Fantasy Pralay

[Thakur]

INDEX

Introduction​

Update 1​	Update 2​	Update 3​	Update 4​	Update 5​
Update 6​	Update 7​	Update 8​	Pralay 1​	Pralay 2​
Pralay 3​	Update 9​	Update 10​	Update 11​	Update 12​
Update 13​	Update 14​	Update 15​	Update 16​	Update 17​
Update 18​	Update 19​	Update 20​	Update 21​	Update 22​
Update 23​	Update 24​	Update 25​	Update 26​	Update​

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[Thakur]

Awesome and fantastic story and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Thanks Shahrukh bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Ramesh628]

Update 8​

Vatavaran me bullet ki awaj he sunai de rahi thi ke muze firse aisa laga jaise koi mere sath daud raha ho aur iss baar mera dimag muze kuchh kehta usse pehle maine apni aankhe bayi taraf ghumai aur rear view mirror me dekha ke 2 bayi aankhe muzse 5 foot duri se he par thoda pichhe daud rahi thi aur andhere me wo konsa jeev he ye bhi pata nahi chal raha tha ,ke wo sher he ya tendua ya koi Aur ! iss waqt me bullet ko 90 km/hr ki speed se dauda raha tha aur tabhi samne se ek tempo aaya aur uske headlight ki roshni me maine use dekha ….







To be continued…





Wo ek bada sa kaala Tendua (Black Panther) tha jo meri taraf dekhte hue mere sath me daud raha tha, uske aur mere bich me 5-6 feet ka he distance tha ,matlab uski ek jump aur mera khel khatam !

Par usne mere upar chhalang nahi lagai, tempo nikal chuka tha aur me accelerator daba ke jitna ho sake utni teji se bullet bhagane laga . Lekin wo Tendua ab bhi mere pichhe tha aur me uski chamakti ankho ko mirror se dekh pa raha tha ,itne me muze gaon sima dikhne lagi aur jaise he maine sima paar ki tab jaake mere seene me jaan aa gayi , saamne se kuchh gaon wale bhi dikhe par me ruka nahi aur sidha hamare ghar jaake bike roki .

Bike ki chabi nikalte samay mere hath kaanp rahe the jaise me abhi apne ghar ke samne na ho ke uss Kaale Tendue ke saamne khada hu aur uski wo pili si chamkili ankhe meri ankho me jhaank rahi ho .

Didi : Ajay, itni der se bahar kyu khada he ? Sunai nahi de raha kya tuze ?

Didi ki awaj se me vartaman me aaya aur sidha apne room me chala gaya.

Bed bag feki aur bistar pe let gaya aur aaj jo kuchh bhi hua tha usse yaad karne laga aur sochne laga agar me beer he nahi pita to meri jaan pe nahi ban aati , par jo hona tha wo ho gaya .

Par muze kya pata tha ke ye ant nahi aarambh he Pralay ka !



Aaj babuji kheto par he rukne wale the isliye me unhe khana dene chala gaya. Kheto ke paas jake pohocha to dekha babu ji aur pehelwan chacha dono alaav (aag ) ke paas baithe sek rahe the aur baate ho rahi thi ,aur baju me Ashwini khana laga rahi thi.

Babu ji : le shambhu Ajay bhi aa gaya khana leke.

Pehelwan chacha (Shambhu chacha) : Ajay, khana ghar le ja idhar Ashwini ne bhuni murgi banai he, aaj khas din he to.

Me : kya khaas he chacha ji ?

Ispe babu ji unko kohni maari to maine dekha ek side me kaanch ke glass rakhe he matlab aaj pine ka plan hoga inka. Jabse me bada hua tabse maine kabhi bhi na to Babu ji ko aur na he Shambhu chacha ko sharab pite hue dekha tha, ha bas holi waghera ke samay bhang pina yaad he par gaon me ye common he. Par aaj sharab he matlab jarur special hoga kuchh. Unka special program dekhne ke liye me bhi unke sath baitha to babu ji ne hadkaya ,

Babu ji : Tu kya baitha he nawab jaisa , jake Ashwini ko madat kar !

Waha se laat kha ke me Ashwini ke paas gaya, usne already khana laga he diya tha ,

Ashwini : Bas ho he gaya khana laga ke ,tu ruk idhar he fir hum dono chalte he .

Babu ji aur pehelwan chacha baith gaye khana khane ,aur me bhi apni potali leke wapas ghar nikalne laga to babu ji ne roka,

Babu ji : kaisa nalayak ladka he ye, idhar andhera ho chala he , Ashwini kya akele ghar jayegi ? usko pehle uske ghar chhod fir apne ghar jana .

Ispe Ashwini halka sa has di, aur chacha to laga he tha peg banane me .

Me aur Ashwini uske ghar ki taraf chalne lage jo ke unke khet fir aam aur kaju ke baagho ke baad aata hai ! hum dono chal he rahe the khali, koi kuchh bol nahi raha tha, Purnima ki raat hone ke karan andhere me bhi sab kuchh saaf dikh raha tha, aaj Ashwini apne me he muskura rahi thi ,par mene puchha nahi ,agar puchhta to alag siyappa hoga iska !

Ashwini : Suno .

Me : Hmm kya he ?

Ashwini : ek kaam he muze tuzse , karoge ?

Me : kaisa kaam ?

Ashwini : Actually 2 kaam he, 1 ye ke wo Vinod he na Nisha ka pati usko baki awara log jinke sath wo ghumta he unse alag karna he aur dusra ye ke uske liye koi naukari ya kaam dhundhna he ,plz ha bol na Ajay

Me : Pagla gayi he kya tu ? Nisha ke liye kuchh hota to baat hoti kuchh par ye Vinod pura kaam se gaya he, daru cigarette hukka tak thik he , par ye chutiya Ganja, randibaji tak karta firta he, aajkal to sunne me aaya he ke iske dosto ne kahi aas pados me koi illegal kaam tak chalu kiye he. Iske liye kya kuchh karna ? aur karna bhi kyu jab iske baap ki badi dukaan he wo he sambhale apne poot ko !

Ashwini : aur Nisha ka kya ? dost he wo meri, kya ye bhi bhool jaye ? aur Vinod illegal kaam nahi kar raha par jinke sath wo ghumta firta he wo karte he, aur abhi 2 mahine pehle vinod bhi Naukri karta tha ,acchha khasa kama ke deta tha ghar me par aisi sangat me pada ke aaj ye haal hai, aur hum kya aise he ye sab hone de kyunki wo hamara kuchh nahi lagta ?

Me : Dekh har chij apni marji se razamandi se he hoti he ,koi daru ki botal tumhare muh ko lagaye bhi to bhi use pina he ya nahi ye hum tay karte he. Baki tu kehti he to me koshish karunga baki jiske jaise karam-dharam.

Ashwini: Thank you thank you Ajay, tune mera ek kaam to kar he diya ,dusra fir kabhi bataungi abhi ye bata tuze kya hua he ,pareshan sa lag raha he aaj ?

Me : kuchh nahi bass study aur career ki tension he thoda

Ashwini : muzse jhuth bol ke kya milega tuze ? bata to , dost he itne saalo se ,ha ab itne time baad mile he wo baat alag he par dost to samazta he na tu muze ,ya wo bhi nahi ?

Me : (frustrate ho ke )Arre yaarr kya tu bhi ye sab leke baithi hai ,jaldi jaldi chal muze bhuk lagi he

Ashwini ne ispe kuchh nahi kaha aur mere sath chalne lagi ,ab unke hamare khet khatam ho chuke the aur pedo wala area shuru hua tha ke ekdam se usne mera hath pakda aur ek ped paas ke le kar gayi aur khinch ke niche bithaya .



Me : Aashu yaar ghar chal pehle he raat ho gayi he aur yaha tere drame khatam nahi ho rahe

Ashwini ne bass meri potli leli aur khana bahar nikalne lagi .

Ashwini : Le kha le ab ,bhukh lagi he na tuze, kha ab jaldi se

Me bas use dekhta raha, jab usne dekha ke me kha he nahi raha to usne ek niwala banaya aur mere muh ke paas laai.

Ashwini : Muh khol chupchap.

Ab iss bala se aise to bach nahi sakta tha kyonki bhoot-pishach se uparwale ka naam leke to bacha ja sakta he par naari hat ke aage bhala kisi ki chali he jo meri chalti !

Uske ek niwala khilane ke baad mene khud se khana shuru kiya, khane ka taste alag tha par badhiya banaya tha, matlab Vidya didi ne he banaya hoga aaj . maine dekha ke wo bass muze he dekh rahi he to na jane kyu aur kaise maine ek niwala uske hotho se lagaya ,usne bina kuchh kahe wo kha liya. Fir jab khana khatam hua to hum log kapde zaadte hue uthe aur uske ghar ki taraf nikle jo ki abhi bhi 10 minute ki duri pe tha.

Ashwini : Tune bataya nahi aaj kya hua tuze ?

Me : kya batata tuze ke marte marte bacha hu aaj !

Ashwini wahi ki wahi ruk gayi aur usne mera hath pakad liya,

Ashwini : Thik se bata matlab kya hua , kisne mara kya, ya ….

Me : Arre yaar kuchh nahi, bas Sheher1 se aa raha tha jungle wale raste se to ek jagah ruk gaya aur waha Kaala Tendua dikha jo mere pichhe pad gaya, gaadi bhaga bhaga ke aaya hu bass aur kya !

Ashwini : Tu jhuth to nahi bol raha he na ?

Me : me kyu jhuth bolu Aashu ab,

Ashwini : Hamare yaha jungle me baagh, tendue jaise koi janwar nahi he isliye maine puchha , yaha sirf jangli suar aur bandar wagera jaise chhote mote janwar he , tune pakka tendua he dekha tha na ? ya tu kuchh pike baitha tha .

Uske iss sawal se me sakpaka gaya aur usne ye baat notice kari.

Me : Chhod ye sab ghar aa gaya tera .

Usne kuchh nahi kaha,bass aise he aage chali gayiaur me bhi apne ghar ki taraf nikala, kuchh dur he chala tha ke pichhe se usne aawaj lagai to me ruk gaya, wo lagbhag daudate hue mere paas aayi aur usne apne hatho me kuchh laya tha,kya wo pata nahi par usne mere sir ke upar se 1-2 baar daayi fir baayi taraf use ghumaya aur dur feka.

Me : kya kar rahi he tu aashu ? pagal wagal ho gayi he kya ?

Ashwini : (haste hue) Najar utar rahi thi teri .

Me : Muze kiski najar lagegi bhala ?

Usne jaate hue dhire se kaha “Meri” !



To be continued...

Sandar kahani hai bhai

 

[Alok]

Bahut hi behtareen story likh rahe ho Thakur bhai....

Padhkar mazza aa raha hai aur update bhi samay par aa rahe hai toh flow bhi ban Raha hai..

 

[Thakur]

Sandar kahani hai bhai

Thanks Ramesh bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Thakur]

Bahut hi behtareen story likh rahe ho Thakur bhai....

Padhkar mazza aa raha hai aur update bhi samay par aa rahe hai toh flow bhi ban Raha hai..

Thanks Alok bhai
Updates ab regularly milte rahenge,bass reader's bhi sath dete rahe

 

[G goraya g]

Nice update bro and waiting for next update aur mujy lagta hai ajy my Kuch power bi ho gi

 

[parkas]

Update 8​

Vatavaran me bullet ki awaj he sunai de rahi thi ke muze firse aisa laga jaise koi mere sath daud raha ho aur iss baar mera dimag muze kuchh kehta usse pehle maine apni aankhe bayi taraf ghumai aur rear view mirror me dekha ke 2 bayi aankhe muzse 5 foot duri se he par thoda pichhe daud rahi thi aur andhere me wo konsa jeev he ye bhi pata nahi chal raha tha ,ke wo sher he ya tendua ya koi Aur ! iss waqt me bullet ko 90 km/hr ki speed se dauda raha tha aur tabhi samne se ek tempo aaya aur uske headlight ki roshni me maine use dekha ….







To be continued…





Wo ek bada sa kaala Tendua (Black Panther) tha jo meri taraf dekhte hue mere sath me daud raha tha, uske aur mere bich me 5-6 feet ka he distance tha ,matlab uski ek jump aur mera khel khatam !

Par usne mere upar chhalang nahi lagai, tempo nikal chuka tha aur me accelerator daba ke jitna ho sake utni teji se bullet bhagane laga . Lekin wo Tendua ab bhi mere pichhe tha aur me uski chamakti ankho ko mirror se dekh pa raha tha ,itne me muze gaon sima dikhne lagi aur jaise he maine sima paar ki tab jaake mere seene me jaan aa gayi , saamne se kuchh gaon wale bhi dikhe par me ruka nahi aur sidha hamare ghar jaake bike roki .

Bike ki chabi nikalte samay mere hath kaanp rahe the jaise me abhi apne ghar ke samne na ho ke uss Kaale Tendue ke saamne khada hu aur uski wo pili si chamkili ankhe meri ankho me jhaank rahi ho .

Didi : Ajay, itni der se bahar kyu khada he ? Sunai nahi de raha kya tuze ?

Didi ki awaj se me vartaman me aaya aur sidha apne room me chala gaya.

Bed bag feki aur bistar pe let gaya aur aaj jo kuchh bhi hua tha usse yaad karne laga aur sochne laga agar me beer he nahi pita to meri jaan pe nahi ban aati , par jo hona tha wo ho gaya .

Par muze kya pata tha ke ye ant nahi aarambh he Pralay ka !



Aaj babuji kheto par he rukne wale the isliye me unhe khana dene chala gaya. Kheto ke paas jake pohocha to dekha babu ji aur pehelwan chacha dono alaav (aag ) ke paas baithe sek rahe the aur baate ho rahi thi ,aur baju me Ashwini khana laga rahi thi.

Babu ji : le shambhu Ajay bhi aa gaya khana leke.

Pehelwan chacha (Shambhu chacha) : Ajay, khana ghar le ja idhar Ashwini ne bhuni murgi banai he, aaj khas din he to.

Me : kya khaas he chacha ji ?

Ispe babu ji unko kohni maari to maine dekha ek side me kaanch ke glass rakhe he matlab aaj pine ka plan hoga inka. Jabse me bada hua tabse maine kabhi bhi na to Babu ji ko aur na he Shambhu chacha ko sharab pite hue dekha tha, ha bas holi waghera ke samay bhang pina yaad he par gaon me ye common he. Par aaj sharab he matlab jarur special hoga kuchh. Unka special program dekhne ke liye me bhi unke sath baitha to babu ji ne hadkaya ,

Babu ji : Tu kya baitha he nawab jaisa , jake Ashwini ko madat kar !

Waha se laat kha ke me Ashwini ke paas gaya, usne already khana laga he diya tha ,

Ashwini : Bas ho he gaya khana laga ke ,tu ruk idhar he fir hum dono chalte he .

Babu ji aur pehelwan chacha baith gaye khana khane ,aur me bhi apni potali leke wapas ghar nikalne laga to babu ji ne roka,

Babu ji : kaisa nalayak ladka he ye, idhar andhera ho chala he , Ashwini kya akele ghar jayegi ? usko pehle uske ghar chhod fir apne ghar jana .

Ispe Ashwini halka sa has di, aur chacha to laga he tha peg banane me .

Me aur Ashwini uske ghar ki taraf chalne lage jo ke unke khet fir aam aur kaju ke baagho ke baad aata hai ! hum dono chal he rahe the khali, koi kuchh bol nahi raha tha, Purnima ki raat hone ke karan andhere me bhi sab kuchh saaf dikh raha tha, aaj Ashwini apne me he muskura rahi thi ,par mene puchha nahi ,agar puchhta to alag siyappa hoga iska !

Ashwini : Suno .

Me : Hmm kya he ?

Ashwini : ek kaam he muze tuzse , karoge ?

Me : kaisa kaam ?

Ashwini : Actually 2 kaam he, 1 ye ke wo Vinod he na Nisha ka pati usko baki awara log jinke sath wo ghumta he unse alag karna he aur dusra ye ke uske liye koi naukari ya kaam dhundhna he ,plz ha bol na Ajay

Me : Pagla gayi he kya tu ? Nisha ke liye kuchh hota to baat hoti kuchh par ye Vinod pura kaam se gaya he, daru cigarette hukka tak thik he , par ye chutiya Ganja, randibaji tak karta firta he, aajkal to sunne me aaya he ke iske dosto ne kahi aas pados me koi illegal kaam tak chalu kiye he. Iske liye kya kuchh karna ? aur karna bhi kyu jab iske baap ki badi dukaan he wo he sambhale apne poot ko !

Ashwini : aur Nisha ka kya ? dost he wo meri, kya ye bhi bhool jaye ? aur Vinod illegal kaam nahi kar raha par jinke sath wo ghumta firta he wo karte he, aur abhi 2 mahine pehle vinod bhi Naukri karta tha ,acchha khasa kama ke deta tha ghar me par aisi sangat me pada ke aaj ye haal hai, aur hum kya aise he ye sab hone de kyunki wo hamara kuchh nahi lagta ?

Me : Dekh har chij apni marji se razamandi se he hoti he ,koi daru ki botal tumhare muh ko lagaye bhi to bhi use pina he ya nahi ye hum tay karte he. Baki tu kehti he to me koshish karunga baki jiske jaise karam-dharam.

Ashwini: Thank you thank you Ajay, tune mera ek kaam to kar he diya ,dusra fir kabhi bataungi abhi ye bata tuze kya hua he ,pareshan sa lag raha he aaj ?

Me : kuchh nahi bass study aur career ki tension he thoda

Ashwini : muzse jhuth bol ke kya milega tuze ? bata to , dost he itne saalo se ,ha ab itne time baad mile he wo baat alag he par dost to samazta he na tu muze ,ya wo bhi nahi ?

Me : (frustrate ho ke )Arre yaarr kya tu bhi ye sab leke baithi hai ,jaldi jaldi chal muze bhuk lagi he

Ashwini ne ispe kuchh nahi kaha aur mere sath chalne lagi ,ab unke hamare khet khatam ho chuke the aur pedo wala area shuru hua tha ke ekdam se usne mera hath pakda aur ek ped paas ke le kar gayi aur khinch ke niche bithaya .



Me : Aashu yaar ghar chal pehle he raat ho gayi he aur yaha tere drame khatam nahi ho rahe

Ashwini ne bass meri potli leli aur khana bahar nikalne lagi .

Ashwini : Le kha le ab ,bhukh lagi he na tuze, kha ab jaldi se

Me bas use dekhta raha, jab usne dekha ke me kha he nahi raha to usne ek niwala banaya aur mere muh ke paas laai.

Ashwini : Muh khol chupchap.

Ab iss bala se aise to bach nahi sakta tha kyonki bhoot-pishach se uparwale ka naam leke to bacha ja sakta he par naari hat ke aage bhala kisi ki chali he jo meri chalti !

Uske ek niwala khilane ke baad mene khud se khana shuru kiya, khane ka taste alag tha par badhiya banaya tha, matlab Vidya didi ne he banaya hoga aaj . maine dekha ke wo bass muze he dekh rahi he to na jane kyu aur kaise maine ek niwala uske hotho se lagaya ,usne bina kuchh kahe wo kha liya. Fir jab khana khatam hua to hum log kapde zaadte hue uthe aur uske ghar ki taraf nikle jo ki abhi bhi 10 minute ki duri pe tha.

Ashwini : Tune bataya nahi aaj kya hua tuze ?

Me : kya batata tuze ke marte marte bacha hu aaj !

Ashwini wahi ki wahi ruk gayi aur usne mera hath pakad liya,

Ashwini : Thik se bata matlab kya hua , kisne mara kya, ya ….

Me : Arre yaar kuchh nahi, bas Sheher1 se aa raha tha jungle wale raste se to ek jagah ruk gaya aur waha Kaala Tendua dikha jo mere pichhe pad gaya, gaadi bhaga bhaga ke aaya hu bass aur kya !

Ashwini : Tu jhuth to nahi bol raha he na ?

Me : me kyu jhuth bolu Aashu ab,

Ashwini : Hamare yaha jungle me baagh, tendue jaise koi janwar nahi he isliye maine puchha , yaha sirf jangli suar aur bandar wagera jaise chhote mote janwar he , tune pakka tendua he dekha tha na ? ya tu kuchh pike baitha tha .

Uske iss sawal se me sakpaka gaya aur usne ye baat notice kari.

Me : Chhod ye sab ghar aa gaya tera .

Usne kuchh nahi kaha,bass aise he aage chali gayiaur me bhi apne ghar ki taraf nikala, kuchh dur he chala tha ke pichhe se usne aawaj lagai to me ruk gaya, wo lagbhag daudate hue mere paas aayi aur usne apne hatho me kuchh laya tha,kya wo pata nahi par usne mere sir ke upar se 1-2 baar daayi fir baayi taraf use ghumaya aur dur feka.

Me : kya kar rahi he tu aashu ? pagal wagal ho gayi he kya ?

Ashwini : (haste hue) Najar utar rahi thi teri .

Me : Muze kiski najar lagegi bhala ?

Usne jaate hue dhire se kaha “Meri” !



To be continued...

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Thakur bhai...
Nice and lovely update....

 

[Thakur]

Nice update bro and waiting for next update aur mujy lagta hai ajy my Kuch power bi ho gi

Thanks for support

 

[Thakur]

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Thakur bhai...
Nice and lovely update....

Thanks parkas Bhai

 

[Thakur]

Pralay is coming


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