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Badhiya shaandar update bhai
Woh tasveer m kia h jo Ajay ek dam se khicha chala jaa raha h uski taraf
Tow bhai sahab pyar m pad gaye
Didi kyon itna bhadak Rahi h ki ladki se door reh kia chal raha h inke dimag m
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
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Tow Babu ji k samjhane se dimag batti jalti h kuch ab kheti badi m kuch dhiyan lagayenge bhai sahab or saath m pyar bhi parwan chadh raha hUpdate 14: Aashiq Awara!
Raat ke 2 baje the aur me piping wala topic clear kar raha tha ke darwaje pe halka sa knock hua.
Mene darwaja khola to didi thi,
Didi : side de .
Aur didi waise muze thokar maar ke andar ghusi aayi,
Me : Kya hua di ? kuchh chahiye tha kya aapko ?
Didi ne kuchh der muze dekha fir kaha,
Didi : Maine kaha tha na ke ladki ke chakkar se durr reh tu ,kaha tha na maine ?
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To be continued …
“Jo hue he gar badnam to fir chhupana kaisa,
Jurm he ishq humara to mukarna kaisa !”
Akhir didi ko pata chal he gaya tha mere aur Ashwini ke baare me ! Aise to me bhi inkar nahi karunga, abtak jo bhi kiya danke ki chot pe kiya aur abse jo bhi karunga danke ki chot pe he karunga .
Me : kya kehna chahti ho di aap ?
Didi : Tuze mere muh se sunna he ? Thik he fir ,ladki ke chakkar me mat pad ,pehle he tera ek saal kharab hua he, uske upar tere college ka wo kand jo tune bataya nahi yaha kisi ko wo bhi pata chala he muze, tuze chacha ji ne udhar sirf padhne ke liye bheja tha, sirf padhne ke liye ,lekin tune paha study chhod ke sab kuchh kiya, tune jhagda kiya, tune ragging li, fir wo tere naam ke dost jo ab puchhte tak nahi unke sath lecture bunk kar ke awaragardi ki, ladki ke sath ashiqui ki par ye bhi nahi dekha uske khaandaan wale kaun he kya karte he, fir tune 5 logo ko hospital tak pohochayaGanimat he ke police case nahi bana . Aur ye sab kar ke bhi kya mila tuze ? Bata na Ajay kya mila ? Teri bhalai ki baat kar rahi hu ke tuz pe ehsatan karne ke liye nahi , dard hota he tuze aise dekh ke. Ghar pe 3 mahine se he tu, ek baar bhi kachha-baniyan me nahi dekha hoga tuze yaha kisi ne, warna pura din aise kachhe me he ghumta tha na tu ! Kitna chhupa sakta he tu khud ko ?
Mere dinosaur ke size ka ego ko didi ne ek he jhatke me jameen pe gira diya tha, mera muh khula tha par awaj nahi nikal rahi thi, akhir didi ne photo nahi aaina jo dikhaya tha !
Didi : Tuze jyada kuchh bol bhi nahi sakti me ,ek he to bhai he mera, par abhi bhi time he to sambhal ja bhai, ek baar jo pair fisla to aadmi dusro ki najaro me baad pehle khud ki najaro me gir jaata he ! Tuze aasman ki unchaiyo ko chute dekhna he hume, bohot aas he chacha chachi ko tuzse .
Me : Di…
Didi : Tune college me ladkio ke sath jo bhi kiya ho me jaanti hu uss mahol me ho jata he, ladkiya bhi apni jarurat hisab se jo karna he wo karti he, par yaha gaon me ye sab karna aur wo bhi kiya to kiske sath ? Ashwini ! Matlab hadd he bhai, wo ladki achhi he par tuz pe bhari padegi dekh lena, abhi bhi waqt he sambhal ja tu.
Me : Ji thik he didi.
Didi : Chal ab tu bhi so ja aur subah uth ke padhna ab, good night .
Didi to chali gayi par mere andar jo jung shuru hui thi uska kya ? Mera dimag jo subah se gayab tha wo dil ko gaaliya de raha tha aur dil usko aur me inse bach bhi nahi sakta tha.
Ek taraf me purani baato pe mitti daale aage ja raha tha, ke didi aa gayi bulldozer leke aur satyanaash ho gaya sabka. Jitni meri kaali kartute ki thi in pichhle 2 saalo me jinhe me dafna ke un pe jungle bana raha tha wo sab bahar nikali gayi thi ab didi ko sab pata chal chuki thi ya fir thoda bohot wahi jaane. Kher ab kuchh to karna padega iss sab ka warna aise to lavde lag jayenge meri life ke aur didi ki baat bhi sahi he ke jinke liye kiya wo sab harami gayab the, Rajan to khud ka shop bana ke settle ho raha he, aisa bhi nahi he ke maje dusre ne liye uss time aur saja me bhugat raha hu, na na maje to maine bhi liye aur abhi khaali iljaam kisi na kisi pe daal ke chain ki nind sona chahta hu.
Subah 6:30 ko didi ne jagaya to me bhi fresh ho ke padhne baith gaya, ab kuchh din ashiqui side me aur good boy ban ke rehna padega ,at least didi ke saamne to !
11 baje tak padhai ki aur planning bhi ki ke kaise muze sab set karna he, kaise wapas college jaana he ,kaha pe paisa lagana he ,kiske sath kya karna he etc etc . Padh ke jo me utha aur nahane gaya he tha ke babu ji ka phone aaya, unhone kheto pe bulaya tha motor pump set karne ke liye . Mere dimag ki ghanti baji ke ye sahi nahi he guru, bhale he babu ji Arts wale ho par motor pump set karna unko aata he, bachpan se dekha he ye sab karte hue, pakka kuchh na kuchh gadbad he pencho. Mene balti me kapde liye aur kheto ki or nikal gaya ke babu ji pehle he bike leke gaye the.
Me : Ji babu ji kya hua he pump ko, pani nahi aa raha kya ?
Babu ji : pump bhi sahi se chal raha he aur pani bhi sahi aa raha he .
Me : Fir ?
Babu ji : Dekhna tha ke tuze iss kaam me interest he bhi ya nahi ! Dekh Ajay aisa he ke jo tu engineering kar raha he usme bhale he tuze moti rakmi Naukri mile par waha gadha mehnat kar ke dusro ki gaali khane ke baad khana gale se niche nahi utarta . Me bhi BA kar chuka hu, M.A. ke 2nd year me tha jab sab chhod ke wapas Dhangarh aaya aur kheti karne laga. Tum bhi kheti he karo ye me nahi keh raha, par jo aaj ke halaat he uss hisab kahu to tu ise apni dusri income samaz ke chal. Agar tune job ki ya koi business he start kiya to naya ghar lene se leke aage jo bhi bada karna he uske liye tuze paisa to lagega he, agar tu kheti sahi se kar paaya to fayde me bhi rahega aur jameen bechne ka koi khayal bhi nahi aayega !
Me : Me jameen nahi bechunga babu ji !
Babu ji : Jaanta hu, me bhi babu ji se ye kehta tha par mene bhi hamari dusri jameen ka ek hissa becha tha, tab samaz nahi thi par ab pachhtawa hota he. Waise to kuchh aur kaam bhi he tere liye, ye bike ke paper le aur Sheher2 jaake isse apne naam kar lena aur license bhi nikal lena, aur dusra yaha apne kheto wale kholi ke bagal me ek sandas banana he to uska samaan leke aana aur banwa lena . Aaj Parvan gaon jaana aur waha bank se paise nikal lena.
Unhone muze check diya to usme amount bohot jyada thi.
Me : Babu ji Itne paise thodi lagenge ek toilet banane ke liye !
Babu ji : Pata he pata he, mene apne kheto ke saath pados ke Nayak ki 8 acre jameen li he jotne ke liye wo bhi 5 saalo ke liye ,iss saal ka aadha bhaada dena he usse. Iss jameen ke aane ke baad apni income bhi badh jayegi , ha thoda adjust karna hoga hume, yaha tuze dekhna hoga aur waha muze par thik he ho jayega.
Me : Ji thik he babu ji me kar lunga .
Babu ji : Me nikal raha hu ab wakeel ke saath jameen ki kaagji karwai karne ,tu yahi baith ja padhne aur majdur ayenge to unse aaj he sabji lagane ke liye baagicha taiyar karwana he. Kar leg ana tu ?
Me : Ha kar lunga me, aap tension mat lo.
Babu ji : Hmm kaunsi sabji lagayega ye bhi bata fir ?
Me : Wo Kakdi, lauki aur bhindi lagwa deta hu.
Babu ji : Bohot khub, aaj aap engineering kar rahe ho to kheti ke kaam ko nichla kaam kabhi mat samazna. Jo desh kheti se, jameen se dur jaayega uska patan hona nishchitt hai !
Mene bhi haa me gardan hilai akhir babu ji ne baat he aisi ki thi . Mene bhi socha ke agar mere saare dost apne apni naiya paar laga rahe he kuchh na kuchh kar ke to hum kyu pichhe rahe .
Motor pump chalu kar ke me pani ke tanke yaha gaya aur kapde nikal ke nahane baitha , par paani se baas aane lagi to wahi rukk gaya. Tanki khol ke dekha usme bada sa chuha mara pada tha, ab ye sara paani waste ho gaya bc apna upar se tanki saaf karni padegi wo alag. Mene paani ka nal khol diya aur tanki puri khaali kar ke uss mare hue chuhe ko nikal feka aur brush leke nirma powder laga ke tanki saaf karne laga jaise bachpan me karta tha
Kuchh der me majdoor bhi aa gaye to ek ko tanki saaf karwane lagaya aur me baju me pipe ko hand shower ki tarah leke nahane laga .
Me sabun laga he chuka tha ke pichhe se seenti ki awaj aayi !
Pichhe kuchh ladkiyo khadi thi,
Ladki 1 : Haaye kya ladka he tere gaon ka Ashwini..
Ispe baki ladkiya hasne lagi aur mera dhyan unki taraf gaya.
Dusri Ladki : Ashwini Ae Ashwini idhar dekh to, jise tu dhundh rahi he wo yahi to nahi !
Uske muh se Ashwini naam sun ke me chuka he tha ke hamare kheto wale kholi se Ashwini bahar aayi jo shayad muze he dhund rahi thi .
Ashwini : Wah Suryavanshi wah , badi jaldi uth gaye aap to aur ang-pradarshan bhi ho raha he aajkal ,kyu ?
Me : Ha socha bekaar baithne se achha kuchh kaam he kar lu. Aur tumhe bhi mehmano ko dikhane ek yahi jagah mili thi kya gaon me ?
Ladki1 : Dekhne layak to kuchh nahi tha abtak aapke gaon me, bas aaj aapko dekh liya to hamare dil ko karaar aaya !
Ashwini : Ho gaya Naina tera ? Ab jao jaake aam ke baagiche ghumo, me aati hu kuchh der me .
Naina : Ha chalo chalo, aur aap bhi aao aam ke bagiche me didi ke sath .
Wo 3 no ladkiya daant nikalte hue waha se chali gayi to Ashwini mere paas aayi aur mugge se mere pith pe pani dalne lagi,
Me : Kya kar rahi he yaar, majdoor he aur koi na koi aata rehta he yaha pe ..
Ashwini : Ye to kal sochna chahiye tha na muze god me bithane se pehle ,kyu ?
Wo ruki nahi aur mere upar paani daalti rahi aur pith pe se sabun ka jhaag bhi hatane lagi.
Ashwini : Ye itne saare jagah jagah pe jakham kaise aaye he tumhare upar Ajay ?
Uski awaj me chinta thi ,wo jaha jaha jakham the waha apne hath fira rahi thi.
Me : Bas ek do baar accident hua tha, aur ek baar chhota sa jhagda hua tha tab ke he ye.
Ashwini : Chhote se jhagde me itne saare jakham nahi hote Ajay..
Me : Arre yaar bas college me thodi hathapai hui thi aur lag gayi thi idhar udhar bass.
Me un jakhmo ki kadvi yaado se frustrate ho gaya tha aur baalti se sara paani khud pe udhel ke towel lapet ke room me chala gaya . Bahar aaya aur sidha jaake majduro se mila, unko kaam samzaya ke baagiche kaise banane he aur aage kya kya saaman lagne wala he ye bhi puchh liya . Ashwini wahi dhoop me khadi muze dekh rahi thi ,usko aisa dekh ke muze bhi bura laga ke usne to sirf apni chinta jatai thi jo hamare naye rishte me hona jayaj he par me he overreact kar gaya wo bhi uss baat pe jaha uski koi galti nahi thi .
Me : Dhoop me kyo khadi ho yaha chaao me baitho ped ke niche .
Par wo shayad gussa ho gayi thi jo wo apne saath laayi bag uthayi aur mere hath me rakh di,
Ashwini : Nashta laai thi ,kha lena .
Fuck . Matlab apni gaadi chalne se pehle he atak gayi !
Wo lambi lambe kadmo se aam ke baghiche ki or ja rahi thi aur me bhi uske pichhe chal diya, jo gar ruthi he meri wajah se to manana bhi muze he hai aur jitne jaldi ye bala maane utna meri sehat ke liye achha he !
Me : Arre Asshu ruk na .
Par wo aur teji se aage badhti gayi.
Me : Ashu tu to pichhe se bhi sexy lagti he yaar !
Ab laga uski gaadi ko break, aur gaadi ne liya U turn !
Me uske paas gaya aur kaha ,
Me : Baddi sohni lag ri aaj tu yaara, chal baghicha ghum aate he, Akele akele !
Wo apne muh pe hath rakh ke hasne lagi, par achha he hai maan to gayi ye.
Hum dono hatho me hath liye aam ke baagiche ki or chal diye,
Ashwini : Ab bataoge kaise lagi itni saare chote ?
Mera muh firse khatta hone laga tha par aaj nahi to kal use batana he tha to ab he sahi,
Me : College ke shuru hone ke 2 din baad he mera ek ladke ke sath jhagda hua tha to ,college chhutne ke baad bahar usme ek bande ne kaichi ✂ se pith pe maara tha, jyada laga nahi tha bas patti ki or 3-4 din me thik ho gaya.
Ashwini : Hmm .
Me : Vinod ko bank me kaam pe laga diya he kal he to uska bhi kaam ho gya baki wo jaane aur uske karam.
Ashwini : Achha kiya tumne, Nisha bohot roi thi uss din bhi usko leke bass ab wo firse un awara logo ke saath na jaye .
Me : Humne apna kaam kar diya Ashu ab baki jiske jaise karam .
Hum aam ke baagiche me pohoche to waha uss side koi nahi tha aur bahar dhoop bhi jyada thi to mene bhi usse kaha ki yahi baith jaate he aur wahi baith usne nashta lagaya ,tabtak me kuchh pake aam dhund ke laaya. Usne baajre ki rotiya aur baingan ka bharta laaya tha ,muze bhi bhook lagi thi to me bhi ji bhar ke khaane laga aur use bhi khila raha tha .
Naina : (Seenti marte hue) Oye hoye kya ashiqui ho rahi he khule me, itna to hamare yaha bhi nahi hota jitna yaha ho raha he .
Hum dono uski or dekhne lage ,jaha me Naina ko dekh ke thoda hadbada gaya tha wahi Ashwini sharma gayi thi, jo mene use sharmate dekha to dekhta he reh gaya.
Iss ladki ko shayad he kabhi mene sharmate dekha ho, uske gore gaal sharm se halke gulaabi hue the ,hontho pe dabi si muskaan aur najre nichi kar ke chupchap samaan sametne lagi. Idhar naina ne meri thuddi pakad ke uski aur ghumai,
Naina : Jara idhar hamari bhi to dekho handsome ,kabse hamare didi ko najar laga rahe ho.
Ashwini ne uska hath hataya mere se,
Ashwini : Chalo bhaago yaha se, jaake taalab ke yaha ghumo fir ghar jana, chalo jao ab.
Naina : Na na na bohot bhagam bhaag kar li humne didi ab jaha aap dono waha hum .
Ashwini uthne lagi to mene use pakda apni god me bithaya kal ki tarah aur unko kaha,
Me : Yaha se sidhe jao uss pahadi pe ,fir niche wo talaab dikhega, agar waha koi nahi he to he pass me jana warna mat jana, hum dono aate he abhi kuchh der me.
Naina : Pakka na ya aise he humko lollypop de rahe he !
Me : Ha pakka, waha se aage khandar bhi leke jaunga dikhane .
Unke jaane ke hum dono kuchh der aise he ek dusre ki baho me pade rahe aur kuchh idhar udhar ki baate karne lage, par maine use kal ki Renuka wali baat nahi batai jo ki bawal hona tay tha batane se. Aur mene soch liya ke Renuka se kinara karunga aage se ,use dur se he dua salam kar ke aage badhunga jo ki ab apna jo bhi he wo Ashwini ke sath he hai.
Kuchh der me uske mobile pe Naina ka missed call aaya to hun uth ke talaab ki or nikale. Aam ke bagiche ke baad wali pahadi ko cross kar ke ye talaab aata he jo ki kaafi bada he aur gehra bhi, lekin khaas ye hai ke ye natural nahi he balki ise khudwaya gaya he aur pakki boundary bhi banai he kaafi dashako pehle, ye talaab kabhi bhi sukhta nahi he chahe bahar kitna he sukha kyo na pade shayad iske andar koi chhoti neher ho .
Hum niche gaye to wo 3no talab ke pani me pair daale baate kar rahi thi ,hamare aane se uth gayi aur dusri ladki jo ki Shivani he usne kaha ,
Shivani : Yaar aap ke yaha talaab aur khandahar chhod ke kuchh nahi he kya ? Hum itne dur sheher2 se yaha aaye aur yaha aake kya mila kuchh nahi.
Ashwini : Kal Parvan gaon wale mandir jayenge, waha ghumna sab log abhi ghar chalo khana khane ka time ho gaya he .
Naina : Ha chalo chalo, ab didi ka kaam to ho gaya ab humse kya matlab reh gaya waise bhi . Chalo chalo ghar .
Wo taana maar rahi thi aur Ashwini bhi muskurate hue bye keh unko leke chali gayi. Mene nashta karne ke baad hath rumaal ko poche the to me talaab ke paani se hath dhone laga ,hath muh dhote samay aisa laga jaise paani ki gehrai se kuchh aawaj aa rahi he, aawaj insano wali ya janwaro ki nahi thi, awaj thokre maarne wali thi jaisi khudai ke samay aati he.
Me kuchh der yu he paani me aankhe gadaye dhyaan se uss awaj ko sunne me laga raha, awaj kaafi dhire dhire aa rahi thi par kaafi asaamanya thi. Itne me babu ji ka phone aaya to me sir jhatak ke khana khane sidha ghar chala gaya.
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Talaab ki satah ke 200 foot niche :
Ek aadmi jo umar se 45-46 ka hoga, jiski daadhi aur baal bohot jyada badhe hue the , sharir pe ek kamar pe bandha hua kapda chhod ke kuchh bhi nahi tha apna pura jor lagaye bade 25 kilo ke hathode se patthar tode ja raha tha. Ye kaam wo roj kiye ja raha tha bina ruke bina thake, aur aaj ek mod aisa aaya jab mitti hatate hatate mitti se nar-kankaal ki khopdi uske saamne aa giri !
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To be continued …
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Ab talab m woh Banda kia khod raha laga taare kia dhoond raha h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update bhai
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Bohot mast update tha.Sare kand bahen ko pata hona lajmi hai 
ye to hote hi hai Lekin jo bate unhone bataya aur samjhaya wo bohot jaruri the jo ajay bhi smjh gaya tha akhir samjhaya hi aisa tha bojh daal kar 
ye to ghar ki kahani hai bojh daal kar samjhana jo bohot jaruri hai khair iss update me ju ne ajay ki jimmedariya dikhayi jo bohot alag tha.
Khair Ashu wale scene thode romantic angle diye par unique style me aur jo Dhangarh ka jikr kiya red font me matlab ye jagah aage to aayegi jarur aur waha jo chode hongi wo bohot bawal hongi.Agle update ka intezar rahega.
ye to hote hi hai Lekin jo bate unhone bataya aur samjhaya wo bohot jaruri the jo ajay bhi smjh gaya tha akhir samjhaya hi aisa tha bojh daal kar ye to ghar ki kahani hai bojh daal kar samjhana jo bohot jaruri hai khair iss update me ju ne ajay ki jimmedariya dikhayi jo bohot alag tha.Khair Ashu wale scene thode romantic angle diye par unique style me aur jo Dhangarh ka jikr kiya red font me matlab ye jagah aage to aayegi jarur aur waha jo chode hongi wo bohot bawal hongi.Agle update ka intezar rahega.
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Jabardast yaar akhir romance ke sath suspence bhi mil raha hai dekhne ko
Waise update kab kab dete ho
Waise update kab kab dete ho
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Bohot mast update tha.Sare kand bahen ko pata hona lajmi hai
Khair Ashu wale scene thode romantic angle diye par unique style me aur jo Dhangarh ka jikr kiya red font me matlab ye jagah aage to aayegi jarur aur waha jo chode hongi wo bohot bawal hongi.Agle update ka intezar rahega.
Thanks for review sanki BhaiBohot mast update tha.Sare kand bahen ko pata hona lajmi hai
Khair Ashu wale scene thode romantic angle diye par unique style me aur jo Dhangarh ka jikr kiya red font me matlab ye jagah aage to aayegi jarur aur waha jo chode hongi wo bohot bawal hongi.Agle update ka intezar rahega.
Story ko real rakhne ki koshish he apni to kafi sari relative bate aa jati he.
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Thanks yamraj Bhai for support.
Update hafte me 2-3 dene ka irada hota he par me khud dusri stories me gayab rehta hu to 1 he deta hu.