta hai
"Chal chor baksh diya tujhe,lekin aaj se saare kaam tu karega,mujhe samjhayega,mera notes lega aur bag ghar tak le aayega,samjha"roma dhamkate hue boli
"J ji??"vivek ne poochha
"Fir ji??jo bola hai agar na hua na to..."roma apne aankhen badi badi karte hue boli
"Karunga karunga "bol vivek bhaag gaya aur roma ki hansi choot gayi
Vivek bhi samajh gaya ki ye ladki kisi gundi se kam nahi
He bhagwan ise jhelna padega???
"Bas chutiya banaye ja rahe hai BC"kyle bola
"Isme koun si badi baat hai choti jagah hai kuch na kuch intezam.to ho hi jayega"krish bola
"Hmm"ankan bola
"He bhagwan kaise katenge do saal??"vivek bola
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WESLEY COLLEGE
"Tum teeno ko yahan isliye bulaya hai kyunki mai nahi chahti ki tumhari wajah se mere baaki students par asar pade,chupchap apna bachelors complete karo aur chalte bano"principal nirmala yadav boli
"Hame bhi koi shouk nahi is fatichar college me padhne ka,wo to hame saza hui isliye padh rahe hai "kyle ulte muh bola
"Kyle please"ankan ne sthiti sambhalne ki koshish ki
"Dekhiye madam,hum din raat ek kar denge,aur ache students bankar hi college se nikalenge,hamari wajah se koi takleef nahi hogi aapko"ankan bola
"Yahi acha hota tum teeno ke liye,now go back to your classes"bol principal madam ne kyle ki aur nazar daudai
Adiyal hai lekin use dekh apne din yaad a gaye nirmala madam ko aur wo muskuraye bina nahi reh saki
Wesley college me teeno ka admission to ho gaya.aur principal ne teeno ka jurm chupa bhi liya
"Wow Ayushi lagta hai tere takkar ka koi bhi nahi hai is college me"jennifer boli
"Ek union member se aisi tareef Patna kam hai kya"aayushi jate hue boli
"School me bhi topper thi"jennifer ne yaad dilaya
Ayushi ne don't care attitude to dikha diya lekin ander hi ander garv se gadgad ho rahi thi tabhi
"Are ye naya student ankan aaya hai jo highest marks lagaya hai"ek student ne doosre se kaha
"Haan bhai suna hai ki aayushi se bhi top me hai"doosre student ne kaha
"Huh acha hua.bohut udd rahi thi kamini"pehle student ne bola aur dono student khilkhilakar has pade
Ayushi ka gussa saatve aasman ke paar pohunch gaya
Is naye student ki to...
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DAHLIA HIGH SCHOOL
vivek dheere dheere class me aaya .
Sab khusur fusur karne lage use dekhkar
Tabhi ek awaz aayi uske kaan me
"Oye jhingur idhar a"roma apne pair ke upar pair rakhte hue ek chashmish ladke ko dekhte hue apne paas bulati hai
"J j jh jh jhingur??"vivek darte hue poochta hai
"Haan jhingur jo tu hai,ab bol teetar ke do aage teetar ,teetar ke do peeche teetar,teetar ke do oopar Teetar,teetar ke do neeche teetar ,bata kitne teetar"roma apne haatho ko masalte hue poochta hai
"P p pata nahi ji"vivek darte hue bolta hai
" marungi abhi"bol jaise hi roma apne haath uthati hai vivek darte hue aankhen band kar leta hai
"Chal chor baksh diya tujhe,lekin aaj se saare kaam tu karega,mujhe samjhayega,mera notes lega aur bag ghar tak le aayega,samjha"roma dhamkate hue boli
"J ji??"vivek ne poochha
"Fir ji??jo bola hai agar na hua na to..."roma apne aankhen badi badi karte hue boli
"Karunga karunga "bol vivek bhaag gaya aur roma ki hansi choot gayi
Vivek bhi samajh gaya ki ye ladki kisi gundi se kam nahi
He bhagwan ise jhelna padega???