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Ummid karta hoon ap logo ko story pasand aai hogi kuch kahenge ki jaldi khatam kar di kuch kahenge ki abhi Is stroy main scope tha par mere soch yahi tak thi toh is rachna ko yahi the end samjhe aur enjoy kare bye take care see yaa
agar koi aur story likhwana chahate hai toh suggestions welcome hai nahi toh ye bye take care all o
Baap Beti or bahu pr likho or beti shaadi shuda ho or kam se kam do beti to hoEk suggestion sub se do option hai kal se soch raha hoon ki kis par likhu
1. Maa bete par he par badi aur characters ko add karke
ya
2. Baap beti aur bahu ko mila kar
jaldi batana phir update dunga
BAAP Beti per hi likho bas thoda slow chalna Sex jaldi se mat dikhana or jaldi se shuru kro . intzaar nhi hota hEk suggestion sub se do option hai kal se soch raha hoon ki kis par likhu
1. Maa bete par he par badi aur characters ko add karke
ya
2. Baap beti aur bahu ko mila kar
jaldi batana phir update dunga
स्टोरी बहुत बढ़िया थी भईया..Ek suggestion sub se do option hai kal se soch raha hoon ki kis par likhu
1. Maa bete par he par badi aur characters ko add karke
ya
2. Baap beti aur bahu ko mila kar
jaldi batana phir update dunga
Thanksस्टोरी बहुत बढ़िया थी भईया..
1 ऑप्शन ठीक हैं.. माँ बेटे की स्टोरी
OkMa beta ke bich pyer ho jayaga. Or dono gar sa bhag ka sadi kerka bacha paida karaga....
Ye toh hai par phir kuch bolenge ki sub ek he tarah ki story haiIs forum par sabse jyada maa beta par hi readers padna pasan karte hai
OkBehtereen story Vijay bhai......short story pr hot ...me is story me ek silent reader ke dor pr aaya tha....ab iska end ho gya hai to me comment krne se rok nhi paya ...itna mast like ho aap ......bhai baap or beti ki story shuru karna ....bahu na ho .....
Isi liye to keh rha hu BAAP Beti per likhoYe toh hai par phir kuch bolenge ki sub ek he tarah ki story hai
Nahi yaar kafi dino se ek story hai dimag main maa bete par hai aur pyar nahi hai kuch aur hai ussi par suru kar raha hoon dekhte hai kya hota hai.Isi liye to keh rha hu BAAP Beti per likho