Fantasy Pralay

[Thakur]

INDEX

Introduction​

Update 1​	Update 2​	Update 3​	Update 4​	Update 5​
Update 6​	Update 7​	Update 8​	Pralay 1​	Pralay 2​
Pralay 3​	Update 9​	Update 10​	Update 11​	Update 12​
Update 13​	Update 14​	Update 15​	Update 16​	Update 17​
Update 18​	Update 19​	Update 20​	Update 21​	Update 22​
Update 23​	Update 24​	Update 25​	Update 26​	Update​

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[Xabhi]

sabse pehle to bahot bahot sukriya ek mazedaar aur jabardast kahani suruwat karne ke liye...

Kahani Ajay ki jo flashback se suru hoti hai.... Meri nazar mein ye kahani best kahaniyo mein ek hogi...
aisa kyun?
Kyuki

1) dialogues.. Kirdaaro ke bich baatcheet ....
2) kirdaaro ke vichar.. bolne aur sochne ka tarika
3) kahani ki flow...
lage Jaise mujhe unke gaon le gaye ho, aur ye ho rahi gatividhiya aankho saamne ghat rahi ho... coz writer sahab ki lekhni hi hai itni realistic..
Yathaarth vadi bhaavnaye jo ki ek kathin vishay hai - chaahe lekhan mein ho ya film abhinay - lekin aap is mamle mein mahir hai. har pehlu aur bhumika ko dhyan mein rakhte huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai... gaon ka paribhes aur hero ki soch vichar ke sath sath uske aas paas usse jude logo ki soch vichar ko bhi bahot behtareen tarike pesh kiye hai...

Sabse important baat.... comedy ka level high hai story pe.. pehle update ne is baat ki proof di hai...
Ajay se leke pehelwan chacha tak, Chaudhary se leke uski tharki bahu tak... Hashya mishrit ke sath sath rochak romanchkari gatividhiyo ka ek anutha sangam raha update mein...
Btw pehelvan kaafi tez dimag wala hai

Ant mein readers se yahi request hai ki ek baar jarur is kahani padhe..

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Xabhi]

The king KEKIUS MAXIMUS SANJU ( V. R. ) Mahi Maurya Jaguaar .. SultanTipu40 mashish
bahot jabardast aur majedaar suruwat huyi hai story ki... waqt mile to aap sabhi ek baar padh ke jarur dekhiyega...

Mera naam nhi hai isme lagta hai Mai abhi famous nhi hua kuchh to alag karna padega baki gaanv valo se hat kr Taki logo ki najar me aa sku

 

[Thakur]

For the story Bhai
Sandar update bhai

Thanks for reply bhai

 

[Thakur]

Bahut shandaar update.

Dhanyavad padhne ke liye

 

[Xabhi]

Short character intro :



Characters (Gaon wale)

Ghar wale:

• Me (Ajay Harish Thakur, Age 20)
• Babu ji (Harish ,46)
• Maa (Alka,43)
• Dadi (Kanta, 65 no need to mention)
• Vidya didi (23, chacha ki beti 3 saal badi he muzse)
• Chacha -chachi : inki kuchh 6 saal pehle accident me maut ho chuki he to vidya didi hamare sath he rehti he.

Ghar : Hamara ye ek medium size ka old style ka ghar jo koi 30-40 saal purana hoga. Ghar ke bahar bada sa aangan he jiske bich me tulsi he. Fir ghar ka hall he jisme 2 bade diwan lagaye he aur baki aam furniture. Hall ke samne ki taraf galiyara sa he jisse kitchen me jate he .hall ke daye aur baye taraf 2-2 rooms he jinme se dayi taraf wala pehla dadi ka he fir babu ji ka. Bayi taraf wala pehla room saman ke liye he aur uske baju me mera wala. Bathroom ghar ke bahar he jisse attached toilet bhi he wahi purane style ka

Didi jyadatar girls hostel me he rehti he ,to babu ji usse milne hafte das din me jate rehte he.

• 1.Pehelwan chacha(Shambhu Nath patil,55 years)
• 2. patni : Sharada
• 3. beta Ashwin ,20 saal
• 4. beti Ashwini,20 (Twins he ye)
• Shikhar Rav Chaudhary,59 Gaon ke chaudhary he
• Beta : Sharad ,30(Dusre state me job karta he)
• Bahu : Revati,22
• Beti : Purnima(31,married)

1.Nisha : meri classmate ,halwai ki bahu

2. Rajan : mera engineering wala dost he ,sheher1 me he rehta he wahi inki kapde ki dukan he.


Update 2



Ghar pohoch ke maine bike ghar ke side me bane shade me laga di, itne me daadi bahar aayi aawaj sun ke .

Dadi : Kiski gaadi he ye Ajay aur tere pas kaise ?

Me : batata hu pehle andar to chalo .

Me andar aaya maa ko aawaj deke bulaya aur uske hath me wo paise rakhe .

Me : ye le maa meri pehli kamai .

Maa : ye kaise ? tu kaam pe kab lag gaya aur kaha lag gaya bataya tak nahi tune ? ab bolega kuchh

Maa ke chehre pe khushi bhi thi aur achambha bhi .



Me : aree bas abhi pehelewan chacha ke sath kam karne wala hu to unhone diye he muze pehele he . me unke liye gaaye ,bail wagera kharidne ka kaam kar raha hu abse kuchh din . thik he na ?

Maa : ha thik he aur teri padhai ka kya ? dekh tu agar firse fail ho gaya na to tere babu ji se tu he samazna me bich me na padne wali is baar .

Dadi : are ho jayega na pass wo ,tu ja shakkar leke aa aur muh mitha kar pehele. Aur tu bhi ye paise abhi kharach mat karna tere babu ji ko aane de pehle .

Me : ha thik he ,tum log khana lagao me tabtak aata hu petrol bhar ke gaadi me.

Tabhi maa shakkar leke aayi aur muze khila di aur kaha,

Maa: jaldi aana tere babu ji aate he honge sheher se aur dukan se mithai bhi leke aana Vidya aa rahi he unke sath me.

(Vidya mere chacha ki beti he muzse 3 saal badi he ,sheher 1 me reh ke banking ke exams ki taiyari kar rahi he)

Me : achha thik he .



Me bike leke petrol pump ki taraf nikla aur ate time mithai wale Chandumal halwai se aadha kilo kaaju katli ke liye kaha.



Halwai : ruko jara aaj ye kaaju katli to khatam ho gayi abhi 5-10 min me aa jayegi.



Me bhi thik he keh ke wahi baith gaya uske dukan me.

Baithe baithe 15 minute ,fir aadha ghanta ho gaya par uska nokar to mithai leke nahi aaya. Par babu ji ka phone jarur aaya.

Babu ji : kidhar ghum raha he loafer ? idhar hum khane pe baithe he.

Me : wo bas mithai le raha hu didi ke pasand ki bas abhi 2 minute me aaya ,

Mene aata hu abhi keh ke kaat phone diya ,par ye babu ji aaj jyada he gusse me he.

Me : are chacha pure gaon ko mithai na khilani muze,jaldi bolo mithai aa rahi he ya me dusre dukan jau ?

Halwai : beta mithai ghar me ready he par ye nokar kaha mar gaya pata nahi,tum ek kaam karo ye hamare ghar he jao aur mere bete se mithai le lena ,mera ghar usi side padta he jidhar tumhe jana he.

Me : thik he .

Aur me uske ghar ki taraf chal diya.

Uske ghar ke darwaje ke samne jake awaj lagai par bahar koi nahi aaya.

Fir baukhala ke me muda he tha to darwaja khula.

Darwaja kholne wali ek meri he hum-umar ladki thi jisne saadi pehni thi aur uska chehra kuchh jana pehchana sa laga.

Wo : Ajay tum yaha kaise ? kuchh kaam tha kya ?



Aur uski awaj sun ke meri batti jali ke ye meri he batchmate he jo 10th tak mere sath thi ,iska naam Nisha he ,isne board ke exam hote he bhag ke shadi ki thi aur naam mere dost ka aaya tha , abhi wo pehele jaisi moti nahi dikh rahi thi balke puri bhari hui kamsin hasina lag rahi thi aur usse dekh ke mere armaan sulagne lage par jaise taise apne pe maine kaabu kiya.



Me : Oh hi nisha ,wo me idhar wo mithai lene aaya tha .

Nisha : Achha tum andar baitho me abhi laati hu mithai .

Me : nahi tum yahi bahar lao muze bhi der ho rahi…

Par wo kaha manne wali thi usne aake mera hath pakda aur muze ghar me khinch ke le gayi . aur sofe pe bitha diya .

Nisha : ab bolo kya loge tum ,thanda ya garam ? thanda he laati hu garmi bohot he na.

Aur waise he wo khud se bolte-2 andar chali gayi aur ek glass me coke daal ke laayi.



Andar jate time uske pichhe meri najar padi to jana sahi me wo pura badal gayi thi wo ,kaha school me wo moti si thi aur kaha ab aise patli kamar jo jyada bhi patli nahi thi par dikh rahi thi uske dress me. Aur uske wo bade boobs jo meri taraf aate waqt aise hil rahe the jaise andar usne kuchh pehna he na ho. Jaise he wo mere paas aayi me sambhal ke baith gaya ,kyonki bina wajah ijjat ka bhajipala nahi karna tha muze yaha.

Me : thank you nisha ,par ab jaldi se muze aadha kilo kaju katli bandh ke do jaldi ghar jana he.

Nisha : bas ! abhi laai .

Aur wo kuchh minute me ek packet thaile me bhar ke laayi ,par mithai kuchh jyada he lagi muze.

Mene jab paise diye to wo mana karne lagi,par maine jabardasti de diye usko paise. Is sab me maine uske hath pakad liye the aur meri pant ka agla hissa uske kamar se chipak gaya tha . akhir usko paise deke me bye bol ke jane laga.

Nisha : are ruko to apna number to dete jao .muze kaam he kuchh..

Me : achha thik he save kar lo.

Fir use bye bolke me rocket ki bike bhaga ke ghar aaya.

Babu ji ghar ke bahar baithe the aur sath me Vidya didi bhi thi.

Ab didi waha thi to babu ji bhi kuchh nahi bole aur hum waise he andar chal diye.

Didi : Aur hero kidhar ghumta fir raha aajkal ? study bhi ekdam hawa me chal he teri .

Me : kahi nahi didi bas abhi bas kaam se bahar gaya tha..

Didi : malum he tere kam muze ,mere hostel me tere college ki friends rehti he to malum he muze sab tera kya chalta he ,he he he ( hum bahar he khade the aur dhire dhire baat kar rahe the to kisi ne hamari bate nahi suni)

Par idhar meri fat chuki thi didi ki bate sun ke ,yaha didi jorse haste hue andar chali gayi.



Khana khane hum log chadar daal ke baith gaye par mere halak ke niche ek niwala bhi nahi ja raha tha .

Jaise taise khana pura hua ,wo to bhala ho ke khane pe didi kuchh na boli .



Khane ke baad maa ne babu ji ko mere laye hue 30,000 rupye diye , fir babu ji ne muze awaj lagai fir didi ko.

Babu ji : vidya ,meri bag leke idhar aana to .

Didi se bag leke unhone muze kuchh nikalke diya .

Usme ek brouchure tha kisi tution class ka .

Me : ye kya babu ji ?

B : Shambhu ke kam ke liye tu sheher1 to jayega he na wahi pe ye classes he ,kal bail bajar se hoke aao to turant wahi jana . padhai ke mamle koi dhilai nahi chalegi warna sidha hal ko jot dunga samze .

Me : ji babu ji.

B : aur ye 20,000 bhi rakh le tution ki fees ke liye diye he . hafte akhri 2 din he class rahegi teri udhar. Is baar har subject me pass hona he samze ?

Me : ji samza .



Darasal babu ji ke strict nature ke karan meri hamesha se usne fatati aa rahi he ,waise to me kisi se nahi darta par inki bat alag he



Khana kha ke babu ji chale gaye pehelwan chacha ki taraf aur me apne room me aake let gaya. Par itne me humne chain kaha .

Didi : aur hero bhul gaya kya tu muze

Me : na na nai didi me to bas aaram kar raha tha .aap batao apki padhai kaisi chal rahi he udhar ?

D : oh to ab tu bate ghumana bhi sikh gaya . achha ye bata ye soniya se tera kya relation he ?

Me : k k kaun sonia didi ?

D : chachi ! jara idhar to aana . batau konsi soniya ? batau ?

Me : nahi didi sorry ,wo to me use sahi se janta bhi nahi hu, bas 1-2 baar bat ki he aur ghumne gaya tha trip pe uske sath ,kasam se mene kuchh nahi kiya ,plz kisi ko kuchh mat batana . (mene hath jodte hue kaha)



D : hehehe are me bas maje le rahi thi aur tu to rone lag gaya ,are kisi ko kuchh na bata rahi me bas.

Me: thanks didi ,thank u very much,

D : Ayy par dur rehna usse aur baki ladkiyo se bhi,already year drop laga he aur chacha bhi gusse me he ,samza , enjoy kar par limit me . padhai bhi jaruri he samze.

Me : thanks D.

D : chal me jati hu dadi ke room me sone tu bhi aaram kar le.



Didi chali gayi aur mene dam chhoda ,sahi me is buri wali fati thi. Soniya 2nd year me meri achhi dost thi,dikhne me bhi mast aur openly baat karti thi ,iske sath scene ban raha tha mera par agar college me kand na hua hota to me aaj yaha nahi hota,khair wo bate fir kabhi .



Kuchh der mobile chalata raha fir socha sheher1 me koi jaan pehchan ka dost ho sakta he mere college ka ,ju ki college mera sheher2 me he . fir ek dost ko call kiya ,

Me : uth gaya bsdk ?

Rajan : Oho is garib ki yaad kaise aa gayi aaj ?

Me : drame na kar lodu aur bata college kaisa chal raha he?

R : Laude ka college ,me idhar pappa ke sath apni dukan pe saree fold kar raha hu

Me: abe tu to full pass tha na fir ye kaise ?

R : wo to me aise he bola tha ,mere bhi 8 subjects me back lage he to pappa ne dukan pe lagaya he unke sath.

Me : maje he aise bhi bhabhiya taadne ko mil rahi he samne se

R : ha tu bhi aaja 6000 me kaam pe lagata hu ,wo chhod ab bata phone kyu kiya aaj ?

Me :kuchh nahi kal sheher1 aa raha hu tution me admission lene tu bhi aaja sath me tera bhi kar denge. kya bolta he ?

R :pappa nahi manenge bhai ,ab kahe ki engineering yahi dukan apna future he.

Me : drame na kar tu, hafte me 2 bar he jana he khali. Uncle se me bat kar lunga. Aur adress bhej dena me aaunga pick karne.

R : thik he msg kar deta hu ,chal ab phone rakh customer aaya he.

Fir call cut kar diya aur sochne laga ek akele hum he thodi he jinki jhand ho ri he Agar dost sath ho to ye bhi sahi .

Fir khas kuchh na hua , dosto milne jana tha par maa ne jane nahi diya isliye socha study he kar lu . fir 2 ghante padhne baitha ,dimag pe jung lag gaya tha jo dhire-2 saaf ho raha tha. akhir kal se tution join karne the to padh ke jana he tha.

Bas fir aise he sham ho gayi aur khana kha ke jaldi he so gaya .



Continued …

Wao aapki lekhni ascharyajanak roop se Khatarnak hai Bhai pahli Kosis me itna perfection ke sath likh rhe ho kya hi kahne maza type hi aa gya padh kr bhai superb update jabarjast

 

[Xabhi]

सबसे पहले तो आपको इस कहानी के लिए शुभकामना कहता हूं और आशा करता हूं कि आप की यह स्टोरी इस फोरम की सफलतम कहानियों में से एक बनें ।

कहानी का नायक अजय ठाकुर है और कहानी एक तरह से देखा जाए तो अजय के बायोग्राफी की तरह ही से आगे बढ़ेगी । मतलब उस के नजरिए से चलेगी ।

दसवीं में पचासी परसेंट मार्क पाकर और जेईई में सफलता हासिल करके भी वह पढ़ाई में कमजोर कैसे हो गया ? ऐसा क्या हो गया जो इंजीनियरिंग के थर्ड या फोर सेमेस्टर में ही पढ़ाई-लिखाई में फिसलने लगा ?
लड़का होशियार है इसमें कोई संदेह नहीं है । होशियार नहीं होता तो जेईई क्लियर नहीं कर पाता । इसका मतलब जो भी गड़बड़ी हुआ वो इंजीनियरिंग करते हुए हुआ था । शायद बाद में इस राज से पर्दा खुले !

फिलहाल तो गांव में ही पहलवान चाचा के यहां नौकरी पर लग गया है और तनख्वाह भी अच्छी खासी है । लेकिन उसके फादर का कहना सही है कि वो अपने एजूकेशन पर ध्यान केन्द्रित करे । उन्होंने उसे काम करने के लिए शायद इस लिए इजाजत दी होगी कि वो काम पार्ट टाइम जॉब है ।

यह कहानी गांव और शहर दोनों जगहों पर चलती रहेगी । लेकिन यह नहीं पता है कि वह गांव और शहर किस स्टेट के हैं और उनका नाम क्या है । शहर को भी १ और २ में जिक्र किया गया है । ये सही नहीं होगा । शहरों का नाम लिखा जाना चाहिए । वैसे तो हमें पता है यह काल्पनिक ही होगा पर फिर भी नाम अवश्य लिखा होना चाहिए ।

अभी तक आपने इसे बिल्कुल एक प्रोफेशनल राइटर्स की तरह लिखा है । संवाद और कामेडी का पुट बहुत ही बढ़िया है ।
कहानी का शीर्षक " प्रलय " है । अब देखना यह है कि शीर्षक कहानी के साथ न्याय कर पाती है या नहीं ।

बहुत ही बढ़िया शुरुआत हुई है स्टोरी की ।
दोनों अपडेट्स भी बेहतरीन थे ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग । एंड वेटिंग फॉर नेक्स्ट ।

 

[Thakur]

Wao aapki lekhni ascharyajanak roop se Khatarnak hai Bhai pahli Kosis me itna perfection ke sath likh rhe ho kya hi kahne maza type hi aa gya padh kr bhai superb update jabarjast

Thanks for appreciation
Hindi wali bohot si stories padh ke un jaisa likhne ki koshish kar raha hu, story readers ko pasand aayi yahi badi baat he, kahi suggestion ho ya correction ho to hamari help karna

 

[Love 1994]

Thanks bhai keep reading bhai

Ok bh thakur bhai

 

[mashish]

The king KEKIUS MAXIMUS SANJU ( V. R. ) Mahi Maurya Jaguaar .. SultanTipu40 mashish
bahot jabardast aur majedaar suruwat huyi hai story ki... waqt mile to aap sabhi ek baar padh ke jarur dekhiyega...

ham to phele se hi hai naina ji

 

[mashish]

Short character intro :



Characters (Gaon wale)

Ghar wale:

• Me (Ajay Harish Thakur, Age 20)
• Babu ji (Harish ,46)
• Maa (Alka,43)
• Dadi (Kanta, 65 no need to mention)
• Vidya didi (23, chacha ki beti 3 saal badi he muzse)
• Chacha -chachi : inki kuchh 6 saal pehle accident me maut ho chuki he to vidya didi hamare sath he rehti he.

Ghar : Hamara ye ek medium size ka old style ka ghar jo koi 30-40 saal purana hoga. Ghar ke bahar bada sa aangan he jiske bich me tulsi he. Fir ghar ka hall he jisme 2 bade diwan lagaye he aur baki aam furniture. Hall ke samne ki taraf galiyara sa he jisse kitchen me jate he .hall ke daye aur baye taraf 2-2 rooms he jinme se dayi taraf wala pehla dadi ka he fir babu ji ka. Bayi taraf wala pehla room saman ke liye he aur uske baju me mera wala. Bathroom ghar ke bahar he jisse attached toilet bhi he wahi purane style ka

Didi jyadatar girls hostel me he rehti he ,to babu ji usse milne hafte das din me jate rehte he.

• 1.Pehelwan chacha(Shambhu Nath patil,55 years)
• 2. patni : Sharada
• 3. beta Ashwin ,20 saal
• 4. beti Ashwini,20 (Twins he ye)
• Shikhar Rav Chaudhary,59 Gaon ke chaudhary he
• Beta : Sharad ,30(Dusre state me job karta he)
• Bahu : Revati,22
• Beti : Purnima(31,married)

1.Nisha : meri classmate ,halwai ki bahu

2. Rajan : mera engineering wala dost he ,sheher1 me he rehta he wahi inki kapde ki dukan he.


Update 2



Ghar pohoch ke maine bike ghar ke side me bane shade me laga di, itne me daadi bahar aayi aawaj sun ke .

Dadi : Kiski gaadi he ye Ajay aur tere pas kaise ?

Me : batata hu pehle andar to chalo .

Me andar aaya maa ko aawaj deke bulaya aur uske hath me wo paise rakhe .

Me : ye le maa meri pehli kamai .

Maa : ye kaise ? tu kaam pe kab lag gaya aur kaha lag gaya bataya tak nahi tune ? ab bolega kuchh

Maa ke chehre pe khushi bhi thi aur achambha bhi .



Me : aree bas abhi pehelewan chacha ke sath kam karne wala hu to unhone diye he muze pehele he . me unke liye gaaye ,bail wagera kharidne ka kaam kar raha hu abse kuchh din . thik he na ?

Maa : ha thik he aur teri padhai ka kya ? dekh tu agar firse fail ho gaya na to tere babu ji se tu he samazna me bich me na padne wali is baar .

Dadi : are ho jayega na pass wo ,tu ja shakkar leke aa aur muh mitha kar pehele. Aur tu bhi ye paise abhi kharach mat karna tere babu ji ko aane de pehle .

Me : ha thik he ,tum log khana lagao me tabtak aata hu petrol bhar ke gaadi me.

Tabhi maa shakkar leke aayi aur muze khila di aur kaha,

Maa: jaldi aana tere babu ji aate he honge sheher se aur dukan se mithai bhi leke aana Vidya aa rahi he unke sath me.

(Vidya mere chacha ki beti he muzse 3 saal badi he ,sheher 1 me reh ke banking ke exams ki taiyari kar rahi he)

Me : achha thik he .



Me bike leke petrol pump ki taraf nikla aur ate time mithai wale Chandumal halwai se aadha kilo kaaju katli ke liye kaha.



Halwai : ruko jara aaj ye kaaju katli to khatam ho gayi abhi 5-10 min me aa jayegi.



Me bhi thik he keh ke wahi baith gaya uske dukan me.

Baithe baithe 15 minute ,fir aadha ghanta ho gaya par uska nokar to mithai leke nahi aaya. Par babu ji ka phone jarur aaya.

Babu ji : kidhar ghum raha he loafer ? idhar hum khane pe baithe he.

Me : wo bas mithai le raha hu didi ke pasand ki bas abhi 2 minute me aaya ,

Mene aata hu abhi keh ke kaat phone diya ,par ye babu ji aaj jyada he gusse me he.

Me : are chacha pure gaon ko mithai na khilani muze,jaldi bolo mithai aa rahi he ya me dusre dukan jau ?

Halwai : beta mithai ghar me ready he par ye nokar kaha mar gaya pata nahi,tum ek kaam karo ye hamare ghar he jao aur mere bete se mithai le lena ,mera ghar usi side padta he jidhar tumhe jana he.

Me : thik he .

Aur me uske ghar ki taraf chal diya.

Uske ghar ke darwaje ke samne jake awaj lagai par bahar koi nahi aaya.

Fir baukhala ke me muda he tha to darwaja khula.

Darwaja kholne wali ek meri he hum-umar ladki thi jisne saadi pehni thi aur uska chehra kuchh jana pehchana sa laga.

Wo : Ajay tum yaha kaise ? kuchh kaam tha kya ?



Aur uski awaj sun ke meri batti jali ke ye meri he batchmate he jo 10th tak mere sath thi ,iska naam Nisha he ,isne board ke exam hote he bhag ke shadi ki thi aur naam mere dost ka aaya tha , abhi wo pehele jaisi moti nahi dikh rahi thi balke puri bhari hui kamsin hasina lag rahi thi aur usse dekh ke mere armaan sulagne lage par jaise taise apne pe maine kaabu kiya.



Me : Oh hi nisha ,wo me idhar wo mithai lene aaya tha .

Nisha : Achha tum andar baitho me abhi laati hu mithai .

Me : nahi tum yahi bahar lao muze bhi der ho rahi…

Par wo kaha manne wali thi usne aake mera hath pakda aur muze ghar me khinch ke le gayi . aur sofe pe bitha diya .

Nisha : ab bolo kya loge tum ,thanda ya garam ? thanda he laati hu garmi bohot he na.

Aur waise he wo khud se bolte-2 andar chali gayi aur ek glass me coke daal ke laayi.



Andar jate time uske pichhe meri najar padi to jana sahi me wo pura badal gayi thi wo ,kaha school me wo moti si thi aur kaha ab aise patli kamar jo jyada bhi patli nahi thi par dikh rahi thi uske dress me. Aur uske wo bade boobs jo meri taraf aate waqt aise hil rahe the jaise andar usne kuchh pehna he na ho. Jaise he wo mere paas aayi me sambhal ke baith gaya ,kyonki bina wajah ijjat ka bhajipala nahi karna tha muze yaha.

Me : thank you nisha ,par ab jaldi se muze aadha kilo kaju katli bandh ke do jaldi ghar jana he.

Nisha : bas ! abhi laai .

Aur wo kuchh minute me ek packet thaile me bhar ke laayi ,par mithai kuchh jyada he lagi muze.

Mene jab paise diye to wo mana karne lagi,par maine jabardasti de diye usko paise. Is sab me maine uske hath pakad liye the aur meri pant ka agla hissa uske kamar se chipak gaya tha . akhir usko paise deke me bye bol ke jane laga.

Nisha : are ruko to apna number to dete jao .muze kaam he kuchh..

Me : achha thik he save kar lo.

Fir use bye bolke me rocket ki bike bhaga ke ghar aaya.

Babu ji ghar ke bahar baithe the aur sath me Vidya didi bhi thi.

Ab didi waha thi to babu ji bhi kuchh nahi bole aur hum waise he andar chal diye.

Didi : Aur hero kidhar ghumta fir raha aajkal ? study bhi ekdam hawa me chal he teri .

Me : kahi nahi didi bas abhi bas kaam se bahar gaya tha..

Didi : malum he tere kam muze ,mere hostel me tere college ki friends rehti he to malum he muze sab tera kya chalta he ,he he he ( hum bahar he khade the aur dhire dhire baat kar rahe the to kisi ne hamari bate nahi suni)

Par idhar meri fat chuki thi didi ki bate sun ke ,yaha didi jorse haste hue andar chali gayi.



Khana khane hum log chadar daal ke baith gaye par mere halak ke niche ek niwala bhi nahi ja raha tha .

Jaise taise khana pura hua ,wo to bhala ho ke khane pe didi kuchh na boli .



Khane ke baad maa ne babu ji ko mere laye hue 30,000 rupye diye , fir babu ji ne muze awaj lagai fir didi ko.

Babu ji : vidya ,meri bag leke idhar aana to .

Didi se bag leke unhone muze kuchh nikalke diya .

Usme ek brouchure tha kisi tution class ka .

Me : ye kya babu ji ?

B : Shambhu ke kam ke liye tu sheher1 to jayega he na wahi pe ye classes he ,kal bail bajar se hoke aao to turant wahi jana . padhai ke mamle koi dhilai nahi chalegi warna sidha hal ko jot dunga samze .

Me : ji babu ji.

B : aur ye 20,000 bhi rakh le tution ki fees ke liye diye he . hafte akhri 2 din he class rahegi teri udhar. Is baar har subject me pass hona he samze ?

Me : ji samza .



Darasal babu ji ke strict nature ke karan meri hamesha se usne fatati aa rahi he ,waise to me kisi se nahi darta par inki bat alag he



Khana kha ke babu ji chale gaye pehelwan chacha ki taraf aur me apne room me aake let gaya. Par itne me humne chain kaha .

Didi : aur hero bhul gaya kya tu muze

Me : na na nai didi me to bas aaram kar raha tha .aap batao apki padhai kaisi chal rahi he udhar ?

D : oh to ab tu bate ghumana bhi sikh gaya . achha ye bata ye soniya se tera kya relation he ?

Me : k k kaun sonia didi ?

D : chachi ! jara idhar to aana . batau konsi soniya ? batau ?

Me : nahi didi sorry ,wo to me use sahi se janta bhi nahi hu, bas 1-2 baar bat ki he aur ghumne gaya tha trip pe uske sath ,kasam se mene kuchh nahi kiya ,plz kisi ko kuchh mat batana . (mene hath jodte hue kaha)



D : hehehe are me bas maje le rahi thi aur tu to rone lag gaya ,are kisi ko kuchh na bata rahi me bas.

Me: thanks didi ,thank u very much,

D : Ayy par dur rehna usse aur baki ladkiyo se bhi,already year drop laga he aur chacha bhi gusse me he ,samza , enjoy kar par limit me . padhai bhi jaruri he samze.

Me : thanks D.

D : chal me jati hu dadi ke room me sone tu bhi aaram kar le.



Didi chali gayi aur mene dam chhoda ,sahi me is buri wali fati thi. Soniya 2nd year me meri achhi dost thi,dikhne me bhi mast aur openly baat karti thi ,iske sath scene ban raha tha mera par agar college me kand na hua hota to me aaj yaha nahi hota,khair wo bate fir kabhi .



Kuchh der mobile chalata raha fir socha sheher1 me koi jaan pehchan ka dost ho sakta he mere college ka ,ju ki college mera sheher2 me he . fir ek dost ko call kiya ,

Me : uth gaya bsdk ?

Rajan : Oho is garib ki yaad kaise aa gayi aaj ?

Me : drame na kar lodu aur bata college kaisa chal raha he?

R : Laude ka college ,me idhar pappa ke sath apni dukan pe saree fold kar raha hu

Me: abe tu to full pass tha na fir ye kaise ?

R : wo to me aise he bola tha ,mere bhi 8 subjects me back lage he to pappa ne dukan pe lagaya he unke sath.

Me : maje he aise bhi bhabhiya taadne ko mil rahi he samne se

R : ha tu bhi aaja 6000 me kaam pe lagata hu ,wo chhod ab bata phone kyu kiya aaj ?

Me :kuchh nahi kal sheher1 aa raha hu tution me admission lene tu bhi aaja sath me tera bhi kar denge. kya bolta he ?

R :pappa nahi manenge bhai ,ab kahe ki engineering yahi dukan apna future he.

Me : drame na kar tu, hafte me 2 bar he jana he khali. Uncle se me bat kar lunga. Aur adress bhej dena me aaunga pick karne.

R : thik he msg kar deta hu ,chal ab phone rakh customer aaya he.

Fir call cut kar diya aur sochne laga ek akele hum he thodi he jinki jhand ho ri he Agar dost sath ho to ye bhi sahi .

Fir khas kuchh na hua , dosto milne jana tha par maa ne jane nahi diya isliye socha study he kar lu . fir 2 ghante padhne baitha ,dimag pe jung lag gaya tha jo dhire-2 saaf ho raha tha. akhir kal se tution join karne the to padh ke jana he tha.

Bas fir aise he sham ho gayi aur khana kha ke jaldi he so gaya .



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nice intro & good update