Incest Pratisodh: The Algorithm ( incest + adultery + revenge )

[Kalyansurya 1]

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[Kalyansurya 1]

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[Kalyansurya 1]

Update 1​

khaamoshi mein, bas patton ki sarsarahat aur dur kahin se aate bhediye ki awaaz thi. Andhera itna gehra tha ki chand ki roshni bhi zameen tak pahunchne se darti thi. Usi ghane andhere aur sardi mein, ek jawan ladka zameen par bejaan pada tha, khoon mein latpat. Saansein dheemi aur unchi chal rahi thi, jaise zindagi aur maut ke beech ek aakhri jung lad raha ho. Uske chehre par purane zakhm the, jo shayad saalon se bane hue the, aur ab naye zakhm un purane dardon par haavi ho chuke the

Ek tez hawa ka jhonka aaya, aur uske bagal mein padi cheez par se patte hat gaye. Woh ek ajeeb sa, chamakta hua mobile phone tha, jiske design mein kuch futurism tha jo us jungle ke mahol mein bilkul bemel lag raha tha.
Dheere-dheere us ladke ki aankhon mein halki si jhalak aayi. Usne badi mushkil se apni aankheen kholi. Pehle toh sab dhundhla tha, phir dheere-dheere uski nazar apne aas-pass ke jungle par padi. Dard ki ek tez leher uske badan mein daud gayi, usne karaha. Par us dard ke beech bhi, uski nazar us chamakte hue mobile par padi.
Ek pal ke liye usne Aankheen band ki, dard se tadapta hua, par agle hi pal usne apna zakhmi haath badhaya aur bina soche bina dekhe us phone ko utha kar apni tooti hui jeb mein daal liya. Jaise yeh uske liye sirf ek phone nahi, uski aakhri umeed thi, ya shayad ek purani aadat. Uske zehan mein kuch bhi saaf nahi tha, bas ek anjaani si bechaini aur badle ki aag ka halka sa ehsaas
Abhi woh puri tarah hosh mein aaya bhi nahi tha ki dur se kuch roshni dikhi. Ek tezi se aati hui gaadi ki headlamps jungle ke pedon ko roshan karti hui uski taraf badh rahi thi. Us ladke ne aankheen band kar li, shayad maut ko accept karne ke liye, ya shayad itni himmat nahi thi ki woh phir se kisi ko dekh sake

Gadi theek uske paas aakar ruki. Darwaza khula, aur do lambe, chust aadmi bahar nikle. Unke chehre andhere mein saaf nahi dikh rahe the, par unki chal mein ek tez raftar aur irada tha. Ek ne dusre se dheemi awaaz mein kuch kaha

Admi 1 : yeh Hain Kya

Bina koi sawaal kiye, bina ladke se baat kiye, unhone use uthaya. Ladke ka badan dard se toot raha tha, par usmein itni taakat nahi thi ki woh unka virodh kar sake. Uska bejaan sa shareer unhone pichli seat par fenk diya, jaise woh koi bejaan samaan ho. Gaadi phir se chal padi, jungle ke andhere ko cheerte hue.
Woh sab anjaan log, us bejaan ladke ko liye hue, us jungle se bahar nikal gaye. Us ladke ko nahi pata tha ki kahan jaa rahe the, aur uski zindagi ab kaun sa naya mod lene wali thi. Uska purana shehar uske purane rishte sab peeche choot chuke the. Ab uski kismat use kisi aur shehar, kisi aur zindagi ki taraf le ja rahi thi. Us bejaan jeb mein pada woh ajeeb mobile phone, un sab badlavon ka gawah tha, aur shayad unka naya sarthi bhi

Gadi jungle ke kacche raaste se nikal kar ab tez-raftaar highway par daud rahi thi. Ladka, jiska naam Rahul tha abhi bi behosh tha, par uski saanson ki raftaar normal ho chuki thi. Uske zakhmon se khoon behna ruk gaya tha.
Gaadi mein baithe woh do aadmi, jo pehle chup the, ab dheemi awaaz mein baat kar rahe the. Unki Hindi mein ek alag hi lehza tha, jo batata tha ki woh is ilaake ke nahi hain

Admi 1 (Driver) : "Boss ne kaha tha, sirf zinda chahiye. Lagta hai kaam ho gaya."
Aadmi 2 : "Zinda toh hai, par bahut kharab haalat mein. Isko sambhalna padega. Jaldi chalo, hosh mein aaya toh dikkat hogi."

Kuch ghanton ki lambi drive ke baad, subah hone se pehle, gaadi ek bade shehar mein daakhil hui. Yeh shehar Rahul ke purane shehar se bilkul alag tha—zyada modern, zyada behensaab (organised), aur zyada khamosh. Gaadi shehar ke posh ilaake mein ek badi, surakshit (secure) building ke neeche ruki. Yeh building kisi corporate office se zyada, ek high-tech research facility lag rahi thi.
Dono admi Rahul ko bahar nikaalte hain aur ek private lift se use building ke Top Floor par le jaate hain.


Jab Rahul ko hosh aaya, toh usne khud ko ek bade aur behtareen kamre mein paaya. Woh ek comfortable bed par leta tha, uske saare zakhm saaf ho chuke the aur un par high-tech dressings lagi hui thi. Uska sar halka ho raha tha, aur dard kam tha. Kamra kisi mehenge hotel se kam nahi tha, par yahan koi khidki nahi thi, bas bade monitors aur kuch ajeeb-o-ghareeb gadgets pade the.
Jaise hi usne uthne ki koshish ki, uske saamne ek admi aaya. Yeh aadmi lagbhag 50 saal ka tha, safed daadhi, aur aankhon mein ek tez chamak thi. Usne ek safed suit pehna hua tha, jaise woh koi bada doctor ya scientist ho.
Admi (Muskurate hue) : "Aaram se Rahul Tum abhi bahut kamzor ho. Tumhe bachaya gaya hai."

Rahul ne aankheen sikod kar uss aadmi ko ghoora. Uske dimag mein bas ek hi sawaal tha, jo uske hothon tak nahi aa pa raha tha.
Veer (Dheemi, halki awaaz mein) : "Ap... kaun hain? Aur main... kahan hoon?


Admi ( Apni kursii Veer ke paas khinchte hue ) : "Mera naam Dr. Rohan hai. Aur tum ek aisi jagah ho jahan tumhari family ka koi bhi aadmi nahi pahunch sakta."

Rahul ka chehra gusse se tann gaya. "Meri Family? Unhone mujhe marne ke liye chhod diya tha!"

Dr. Rohan (Shaanti se): "Hum jaante hain Rahul Tumhe marwane ki saazish tumhari family ke biggest rival ne nahi, balke tumhare apnon ne hi ki thi. Aur tumhari kismat mein abhi marna nahi likha tha Aur the Bachane wale aur koi Nahin balke Dr. Mehta Hain

Rahul ne halka sa sir hilaya usko jatka laga ke uska family Doctor usko Kyun Bachana Chahta Hain yeh baat uski Samaj main Nahin AA Rahi Thi

Dr. Rohan (Haste hue) : Tumhe marne ki plan banana woh toh bas ek chota sa shuruwat hai Tumhe bachaane waale hum nahi... tumhari kismat thi. Hum us kismat ko padh rahe the Jab tumhari family ne tumhe maarne ka plan banaya, usi waqt Dr Mehta ne mujhe phone Karke sab Kuch Bata diya phir Maine Apne 2 sabse bharose mand aadmi tumhare Piche Laga diya jab Tumhe marne ka plan start hua tab us waqt mere admi ne Tumhe bacha Liya aur Tumhe Yaha le aye
Ab tumhare pass do raste hain Ek, ki tum yahan raho aur apni family se badla lene ke liye taiyaar ho jao, par is baar... Ya doosra, tum yahan se jaa sakte ho, par shayad phir zinda nahi bachoge.

Rahul ki aankhon mein ab dard nahi, balki uski Ankhoo mein chamak thi. Usne samajh liya tha ki woh sirf nahi bacha, balke use ek auzaar banaaya gaya hai. Aur us auzaar ka pehla target... wahi family hogi, jisne use dhokha diya tha.
Rahul (Bina koi sawaal kiye, seedhe aankhon mein dekhte hue ): "Mera badla. Kaise shuru
karein... Dr. Rohan?"

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Update 1​

khaamoshi mein, bas patton ki sarsarahat aur dur kahin se aate bhediye ki awaaz thi. Andhera itna gehra tha ki chand ki roshni bhi zameen tak pahunchne se darti thi. Usi ghane andhere aur sardi mein, ek jawan ladka zameen par bejaan pada tha, khoon mein latpat. Saansein dheemi aur unchi chal rahi thi, jaise zindagi aur maut ke beech ek aakhri jung lad raha ho. Uske chehre par purane zakhm the, jo shayad saalon se bane hue the, aur ab naye zakhm un purane dardon par haavi ho chuke the

Ek tez hawa ka jhonka aaya, aur uske bagal mein padi cheez par se patte hat gaye. Woh ek ajeeb sa, chamakta hua mobile phone tha, jiske design mein kuch futurism tha jo us jungle ke mahol mein bilkul bemel lag raha tha.
Dheere-dheere us ladke ki aankhon mein halki si jhalak aayi. Usne badi mushkil se apni aankheen kholi. Pehle toh sab dhundhla tha, phir dheere-dheere uski nazar apne aas-pass ke jungle par padi. Dard ki ek tez leher uske badan mein daud gayi, usne karaha. Par us dard ke beech bhi, uski nazar us chamakte hue mobile par padi.
Ek pal ke liye usne Aankheen band ki, dard se tadapta hua, par agle hi pal usne apna zakhmi haath badhaya aur bina soche bina dekhe us phone ko utha kar apni tooti hui jeb mein daal liya. Jaise yeh uske liye sirf ek phone nahi, uski aakhri umeed thi, ya shayad ek purani aadat. Uske zehan mein kuch bhi saaf nahi tha, bas ek anjaani si bechaini aur badle ki aag ka halka sa ehsaas
Abhi woh puri tarah hosh mein aaya bhi nahi tha ki dur se kuch roshni dikhi. Ek tezi se aati hui gaadi ki headlamps jungle ke pedon ko roshan karti hui uski taraf badh rahi thi. Us ladke ne aankheen band kar li, shayad maut ko accept karne ke liye, ya shayad itni himmat nahi thi ki woh phir se kisi ko dekh sake

Gadi theek uske paas aakar ruki. Darwaza khula, aur do lambe, chust aadmi bahar nikle. Unke chehre andhere mein saaf nahi dikh rahe the, par unki chal mein ek tez raftar aur irada tha. Ek ne dusre se dheemi awaaz mein kuch kaha

Admi 1 : yeh Hain Kya

Bina koi sawaal kiye, bina ladke se baat kiye, unhone use uthaya. Ladke ka badan dard se toot raha tha, par usmein itni taakat nahi thi ki woh unka virodh kar sake. Uska bejaan sa shareer unhone pichli seat par fenk diya, jaise woh koi bejaan samaan ho. Gaadi phir se chal padi, jungle ke andhere ko cheerte hue.
Woh sab anjaan log, us bejaan ladke ko liye hue, us jungle se bahar nikal gaye. Us ladke ko nahi pata tha ki kahan jaa rahe the, aur uski zindagi ab kaun sa naya mod lene wali thi. Uska purana shehar uske purane rishte sab peeche choot chuke the. Ab uski kismat use kisi aur shehar, kisi aur zindagi ki taraf le ja rahi thi. Us bejaan jeb mein pada woh ajeeb mobile phone, un sab badlavon ka gawah tha, aur shayad unka naya sarthi bhi

Gadi jungle ke kacche raaste se nikal kar ab tez-raftaar highway par daud rahi thi. Ladka, jiska naam Rahul tha abhi bi behosh tha, par uski saanson ki raftaar normal ho chuki thi. Uske zakhmon se khoon behna ruk gaya tha.
Gaadi mein baithe woh do aadmi, jo pehle chup the, ab dheemi awaaz mein baat kar rahe the. Unki Hindi mein ek alag hi lehza tha, jo batata tha ki woh is ilaake ke nahi hain

Admi 1 (Driver) : "Boss ne kaha tha, sirf zinda chahiye. Lagta hai kaam ho gaya."
Aadmi 2 : "Zinda toh hai, par bahut kharab haalat mein. Isko sambhalna padega. Jaldi chalo, hosh mein aaya toh dikkat hogi."

Kuch ghanton ki lambi drive ke baad, subah hone se pehle, gaadi ek bade shehar mein daakhil hui. Yeh shehar Rahul ke purane shehar se bilkul alag tha—zyada modern, zyada behensaab (organised), aur zyada khamosh. Gaadi shehar ke posh ilaake mein ek badi, surakshit (secure) building ke neeche ruki. Yeh building kisi corporate office se zyada, ek high-tech research facility lag rahi thi.
Dono admi Rahul ko bahar nikaalte hain aur ek private lift se use building ke Top Floor par le jaate hain.


Jab Rahul ko hosh aaya, toh usne khud ko ek bade aur behtareen kamre mein paaya. Woh ek comfortable bed par leta tha, uske saare zakhm saaf ho chuke the aur un par high-tech dressings lagi hui thi. Uska sar halka ho raha tha, aur dard kam tha. Kamra kisi mehenge hotel se kam nahi tha, par yahan koi khidki nahi thi, bas bade monitors aur kuch ajeeb-o-ghareeb gadgets pade the.
Jaise hi usne uthne ki koshish ki, uske saamne ek admi aaya. Yeh aadmi lagbhag 50 saal ka tha, safed daadhi, aur aankhon mein ek tez chamak thi. Usne ek safed suit pehna hua tha, jaise woh koi bada doctor ya scientist ho.
Admi (Muskurate hue) : "Aaram se Rahul Tum abhi bahut kamzor ho. Tumhe bachaya gaya hai."

Rahul ne aankheen sikod kar uss aadmi ko ghoora. Uske dimag mein bas ek hi sawaal tha, jo uske hothon tak nahi aa pa raha tha.
Veer (Dheemi, halki awaaz mein) : "Ap... kaun hain? Aur main... kahan hoon?


Admi ( Apni kursii Veer ke paas khinchte hue ) : "Mera naam Dr. Rohan hai. Aur tum ek aisi jagah ho jahan tumhari family ka koi bhi aadmi nahi pahunch sakta."

Rahul ka chehra gusse se tann gaya. "Meri Family? Unhone mujhe marne ke liye chhod diya tha!"

Dr. Rohan (Shaanti se): "Hum jaante hain Rahul Tumhe marwane ki saazish tumhari family ke biggest rival ne nahi, balke tumhare apnon ne hi ki thi. Aur tumhari kismat mein abhi marna nahi likha tha Aur the Bachane wale aur koi Nahin balke Dr. Mehta Hain

Rahul ne halka sa sir hilaya usko jatka laga ke uska family Doctor usko Kyun Bachana Chahta Hain yeh baat uski Samaj main Nahin AA Rahi Thi

Dr. Rohan (Haste hue) : Tumhe marne ki plan banana woh toh bas ek chota sa shuruwat hai Tumhe bachaane waale hum nahi... tumhari kismat thi. Hum us kismat ko padh rahe the Jab tumhari family ne tumhe maarne ka plan banaya, usi waqt Dr Mehta ne mujhe phone Karke sab Kuch Bata diya phir Maine Apne 2 sabse bharose mand aadmi tumhare Piche Laga diya jab Tumhe marne ka plan start hua tab us waqt mere admi ne Tumhe bacha Liya aur Tumhe Yaha le aye
Ab tumhare pass do raste hain Ek, ki tum yahan raho aur apni family se badla lene ke liye taiyaar ho jao, par is baar... Ya doosra, tum yahan se jaa sakte ho, par shayad phir zinda nahi bachoge.

Rahul ki aankhon mein ab dard nahi, balki uski Ankhoo mein chamak thi. Usne samajh liya tha ki woh sirf nahi bacha, balke use ek auzaar banaaya gaya hai. Aur us auzaar ka pehla target... wahi family hogi, jisne use dhokha diya tha.
Rahul (Bina koi sawaal kiye, seedhe aankhon mein dekhte hue ): "Mera badla. Kaise shuru
karein... Dr. Rohan?"

~~~~~to be continue ~~~~

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Update 1​

khaamoshi mein, bas patton ki sarsarahat aur dur kahin se aate bhediye ki awaaz thi. Andhera itna gehra tha ki chand ki roshni bhi zameen tak pahunchne se darti thi. Usi ghane andhere aur sardi mein, ek jawan ladka zameen par bejaan pada tha, khoon mein latpat. Saansein dheemi aur unchi chal rahi thi, jaise zindagi aur maut ke beech ek aakhri jung lad raha ho. Uske chehre par purane zakhm the, jo shayad saalon se bane hue the, aur ab naye zakhm un purane dardon par haavi ho chuke the

Ek tez hawa ka jhonka aaya, aur uske bagal mein padi cheez par se patte hat gaye. Woh ek ajeeb sa, chamakta hua mobile phone tha, jiske design mein kuch futurism tha jo us jungle ke mahol mein bilkul bemel lag raha tha.
Dheere-dheere us ladke ki aankhon mein halki si jhalak aayi. Usne badi mushkil se apni aankheen kholi. Pehle toh sab dhundhla tha, phir dheere-dheere uski nazar apne aas-pass ke jungle par padi. Dard ki ek tez leher uske badan mein daud gayi, usne karaha. Par us dard ke beech bhi, uski nazar us chamakte hue mobile par padi.
Ek pal ke liye usne Aankheen band ki, dard se tadapta hua, par agle hi pal usne apna zakhmi haath badhaya aur bina soche bina dekhe us phone ko utha kar apni tooti hui jeb mein daal liya. Jaise yeh uske liye sirf ek phone nahi, uski aakhri umeed thi, ya shayad ek purani aadat. Uske zehan mein kuch bhi saaf nahi tha, bas ek anjaani si bechaini aur badle ki aag ka halka sa ehsaas
Abhi woh puri tarah hosh mein aaya bhi nahi tha ki dur se kuch roshni dikhi. Ek tezi se aati hui gaadi ki headlamps jungle ke pedon ko roshan karti hui uski taraf badh rahi thi. Us ladke ne aankheen band kar li, shayad maut ko accept karne ke liye, ya shayad itni himmat nahi thi ki woh phir se kisi ko dekh sake

Gadi theek uske paas aakar ruki. Darwaza khula, aur do lambe, chust aadmi bahar nikle. Unke chehre andhere mein saaf nahi dikh rahe the, par unki chal mein ek tez raftar aur irada tha. Ek ne dusre se dheemi awaaz mein kuch kaha

Admi 1 : yeh Hain Kya

Bina koi sawaal kiye, bina ladke se baat kiye, unhone use uthaya. Ladke ka badan dard se toot raha tha, par usmein itni taakat nahi thi ki woh unka virodh kar sake. Uska bejaan sa shareer unhone pichli seat par fenk diya, jaise woh koi bejaan samaan ho. Gaadi phir se chal padi, jungle ke andhere ko cheerte hue.
Woh sab anjaan log, us bejaan ladke ko liye hue, us jungle se bahar nikal gaye. Us ladke ko nahi pata tha ki kahan jaa rahe the, aur uski zindagi ab kaun sa naya mod lene wali thi. Uska purana shehar uske purane rishte sab peeche choot chuke the. Ab uski kismat use kisi aur shehar, kisi aur zindagi ki taraf le ja rahi thi. Us bejaan jeb mein pada woh ajeeb mobile phone, un sab badlavon ka gawah tha, aur shayad unka naya sarthi bhi

Gadi jungle ke kacche raaste se nikal kar ab tez-raftaar highway par daud rahi thi. Ladka, jiska naam Rahul tha abhi bi behosh tha, par uski saanson ki raftaar normal ho chuki thi. Uske zakhmon se khoon behna ruk gaya tha.
Gaadi mein baithe woh do aadmi, jo pehle chup the, ab dheemi awaaz mein baat kar rahe the. Unki Hindi mein ek alag hi lehza tha, jo batata tha ki woh is ilaake ke nahi hain

Admi 1 (Driver) : "Boss ne kaha tha, sirf zinda chahiye. Lagta hai kaam ho gaya."
Aadmi 2 : "Zinda toh hai, par bahut kharab haalat mein. Isko sambhalna padega. Jaldi chalo, hosh mein aaya toh dikkat hogi."

Kuch ghanton ki lambi drive ke baad, subah hone se pehle, gaadi ek bade shehar mein daakhil hui. Yeh shehar Rahul ke purane shehar se bilkul alag tha—zyada modern, zyada behensaab (organised), aur zyada khamosh. Gaadi shehar ke posh ilaake mein ek badi, surakshit (secure) building ke neeche ruki. Yeh building kisi corporate office se zyada, ek high-tech research facility lag rahi thi.
Dono admi Rahul ko bahar nikaalte hain aur ek private lift se use building ke Top Floor par le jaate hain.


Jab Rahul ko hosh aaya, toh usne khud ko ek bade aur behtareen kamre mein paaya. Woh ek comfortable bed par leta tha, uske saare zakhm saaf ho chuke the aur un par high-tech dressings lagi hui thi. Uska sar halka ho raha tha, aur dard kam tha. Kamra kisi mehenge hotel se kam nahi tha, par yahan koi khidki nahi thi, bas bade monitors aur kuch ajeeb-o-ghareeb gadgets pade the.
Jaise hi usne uthne ki koshish ki, uske saamne ek admi aaya. Yeh aadmi lagbhag 50 saal ka tha, safed daadhi, aur aankhon mein ek tez chamak thi. Usne ek safed suit pehna hua tha, jaise woh koi bada doctor ya scientist ho.
Admi (Muskurate hue) : "Aaram se Rahul Tum abhi bahut kamzor ho. Tumhe bachaya gaya hai."

Rahul ne aankheen sikod kar uss aadmi ko ghoora. Uske dimag mein bas ek hi sawaal tha, jo uske hothon tak nahi aa pa raha tha.
Veer (Dheemi, halki awaaz mein) : "Ap... kaun hain? Aur main... kahan hoon?


Admi ( Apni kursii Veer ke paas khinchte hue ) : "Mera naam Dr. Rohan hai. Aur tum ek aisi jagah ho jahan tumhari family ka koi bhi aadmi nahi pahunch sakta."

Rahul ka chehra gusse se tann gaya. "Meri Family? Unhone mujhe marne ke liye chhod diya tha!"

Dr. Rohan (Shaanti se): "Hum jaante hain Rahul Tumhe marwane ki saazish tumhari family ke biggest rival ne nahi, balke tumhare apnon ne hi ki thi. Aur tumhari kismat mein abhi marna nahi likha tha Aur the Bachane wale aur koi Nahin balke Dr. Mehta Hain

Rahul ne halka sa sir hilaya usko jatka laga ke uska family Doctor usko Kyun Bachana Chahta Hain yeh baat uski Samaj main Nahin AA Rahi Thi

Dr. Rohan (Haste hue) : Tumhe marne ki plan banana woh toh bas ek chota sa shuruwat hai Tumhe bachaane waale hum nahi... tumhari kismat thi. Hum us kismat ko padh rahe the Jab tumhari family ne tumhe maarne ka plan banaya, usi waqt Dr Mehta ne mujhe phone Karke sab Kuch Bata diya phir Maine Apne 2 sabse bharose mand aadmi tumhare Piche Laga diya jab Tumhe marne ka plan start hua tab us waqt mere admi ne Tumhe bacha Liya aur Tumhe Yaha le aye
Ab tumhare pass do raste hain Ek, ki tum yahan raho aur apni family se badla lene ke liye taiyaar ho jao, par is baar... Ya doosra, tum yahan se jaa sakte ho, par shayad phir zinda nahi bachoge.

Rahul ki aankhon mein ab dard nahi, balki uski Ankhoo mein chamak thi. Usne samajh liya tha ki woh sirf nahi bacha, balke use ek auzaar banaaya gaya hai. Aur us auzaar ka pehla target... wahi family hogi, jisne use dhokha diya tha.
Rahul (Bina koi sawaal kiye, seedhe aankhon mein dekhte hue ): "Mera badla. Kaise shuru
karein... Dr. Rohan?"

~~~~~to be continue ~~~~

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Nice story bro

 

[Kalyansurya 1]

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[Kalyansurya 1]

Nice story bro

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Best of luck

 

[tyro]

Congrats bro for new story

 

[Alok]

Superb start Kalyansurya 1 .. ..

Just keep the updates regular.