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*Asʟᴀᴍ ᴏ ᴀʟaɪᴋᴜᴍ.*

Oɴ ᴛʜɪs ʙʟᴇssᴇᴅ ᴏᴄᴄᴀsɪᴏɴ ᴏғ Eɪᴅ, ᴡɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴊᴏʏ, ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss, ᴘᴇᴀᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴘʀᴏsᴘᴇʀɪᴛʏ! Eɪᴅ Mᴜʙᴀʀᴀᴋ! Tʜᴇ ᴍᴀɢɪᴄ ᴏғ ᴛʜɪs ᴅᴀʏ ʙʀɪɴɢ ᴀ ʟᴏᴛ ᴏғ ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss ᴀɴᴅ ʙʟᴇssɪɴɢs ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʟɪғᴇ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴡɪʟʟ ғɪʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴊᴏʏ. Wɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴀ Hᴀᴘᴘʏ Eɪᴅ.❤

*𝒲𝒶𝓇𝓂 𝓡𝓮𝓰𝓪𝓻𝓭,*
AHSAN

 

[LionHeart007]

Update 10



Next morning


Subah sabhi as routine uthte hain or Naashta kar k Sabhi mard log (parents) baher chale gye the ab ghr m sirf ladies or apne youngsters hi reh gye the.

Ladies apne ghar k kaamon m lagi huii thin to bache log aapsss m baaton or hansi mazak kr rhe the jo inka roz ka hota hai pr aaj inki baaton ka ek ehem hissa Saba thi. Sonia bhi godi m chadh kr baithi thi pr aaj Kuch alag tha jahan pehle woh sirf Viki ki godi m hi baithti thi to aj woh Saba k saath chipki huiii thi aakhir uski hone wali Bhabhi jo thi Saba or iska 2nd reason ye tha apna Viki jo is scene se ghayab tha asal m Viki apna kuch kaam kr rha tha office ka, atleast baaki sab ko to usne yehi bola tha.
Baaki poora din normal hi guzarta hai.

Next day

Naashte k baad sab bade log apne apne kaam pr nikal jaate hain to wahin aaj Saba bhi ready thi or usne Burka pehena huwa tha or wo Mehwish ka wait kr rhi thi (Full too BURKA AVENGER wala look lag rha tha jaise abhi jaa kr BABA BANDOOK ka fuse nikaal degi ).

Asal m aaj Mehwish jis school m padhaati thi wahan pr koi function tha or kyun k woh girls school m padhaati thi to usne socha k apne saath Saba ko bhi le chalti hun usse bhi koi problem nhi hogi. Pehle to Saba manaa krti hai pr Mehwish k insist krne or maan jaati hai.
Mehwish ready ho kr aati hai or ye 2non nikal jaate hain School ki taraf.

Wahin Viki bhi jaa raha tha baher, woh Umar or Laiba k saath jaa rha tha unke college kyun k aaj un 2non ka result aane wala tha.

Umar or Laiba 2non hi same college me padhte the or class bhi same hi thi inki bcz in 2non ne hi arts liya tha .
Ghr se car le kr nikal jaate hain car Viki drive kr rha tha or Umar uske Barabar me or Laiba back seat pr baithi thi or ye log baaten krte college pohonch jaate hain jahan pr jab ye log apni class m jaate hain to Viki bhi inke saath hi tha.

Ab apna Viki itna handsome to tha k free mahol wali ladkiyaan ek baar dekh kr kuch had tak impress to ho hi jaati thin waisa hi yahan bhi huwa kuch girls thin jo usse taad rhi thin pr apna Viki thehra sakht londa ab har kisi pr thode hi pighle gaa to usne wohi kiya jo wo hamesha se krta aaya tha means ignore.

Laiba or Umar Viki ko le kr apne group ki taraf chale jaate hain, inke group m 2 ladke or 3 ladkiyaan or thin in 2non k ilaawa.
Salaam dua k baad sab ek saath hi baith jaate hain .

F1(friend 1 "in ka koi khass role nhi hai to name nhi likha"): yrr Laiba ye kon hai tumhare saath pehle to nhi dekha kabhi.

F2: haan Umar kon hai ye bata naa.

Umarintro krwaatw huwe) guys inse milo ye hain hamare cousin brother Waqas Rajput or bhai ye mere friends hain .

Viki halki smile k saath unko great krta hai.

F3: cousin pr tumhare to sabhi cousins ko him jaante hain ya atleast dekha to hai or inko kabhi nhi dekha .

Laiba: woh is liye k Bhai apne Ami Abu or bhaiyon k saath Karachi m rehte hain.

F4: acha Sahi waise ye Kuch bol q nhi rhe ?

Laiba: kab se to tum sab k sawaal jawaab chal rhe hain to kaise bolen ge or waise bhi bhai kisi ko jaante nhi to kya baat Karen ge tumhe kuch baat krni hai to bolo .

F2(jo ladki thi Viki ki taraf haath aage krti huii) ap mujhse friendship karen ge please.
Sun kr baaki friends thode shocked huwe pr Laiba or Umar to just apna head shake krne lage.

Viki: I'm sorry Sister but me girls k saath dosti nhi krta, please don't mind haan.

Ye sun kr to us ladki ka muhn hi utarr gaya pr usne sambhalte huwe bola

F2: waise me jaan skti hun k wajah kya hai iski ?

Laiba: woh me batati hun, darasal bhai ladkiyon se dosti hi nhi krte or wiase bhi jo tum soch rhi ho woh ab possible bhi nhi hai .

F2: me kya soch rhi hun or kya possible nhi hai?

Umar: yehi k tum jo bhai ki gf banne ka soch rhi ho woh possible nhi hai pehli baat to bhai khud in chakkaron m nhi padte or 2nd k bhai ka rishta pakka ho chuka hai to samajh rhi ho na tumhaara patta ugne se pehle hi cut gaya hai .

F5: ohhhh to yeh baat hai .

F6: wiase kya hum wajah jaan sakte hain k ap girls se dosti kyun nhi krte ?

Viki: zaroori nhi kr har cheez ki koi wajah ho bss mera dil nhi maanta to nhi krta simple.

F5: hain ye kya baat huii .

Viki: isme problem hi kya hai insaan ko wohi krna chahiye jo uska dil bole lekin usme dimaagh ka hissa bhi ho. Lekin bss condition yeh hai k woh kaam shi ho jo aapka dil apko krne ka bol rha hai .
Ab dekho na dost me banana nhi chahta or behen woh banna nhi chahtin to isme me kya kr sakta hun .
Hahahaha sabhi hans dete hain .
Utne m hi results announcement start ho jaati hai to sab khamoshi se us taraf focus kr lete hain.

Laiba Umar or inke sabhi dost ache numbers se paas ho gye the to ye log canteen m jaa kr choti sii party krne lagte hain k itne m

Trinnmnnn trinnmnnn

Viki ka phone bajta hai dekho to ghr se Ami ki call thi.

Viki: A.SalaaamoAlikum Ami.
Ami:W.Salaam.

Viki: g Ami sab khairiyat hai jo aapne call kiya ?

Ami: khairiyat k bacche ghr jab aoge bola tha na k jaldii aajana ghr shopping bhi krni hai or tum ho k abhi tk nhi aye thode se to din hain apne paas.

Viki: ye meri ghalti nhi hai results aane m time lag gaya or bss abbi canteen m hain bss aate hain thodi der m.

Ami: jaldi aaoo yahaan itne kaam hain or tum ho k ghayab ho or Saba or Mehwish bhi nhi ayiin abhi tk.

Viki: to itni jaldi kis baat ki hai Ami next week ki date hai na to araam se ho jaiga sab waise bhi konsa koi badaa function krna hai jo itna pareshan ho rhi ho.

Ami: beta hamare liye to ye bada function hi hai. Or ab tum Baaton m time waste naa Karo or jaldi ghr aajao.

Viki: ok Ami aate hain bss.
Call cut kr ke Laiba or Umar se bolta hai.

Viki: chlo yrr jaldi kro Ami ka call tha jaldi bula rhi hain.

Laiba (to her friends) ok friends ab hum chalte hai ghr m kuch kaam hain to humen nikalna pade gaa.

Same day
Saba' side

Ab dekh lete hain k yahan school m kya chal rha hai.

To jab Mehwish Saba ko le kr school pohonchti hai to ek Side pr uski colleagues or kuch puraani friends khadi hoti hain (inke bhi name important nhi hain to F1,F2 hi likhun gaa).

Salaam dua k baad ek Mehwish intro krwaati hai sabka

Mehwish: Saba ye meri colleagues or friends hain or friends ye hai Saba meri hone wali Bhabhi.
Sabhi shocked

F1: Mehwish ye tu kya bol rhi hai yeh trri hone wali Bhabhi! Mtlb kaise?

Mehwish: kya matlb kaise or ye kyun nhi ho skti meri Bhabhi??

F2: are isko dekh kr to lagta hai k iski age kam se kam 19 ya 20 to hogi hi .

Mehwish: han 20 ki hai ye to usme kya problem hai.

F3: are problem nhi hai mtlb yeh hai hamare bolne ka k ye 20 ki hai or Faizi to abhi sirf 15 ka hi hai.
Ye sun kr Mehwish to hansne lag jaati hai , or Saba shock ho jaati hain .

Mehwish (hanste huwe) paagal ho kya sab k sab jo ye soch rhe ho k ye or faizi hahahaha

F3: hans kyun rhi hai or ye Faizi ki nhi hai ??

Mehwish: haan mtlb nhi ye Faizi ki bhi hone wlai Bhabhi hi hai or tum log kya soch the the mene hone wali Bhabhi kya bola tum to apne hi logics lag baithi.

F4: to phir kiski hone wali wife hai ye ?

Mehwish: are mene bataaya tha na mere Mamu aye huwe hain Karachi se unke bade bete Viki ki hone wali wife hai ye .

F4: acha acha sorry hann please maaf krna Saba humen thodi ghalatfehmi ho gyii thi.

Saba: koi baat nhi ap sorry na bolen .

F5: waise tum krti kya ho Saba means k studies etc .

Saba: abhi tk mene apna Enter kiya hai Computer Science se aage abhi B-Tech ya BSCS krna hai .

F4: pr uske liye yo bohot dimaagh chahiye hota hai or mehnat bhi bohot lagti hai .

Mehwish: to uska kya hai ye topper hai apne college ki to koi masla hi nhi hai iske liye to entry test agr huwa bhi to ye yuun clear kr le gii.

F4: mera mtlb ye hai k shaadi k baad iska hubby isko permission de ga aage padhne ki ir phir shaadi k baad studies manage krna easy nhi hota naa.

Saba: woh kyun mana karen ge ulta unhon ne to mujhe khud bola tha k aage studies krna chahti ho to unhe koi problem nhi hai ulta woh to support m hain is baat k.

F3: ladke to bolte hain bss or jab khud padhte nhi hain to apni biviyon ko kaise padhne den ge .

Mehwish: faaltu baaten naa kro Viki khud bohot hi bright hai studies m. Jitna woh handsome hai us se zeyaada intelligent hai apne college ka topper hai or sports activities m bhi brilliant hai wo.

F2: acha ye baat hai, phir to thk hai .

F3: chlo dekhen g k kitna intelligent hai ye Viki.

Mehwish: ab tum log bss uska exam na lene Beth janaa .
Hahahaha Sabhi hanse dete hain .
Aise hi kaafi time nikal jaata hai to Phupho ki call aati hai Mehwish k paas k jaldi ghr aajaao etc to ye log bhi nikal jaate hain ghr ki taraf.

Ab aaakhir aisa kya hona hai next week jiski tayaari ho rhi hai bcz Viki ki shaadi to pakka nhi hai usne khud jo abhi manaa kiya tha.
To aage dekhte hain k kya baat hai aakhir lekin next update m.


Abhi k liye itna hi guys.
Maybe aaj raat tk ek update orr aye.
Tab tak saath bane rahiye .
Padhiye or apni raye se aagah krna naa bhulen.
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Awesome, beautiful❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

 

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Update 1.

" are yrr kya kr rha hai vikki itni jaldi kis baat ki hai tujhe! Tu to aise kr rha hai jaise Teri baaraat aane wali ho or tu late na ho jaye"

"Beta meri baaraat nhi aarahi pr teri rkhsati ka time zaroor hone wala hai, ek bhai hone ka frz to mujhe poora krna hi pade ga naa, or jaldbaazi is liye kr rha hun k aakhir teri doli jo mujhe uthaani hai ab bhai nhi kare ga to kon kare gaa ".

"Yrr tu bhadak q rha hai or me ladka hun ladki nhi jo tu meri doli uthaye gaa or me bhai hun tera koi behen nhi samjha ".

Vikki: Pta hai dost kam bhai hai tu mera or shukr kr behen bol diya tujhe wrna kaam to tere lugaiyoon wale hain, jab dekho ye kya kr rha hai q kr rha hai. Or me bhadakk nhi rha tha yrr mazak kr rha tha dil pr naa lena baaki Gurde, phephde pr bhale hi le le .

Ali: dekh tu phir mujhe tang kr rha hai kabhi bhai bolta hai to agle hi second behan aakhir tu chahta kya hai, or ye dil pr naa lun kidney etc pr bhale hi le lun kya mtlb hai tera ?

Vikki: are yrr dil to ek hi hai tere passs or uspe bhi kisi or ka kabzaa hai to uska risk nhi le sakte naa or kidney to 2 hoti hain na isii liye bola .

Ali: mere dil pr kisi ka kabzaa nhi hai or tu baat mat ghumaa seedha seedha bata k itni jaldi m kaaam q niptaa rha hai pehle to tu hi bolta tha k araam se kaam karo to ab kya huwaa, kahin jaa rha hai kya tu ?

Vikki: haan yrr wo baat ye hai k me kal apni family k saath apne gaon jaa rha hun.

Ali: acha to ye baat hai! pr isme itna excited hone wali kya baat hui? Gaon hi to jaa rha hai koi Switzerland thodi na jaar rha hai .

Vikki: tu nhi samjhe gaa yrr .

Ali: to samjha naa bhai, kahin tera kisi k saath gaon m chakkar to nhi chl rha naa ?

Vikki: abe nhi koi chakkar nhi chal rha mera kisi k saath or agr aisa hota bhi to tujhe sabse pehle pata chaltaa na aakhir lugayiiii jo hai tu meri .

Ali: haan yeh to hai,(thoda ruk kr jaise kuch yaad aaya ho) ek minute tune phir se mujhe lugayiiii bola naa.

Vikki: nhi mene to ye nhi bola, tune aisa suna kya ?

Ali: haan tun bola tha to sunuon ga hi naa .

Vikki: nhi bhau mene nhi bola tere kaan baj rhe hon ge .

Ali: tu baat naa ghumaa saaf saaf bata baat jya hai ?

Vikki: yr koi khaas baat nhi hai or agr hai bhi to atleast mujhe nhi maloom bcz ye plan Ami Abu ka hai mujhe to khud 2 din pehle bataya gaya hai isii liye me jaldi kaam niptaa rha hun .

Ali: acha to aisa hai kya to phir tere chehre pr ye excitement q dikh rhi hai ?

Vikki: bhai baat ye hai k tujhe to pata hi hai k me bohot lambe time se out of city nhi gaya specially gaon agye huwe to bohot time ho gaya hai to itne time baad jaa rha hun to thodi excitement to usual hi hai naa yrr. Gaon ka wo khamosh or sukoon wala mahol, khushnumaa mosam, lehlahaate khet, wo subah or shaaam ki thandii Hawaiian or bhi bohit sii chizwn hain yrr. Or ab to suna hai k pehle se kaafi developed ho gaya hai pakki sadken, school , College or bhi bohot kuch to bss isii liye thoda excited hun.

Ali: acha chl thk hai pr wahan jaa kr bhool mt jaana apne is bhai ko.

Vikki: me koi permanently wahin basne nhi jaa rha bss kuch time k liye jaa rha hun, or tu koi bhoolne wali chiz thodi hai.

Ali: waise ye achaanak plan kaise ban gaya.

Vikki: pta nhi yrr bataya to hai tujhe k mujhe khud 2 din pehle bataya hai Ami n jaane ka, or ab plans achaanak hi ban jaate hain pr ye plan q bana ye to ab gaon jaa kr hi pata chale gaa.

Ali: chl koi baat nhi dheyaan rakhna bss Sabka or khaas tor pr apna khayal rakhna. Have a Safe Journey.

Vikki: thanks yrr, chl bye take care.

Ali: ok bro bye and you too take care.




Aj k liye itna hi
Padhiye or apni Raye se aagah krna naa bhulen.

Toh finaly apne story ka pahla update de diya ek baat ye tay h ali vicky ka sath kabhi nahi chodega aur dono best friends h toh baat he alag h aur dono ki jugalbandi bahut achi lagi par pahle he update mai dono alag ho gaye h....dekhte h ab kab milte h dono

 

[LionHeart007]

Toh finaly apne story ka pahla update de diya ek baat ye tay h ali vicky ka sath kabhi nahi chodega aur dono best friends h toh baat he alag h aur dono ki jugalbandi bahut achi lagi par pahle he update mai dono alag ho gaye h....dekhte h ab kab milte h dono

Waise update to ab tk 10 ho chuke hain or aaj INSHA'ALLAH 11th bhi aajaye gaa jis m characters entry bhi hogi or story k ek khaas hisse ki shuruwaat bhi hogii.

Ali or Viki ki dosti to hai hi aisi k jugalbandi kabhi khatam nhi honi or jahan tak baat hai 2baara milne ki to woh to qismat pr hai k kab woh waqt aata hai jab inki mulakaat hogi.

 

[LionHeart007]

Awesome, beautiful❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Thanks dear .

 

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Update 11 will be posted soon.

 

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