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ok bhai try karunga aga se sahi karna kabhai..story is good..but tumhaara language samajhne mein bahut mushkil hota hai...
ex: ap inha so jaia...iska kya matlab hai? mostly "aap yahan so jaayiye"...see what you have written...not criticizing. But very difficult to understand..
thoda language pe dhyaan do pls..thanks.
momlover22