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Your Favourite Pair With Prem ?

  • 1) Pratibha

  • 2) Prerna

  • 3) Vrinda

  • 4) Mamta

  • 5) Shruti

  • 6) Kritika

  • 7) Palak

  • 8) Paridhi

  • 9) Sakshi

  • 10) Diya


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Update 33

I GUESS YOU WILL NEVER KNOW !!!

[ Prem Apne Aap se Ladte Hue Gate Knock Karta Hai .

Kritika Aakar Gate Kholti Hai . Prem aur Kritika Dono Ki Nazar Ek Dusre se Takrati Hai .

Kritika : Prem !!! ]

Ab Aage :

Kritika Ke Saamne Hi Prem Khada Hua Tha . Dono Hi Awkward Feel Kar Rahe The .

Kritika : Please Come !

Prem Room Ke Andar aa Jata Hai .

Kritika : Kuch Chahiye ??

Prem : Nahi ! Kuch Baat Karni Thi !

Kritika : Haan !

Prem : Umm….Woh…..

Vrinda : Prem !!!

Prem Kritika se Kuch Baat Karne Hi Wala Hota Hai Par Tabhi Vrinda Waha aa Jati Hai .

Vrinda : Umm…Prem Jara 2 Minute aana !

Prem : Haan !

Prem Vrinda Ke Saath Room se Baahar Chala Jaata Hai . Vrinda Prem Ko Thoda aur Dur Lekar Jaati Hai .

Vrinda : Appointment Fix Ho Chuki Hai ! Tomorrow 2 PM !

Prem : Nice !

Vrinda : Wese I'm Sure Tumne Un Ladko Ke Baare Me Jarur Kuch Socha Hoga !

Prem : ( Smirks ) Swaha !

Vrinda : What ?? Kab ?

Prem : Samay Samay Ki Baat Hai ! Samay Samay Ka Khel !

Vrinda : Oh God ! Anyways ! Me Aati Hu !

Prem : Haan !

Vrinda Waha se Chali Jaati Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Aman se Baatchit Nahi Huyi Meri Abhi Tak ! Usko Call Karke Dekhta Hu !

Prem Aman Ko Call Karta Hai Par Aman Ka Mobile Switch Off Hi Batata Hai . Prem Mobile Ko Apne Pocket Me Rakh Deta Hai .

Prem Ki Nazar Dur se Jaate Hue Prerna aur Diya Par Padti Hai . Diya Ko Dekh Prem Ko Kal Raat Jo Bhi Hua Wo Sab Yaad Aane Lagta Hai

[ *Flashback*

Prem Ke Haatho Me Parking Area Ki CCTV Ki Recording Thi Jisne Usko Security Se Li Thi aur Unke Base se Wo Delete Karwa Li Thi .

Prem Puri Recording Dekh Kar Un Logo Ki Shakal Dekhta Hai Ki Wo Koun Log The aur Aakhir Me Clip Delete Kar Leta Hai .

Prem Waha se Baahar Chala Jaata Hai aur Waha aa Jata Hai Jaha Sangeet Ceremony Chal Rahi Thi , Parantu Prem Ki Nazar Un Chaar Ladko Ko Dhundh Rahi Thi .

Kuch Hi Der Me Dhundhne Par Prem Ko Woh Chaar Ladke Mil Jaate Hai Par Prem Unke Pass Nahi Jaata . Prem Dur se Hi Un Sab Ko Dekhe Jaa Raha Tha .

Karib 15 Minute Baad Wo Ladke Waha se Parking Area Me aa Jate Hai aur Car Me Baith Kar Jaane Lagte Hai .

Prem Bhi Ek Car Ki Keys Lekar Car Me Baith Un Ladko Ka Picha Karne Lagta Hai . Jaha Aage - Aage un Ladko Ki Car Chal Rahi Thi To Wahi Unse Thoda Dur Car Me Prem Bhi Unka Picha Kar Raha Tha .

Adnan : Saari Bottles aur Saara Maal Pada Hai na Car Me ! Ek Bar Check Kar Le Trunk Me !

Danish : Check Kar Liya Hai Mene ! Sab Kuch Ready Hai ! Bas Yaha se Highway Ka Rasta Pakad 11 KM Dur Ek Hotel Hai Waha Jana Hai ! Mene 8 Russian Escort Hire Ki Hai ! Wo Sidha Waha Pahuch Jaayegi !

Adnan : Par Russian Me Wo Baat Nahi Jo Indian Me Hai ! Aaj us Saali Ka Figure Dekh Ke Hi Mera Khada Ho Gaya ! Itne Bade Chuche , Badi si Gaand ! Saali Agli Baar Jaha Bhi Dikhegi , Wahi Khade - Khade Uski Gaand Maaruga !

Danish : Wo Kaam Hum Kal Kar Lege ! Par Aaj Russians Ki Gaand Maarte Hai !


Rasta Ek Dum Sunsaan Tha . Aaspass Bas Trees aur Jungle The aur Bich Me Ek Sunsaan Raasta . Prem Mauka Dekh Car Ki Speed Max. Kar Deta Hai aur Adnan Ki Car Ko Overtake Kar Uske Saamne Rok Deta Hai .

Achanank Car Ko Apne Saamne Rokta Dekh Firoz Achanak Break Maarta Hai Jiski Wajah se Sabhi Restless Ho Jaate Hai .

Adnan : Kya Hua ? Gaadi Kyu Roki ?

Firoz : Ye Saamne Dekhna ! Koyi Car Wale ne Apne Saamne Hi Car Rok Di !

Adnan : Jaa Firoz ! Isko 2 Lagake Aa !

Firoz : Haan ! Ruk Jaa Isko Thoda Dara Ke Aata Hu!

Firoz Car Ki Keys Nikalta Hai Kyunki Uske Challe Me Hi Ek Chota aur Teekha sa Knife Bhi Laga Hua Tha .

Firoz Driving Seat se Uth Car se Baahar Nikalta Hai. Wahi Prem Bhi Car se Baahar Nikal Chuka Tha aur Apni Car Ke Pass Khada Tha .

Adnan Ke Car Ki Headlight Uske Taraf Hi Apna Flash Maar Rahi Thi .

Firoz : Andha Hai Kya Lawde ??

Firoz Prem Ki Taraf Badhta Hai aur Use Knife Dikhata Hai . Prem Bas Chupchaap Khada Usko Dekhe Jaa Raha Tha .

Firoz Jese Hi Uske Pass Jaata Hai Prem Usko Haath Pakad Kar Mod Deta Hai aur Wo Keys Apne Hath Me Le leta Hai aur

Firoz : AAHHHHHHHH !!!!

Prem Firoz Ka Gala Pakadta Hai aur Keys Ke Challe Me se Knife Nikal Kar ,

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*


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Adnan aur Uske Dost Apni Aankho Ke Saamne Ho Rahe Hai Drishya Ko Dekhkar Dar Jaate Hai . Prem Chaku Ko Firoz Ki Aankho Me Aar Paar Karte Jaa Raha Tha . Firoz Ki Cheenkhe Nikal Rahi Thi aur Wo Jhatpata Raha Tha . Aakhir Me Prem Wo Knife Firoz Ke Gale Me Ghusa Deta Hai . Prem Ka Muh Khoon se Latpat Ho Jaata Hai .

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Car Me Bethe Teeno Logo Ki Jaan Halak Me Aa Gayi Thi Ye Dekhkar . Firoz Wahi Niche Gir Apni Aakhri Saanse Le Leta Hai .

Adnan : JALDI GAADI CHALU KAR !!!

Sahil : ISME CHAABI NAHI HAI !! FIROZ SAATH ME LEKAR GAYA THA !!!

Danish : TO BHAAGO YAHA SE !!! YE KOYI PSYCHO KILLER HAI !! TEENO ALAG ALAG BHAAGO !!!

Prem Apni Jagah se Ek Kadam Bhi Aage Nahi Badha Tha . Wo Teeno Log Car se Utar Kar Alag Alag Direction Me Jungle Ki Taraf Bhagne Lagte Hai .

Prem Wahi Khada Hua Apni Pocket Me se Cigarette Nikalta Hai aur Lighte Se Usko Jalakar Fukne Lagta Hai .

Prem : LET MY RAGE COME INTO PLAY !!!!


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Wahi Sahil Jungle Me Daud Raha Tha . Wo Karib 10 Minute se Bas Daude Hi Jaa Raha Tha . Aakhir Me Wo Thak Haar Ke Wahi Ek Beth Jaata Hai .

Sahil Apni Pocket Me Haath Ghumata Hai Par Usme Uska Mobile Nahi Tha .

Sahil : FUCKK !!!

Prem : Yeah……..You are Fucked Up !!!

Sahil Apne Piche Mud Kar Dekhta Hai .

Prem : ( Smirks )

Sahil Prem Ko Maarne Ki Koshish Karta Hai Par Prem Uska Haath Pakad Kar Marod Deta hai aur Uske Muh Par Ek Jordaar Punch Maarta Hai .

Sahil Ki Naak Me se Khoon Nikalne Lagta Hai . Sahil Ki Height Prem se Bahut Choti Thi Jiski Wajah se Bade Hi Aaram se Prem Sahil Ka Gala Pakadta Hai aur Ek Haath se Hi Usko Hawa Me Utha Deta Hai .

Sahil Jhatpatane Lagta Hai . Uski Aankhe Badi Hone Lagti Hai . Prem aur Bhi Jor se Sahil Ka Gala Dabane Lagta Hai . Sahil Apne Haath Paav Maarne Lagta Hai Par Koyi Farq Nahi Padta .

2 Minute Baad Sahil Apni Aakhri Saanse Gin Raha Tha .Prem Uski Pulse Check Karta Hai aur Uski Maut Confirm Karne Ke Baad Usko Ghasit te Hue Waha se Lekar Jaane Lagta Hai .

10 Minute Baad Prem Car Ke Pass Pahuch Sahil Ki Laash Ko Adnan Ki Car Me Rakh Deta Hai .

*10 Minutes Later*

Danish Aaram se Chalkar Aage Badh Raha Tha . Har Jagah Bas Andhera Hi Chaya Hua Tha .

Danish : ( Mann Me ) Shayad ab Waapas Mud Kar Jana Chahiye ! Wo Aadmi Chala Gaya Hoga !

Danish Jese Hi Apne Piche Mudta Hai Uske Muh Par Ek Jordaar Punch Padta Hai .

Danish Apne Aap Ko Sambhalke Jese Hi Prem Par Apna Vaar Karta Hai , Prem Uske Gale Par Eo Jordaar Kick Maarta Hai .

Kick Khaate Hi Danish Wahi Gir Jaata Hai aur Saath Me Hi Prem Ka Pajama Bhi Galat Jagah se Fatt Jata Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Oh Shitt !!

Prem Jaakar Danish Ki Pulse Check Karta Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Ye To Shuru Hote Hi Khatam Ho Gaya ! Kam se Kam 2 Minute To Tikta !

Prem Danish Ko Ghasit Te Hue Lekar Jaane Lagta Hai .

*Kuch Der Baad*

Prem Danish Ko Lekar Jaa Raha Tha Parantu Bich Raste Me Hi Piche se Uske Sar Par Ek Jordaar Vaar Hota Hai

Prem : ( Gusse Me ) BHENCHODD !!!!

Prem Ke Hath se Danish Ka Paanv Chutt Jata Hai . Prem Apne Piche Mud Kar Dekhta Hai To Waha Adnan Khada Hua Tha Ek Rod Pakar Kar .

Prem Apne Sar Ke Piche Haath Touch Karke Dekhta Hai Jaha Uske Halka Halka Khoon Nikal Raha Tha .

Adnan Waapas se Prem Ke Upar Hamla Karne Lagta Hai Par is Baar Prem Uski Rod Ek Haath se Pakad Leta Hai aur Uski Chest Par Ek Kick Maarta Hai .

Adnan Wahi Niche Gir Jata Hai aur Prem Ke Haath Me Uski Rod aa Jati Hai .

Adnan : ( Darte Hue ) Aakhir Tum Humare Piche Kyu Pade Ho ???

Prem : I GUESS YOU WILL NEVER KNOW !!!

Prem Adnan Ke Muh Par Us Rod se Lagataar Vaar Karne Lagta Hai . Aakhir Me Prem Apne Pass Pade Ek Bade se Patthar Ko Uthata Hai aur Wo Sidha Jor se Adnan Ke Sar Par Fek Deta Hai .

Adnan Ka Sar Fut Jata Hai aur Adnan Ki Aankhe Band Ho Jaati Hai . Parantu Prem Ko Usse Bhi Chain Nahi Mila Tha . Prem Us Patthar Ko Leke Baar Baar Adnan Ke Sar Par Maarne Lagta Hai .

Prem Ye Tab Tak Karta Hai Jab Tak Usko Chain Nahi Milta . Isi Bich Adnan Ke Sar se Bahut Khoon Nikal Chuka Tha Jisme se Bahut Khoon Prem Ke Kapdo Par Lag Chuka Tha .

Aakhir Me Prem Ek Haath se Adnan Ka Paav aur Ek Haath se Danish Ka Paanv Pakadta Hai aur Un Dono Ko Ghasit Te Hue Lekar Jaane Lagta Hai.

Karib 10 Minute Baad Prem Car Ke Pass Pahuch Jaata Hai aur Un Dono Ko Bhi Car Ke Andar Daal Deta Hai .

Prem ne Chaaro Ladko Ko Car Me Daal Diya Tha. Prem Ki Nazar Bahut Pehle Hi Car Ke Trunk Me Padi Alcohol Bottles Par Pad Gayi Thi .

Prem Baahar se Ek Badi Si Lakdi Leta hai aur Apni Pocket Me se Rumaal Nikal Kar Uske Aage Ki Taraf Baandh Leta Hai . Uske Baad Prem Alcohol Ki Bottle Leta Hai aur Us Lakdi Ke Muh Par Daal Deta Hai .

Aakhir Me Prem Apni Pocket se Lighter Nikalta Hai aur Us Lakdi Ko Jala Leta Hai .

Prem Car Ke Petrol Intake Cap Ke Pass Jaata Hai aur Usko Open Kar Leta Hai . Fir Prem Thoda sa Dur Jaata Hai aur Wo Lakdi Sidha Uske Andar Fek Deta Hai .

*BOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMM*

Ek Bada Sa Dhamaka Hota Hai Jisme Woh Car Puri Tarah se Tabah Ho Chuki Thi.


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Prem : SWAHA !!

*FLASHBACK ENDS* ]


Prem Apne Room Me Aa Jata Hai aur Bed Par Let Jaata Hai .

*Knock* *Knock*

Sheena : Me Andar aajau ??


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Prem : Bilkul !

Prem Bed se Khada Ho Jaata Hai .

Sheena : Us Din Ke Baad Hum Mile Hi Nahi !

Prem : Yeah !

Sheena : Tum Achanak se Kaha Chale Gaye The us Din?

Prem : Kuch Jaruri Kaam Tha Isliye Jana Pada !

Sheena aur Prem Baat-chit Kar Rahe The Par Bich Me Hi Aaradhya Waha aa Jati Hai .

Aaradhya : Wo Dadu Aapko Bula Rahe Hai !

Prem : Aaya Me !

Aaradhya : Jaldi Aana !

Aaradhya Waha se Chali Jaati Hai .

Sheena : Mujhe Ye Puchna Tha Ki us Raat Ko Kuch Hua Tha Kya ??

Prem : Oh ! Ofcourse !

Sheena : K..Kya ???

Prem : Aap Bhul Gaye ? Humari Car Ka Accident Ho Gaya Tha , Kuch Logo ne Hume Pakad Liya Tha !

Sheena : Wo Sab Yaad Hai Mujhe ! Uske Baad Hum Ek Choti si Jhopdi Me Gaye The , Uske Baad Kya Hua Mujhe Theek se Yaad Nahi ! Me Jab Subah Uthi Thi To Tum Waha Nahi The Aur Mere Baalo Ki Bhi Choti Bani Huyi Thi !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Haan ! Eventually Aapne Paani Samajh Kar Ek Bottle Me se Sharaab Pi Li Thi ! Wo Bhi Ekdum Strong ! Aur Aapko Chadh Gayi Thi ! Aapki Choti Mene Hi Banayi Thi Aapke Kehne Par , Aur Uske Baad Aap So Gaye The ! That's It !

Sheena : Sharaab ??? Oh..No

Prem : Kabhi Alcohol Ka Sevan Nahi Kiya Aapne ?

Sheena : Nahi !

Prem : Nice ! Karna….It's Not So Bad ! Anyways Baad Me Milte Hai !

*Kuch Der Baad*


Prem Apne Nana se Mil Kar Mahal Ke Baahar aa Jata Hai . Baahar Hi Usko Uske Sahitya Mama Mil Jate Hi Jinki Shaadi Ho Rahi Thi . Prem Unke Pass Ki Chair Par Beth Jata hai .

Prem : Aur Mama….Sab Badhiya !

Sahitya : Tu Kaha Ghum Raha Hai ? Dikha Hi Nahi Mujhe To !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Mera Chodo…Aap Batao ! Abhi Bhi Gao Me Sharaab Pikar Ghumte Rehte Ho Kya ?

Sahitya : ( Smiles ) Panchayat Bahut Hai Tujhe !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Wese Aane Wali Mami Ko To Pata Hai Na Ki Ek Din Aapke Room se 3 Ladkiya Mili Thi Wo Bhi Nagn Avastha Me !

Sahitya : Chup Hoja Bhai ! Gade Murde Mat Ukhaad !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Me To Bas Puch Raha Tha !

Sahitya : ( Smiles ) Tu Bata…..Teri Koyi GF ??

Prem : ( Smiles ) Aapke Jesi Kismat Sab Ki Kaha Hoti Hai

Sahitya : ( Smiles )

Prem : Mujhe Bhi To Photo Dikhao Hone Wali Mami Ka ! Mene To Chehra Hi Nahi Dekha Abhi Tak !

Sahitya : Mera Mobile To Charging Par Rakha Hai ! Aaj Raat Ko Dekh Lena Shaadi Ke Fero Ke Waqt !

Prem : Haan ! Wese Honeymoon Par Kaha Jaane Ka Soch Rahe Ho ?

Sahitya : Baad Me Sochege Wo Toh ! Shayad Switzerland ! Par Baad Me Jaayege , Abhi Nahi !

Prem : Nice ! Wese Wedding To Destinations Bhi Ho Sakti Thi ! Ye Baarat Lekar Jao and All ab To Bahut Purana Style Ho Chuka Hai !

Sahitya : Haan But Ladki Waale Yahi Chahte The aur Tere Nana Bhi Yahi Chahte The ! Chal Tu Taiyar Hoja ! Aadhe Ghante Baar Yaha se 51 Car Niklegi Jane Ke Liye ! Yaha se Pritampura Jaane Me 1 Ghanta To Lag Hi Jayega !

Prem : Haan Me Ready Hokar Aata Hu !

Prem Waha se Khada Hokar Aaram se Pure Mahal Me Ghumne Lag Jaata Hai . Akelapan Sataa Raha Tha Prem Ko Ab . Prem Ghum Raha Tha Waha Bich Me Hi Usko Aaradhya Mil Jaati Hai.

Aaradhya : Ready ?

Prem : Nahi ! Clothes Change Karne Hai !

Aaradhya : To Jaldi Change Karlo !

Prem : Haan !

Aaradhya : Everything Okay ?

Prem : Ofcourse ! Kyu ?

Aaradhya : Tum Apne Aap Me Hi Ghumsum Ho ! Chupchaap Yaha se Waha Ghumte Rehte Ho !

Prem : Nahi Bas Aese Hi ! Anyways Ye Batao Tum Kya Abhi College Me Ho ?

Aaradhya : Nahi ! Meri Graduation Ho Chuki Hai !

Prem : Nice ! To Ab Kya ? Business Ya Job ? Yaa Fir Sidha Haath Peele ?

Aaradhya : Job ! Me Soch Rahi Hu Job Karne Ki ! Par Uske Liye Mujhe Dada , Dadi , Papa aur Mumma Ki Bhi Permission Leni Padegi ! And I'm Sure Wo Allow Nahi Karege But Still Me Apni Puri Koshish Karugi !

Prem : Don't Worry , Me Baat Karuga Unse ! Aur Wo Mujhe Mana Nahi Karege ! But I Think Tum Unko Easily Convince Kar Logi ! Tumhari Eyes Bahut Intimidating Hai ! Kisiki Bhi Aankho Me Aankhe Daal Kar Kuch Kahogi , Wo Chupchaap Haan Bol Dege ! i Bet !

Aaradhya : ( Blushes ) Tumhe Lagta Hai Aesa ?


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Prem : ( Smirks ) Ofcourse ! Chalo Me Aata Hu Kapde Change Karke !

Prem Waha se Apne Room Me Jaane Lagta Hai Parantu Bich Me Hi Prem Ke Mobile Par Call Aane Lagta Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Saans Leta Hu To Mobile Par Call Aane Lag Jaata Hai !

Prem Caller Ka Name Check Karta Hai .

Prem : Shubham Ka Call ???

Prem Call Receive Karta Hai.

*On Call*

Prem : Haan Bhai Shubham ! Koyi Jaruri Khabar ?

Shubham : Woh..Prem…Woh

Prem : Sunayi De Raha Hai…..Behra Nahi Hoon Main

Shubham : AMAN IS NO MORE !!!!!





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Update 30

Breakdown of Kritika's Past

[ Prem : ( Chillakar ) JUST FUCKING HOLD THAT !!!! GATE PAKDO !!!

Kritika Apne Piche Mud Kar Dekhti Hai Tab Tak Gate Bandh Ho Jaata Hai .

Prem : SHITTTTT !!!!!!!! ]

Ab Aage :

Prem : ( Lashes Out ) Are You Deaf ??? Sunayi Nahi De Raha Hai , Bol Raha Hu Hold That !

Prem aur Kritika Dono ab Room Me Fas Chuke The. Kritika Jaakar Gate Kholne Ki Koshish Karti Hai Par Gate Nahi Khulta . Prem Diwaar Ke Pass Jaakar Niche Baith Jaata Hai .

Kritika : Ye Gate To Khul Hi Nahi Raha !

Prem : Nice !

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Aaj Ka Din To Bure Se Wahiyaat Hote Jaa Raha Hai !

Kritika : Nice ????

Prem : Chup Raho Na !

Kritika Waapas Gate Kholne Ki Try Karti Hai Par Kuch Nahi Farq Nahi Padta .

Prem : Chup Chaap Baith Jao Ab ! Kuch Nahi Hone Wala , Jab Tak Koyi Baahar se Nahi Kholege Tab Tak Nahi Khulega ! Apna Mobile Nikalo Aur Call Karo Kisiko !

Kritika : Umm…Mobile To Mai Laayi Nahi !

Prem : Nice !

Kritika : Tum Waapas Aa Gaye !

Prem : Aankhe Kharaab Hai Kya ? Dikh Nahi Raha!

Kritika : Tum Bas Humesha Mere Saath Hi Kyu itna Rudely Baat Karte Ho ?

Prem : Chupchaap Baith Jaona ! Kyu Dimaag Kharaab Kar Rahi Ho ?

Kritika : Nahi ! Aaj Mai Jaankar Rahugi Ki Tum Mujhse Hi Kyu Aese Rudely Baat Karte Ho ? Tum Apne Saare Siblings aur Cousins se Pyaar ss Pesh Aate Ho Par Mujhse Hi Bas Gusse Me Baat Karte Ho ! Aakhir Mene Aesa Kiya Kya Hai ?

Prem : Mera Dimaag Mat Kharaab Karo!

Kritika : Aaj Mai Jaankar Rahugi Ki Tum Bas Mujhse Hi Kyu Aese Baat Karte Ho ? Aaj To Tumhe Batana Hi Hoga !

Prem : To Suno ! Kayi Wajah Hai ! Choti Choti Wajah Hai Par Dheere Dheere Wo Bas Badi Hoti Gayi aur Mere Aankho Me Tumhare Liye Gussa Badhta Hi Gaya !

Kritika : Par Aakhir Mene Kiya Kya Hai ?

Prem : is Kisse Ki Shuruwaat Tab Hoti Hai Jab Hum Bahut Chote The ! Bachpan se Hi Me Humesha Hi Prerna aur Diya Ke Liye Overprotective Tha Jo Ki Mai Aaj Bhi Hu ! Tum Humesha Se Hi Prerna Ko Pareshaan Karti Rehti Thi , Usse Ladaai Karti Rehti aur Uspar Haath Uthati Thi !

Kritika : Par Tab To Hum Bacche The ! Aur Ye Baat Bhi Koyi Baat Hai ! Itni Choti Wajah se Tum Mujhe Baaharwalo Jese Treat Karte Ho !

Prem : Ye Baat Kuch Khaas Nahi hai Par Ye To Sirf Ek Chingari Thi ! Aag To Baad Me Lagi !

Prem Kritika Ko Saari Vaardaat Batane Lagta Hai .

[ *Flashback*

8 Years Ago :

Location : Mehra Mension

Prerna : Bhai Aap Abhi Tak Hall Me Kya Kar Rahe Ho ? Raat Ki 11 Baj Chuki Hai!

Prem : Papa Nahi Aaye Ab Tak ! Bas Unhi Ka Wait Kar Raha Hu !

Prerna : Kabtak Wait Karege Aap ? Papa Ka To Roj Ka Hai ! Nashe Ki Haalat Me Hoge Kahi !

Prem : Prerna Mind Your Tongue ! Papa Ke Khilaf Kuch Nahi ! Tera Siwa Koyi Dusra Hota To Sare Daat Tod Deta !

Prerna : Sorry !

Prem aur Prerna Dono Hall Me Maujood The . Kritika Bhi Dono Ko Dekh Waha aa Jati Hai .

Kritika : is Waqt Yaha Kya Kar Rahe Ho?

Prerna : Papa Ka Wait Kar Rahe Hai !

Prem : Prerna Tum Jaakar So Jao ! Me Wait Karta Hu !

Prerna : Mai Bhi Wait Karti Hu !

Kritika : Me Bhi Yahi Hu !

Teeno Wahi Hall me Maujood The . Kuch Der Teeno Wahi Intezaar Karte Hai .

Thodi Der Baad Rajveer Mehra Mension Me Enter Karta Hai . Uske Per Ladkhada Rahe The . Prem Rajveer Ko Dekhte Hi Uski Taraf Daudte Hue Jaata Hai Aur Usko Sambhalta Hai .

Prem : Aaram se Papa !

Prem Rajveer Ko Pakad Kar Andar Lekar Aata Hai . Rajveer Nashe Me Dhut Tha , Usko Bilkul Bhi Hosh Nahi Tha . Wo To Bas Apni Yaado Me Ghum Tha .

Prem Rajveer Ko Pakad Kar Dheere Dheere Andar Lekar Jaa Raha Tha . Prerna aur Kritika Bhi Saath Me Hi Aa Rahi Thi , Par Tabhi Rajveer Prem Ke Upar Vomit Kar Deta Hai .

Prem Ka Pura Shirt Kharaab Ho Gaya Tha . Ye Dekhkar Kritika Ko Gussa Aa Jata Hai .

Kritika : ( Gusse Me ) Inka Roj-Roj Bas Yahi Chalta Rehta Hai ! Pure Ghar Ko Kharaab Karke Rakha Hai ! Pata Nahi Dadi Inko Nikaal Kyu Nahi Deti !

Kritika Ki Baat Sunkar Prem Ka Khoon Ubalne Lagta Hai , Par Wo Koyi Jawaab Nahi Deta Hai Kyunki Usne Rajveer Ko Pakad Ke Rakha Tha .

Prem Waha se Rajveer Ko Uske Room Me Lekar Jaata Hai . Ek Akela Room Jaha Sirf Rajveer Rehta Tha Sandhya Nahi . Dono Ke Alag Alag Kamre The.

Prem Apne Pita se Obsessed Tha , Beyhadh Pyaar Karta Tha Wo Apne Pita se . Wo Apne Pita Ke Baare Me Ek Shabd Bhi Bura Nahi Sun Sakta .

*Flashback Ends* ]


Prem : Yaad Aaya !

Kritika : Haan !

Prem : Agar Tum Meri Cousin Nahi Hoti To Usi Waqt Me Tumhari Zubaan Khich Leta ! Me Apne Papa Ke Khilaf Ek Shabd Bhi Nahi Sunuga Kabhi Bhi !

Kritika : Usko Lekar Tum Mujhse Aaj Tak Khafa Ho !

Prem : Khafa To Apno Se Hote Hai ! Us Din Ke Baad se Hi Tum Mere Apno Ki List Se Baahar Ho Chuki Thi ! Mujhe Tumse Koyi Lena Dena Nahi Rakhna Tha !

Ye Baat Sunkar Kritika Ka Dil Tut Jaata Hai .
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Kritika Aakar Prem Ke Pass Baith Jaati Hai .

Kritika : Tumhe Kaha Ki Mai Prerna Ko Pareshan Karti Thi Jab Hum Chote The ! Par Kyu Karti Thi Wo Nahi Pucha !

Prem : Not Interested !

Kritika : Tumhare Liye ! Tum Humesha se Hi Bachpan Me Jyadatar Bas Prerna Ke Saath Hi Rehte The ! Jaha Tum Hote , Waha Prerna Humesha Hoti ! Itni Kam Umra Me Bhi Jalan Hoti Thi Mujhe Prerna se !

Prem : Mere Liye ? Kyu ? Koyi Aur Nahi Mila Pareshaan Karne Ke Liye !

Kritika Prem Ki Baate Sunkar Rone Lagti Hai . Prem Uski Taraf Dekhta Hai .

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Prem : Kya Hua ?

Kritika : ( Rote Hue ) BECAUSE I ALWAYS LIKED YOU !!!! HUMESHA HI TUMHE PASAND KIYA HAI !! SIRF PASAND HI NAHI , PYAAR BHI KIYA HAI BAS TUMHI SE !!!

Prem : ( Speechless )

Kritika : ( Rote Hue ) Mujhe Bas Humesha se Hi Tumhara Attention Chahiya Tha ! Par Har Baar Tum Mujhe Bas Ignore Kar Dete ! Fir To Jese Tumne Mujhse Baat Hi Karna Band Kar Diya !

Prem : Ahem !

Kritika : ( Rote Hue ) Dard Hota Hai Mujhe ! Kayi Raate Meri Bas Aansuo se Bhari Hai ! Bahut Dard Hota Hai Dil Par Jab Tum Paraaye Jesa Bartaav Karte Ho Mujhse ! Chubhta Hai Mere Dil Ko !

Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Me Thi Kritika , Jise Prem Ne Kabhi Aankh Uthakar Dekha Bhi Nahi Tha , Kabhi Sahi Thang Se Baat Bhi Nahi Kari Thi . Kritika Chahti Thi Ki Prem Usko Dekhe , Usko Nihare aur Usse Ache se Baat Kare . Par Aesa Kabhi Nahi Hua .

Kritika : ( Rote Hue ) Tumhare Bengalore Jaane Ke Baad se Tumhari Har Cheez Me Mene Bas Yaadein Basayi Hai ! Tumhari Bike Ka Apni Jaan se Bhi Zyada Khyaal Rakha ! Uske Liye Bike Chalana Sikhi ! Gym Join Kiya Taaki Tumhare Liys Compatible Hu ! Mujhe Laga Tha Aane Ke Baad Tum Mere Saath Ache se Baatchit Karoge Par Wo Din Kabhi Aaya Hi Nahi !

Prem : Umm..I Think…..

Kritika : ( Rote Hue ) Bahut Dard Hota Hai Prem ! Bahut Dard Hota Hai !

Kritika Fut Futkar Rone Lagti Hai . Lehro Ki Tarah Uski Aankhon se Aansu Behne Lagte Hai .

Prem Bas Kritika Ki Taraf Dekh Raha Tha . Aaj Pehli Baar Usko Kritika Ki Shakal Irritating Nahi Lag Rahi Thi . Prem Ko Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Tha Ki Wo Kya Bole .

Prem : Umm..Kritika..Woh

*Door Opens*

Prerna : Bhai !

Prem : ( Chillakar ) GATE KO PAKAD KAR RAKHNA !!

Prerna Ne Gate Ko Pakad Kar Rakha Hua Tha .

Prerna : Haan ! Aap Yaha Kya Kar Rahe Hai ?

Prem Apni Jagah se Khada Ho Jata Hai . Wo Apni Nazar Kritika Ki Taraf Karta Hai . Kritika Bas Apne Aansu Rokne Ki Nasafal Koshish Kar Rahi Thi .

Prerna : Krit , Kya Hua ? Bhai ?

Prem Prerna Ke Pass Jata Hai Aur Gate Pakadta Hai .

Prem : Tu Isko Lekar Jaa ! Me Gate Pakadkar Rakhta Hu !

Prerna : Par Hua Kya ?

Prem : Macchar Kaat Rahe Hai Usko ! Tu Lekar Jaa Isko !

Prerna Kritika Ke Pass Jaati Hai .

Prerna : Kya Hua Krit ?

Prem : My Dear Sweet Sister ! Baate Baad Me Karlena ! Abhi Isko Lekar Jaa ! Chilled Cold Coffee Pila ! Par Abhi Lekar Jaa !

Kritika Apni Jagah Se Khadi Ho Jaati Hai aur Prerna Ke Saath Jaane Lagti Hai .

Prem Baahar Aakar Gate Band Kar Deta Hai aur Dono Ko Jaate Hue Dekhta Hai . Prem Ko Bahut Bura Lag Raha Tha .

Prem : Ladki Brave To Hai ! Me To Usko Bhadwi Samajh Raha Tha ! Agar Mai Uski Jagah Hota aur Pratibha Mere Sath Aesa Bartaav Karti To Mai To Mar Hi Jaata !

Prem Waha se Baahar Aa Jata Hai aur Apne Room Me Aa Jata Hai . Room Me Aate Hi Prem Apne Mobile Ko Apni Pocket Me Rakh Leta Hai . Prem Ke Dimaag Me Abhi Bhi Kritika Ki Baate Hi Gunj Rahi Thi .

Prerna : Bhaiya !

Prerna Prem Ke Room Me Enter Karti Hai .

Prem : Haan !

Prerna : Woh Krit Kyu Ro Rahi Thi ??

Prem : Usse Hi Puch !

Prerna : Wo Kuch Nahi Bata Rahi ! Aap Bataiye Na!

Prem : Mujhe Nahi Pata ! Aur Ye Jo Bhi Hua Kisiko Batana Mat !

Prerna : Please Bataiye Na !

Prem : Prerna Mujhe Headache Ho Raha Hai ! Please Leave !

Prerna : OK ! Me Medicine Lekar Aati Hu !

Prem : Koyi Jarurat Nahi Hai ! You May Leave !

Prerna Waha se Chali Jaati Hai . Prem Ka Sar Dard Kar Raha Tha . Uske Dimaag Me Bas Kritika Ki Baate Chal Rahi Thi Jiski Wajah se Usko Aur Bhi Zyada Dard Ho Raha Tha .

Prem Apne Bag Ke Pass Jaata hai aur Usme Se Headache Ki Pills Nikalkar Le Leta Hai . Bag Ko Waapas Rakh Wo Gate Ko Andar se Lock Kar Bed Par So Jaata Hai .

*3 Hour Later*

Prem Neend se Uthta Hai . Prem Ka Jab Bhi Headache Hota Hai To Wo Bas So Jaata Hai . Prem Bed se Uthkar Bathroom Me Jata Hai aur Face Wash Karke Room Ke Baahar Chala Jata Hai.

Room Ke Baahar Aakar Wo Niche Hall Me Chala Jaata Hai . Hall Me Kayi Log Maujud The .

Prem : Jisko Pehchan Sake Wo Dikhta Hi Nahi Ab Toh ! Sab Pata Nahi Kaha-Kaha Ghumte Rehte Hai !

Prem Bas Side Me Khada Sab Ko Dekh Raha Tha. Tabhi Dur se Usko Dekh Aditi Uske Pass Aati Hai .

Aditi : Bhaiya ! Aap Aa Gaye !

Prem : Lagta To Yahi Hai ! Wese Ye Sangeet Ceremony Kab Chalu Hogi ?

Aditi : Abhi To 1 Ghanta Baaki Hai ! Aap Dinner Kar Lijiye !

Prem : Haan ! Baaki Sab Kaha Hai ? Koyi Dikh Hi Nahi Raha !

Aditi : Kayi Log Baahar Hai aur Kayi Log Upar ! Yaha To Bas Naye Guest Hai Jo Pass Ke Hi Jagah se Aaye Hue Hai !

Prem : Hmm !

Aditi : Bhaiya Humne Suna Aap CEO Banne Wale Hai !

Prem : Kisne Bataya ?

Aditi : Prerna Dii !

Prem : Nice !

Aditi : To Bhaiya Hum Aapki Company Me Job Kar Sakti Hu ?

Prem : Abhi Aap Apni Studies Par Dhyaan Dijiye ! In Sab Ke Baare Me Jyada Mat Socho ! Just Study and Enjoy !

Aditi : OK ! Me Aati Hu !

Prem : Haan !

Aditi Waha se Chali Jaati Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Me Bhi Clothes Change Kar Leta Hu !

Prem Waha se Upar Jaane Lagta Hai Apne Room Me . Tabhi Uski Bhidant Pari se Ho Jaati Hai .

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Pari Prem Ko Dekh Chauk Jaati Hai .

Pari : ( Excites ) PREM !!!!

Prem : ( Smiles ) Dheere ! Hi Pari !

Pari Prem Ko Hug Kar Leti Hai .

Prem : ( Smiles ) Pari ! Log Galat Samjhege !

Prem Pari Ko Apne se Dur Karta Hai .

Pari : Prem ! Tum Yaha Kese Kese ?

Prem : Mere Mama Ki Shaadi Hai ! Mujhe To Yaha Hona Hi Tha !

Pari : ( Smiles ) Prem Mene Socha Nahi Tha Hum Waapas Mil Payege ! Stars Have Really Aligned !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Yeah !

Pari : Aaona Kahi Baith Kar Baate Karte Hai !

Prem : Baad Me Pari ! Abhi Me Thoda Busy Hu ! Abhi To Hum Dono Hi Yahi Hai ! Aaram se Baad me Baat Karte Hai Na !

Pari : ( Upset ) Umm…OK !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Nice !

Pari : ( Fake Smile ) Nice !

Pari Ke Chehre Par Jo Khushi Thi Wo Achanak Gayab Ho Chuki Thi . Prem Usko Nazarandaaz Kar Waha se Chala Jaata Hai . Pari Bas Usko Jaate Hue Dekh Rahi Thi .

Prem Jaate Jaate Mudta Hai aur Waapas Pari Ke Pass Aata Hai .

Prem : Pari ! I'm Sorry ! Mene Jo Tumhare Saath Kiya Tha Wo Nahi Karna Chahiya Tha ! Tum Faaltu Me Bich Me Fas Gayi ! Bye !

Prem Waha se Upar Chala Jaata Hai . Raste Me Hi Usko Rohit Mil Jaata Hai .

Prem : Oye Hero ! Kaha Ghum Raha Hai Aajkal !

Rohit : Woh…Bhaiya Bas Yahi ! Bas Aap Hi Nahi Dikh Rahe !

Prem : Haan ! Tu IPAD Kekar Aaya ?

Rohit : Haan !

Prem : Raat Ko Mujhe Dene Aana ! Mujhe Chahiye!

Rohit : Theek Hai Bhaiya !

Prem Waha se Jaane Lagta Hai . Prem 2nd Floor Ki Balcony Me aa Jata Hai aur Waha Bas Timepass Karta Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Kapde Change Kar Leta Hu ab! Sangeet Ceremony Bhi Start Hone Wali Hai !

Prem Apne Piche Mudta Hai . Prem Ki Nazar Kulgauravi Par Padti Hai . Kulgauravi Jo Prem se Kuch Hi Dur Khadi Thi Uski Nazar Bhi Prem Par Padti Hai .

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Awesome update bhai

Bhai wo ladki kaha hai jisse Prem ki Saadi jabardasti huyi thi usse kab tak ghar waalo se bacha ker rakhega Prem....?
 

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I GUESS YOU WILL NEVER KNOW !!!

[ Prem Apne Aap se Ladte Hue Gate Knock Karta Hai .

Kritika Aakar Gate Kholti Hai . Prem aur Kritika Dono Ki Nazar Ek Dusre se Takrati Hai .

Kritika : Prem !!! ]

Ab Aage :

Kritika Ke Saamne Hi Prem Khada Hua Tha . Dono Hi Awkward Feel Kar Rahe The .

Kritika : Please Come !

Prem Room Ke Andar aa Jata Hai .

Kritika : Kuch Chahiye ??

Prem : Nahi ! Kuch Baat Karni Thi !

Kritika : Haan !

Prem : Umm….Woh…..

Vrinda : Prem !!!

Prem Kritika se Kuch Baat Karne Hi Wala Hota Hai Par Tabhi Vrinda Waha aa Jati Hai .

Vrinda : Umm…Prem Jara 2 Minute aana !

Prem : Haan !

Prem Vrinda Ke Saath Room se Baahar Chala Jaata Hai . Vrinda Prem Ko Thoda aur Dur Lekar Jaati Hai .

Vrinda : Appointment Fix Ho Chuki Hai ! Tomorrow 2 PM !

Prem : Nice !

Vrinda : Wese I'm Sure Tumne Un Ladko Ke Baare Me Jarur Kuch Socha Hoga !

Prem : ( Smirks ) Swaha !

Vrinda : What ?? Kab ?

Prem : Samay Samay Ki Baat Hai ! Samay Samay Ka Khel !

Vrinda : Oh God ! Anyways ! Me Aati Hu !

Prem : Haan !

Vrinda Waha se Chali Jaati Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Aman se Baatchit Nahi Huyi Meri Abhi Tak ! Usko Call Karke Dekhta Hu !

Prem Aman Ko Call Karta Hai Par Aman Ka Mobile Switch Off Hi Batata Hai . Prem Mobile Ko Apne Pocket Me Rakh Deta Hai .

Prem Ki Nazar Dur se Jaate Hue Prerna aur Diya Par Padti Hai . Diya Ko Dekh Prem Ko Kal Raat Jo Bhi Hua Wo Sab Yaad Aane Lagta Hai

[ *Flashback*

Prem Ke Haatho Me Parking Area Ki CCTV Ki Recording Thi Jisne Usko Security Se Li Thi aur Unke Base se Wo Delete Karwa Li Thi .

Prem Puri Recording Dekh Kar Un Logo Ki Shakal Dekhta Hai Ki Wo Koun Log The aur Aakhir Me Clip Delete Kar Leta Hai .

Prem Waha se Baahar Chala Jaata Hai aur Waha aa Jata Hai Jaha Sangeet Ceremony Chal Rahi Thi , Parantu Prem Ki Nazar Un Chaar Ladko Ko Dhundh Rahi Thi .

Kuch Hi Der Me Dhundhne Par Prem Ko Woh Chaar Ladke Mil Jaate Hai Par Prem Unke Pass Nahi Jaata . Prem Dur se Hi Un Sab Ko Dekhe Jaa Raha Tha .

Karib 15 Minute Baad Wo Ladke Waha se Parking Area Me aa Jate Hai aur Car Me Baith Kar Jaane Lagte Hai .

Prem Bhi Ek Car Ki Keys Lekar Car Me Baith Un Ladko Ka Picha Karne Lagta Hai . Jaha Aage - Aage un Ladko Ki Car Chal Rahi Thi To Wahi Unse Thoda Dur Car Me Prem Bhi Unka Picha Kar Raha Tha .

Adnan : Saari Bottles aur Saara Maal Pada Hai na Car Me ! Ek Bar Check Kar Le Trunk Me !

Danish : Check Kar Liya Hai Mene ! Sab Kuch Ready Hai ! Bas Yaha se Highway Ka Rasta Pakad 11 KM Dur Ek Hotel Hai Waha Jana Hai ! Mene 8 Russian Escort Hire Ki Hai ! Wo Sidha Waha Pahuch Jaayegi !

Adnan : Par Russian Me Wo Baat Nahi Jo Indian Me Hai ! Aaj us Saali Ka Figure Dekh Ke Hi Mera Khada Ho Gaya ! Itne Bade Chuche , Badi si Gaand ! Saali Agli Baar Jaha Bhi Dikhegi , Wahi Khade - Khade Uski Gaand Maaruga !

Danish : Wo Kaam Hum Kal Kar Lege ! Par Aaj Russians Ki Gaand Maarte Hai !


Rasta Ek Dum Sunsaan Tha . Aaspass Bas Trees aur Jungle The aur Bich Me Ek Sunsaan Raasta . Prem Mauka Dekh Car Ki Speed Max. Kar Deta Hai aur Adnan Ki Car Ko Overtake Kar Uske Saamne Rok Deta Hai .

Achanank Car Ko Apne Saamne Rokta Dekh Firoz Achanak Break Maarta Hai Jiski Wajah se Sabhi Restless Ho Jaate Hai .

Adnan : Kya Hua ? Gaadi Kyu Roki ?

Firoz : Ye Saamne Dekhna ! Koyi Car Wale ne Apne Saamne Hi Car Rok Di !

Adnan : Jaa Firoz ! Isko 2 Lagake Aa !

Firoz : Haan ! Ruk Jaa Isko Thoda Dara Ke Aata Hu!

Firoz Car Ki Keys Nikalta Hai Kyunki Uske Challe Me Hi Ek Chota aur Teekha sa Knife Bhi Laga Hua Tha .

Firoz Driving Seat se Uth Car se Baahar Nikalta Hai. Wahi Prem Bhi Car se Baahar Nikal Chuka Tha aur Apni Car Ke Pass Khada Tha .

Adnan Ke Car Ki Headlight Uske Taraf Hi Apna Flash Maar Rahi Thi .

Firoz : Andha Hai Kya Lawde ??

Firoz Prem Ki Taraf Badhta Hai aur Use Knife Dikhata Hai . Prem Bas Chupchaap Khada Usko Dekhe Jaa Raha Tha .

Firoz Jese Hi Uske Pass Jaata Hai Prem Usko Haath Pakad Kar Mod Deta Hai aur Wo Keys Apne Hath Me Le leta Hai aur

Firoz : AAHHHHHHHH !!!!

Prem Firoz Ka Gala Pakadta Hai aur Keys Ke Challe Me se Knife Nikal Kar ,

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

*KCCHHHHHHH*

Adnan aur Uske Dost Apni Aankho Ke Saamne Ho Rahe Hai Drishya Ko Dekhkar Dar Jaate Hai . Prem Chaku Ko Firoz Ki Aankho Me Aar Paar Karte Jaa Raha Tha . Firoz Ki Cheenkhe Nikal Rahi Thi aur Wo Jhatpata Raha Tha . Aakhir Me Prem Wo Knife Firoz Ke Gale Me Ghusa Deta Hai . Prem Ka Muh Khoon se Latpat Ho Jaata Hai .

Car Me Bethe Teeno Logo Ki Jaan Halak Me Aa Gayi Thi Ye Dekhkar . Firoz Wahi Niche Gir Apni Aakhri Saanse Le Leta Hai .

Adnan : JALDI GAADI CHALU KAR !!!

Sahil : ISME CHAABI NAHI HAI !! FIROZ SAATH ME LEKAR GAYA THA !!!

Danish : TO BHAAGO YAHA SE !!! YE KOYI PSYCHO KILLER HAI !! TEENO ALAG ALAG BHAAGO !!!

Prem Apni Jagah se Ek Kadam Bhi Aage Nahi Badha Tha . Wo Teeno Log Car se Utar Kar Alag Alag Direction Me Jungle Ki Taraf Bhagne Lagte Hai .

Prem Wahi Khada Hua Apni Pocket Me se Cigarette Nikalta Hai aur Lighte Se Usko Jalakar Fukne Lagta Hai .

Prem : LET MY RAGE COME INTO PLAY !!!!


Wahi Sahil Jungle Me Daud Raha Tha . Wo Karib 10 Minute se Bas Daude Hi Jaa Raha Tha . Aakhir Me Wo Thak Haar Ke Wahi Ek Beth Jaata Hai .

Sahil Apni Pocket Me Haath Ghumata Hai Par Usme Uska Mobile Nahi Tha .

Sahil : FUCKK !!!

Prem : Yeah……..You are Fucked Up !!!

Sahil Apne Piche Mud Kar Dekhta Hai .

Prem : ( Smirks )

Sahil Prem Ko Maarne Ki Koshish Karta Hai Par Prem Uska Haath Pakad Kar Marod Deta hai aur Uske Muh Par Ek Jordaar Punch Maarta Hai .

Sahil Ki Naak Me se Khoon Nikalne Lagta Hai . Sahil Ki Height Prem se Bahut Choti Thi Jiski Wajah se Bade Hi Aaram se Prem Sahil Ka Gala Pakadta Hai aur Ek Haath se Hi Usko Hawa Me Utha Deta Hai .

Sahil Jhatpatane Lagta Hai . Uski Aankhe Badi Hone Lagti Hai . Prem aur Bhi Jor se Sahil Ka Gala Dabane Lagta Hai . Sahil Apne Haath Paav Maarne Lagta Hai Par Koyi Farq Nahi Padta .

2 Minute Baad Sahil Apni Aakhri Saanse Gin Raha Tha .Prem Uski Pulse Check Karta Hai aur Uski Maut Confirm Karne Ke Baad Usko Ghasit te Hue Waha se Lekar Jaane Lagta Hai .

10 Minute Baad Prem Car Ke Pass Pahuch Sahil Ki Laash Ko Adnan Ki Car Me Rakh Deta Hai .

*10 Minutes Later*

Danish Aaram se Chalkar Aage Badh Raha Tha . Har Jagah Bas Andhera Hi Chaya Hua Tha .

Danish : ( Mann Me ) Shayad ab Waapas Mud Kar Jana Chahiye ! Wo Aadmi Chala Gaya Hoga !

Danish Jese Hi Apne Piche Mudta Hai Uske Muh Par Ek Jordaar Punch Padta Hai .

Danish Apne Aap Ko Sambhalke Jese Hi Prem Par Apna Vaar Karta Hai , Prem Uske Gale Par Eo Jordaar Kick Maarta Hai .

Kick Khaate Hi Danish Wahi Gir Jaata Hai aur Saath Me Hi Prem Ka Pajama Bhi Galat Jagah se Fatt Jata Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Oh Shitt !!

Prem Jaakar Danish Ki Pulse Check Karta Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Ye To Shuru Hote Hi Khatam Ho Gaya ! Kam se Kam 2 Minute To Tikta !

Prem Danish Ko Ghasit Te Hue Lekar Jaane Lagta Hai .

*Kuch Der Baad*

Prem Danish Ko Lekar Jaa Raha Tha Parantu Bich Raste Me Hi Piche se Uske Sar Par Ek Jordaar Vaar Hota Hai .

Prem : ( Gusse Me ) BHENCHODD !!!!

Prem Ke Hath se Danish Ka Paanv Chutt Jata Hai . Prem Apne Piche Mud Kar Dekhta Hai To Waha Adnan Khada Hua Tha Ek Rod Pakar Kar .

Prem Apne Sar Ke Piche Haath Touch Karke Dekhta Hai Jaha Uske Halka Halka Khoon Nikal Raha Tha .

Adnan Waapas se Prem Ke Upar Hamla Karne Lagta Hai Par is Baar Prem Uski Rod Ek Haath se Pakad Leta Hai aur Uski Chest Par Ek Kick Maarta Hai .

Adnan Wahi Niche Gir Jata Hai aur Prem Ke Haath Me Uski Rod aa Jati Hai .

Adnan : ( Darte Hue ) Aakhir Tum Humare Piche Kyu Pade Ho ???

Prem : I GUESS YOU WILL NEVER KNOW !!!

Prem Adnan Ke Muh Par Us Rod se Lagataar Vaar Karne Lagta Hai . Aakhir Me Prem Apne Pass Pade Ek Bade se Patthar Ko Uthata Hai aur Wo Sidha Jor se Adnan Ke Sar Par Fek Deta Hai .

Adnan Ka Sar Fut Jata Hai aur Adnan Ki Aankhe Band Ho Jaati Hai . Parantu Prem Ko Usse Bhi Chain Nahi Mila Tha . Prem Us Patthar Ko Leke Baar Baar Adnan Ke Sar Par Maarne Lagta Hai .

Prem Ye Tab Tak Karta Hai Jab Tak Usko Chain Nahi Milta . Isi Bich Adnan Ke Sar se Bahut Khoon Nikal Chuka Tha Jisme se Bahut Khoon Prem Ke Kapdo Par Lag Chuka Tha .

Aakhir Me Prem Ek Haath se Adnan Ka Paav aur Ek Haath se Danish Ka Paanv Pakadta Hai aur Un Dono Ko Ghasit Te Hue Lekar Jaane Lagta Hai.

Karib 10 Minute Baad Prem Car Ke Pass Pahuch Jaata Hai aur Un Dono Ko Bhi Car Ke Andar Daal Deta Hai .

Prem ne Chaaro Ladko Ko Car Me Daal Diya Tha. Prem Ki Nazar Bahut Pehle Hi Car Ke Trunk Me Padi Alcohol Bottles Par Pad Gayi Thi .

Prem Baahar se Ek Badi Si Lakdi Leta hai aur Apni Pocket Me se Rumaal Nikal Kar Uske Aage Ki Taraf Baandh Leta Hai . Uske Baad Prem Alcohol Ki Bottle Leta Hai aur Us Lakdi Ke Muh Par Daal Deta Hai .

Aakhir Me Prem Apni Pocket se Lighter Nikalta Hai aur Us Lakdi Ko Jala Leta Hai .

Prem Car Ke Petrol Intake Cap Ke Pass Jaata Hai aur Usko Open Kar Leta Hai . Fir Prem Thoda sa Dur Jaata Hai aur Wo Lakdi Sidha Uske Andar Fek Deta Hai .

*BOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMM*

Ek Bada Sa Dhamaka Hota Hai Jisme Woh Car Puri Tarah se Tabah Ho Chuki Thi.

Prem : SWAHA !!

*FLASHBACK ENDS* ]


Prem Apne Room Me Aa Jata Hai aur Bed Par Let Jaata Hai .

*Knock* *Knock*

Sheena : Me Andar aajau ??

Prem : Bilkul !

Prem Bed se Khada Ho Jaata Hai .

Sheena : Us Din Ke Baad Hum Mile Hi Nahi !

Prem : Yeah !

Sheena : Tum Achanak se Kaha Chale Gaye The us Din?

Prem : Kuch Jaruri Kaam Tha Isliye Jana Pada !

Sheena aur Prem Baat-chit Kar Rahe The Par Bich Me Hi Aaradhya Waha aa Jati Hai .

Aaradhya : Wo Dadu Aapko Bula Rahe Hai !

Prem : Aaya Me !

Aaradhya : Jaldi Aana !

Aaradhya Waha se Chali Jaati Hai .

Sheena : Mujhe Ye Puchna Tha Ki us Raat Ko Kuch Hua Tha Kya ??

Prem : Oh ! Ofcourse !

Sheena : K..Kya ???

Prem : Aap Bhul Gaye ? Humari Car Ka Accident Ho Gaya Tha , Kuch Logo ne Hume Pakad Liya Tha !

Sheena : Wo Sab Yaad Hai Mujhe ! Uske Baad Hum Ek Choti si Jhopdi Me Gaye The , Uske Baad Kya Hua Mujhe Theek se Yaad Nahi ! Me Jab Subah Uthi Thi To Tum Waha Nahi The Aur Mere Baalo Ki Bhi Choti Bani Huyi Thi !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Haan ! Eventually Aapne Paani Samajh Kar Ek Bottle Me se Sharaab Pi Li Thi ! Wo Bhi Ekdum Strong ! Aur Aapko Chadh Gayi Thi ! Aapki Choti Mene Hi Banayi Thi Aapke Kehne Par , Aur Uske Baad Aap So Gaye The ! That's It !

Sheena : Sharaab ??? Oh..No

Prem : Kabhi Alcohol Ka Sevan Nahi Kiya Aapne ?

Sheena : Nahi !

Prem : Nice ! Karna….It's Not So Bad ! Anyways Baad Me Milte Hai !

*Kuch Der Baad*


Prem Apne Nana se Mil Kar Mahal Ke Baahar aa Jata Hai . Baahar Hi Usko Uske Sahitya Mama Mil Jate Hi Jinki Shaadi Ho Rahi Thi . Prem Unke Pass Ki Chair Par Beth Jata hai .

Prem : Aur Mama….Sab Badhiya !

Sahitya : Tu Kaha Ghum Raha Hai ? Dikha Hi Nahi Mujhe To !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Mera Chodo…Aap Batao ! Abhi Bhi Gao Me Sharaab Pikar Ghumte Rehte Ho Kya ?

Sahitya : ( Smiles ) Panchayat Bahut Hai Tujhe !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Wese Aane Wali Mami Ko To Pata Hai Na Ki Ek Din Aapke Room se 3 Ladkiya Mili Thi Wo Bhi Nagn Avastha Me !

Sahitya : Chup Hoja Bhai ! Gade Murde Mat Ukhaad !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Me To Bas Puch Raha Tha !

Sahitya : ( Smiles ) Tu Bata…..Teri Koyi GF ??

Prem : ( Smiles ) Aapke Jesi Kismat Sab Ki Kaha Hoti Hai

Sahitya : ( Smiles )

Prem : Mujhe Bhi To Photo Dikhao Hone Wali Mami Ka ! Mene To Chehra Hi Nahi Dekha Abhi Tak !

Sahitya : Mera Mobile To Charging Par Rakha Hai ! Aaj Raat Ko Dekh Lena Shaadi Ke Fero Ke Waqt !

Prem : Haan ! Wese Honeymoon Par Kaha Jaane Ka Soch Rahe Ho ?

Sahitya : Baad Me Sochege Wo Toh ! Shayad Switzerland ! Par Baad Me Jaayege , Abhi Nahi !

Prem : Nice ! Wese Wedding To Destinations Bhi Ho Sakti Thi ! Ye Baarat Lekar Jao and All ab To Bahut Purana Style Ho Chuka Hai !

Sahitya : Haan But Ladki Waale Yahi Chahte The aur Tere Nana Bhi Yahi Chahte The ! Chal Tu Taiyar Hoja ! Aadhe Ghante Baar Yaha se 51 Car Niklegi Jane Ke Liye ! Yaha se Pritampura Jaane Me 1 Ghanta To Lag Hi Jayega !

Prem : Haan Me Ready Hokar Aata Hu !

Prem Waha se Khada Hokar Aaram se Pure Mahal Me Ghumne Lag Jaata Hai . Akelapan Sataa Raha Tha Prem Ko Ab . Prem Ghum Raha Tha Waha Bich Me Hi Usko Aaradhya Mil Jaati Hai.

Aaradhya : Ready ?

Prem : Nahi ! Clothes Change Karne Hai !

Aaradhya : To Jaldi Change Karlo !

Prem : Haan !

Aaradhya : Everything Okay ?

Prem : Ofcourse ! Kyu ?

Aaradhya : Tum Apne Aap Me Hi Ghumsum Ho ! Chupchaap Yaha se Waha Ghumte Rehte Ho !

Prem : Nahi Bas Aese Hi ! Anyways Ye Batao Tum Kya Abhi College Me Ho ?

Aaradhya : Nahi ! Meri Graduation Ho Chuki Hai !

Prem : Nice ! To Ab Kya ? Business Ya Job ? Yaa Fir Sidha Haath Peele ?

Aaradhya : Job ! Me Soch Rahi Hu Job Karne Ki ! Par Uske Liye Mujhe Dada , Dadi , Papa aur Mumma Ki Bhi Permission Leni Padegi ! And I'm Sure Wo Allow Nahi Karege But Still Me Apni Puri Koshish Karugi !

Prem : Don't Worry , Me Baat Karuga Unse ! Aur Wo Mujhe Mana Nahi Karege ! But I Think Tum Unko Easily Convince Kar Logi ! Tumhari Eyes Bahut Intimidating Hai ! Kisiki Bhi Aankho Me Aankhe Daal Kar Kuch Kahogi , Wo Chupchaap Haan Bol Dege ! i Bet !

Aaradhya : ( Blushes ) Tumhe Lagta Hai Aesa ?


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Prem : ( Smirks ) Ofcourse ! Chalo Me Aata Hu Kapde Change Karke !

Prem Waha se Apne Room Me Jaane Lagta Hai Parantu Bich Me Hi Prem Ke Mobile Par Call Aane Lagta Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Saans Leta Hu To Mobile Par Call Aane Lag Jaata Hai !

Prem Caller Ka Name Check Karta Hai .

Prem : Shubham Ka Call ???

Prem Call Receive Karta Hai.

*On Call*

Prem : Haan Bhai Shubham ! Koyi Jaruri Khabar ?

Shubham : Woh..Prem…Woh

Prem : Sunayi De Raha Hai…..Behra Nahi Hoon Main

Shubham : AMAN IS NO MORE !!!!!





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