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Writer sahab bille ki suhugrat wali rat daljit or kaale k bich jo v hoya os k baare me details me likh nhi paaye aap soo sad. Too bad for story Coma me chli gyi samye k abhave me.bhot mast likha h yaar. Padh k savad aa giya.
Yr ethe ta 2 seen hor likhne pene tenu
1 Kaale ne diljeet di 1st time maari vo seen bhi details wich likhna pena
2 bille di sahugrat aali rat kaale ne diljeet di 3 vaar maari vo v details wich likhna pena.
Menu lagda ethe to hor v bhot seen bande hunde h.
hun maja jdo aayo jdo teji diljeet nu kaale nu fuddi dendi dekh leve te fr diljeet teji de ghar jaave teji naal gel krn ki teji kaale baare kisi nu na dase te otte teji diljeet di fuddi maare . Bc aakha te hanju te muho cheeka kadhva deve diljeet di. Te fr baaki saariya di v maare diljeet de help naal.
Gede ta marda hi rhnda edar v audar vedar v mar ja geda y
Aaho readers de swad waste diljit ta kaand strt toh n detail naal howeHor kinna ak wait krna pena writer sahab![]()
Lgta writer ka khud ka koi new scene nhi bna kisi maal k sath esliye likhna ka mood nhi. Waise kabse space yatra se aaya desimen change ho gya shyad personal life mei jada busy tbhi edar kam likh paa rhaWriter sahab bille ki suhugrat wali rat daljit or kaale k bich jo v hoya os k baare me details me likh nhi paaye aap soo sad. Too bad for story Coma me chli gyi samye k abhave me.ab sayad .......... pr esme writer ki bhi glti nhi h.
Lgta writer ka khud ka koi new scene nhi bna kisi maal k sath esliye likhna ka mood nhi. Waise kabse space yatra se aaya desimen change ho gya shyad personal life mei jada busy tbhi edar kam likh paa rha