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Udhar jab Meena Jasleen ko milti to wo usse aisi hi patti padhati. Jasleen ke mann par abb jaane anjaane Meena ki baaton ka bohot asar tha.
Fir Jasleen ne Parm ko bahar jaane wali baat batai…
Jasleen kiss krte huye: “my love…ek baat puchni thi apse”
Parm: “poocho”
Jasleen: “Meena, uska dost aur Ramesh ye Sandi bird sanctuary jana chahte hain, mujse pooch rhe the ki agar main bhi unke saathi chalu iss tuesday”
Parm: “tumhe jana hai?? lekin jaoge kaise?”
Jalseen: “unhone gaadi ka arrangment kiya hai”
Parm: “Meri jaan agar tum jana chahti ho to thik hai…lekin gaadi main office bhej dunga.”
Jasleen: “nhi..unhone already arrangment kiya hai”
Parm thoda Jasleen ko leke fikarmand bhi tha, lekin usne mana isiliye nhi kiya kyunki Jasleen uske liye hi yahan aayi thi, aur kabhi koi shikayat nhi ki aur ghar mein akeli bore bhi ho jaati hogi. Parm ko lagga ke use thoda bohot ghumna chahiye.
Jasleen khush thi ke Parm ne han krdi thi. agle din usne Meena aur Ramesh ko bhi bta diya. Jasleen ne thodi der Ramesh se phone par ki.
Tuesday aa gya…Parm ke office jaane ke baad. Rajesh, Meena aur Ramesh Jasleen ke ghar gye. Jasleen ne simple sa suite pehna tha, wo usme bhi kehar lag rhi thi. Ramesh aage baitha tha, Jasleen Meena ke saath peeche baith gyi. Ek ache ghar ki bahu aaj jhopadpati mein rehne walon ke saath jaa rhi thi. Jasleen ka dil saaf tha isiliye wo kisi tarah ka bhedbhav nhi kar rhi thi.
Shayad logo ko lagge ke Ramesh aur Meena milke Jasleen ko blackmail krne ka plan bna rhe hon, lekin aisa kuch bhi nhi tha. Wo jasie bhi hon, lekin Jasleen ko kisi bhi tarah ka nuksaan krne ka unohne socha bhi nhi tha. Ramesh bss Jasleen ko pyaar se pana chahta tha aur Meena uska saath de rhi thi.
Gaadi mein chaaron Sandi bird Sanctuary ke liye nikal padde. Gaadi mein Meena ne Jasleen ka haath apne haath mein leke, Ramesh ki aur ishara kiya, uske ishare se Jasleen samajh gyi ke wo kya kehna chahti hai. Jasleen bhi Meena ki ankho mein dekh kar muskura di. Aaj Jasleen aur Meena masti ke mood mein thi. Jasleen ander hi ander excited bhi ho rhi thi ke na jaane kya hoga. Ajj pehli baar wo apni pati ke siva aur logo ke saath bahar ayi thi. Rajesh ne car mein bhopuri songs lga diye. Jasleen ko itna samjh nhi aa rha tha par wo bhi enjoy kar rhi thi.
Takreeban 50mins mein wo wahan pohunch gye. Rajesh aur Ramesh dono gaadi park krke ticket lene gye. Uss din mausom thoda kharab tha, barish ke pure asaar the, jiski wajah se waha log na ke barabar the. lekin barish huyi nhi. Meena ne Jasleen ne fir Ramesh ke baare mein baat ki..
Meena: “didi main aur Rajesh to thodi der baad aap dono se alag ho jayenge.”
Jasleen: “kyu..hum log sab saath mein ayein hain na.”
Meena : “han lekin baad mein…didi aap bhi na kitni bholi hain.” Meena aankh marte huye.
Jasleen samajh gyi ke wo apne premi se akele mein kyu jana chahti hai. usne Meena ke kandhe par mara. “ zada pyaar aa rha hai apne permi par”
Meena: “han…aaj to aapke pati dev bhi nhi hain..aaj aap azad panchi hain… azaadi udaan bhariyee. ”
Meena aur Jasleen hass rhi thi. tabhi Ramesh aur Rajesh aa gye. Fir chaaron Sanctuary ke ander chale gye. Chaaron birds dekh rhe the, uss din wah unn chaaro ke siva shayed hi koi auor hoga. Chaaron hassi-mazak krte chal rhe the. Wo sabhi khaane-peene ka saaman saath laye the. Meena chahti thi ke Jasleen Ramesh ke saath zada waqt bitaaye, Ramesh bhi yehi chahta tha. Meena aur Rajesh thoda aage chal rhe the. fir Meena ne Jasleen ko ishara kiya, Jasleen samajh gyi. thodi der baad Meena aur Rajesh unse alag ho gye.
Abb Jasleen aur Ramesh dono ek saath pehli baar akele the. Jasleen thoda nervous ho rhi thi. Wo thoda sharma bhi rhi thi. Dono idhar-udhar ki baatein kar rhe the. Ramesh Jasleen ke bohot paas chal rha tha. Wo Jasleen ko birds ke baarein mein bta rha tha. Jasleen bhi interest ke saath sunn rhi thi. Ramesh thoda bohot flirt bhi kar rha tha. Jasleen ko bhi acha lag rha tha.
Ramesh: “to kaisa lag rha hai? bore to nhi ho rhi ho mere saath?”
Jasleen: “nhi…mujhe to bohot acha lag rha hai”
Ramesh: “kya achha laga, ye jagah ? ya mere saath hona?”
Jasleen: “jagah bhi thik hain…aur….”
Ramesh: “aur kyaa?”
Jasleen: “tumhare saath bhi..”
Ramesh: “sach mein..ton itna door kyu chal rhi ho? saath mein bhi chal skti ho”
Jasleen: “dur kahan hoon?”
Ramesh aur paas aa gya, lagabhag Jasleen ke baaju ko touch krke hi chalne lgga. Jasleen ko kuch alag hi feel ho rha tha. Pehli baar kisi gair amrd ke saath istrah se chalna, usse ajeeb si feeling de rha tha.dono chup ho gye. Dono ko kuch sooj nhi rha tha ke kya baat krein. Achanak se Jasleen ruk gyi, wo ek sunder se panchion ke jode ko dekhne laggi.
Jasleen: “wow…kitne payaare hain na dono! so beautiful!”
Ramesh: “han..bilkul tumhari tarah”
Aisa kehte hi Ramesh ne dhire se Jasleen ka haath ko touch kiya. jasleen ki body mein jaise bijli kond gyi. Usne Ramesh ko aur dekha..Ramesh bhi Jasleen ki aankhon mein dekh rha tha. Fir dhire se Ramesh ne Jasleen ka haath apne haath mein lene ki koshish ki. Jasleen ne apna haath chuda liya, uske liye Ramu ka ke haath mein apna haath dena bohot hi badi baat thi. Ye usse nhi huya.
Jasleen: “kya kar rhe ho Ramu?”
Ramesh: “Ajj tum apne aap ko roko mat, azaad mehsus kro…jaise tumhe koi na dekh rha ho”
Jasleen: “lekin…”
Ramesh: “ bss…agar dosti ki hai to itna haq to hai, kya ek dost hone ke naate main kya chahta hoon, iski tumhe koi parwah nhi? ya meri wo hasiyat nhi?”
Jasleen: "nhi wo baat nhi hai"
Ramesh: 'to"?
jasleen: "smajha kro Ramu,"
Ramesh hasne lgga, usne zada jaldbaazi na krne ka fasla liya. usse pta tha ke agar Jasleen yahan tak aa gyi hai to wo usse aage bhi le hi jayega.
Fir Jasleen ne Parm ko bahar jaane wali baat batai…
Jasleen kiss krte huye: “my love…ek baat puchni thi apse”
Parm: “poocho”
Jasleen: “Meena, uska dost aur Ramesh ye Sandi bird sanctuary jana chahte hain, mujse pooch rhe the ki agar main bhi unke saathi chalu iss tuesday”
Parm: “tumhe jana hai?? lekin jaoge kaise?”
Jalseen: “unhone gaadi ka arrangment kiya hai”
Parm: “Meri jaan agar tum jana chahti ho to thik hai…lekin gaadi main office bhej dunga.”
Jasleen: “nhi..unhone already arrangment kiya hai”
Parm thoda Jasleen ko leke fikarmand bhi tha, lekin usne mana isiliye nhi kiya kyunki Jasleen uske liye hi yahan aayi thi, aur kabhi koi shikayat nhi ki aur ghar mein akeli bore bhi ho jaati hogi. Parm ko lagga ke use thoda bohot ghumna chahiye.
Jasleen khush thi ke Parm ne han krdi thi. agle din usne Meena aur Ramesh ko bhi bta diya. Jasleen ne thodi der Ramesh se phone par ki.
Tuesday aa gya…Parm ke office jaane ke baad. Rajesh, Meena aur Ramesh Jasleen ke ghar gye. Jasleen ne simple sa suite pehna tha, wo usme bhi kehar lag rhi thi. Ramesh aage baitha tha, Jasleen Meena ke saath peeche baith gyi. Ek ache ghar ki bahu aaj jhopadpati mein rehne walon ke saath jaa rhi thi. Jasleen ka dil saaf tha isiliye wo kisi tarah ka bhedbhav nhi kar rhi thi.
Shayad logo ko lagge ke Ramesh aur Meena milke Jasleen ko blackmail krne ka plan bna rhe hon, lekin aisa kuch bhi nhi tha. Wo jasie bhi hon, lekin Jasleen ko kisi bhi tarah ka nuksaan krne ka unohne socha bhi nhi tha. Ramesh bss Jasleen ko pyaar se pana chahta tha aur Meena uska saath de rhi thi.
Gaadi mein chaaron Sandi bird Sanctuary ke liye nikal padde. Gaadi mein Meena ne Jasleen ka haath apne haath mein leke, Ramesh ki aur ishara kiya, uske ishare se Jasleen samajh gyi ke wo kya kehna chahti hai. Jasleen bhi Meena ki ankho mein dekh kar muskura di. Aaj Jasleen aur Meena masti ke mood mein thi. Jasleen ander hi ander excited bhi ho rhi thi ke na jaane kya hoga. Ajj pehli baar wo apni pati ke siva aur logo ke saath bahar ayi thi. Rajesh ne car mein bhopuri songs lga diye. Jasleen ko itna samjh nhi aa rha tha par wo bhi enjoy kar rhi thi.
Takreeban 50mins mein wo wahan pohunch gye. Rajesh aur Ramesh dono gaadi park krke ticket lene gye. Uss din mausom thoda kharab tha, barish ke pure asaar the, jiski wajah se waha log na ke barabar the. lekin barish huyi nhi. Meena ne Jasleen ne fir Ramesh ke baare mein baat ki..
Meena: “didi main aur Rajesh to thodi der baad aap dono se alag ho jayenge.”
Jasleen: “kyu..hum log sab saath mein ayein hain na.”
Meena : “han lekin baad mein…didi aap bhi na kitni bholi hain.” Meena aankh marte huye.
Jasleen samajh gyi ke wo apne premi se akele mein kyu jana chahti hai. usne Meena ke kandhe par mara. “ zada pyaar aa rha hai apne permi par”
Meena: “han…aaj to aapke pati dev bhi nhi hain..aaj aap azad panchi hain… azaadi udaan bhariyee. ”
Meena aur Jasleen hass rhi thi. tabhi Ramesh aur Rajesh aa gye. Fir chaaron Sanctuary ke ander chale gye. Chaaron birds dekh rhe the, uss din wah unn chaaro ke siva shayed hi koi auor hoga. Chaaron hassi-mazak krte chal rhe the. Wo sabhi khaane-peene ka saaman saath laye the. Meena chahti thi ke Jasleen Ramesh ke saath zada waqt bitaaye, Ramesh bhi yehi chahta tha. Meena aur Rajesh thoda aage chal rhe the. fir Meena ne Jasleen ko ishara kiya, Jasleen samajh gyi. thodi der baad Meena aur Rajesh unse alag ho gye.
Abb Jasleen aur Ramesh dono ek saath pehli baar akele the. Jasleen thoda nervous ho rhi thi. Wo thoda sharma bhi rhi thi. Dono idhar-udhar ki baatein kar rhe the. Ramesh Jasleen ke bohot paas chal rha tha. Wo Jasleen ko birds ke baarein mein bta rha tha. Jasleen bhi interest ke saath sunn rhi thi. Ramesh thoda bohot flirt bhi kar rha tha. Jasleen ko bhi acha lag rha tha.
Ramesh: “to kaisa lag rha hai? bore to nhi ho rhi ho mere saath?”
Jasleen: “nhi…mujhe to bohot acha lag rha hai”
Ramesh: “kya achha laga, ye jagah ? ya mere saath hona?”
Jasleen: “jagah bhi thik hain…aur….”
Ramesh: “aur kyaa?”
Jasleen: “tumhare saath bhi..”
Ramesh: “sach mein..ton itna door kyu chal rhi ho? saath mein bhi chal skti ho”
Jasleen: “dur kahan hoon?”
Ramesh aur paas aa gya, lagabhag Jasleen ke baaju ko touch krke hi chalne lgga. Jasleen ko kuch alag hi feel ho rha tha. Pehli baar kisi gair amrd ke saath istrah se chalna, usse ajeeb si feeling de rha tha.dono chup ho gye. Dono ko kuch sooj nhi rha tha ke kya baat krein. Achanak se Jasleen ruk gyi, wo ek sunder se panchion ke jode ko dekhne laggi.
Jasleen: “wow…kitne payaare hain na dono! so beautiful!”
Ramesh: “han..bilkul tumhari tarah”
Aisa kehte hi Ramesh ne dhire se Jasleen ka haath ko touch kiya. jasleen ki body mein jaise bijli kond gyi. Usne Ramesh ko aur dekha..Ramesh bhi Jasleen ki aankhon mein dekh rha tha. Fir dhire se Ramesh ne Jasleen ka haath apne haath mein lene ki koshish ki. Jasleen ne apna haath chuda liya, uske liye Ramu ka ke haath mein apna haath dena bohot hi badi baat thi. Ye usse nhi huya.
Jasleen: “kya kar rhe ho Ramu?”
Ramesh: “Ajj tum apne aap ko roko mat, azaad mehsus kro…jaise tumhe koi na dekh rha ho”
Jasleen: “lekin…”
Ramesh: “ bss…agar dosti ki hai to itna haq to hai, kya ek dost hone ke naate main kya chahta hoon, iski tumhe koi parwah nhi? ya meri wo hasiyat nhi?”
Jasleen: "nhi wo baat nhi hai"
Ramesh: 'to"?
jasleen: "smajha kro Ramu,"
Ramesh hasne lgga, usne zada jaldbaazi na krne ka fasla liya. usse pta tha ke agar Jasleen yahan tak aa gyi hai to wo usse aage bhi le hi jayega.
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