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Non-Erotic PASCHATAP (restarting)

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Koun sa character aapko acha laga

  • Krish

    Votes: 9 81.8%
  • Ankan

    Votes: 5 45.5%
  • Raj

    Votes: 4 36.4%
  • Kyle

    Votes: 4 36.4%
  • Vivek

    Votes: 5 45.5%

  • Total voters
    11

Swaraj

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Sorry guys Maine story ke upar bohut kaam kiya lekin shayad kami reh gayi
Story ko wrap up karna chahta hoon completely
Sorry for those who were following it
 
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kamdev99008

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Sorry guys Maine story ke upar bohut kaam kiya lekin shayad kami reh gayi
Story ko wrap up karna chahta hoon completely
Sorry for those who were following it
Koi bat nahi swaraj bhai... Kuchh samay lo aur isko soch samajhkar dobara shuru karna
 

Mbindas

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Kya baat h bhai ab wapas ispar update dene ka man nahi h kya?
Ispar bhi dhyan dijiye bhai
 
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Swaraj

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Guys aap log na koi reaction dete hai na koi review dete hai
Koi bhi writer ka ek maksad hota hai ki uski story ko atleast padha jaay
Lekin pehle to koi reaction deta nahi hai.
Jab writer story band karta hai tab sab kehte hai story continue karne ke liye
Isliye maine "ek mutthi aasman " ko short story banaya .aur wahan bhi abhi tak sirf kuch hi regular readers ne react kiya hai
Guys please samjhiye .ek story likhne ke liye kaafi mehnat lagti hai.aur jab appreciation nahi milta to writer story ko stop kar deta hai
 

Damha

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Guys aap log na koi reaction dete hai na koi review dete hai
Koi bhi writer ka ek maksad hota hai ki uski story ko atleast padha jaay
Lekin pehle to koi reaction deta nahi hai.
Jab writer story band karta hai tab sab kehte hai story continue karne ke liye
Isliye maine "ek mutthi aasman " ko short story banaya .aur wahan bhi abhi tak sirf kuch hi regular readers ne react kiya hai
Guys please samjhiye .ek story likhne ke liye kaafi mehnat lagti hai.aur jab appreciation nahi milta to writer story ko stop kar deta hai
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Mbindas

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Bhai isme aap update to dijiye. Itni achchhi story ko stop karke rakha h.

Ispar behad hi zyada intazar hai aapke update dene ka
 
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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..
 

RAAZ

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Story to dhasu lag rahi hai kuch unique theme hai jaisa ki aapki stories me hota. Hain wow maza aayega lekin bro ab aapki ek sath 3 stories shuru ho gayi kahi kisi ek ke chakkar me agli 2 ke sath na knsaafi na ho jaisay Ajnabee2 me updates late ho rahey hai.
Agar a accha lage to ek story hold kar ke pehlay 2 me se ek khatam. Kar ke phir shuru karey ya phir sab pe weekly 2 updates dijiye is tarah 6 days 6 update aur ek din free rakhay apne liye.

Just suggestion.
"ah ahh ahh......dard ho raha hai chote zameendar ......bhagwan ke liye baksh dijiye"

"Chup saali......abhi to ek round aur chalega"

TRING TRING

"Hello?? harendra Singh speaking???.......hmmm"

Phone kar jaata hai

"Ye le ...aish kar"paiso ka bundle us ladki ke upar fenk kar harendra Singh kamre se bahar a gaya

"Mai baap....kya ab mai apni beti ko le ja sakta hoon??"kaampte haathon ko jod kar ek vriddh bola.jo thik se khada bhi nahi ho pa raha tha

"Abey ruk.....do din aur pyaas bujhane de fir le jaana"bol harendra Singh ne paiso se bhara bundle us vriddh ke haath me rakh diya aur chala gaya

Vriddh ne rote hue kamre me jhank kar apni beti ko bin kapdo me rote hue dekha to usko khud se sharm aane lagi

Uski nazar diwar me tangi mahabharat ke us drishya par ruk gayi jab shri krishna arjun ko geeta ka upadesh de rahe the
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sirf naam ka enterprise hai
Kuch hi dino me to ye sab khatam hi hone wala hai
Preeti office ke ander aate hi hairani se charo aur dekhne lagi

"Kaka??"Preeti ne awaz lagai aur ek aadmi daudkar aaya

"Ye sab kya hai?? office itna saaf suthra???kisne kiya hai ye sab??"Preeti ne poochha

"Arey Preeti didi ye to kal jo ladka aapne kaam par rakha tha wo subah se aakar sab kuch kar raha hai,saare computers ko thik kiya,fir mujhe sab bills ka hisab manga aur files ko sab padhkar alag alag kiya,aapne sahi aadmi chuna hai didi"office ka peon bohut khush tha

"Lekin kal to maine use aadmi ko liya hi nahi kaam par"Preeti paani peete hue boli

"Fir wo kyun ye sab kar raha hai didi"peon apna sar khujate hue bola

"Dekhte hai ,pehle use bulao"Preeti apne seat par baithi

Kuch der baad wo aadmi aaya

"Krish naam tha na aapka??"Preeti ne poochha

"Ji krishna singh.lekin pet name hai krish"krish bola

"Mujhe aapke pet name se koi lena dena nahi hai mr krishna,maine bataya tha na ki mai aapko job me nahi rakh sakti??"Preeti gusse se boli

"Madam.maine usa se..."krish ne bolna chaha

"I give a damn to where you studied,mere paas salary dene tak ka paisa nahi hai mr krish.ek mahine ke ander company band ho jayegi"Preeti boli

"Pata hai madam isliye to keh raha hoon ki mujhe company join karne dijiye.ek mahine me agar aapko laga ki mai bekar hoon.to mai chala jaunga.without salary kaam karunga yahan"krish bola

"Tum kyun apna career barbad kar rahe ho krish,bohut saari companies hai india me tumhe koi bhi mil jayegi,waise bhi tumhare resume me kaafi sources hai bade bade CEO aur MD's ke"Preeti boli

"Mujhe yahi job karne hai madam.aur waise bhi maine job start kar diya hai.sand extraction ke contract ke liye tender bhej diya hai"krish bola

"Wtf?? Krish??paagal ho??kya kaand kar diya tumne damn it"bol Preeti daudi aur peon se baat karne lagi
Peon ne sar hilaya apna,Preeti gusse se krish ko dekhne lagi

"Sand extraction ka contract sirf zamindar parivar ko hi milta hai.uske aage kisi ne tender bharne ki himmat nahi ki aur tum??"preeti boli

"Ye zamindar ke baare me bohut sun raha hoon koun hai wo??"krish ne poochha

"Wahi jisne poore gaon me......khair chodo mai dekhti hoon ki ye tender ko kaise roka jaaye"bol Preeti apne kamre se bahar nikal gayi
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Ankan apne purane din yaad kar raha tha
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"Aaj se ye tumhare mummy papa hai beta"

Chote ankan ne dekha aur muskurati aurat aur ek aadmi khade the anathalay ke saamne

"Hi beta??hamare saath chaloge??"us aadmi ne bola

Aur wo aurat ankan se lipat kar rone lagi thi
Kuch dino me ankan mr aur mrs ganguly ke ghar me a gaya aur ghul mil gaya
Lekin use pata tha ki wo unka apna beta nahi hai,lekin paalne me mr aur mrs ganguly ne koi kasar nahi chodi thi

Ankan ke dimag me baith gaya ki use perfect beta bankar dikhana hai,bas usi din se usne wo sab kiya jo use perfect banati hai
Sivay is accident ke
Mummy papa ke nazron ke saath apne bhaiya bhabhi ke nazron me bhi gir gaya ankan
Tabhi uska phone baj utha

"Haan krish bhaiya.....abhi??"bol krish jald ready ho gaya

Vivek ke kamre me jab ankan pohuncha tab tak baaki ke chaar wahan a chuke the

"Bro itna late??"raj ne ghadi dekh kar kaha

"Bakwas mat kar, krish bhaiya poori baat batao"ankan bola

"zamindar ke baare me kisi ko kuch pata hai??"krish ne poochha
To sab ek doosre ke.muh dekhne lage
 
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