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ME Tumhare Hi Kale Kukurm Hu M Tum HuUpdate 23- Kaale Saaye
Jindagi agar badalni ho to ya to aapko aapki kharab aadate badalni hoti he aur mehnat karni hoti he ya fir kismat ke sahare pendulam ki tarah jhulate rehna padta he aur me pendolam nahi banunga ! Mene jo sapne dekhe he unhe me pura kar ke he rahunga aur iss ke bich me koi nahi aa sakta , koi bhi nahi ! Aur agar koi aayega to me uska naam, sharir , kaam sab kuchh mita dunga !
Mera laksh mere saamne he aur me use paa kar he rahunga !
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Har taraf kohra aur uss kohre ke bich me mai khada hua tha, me yaha kyu khada hu pata nahi, jana kaha he pata nahi . Sir utha ke dekha to aakash me kaale ghane baadal jo chakra bana rahe the mano koi tufan aaya he unme ! Mene najar ghuma ke dekha to dur se he kaafi saare kaale log jo ajib se dikh rahe the meri taraf daud rahe the, ghode pe sawar hue meri or aa rahe the. Unke paas talware, nukile hathiyar the, lekin gajab ki baat ye ke muze dar nahi laga aur me unki or daudne laga. Me un tak pohocha aur jo saamne aaya use dekh ke pehli baar shock hua, uska kala chehra bhi kisi purane helmet se dhaka hua tha aur wo bhi muze dekh ke shocked tha, mene uski talwar li aur uske aar paar ki, jaise he talwar uski chhati ke paar hui wo to ludak gaya par mere chhati me jo dard ki leher uthi aur me chillane laga.
Dusre hatyare bhi wahi ruk gaye aur apni chhati pakad ke chikhne lage , fir me jab sambhala aur ek ke upar kuda aur uski bayi aankh me angutha daal diya, aur hum dono ki chikh ek hath nikli ! Wo aankh pakad ke yaha waha bhagne laga aur meri bhi baayi aankh se khun nikalna shuru ho gaya ! Mere aas pas kya chal raha he muze kuchh bhi samaz me nahi aa raha, aur itne me ghudsawar ne mere pith me bhala daag diya , me wahi ghutno pe baith gaya, meri aankhe mitane lagi aur mene dekha uss ghudsawar ke pith se bhi khun nikal raha he aur me samaz gaya ke ye kya ho raha he !
Me khud se he lad raha hu ! Ye sab me he hu aur dusra koi nahi ! Mene socha ye sab sapna he aur aankhe band kar ke jaagne ki koshish ki, par meri kaano me unki awaj sunai de rahi thi , mene suna ek ghoda mere paas ruka aur muze ghode pe bith diya . Wo kaala ghoda muze leke daudne laga, kaha wahi jaane, pichhe dekha to bas ghana andhera aur baki sab gayab !
Jab ghoda ruka to dekha wo ek suansan waadi he jaha ek ped bhi nahi he, me utra nahi to ghode ne muze giraya aur waadi me bhag gaya, me aage chalne laga ye soch ke agar iss sapne ka end maut se ho to bhi me jaag jaunga he. Aage chal ke mene dekha ek parvat ke upar choti mashale jal rahi he, mene parvat chadhna shuru kiya . Parvat ki choti par pohoncha to dekha pathhar ke sinhasan par koi budha sa aadmi baitha hua tha, uska pura shareer kaala he par ajib sab hi, chehre pe thodi si jhuriyya , safed daadhi badhi hui, hath me lambi talwar, uske side me wahi kaala tendua !
Me : Tum kaun ho aur me yaha kyu hu ?
Wo utha aur chalte hue mere saamne aaya ,
Wo : Me tumhare he kaale kukarm hu, me tum hu !
Muze hairani hui aur me aas paas dekhne laga to ek aur sinhasan uske bagal me dikha jo safed sangamarmar ka he. Me samaz gaya waha kaun ho sakta he par wo khali tha.
Wo : wo to kabhi aaya he nahi, tumne kabhi kuchh achha kiya he nahi !
Me chauk ke uski taraf dekhne laga, uska chehra samanya tha par us bhaav-hin thobde ke pichhe ki kutil muskan bhi me dekh raha tha .
Me : muze yaha se bahar jana he , muze mere ghar jana he .
Wo : mere sath sauda karo me tumhe ghar ka rasta bataunga !
Usne hath aage badhaya, me uska hath thaamne he wala tha ke mene dekha uske hath kaampne lage he aur uska chehra kuchh he kshan ke liye badal ke fir se pehle jaisa ho raha he !
Me : narak me rehne wala dusro ko raasta nahi dikha sakta !
Me mud gaya aur aage chalne laga, wo mere pichhe chikhne laga chillane laga par mene mud ke nahi dekha aur chalta he raha !
Subah pakshio ke chihchihane se meri nind khuli, aisa laga me jameen pe soya hu par uth ke dekha to me jungle me ghaas pe pada hua tha , akela he aur aaspaas mashale lagi hui thi jo bujh chuki thi !
Muze kya ho raha kuchh bhi samaz me nahi aaya to me sidha apne kheto pe gaya, waha ek budhau kaka bahar aalav ke samne bidi fuk rahe the , andar room me sab majdur aurate soyi thi to mene apne kapde nikale aur bahar aaya. Naha dho ke me babu ji ke naye liye kheto pe gaya, waha babu ji surya ko ardh de rahe the.
Me : babu ji mene Bhanu pehelwan ko apne kaam pe rakha he meri madat ke liye, aur aaj me sheher1 ja raha hu class kar ke dost ke ghar rukunga aur kal aaunga.
Babu ji : koi achha sa wakil rakh lena, ye kaale coat wale bade kaam ke log hote he.
Me : Ji, chalta hu.
Babu ji : Paise tere account me daal diye he, baki kya karna he kaise karna tu jaane.
Me sir hila ke Ashwini ke ghar ki or chal diya kyonki ab pehelwan chacha ke yaha kaam karna sambhav nahi he .
Me : Chachi, o chachi
Mere awaj lagane se chachi to nahi aayi par ek chhoti bachhi kitchen se bahar aayi,
Bacchi : aap kon he ? or kya chaiye aapko ?
Me : pehle aap batao ke aap kaun he aur Ashu kidhar he ?
Bacchi : Wo didi nashta bana rai he aur dadu mandir gaye he .
Me : Achha aisa he
badi pyari bacchi he ye, mene use god me uthaya aur usse khelte hue kitchen me gaya, kitchen me dekha to Ashu kya lag rahi thi, wo shayad abhi abhi naha ke aayi hogi jo ki uske baal gile the aur usne sirf maroon colour ki kurti pehni hui thi, niche na salwar na leggings ! Uski safed jaanghe dekh ke mere armano me jo khalbali machi ke kya kahu !
Me : ek cup mere liye bhi banana.
Wo muze dekh ke chauk gayi aur aur thoda garam pani uske hath pe gira.
Ashwini : ouch, Ajay ye kya tha ? aise koi chaukata he kya !
Mene bacchi ko god se utara aur jake uska hath dekha, thoda sa he garam pani laga tha par wo natak kar rahi thi.
Me : arre re ye ungli to jal gayi teri , ruk baraf lagata hu.
Mene fridge se ice cube liya aur uski ungliyo pe funk maar ke uspe lagaya,
Me : Abhi aaram he ?
Ashu : (dard wali tone me) Nai.
Me : achha !
Mene barf side me rakha aur uski ungli ko apne muh pe liya aur lick karne laga, bich me bahar nikal ke uski gili ungli pe fukarta to wo sihar uthti …
Bacchi : didi bhaiya kya kar rahe he ?
Oh shit isko to bhul he gaya tha me !
Mene use uthaya aur hall me le gaya,
Me : wo aapki didi ki finger ko haa hua tha na to use thik kar raha tha , aap batao aapne abtak apna naam nahi bataya hume ?
Wo : To aapne bhi to nahi bataya na
Me : Hmm ye bhi he, mera naam Ajay Thakur he aur aapka naam ?
Wo : Mera naam Kaveri he
Me : aur aap konsi school me jaati ho ?
Wo : me school nahi jaati, me to abhi chhoti hu na…
Me : achha achha to aap ke mummy papa kaun he ?
Me bacchi ke sath bahar hall me baith ke baate karne laga raha, tabtak Ashu ne aake chai biscuit table pe rakh di aur apne room me jake salwar pehen ke aayi .
Me : kya jarurat thi iski , tum aise he khubsurat dikhti ho
Ashu : Bacchi he sath me ,kuchh to khayal karo ..
Me : Kiski bacchi he ye ?
Ashu : Nisha ke cousin ki, jo doctor he na jiske paas Nisha ko leke gaye the tum uski, kal wo aayi thi waha to me aaj raat ke liye hamare yaha le aayi .
Me : Badi cute he ye, muze bhi aisi he bacchi chahiye, dogi na ?
Ashu meri baat sun ke sharmai, aur use chai biscuit khilane lagi to mene bhi apne plan use bataye,
Me : me ab se apna kaam start kar raha hu, ab pehelwan chacha ke sath kaam nahi kar sakta
Ashu : sharam karo kuchh, ab bhi mere papa ko chacha kehte ho !
Me : Sasur ji kaisa rahega fir
Pehelwan chacha : sunne me achha lagega par shadi ke baad abhi nahi !
Wo dono mandir se wapas aaye aur unhone hamari baate suni hogi ! Khair ab kya chhupana ,
Me : paay laagu chacha, aaj mandir kaise jana hua ? aap to mandir khali kushti wale time he jaate the na ?
Pehelwan chacha : Tumhari chachi jabardasti le gayi aaj, kaha ke vrat he uska, tum batao kya karne ka irada he ?
Me : bas sheher1 ja raha hu, business sikhna he to experience lena chahta hu aur ek gaadi bhi.
P.C. : Accha he, koi madat chahiye to batana, lekin tumhara ye jo naya rishta he uski anumati he par ek limit me, tum mere jigri dost ke bete ho jiske liye maine ye gaon tak jalaya tha , apne he jaat walo se bair liya par meri beti mere liye sabse upar he, samze ?
Me : Ji , aap nishchint rahe…
Sharda chachi : kya kisi ne humse puchha ke kya ho raha he ye sab ?
Me : kuchh nahi chachi wo…
Sharda chachi : chachi to bol mat tu, nahi to taange tod dungi, aur aap bhi aise kaise permission di inhe ? uttar do !
PC : Sharda Ajay ko humari beti ne he chuna aur muze usme koi kharabi nahi dikhti, Ajay tum jao abhi sheher1 aur Ashwin se milo, wo ek dealer ke yaha kaam karta he, gaadi lene me help karega.
Me unko bye keh ke nikla sheher1 ki or, abhi jo bhi ho raha tha bohot jyada teji se ho raha tha, jaise mera kisi pe control he na ho, jaise me bahaav ke sath behta he ja raha hu ! Par maine man bana liya he ke ab jo bhi hoga meri marji se he hoga !
Sheher1 aake maine pehle Rajan ko fir Ashwin ko call kiya aur Rajan ke paas gaya. Itne me mobile me message aa gaya tha paise transfer hone ka, babu ji ne 2 crore rupaye daal diye the.
Me : aur bhai ghana busy maanush ho gaya tu to, na dikhta he aur na he koi phone, kyu saale ?
Rajan : bhai kaand ho gaya tha chhota sa to usi ko nipta raha tha, tu bata bhai aaj mood me lag raha he bohot.
Me : car leni he muze aur ek flat bhi chahiye yaha pe, baki baat raaste me karte
Humne raaste me thodi idhar udhar ki baate ki fir mene usse college walo ka haal chaal puchha. Jabse me Lankesh se bhida tha mera bharosa sab se udd chuka tha par bina in sab ke kuchh bhi hath aane nahi wala. Rajan ko Lankesh ka kuchh bhi pata nahi tha to mene bhi jyada khudai nahi ki. Fir Ashwin se mil ke MS Ciaz Alpha book ki jo starting ke liye muze sahi lagi. Fir class jaake sir se mila aur fir jo flats dekhne ka silsila shuru hua wo raat ko he ruka.
End me mene socha ek room rent pe bhi lunga kisi dusre ke naam pe, jo ki dushman jo bhi he wo fir aayega aur me abhi ke liye kisi ki bhi najaro me aana afford nahi kar sakta.
Raat ke 2 baje the aur me Rajan ke ghar ki chhat pe bistar pe leta hua tha, nind dur dur thi. Kuchh soch ke maine Lankesh ko phone kiya …
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