Incest Prem : Hunter or Prey ?

[Blackstar]

Latest Update ~ Update 48

story is currently on a short break because writer is renovating his house and can't been able to sneak out some time to cook here !

 

[Neerav]

Waiting

 

[dhparikh]

waiting for the next update....

 

[Blackstar]

Trivikram ke paas achcha khasa mauka tha Prem ko maar dene ka behosh kerke kursi per baandh ker rakkha tha kia soch ker aisa kia tha kuch hasil nahi huwa uske saare bande maare gaye or khud bandha pada h
Yeh saala kon si jagah h Jo Haven bhi h or Hell bhi
Baherhal dekhte h ab Prem kia karega or kaise in sabko waha nikalega
Badhiya zabardast shaandar update

Thanks Bhai ! Trivikram Kuch Janna Chahta Tha Prem aur Amanda Se ! Wese Wo Baat Update 41 Me Pata Chal Hi Jayegi !

 

[Blackstar]

Update 39

Pay the Price and Fuck the Shitt

[ Amanda : Me Waha 4 Saal Pehle Gayi Thi ! Par Waha Jaane Me Aur Bhejne Me Farq Hota Hai ! Ye Samajh Lo Ki…

Prem : Kya ??

Amanda : YOUR FRIENDS ARE IN HELL NOW ! THEY WILL BE RIPPED APART !!! ]

Ab Aage :

[ English Conversation Translated into Hinglish ]

Prem : Mujhe Detail Me Iske Baare Me Batao ! Hume Waha Jaana Padega Jald se Jald !

Amanda : Waha Ek Pass Ki Price £11 Million Hai ! Ye Pass Har Kisi Ko Bhi Nahi Milte ! Unhe Hi Milte Hai Jo Mafia Se Connected Hote Hai !

Prem : Purchase It and Make it Two !

Amanda : OK !

Nat : Ab Tum Jao aur Apna Check Up Karwao !

Prem : Haan ! Me Abhi Aaya !

Prem Waha se Apne Medication Ke Liye Chala Jaata Hai . Uske Shareer Par Bhi Bahut Chot Lagi Huyi Thi.

Nat : Hum Sahi The ! Aur Hum Sahi Insaan Ke Saath Hai !

Amanda : Haan !


*20 Minutes Later*

Prem Apna Medication Karwa Kar Waapas se Mamta Ke O.T. Ke Baahar aa Jata Hai .

Prem : ( Mann me ) Ab Mujhe Bechaini Ho Rahi Hai ! Mamta Ke Dada Ko Kya Jawaab Duga Mai Agar…

Nat : Kya Soch Rahe Ho ??

Prem : Kuch Nahi !

Karib 15 Minutes Baad 2 Doctors O.T Se Baahar Aate Hai . Unke Baahar Aate Hi Prem Unka Rasta Rok Deta Hai .

[ English Conversation Translated into Hinglish ]

Prem : Doctor ! Kesi Hai Woh ! Is She….

Doctor : Blood Loss Bahut Zyada Ho Chuka Tha ! Agar Aap 10 Minute Bhi Late Hote To Baat Shayad Kuch Aur Hoti ! She is Alive !

Prem : ( Relieved ) Thank God !

Doctor : Meet Me in My Cabin After 15 Minutes !

Prem : OK Doctor ! Aapka Name ?

Doctor : Dr. D'Souza !

Prem : Me Abhi Usse Mil Sakta Hu !

Doctor : No ! Jab Tak Patient Ko Hosh Nahi Aa Jata Tab Tak Aap Nahi Mil Sakte ! Kuch Hi Der Me Unko Hosh Aa Jayega And Also She Will Be Under Observation For Atleast 24 Hours !

Woh Doctor Waha se Chala Jaata Hai .

Prem : PHEW !!!

Prem Ke Sar Se Ek Bahut Bada Bojh Utar Gaya Tha . Agar Mamta Ko Kuch Ho Jata To Prem Apne Aap Ko Kabhi Maaf Nahi Kar Paata Aur Puri Zindagi Bas Guilt Me Jeeta Rehta .

Amanda : Abhi Me Chalti Hu ! Me Celestial Park Jaane Ka Intezaam Karti Hu !

Prem : Haan ! Nat Tum Bhi Jao !

Nat : Nahi ! Me Hoon Yaha Tumhare Saath !

Prem : Abhi Tum Jao ! Kuch Der Me Milta Hu Tum Dono Se !

Nat : Theek Hai Tum Keh Rahe Ho Toh !

Amanda Nat Ke Saath Waha se Chali Jaati Hai .

Prem Kuch Der Baad Dr. D'Souza Ke Cabin Ke Baahar Pahuch Jaata Hai .

*Knocks*

Prem : May i Come !

Dr. D'Souza : Yes !

Prem Room Ke Andar Jaata Hai aur Dr. Ke Saamne Baith Jaata Hai .

D'Souza : Mr…

Prem : Prem !

D'Souza : Yeah So Mr. Prem ! Patient Ke Dono Adjoins Me Faraq Pada Hai ! Lagta Hai Wo Kisi Uchi Jagah se Neeche Geeri Hai !

Prem : Ji Doctor !

D'Souza : Aapki Wife Hai ??

Prem : Yes Doctor ! She's My Wife !

D'Souza : Unke Dono Haatho Par Plaster Lagana Padega ! Unke Dono Haath Ab Kaam Nahi Karege !

Prem : ( Shocks ) Kyaa ???

D'Souza : But The Good Thing is That Ye Permanent Nahi Hai ! Par Kab Tak Hai Woh Hum Nahi Keh Sakte ! Wo Patient Ke Recovery Speed Par Depend Karta Hai !

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Aahh Shittt !!!!!

D'Souza : Agar Thoda Bhi Upar Niche Kahi Hota To Sidha Head Damage Hota Aur Hum Kuch Nahi Kar Paate ! Patient Ka Dhyaan Rakhna ! Unke Per Ki Haddi Bhi Chot Aayi Hai Par Kuch Serious Nahi Hai ! But Thode Din Chalna Avoid Karana ! Kuch Din Unko Abse Bed Rest Hi Karne Dena !

Prem : OK Doctor !

D'Souza : Ek Mahine Baad Waapas Aakar Milna Mujhse !

Prem : OK Doctor !

Doctor Prem Ko Mamta Ki Reports De Deta Hai . Prem un Reports Ko Lekar Baahar aa Jata Hai aur Hospital Ka Final Bill Pay Karne Ke Liye Chala Jaata Hai . Tabhi Prem Ke Mobile Par Nat Ka Call Aata Hai .

*On Call*

Prem : Haa Nat !

Amanda : Prem ! Pass Arrange Kar Diye Hai Maine !

Prem : OK ! Yaha se Waha Pahuchne Me Kitna Time Lagega ?

Amanda : Maybe Around 8 Hours in My Jet !

Prem : OK ! We Will Abroad After 3-4 Hours !

Amanda : OK !

*Call Cuts*

Mamta Ke Dono Haatho Par Plaster Lag Chuke The . Uske Baad Mamta Ko O.T. se Personal Ward Room Me Shift Kara Dete Hai . Mamta Bed Par Behoshi Ki Haalat Par Leti Huyi Thi To Wahi Prem Uske Pass Me Ek Chair Par Betha Hua Tha .

Prem Bas Mamta Ke Hosh Me Aane Ka Wait Kar Raha Tha .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Mujhe Jald se Jald Vrinda Di aur Baaki Sabhi Ko Bachana Padega ! Usse Pehle Bas Jaldi se Mamta Ko Hosh Aa Jaye !

*Call Rings*

Prem Apni Pocket se Mobile Nikalta Hai aur Caller Name Dekh Call Pick Karta Hai .

*On Call*

Prem : Haan Prerna !

Prerna : Kese Hai Aap ?

Prem : Me Bahut Acha ! Tu Bata Tu Kesi Hai ?

Prerna : Bhaiya Aap Kaha Hai ??

Prem : Bangaluru ! Chal Bye ! Goodnight !

Prerna : Rukiye Zara ! Mujhe Aapse Kuch Baat Karni Hai !

Prem : Haa Bol !

Prerna : Mujhe Pata Chala Aman Bhaiya Ke Baare Me !

Prem : Kese ?? I Mean Ki Tujhe Kisne Bataya ?

Prerna : Wo Kimaya Ne !

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Uska Bhai Bhi To Meri Class Me Tha ! Ye Me Kese Bhul Gaya !

Prerna : Bhaiya ??

Prem : Haan ! Mujhe Bhi Pata Chala !

Prerna : To Aap Bengalore Chale Gaye , Ye Baat Mujhe Kuch Hazam Nahi Huyi !

Prem : Me Aman Ke Funeral Me Jaane Ke Baad Bengaluru Gaya ! Aur Tu Ab Apni College Ki Studies Par Dhyaan De…Yaha Waha Dimaag Ko Faaltu Me Kharch Mat Kar !

Prerna : Umm…OK ! Aapne Dinner Kiya ?

Prem : Haan ! Chal Bye !

Prerna : Bye ! Good Night !

*Call Cuts*

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Kimaya ! Me To Bhul Hi Gaya To Ki Kimaya Bhi Exist Karti Hai !

Prem Wahi Betha Hua Tha Mamta Ke Pass . Kuch Der Baad Ek Doctor Kuch Nurse Ke Saath Andar aata Hai aur Mamta Ko Check Karne Lagta Hai .

Doctor : Lagta Hai Inki Body Kabhi Bhi Pehle Insulin Nahi Lagi Hai ! Inki Body Thik se Co-operate Nahi Kar Rahi Hai !

Prem : Anything Serious ???

Doctor : Not Much ! Inko Hosh Me Aane Me Zyada Samay Lag Sakta Hai ! Maybe 20 - 30 Hours !

Prem : ( Shocks ) 20-30 Hours ???

Doctor : Yeah ! Aksar Aesa Hota Hota Hai Jab Body Co-Operate Karne Me Samay Lagaati Hai !

Prem : OK Doctor !

Woh Doctor aur Nurses Waha se Chali Jaati Hai .

Prem Apna Mobile Nikalta Hai Aur Nat Ko Call Karta Hai

*On Call*

[ English Conversation Translated into Hinglish ]

Nat : Hello !

Prem : Amanda Ko Call Dena

Nat : Haan !

Nat Mobile Amanda Ko De Deti Hai .

Amanda : Haan Prem !

Prem : Hum Jald Hi Celestial island Ke Liye Nikalte Hai !

Amanda : OK !

Prem : Nat Ko Call Do !

Amanda Nat Ko Mobile Deti Hai .

Nat : Haan Prem !

Prem : Kal Ek Baar Hospital Me Aakar Supervise Karlena Mamta Par !

Nat : Theek Hai ! Mamta !

Prem : Nice !

*Call Cuts*

Prem Mamta Ke Pass Jaata Hai aur Uske Sar Par Haath Ferta Hai .

Prem : Take Care !

*1 Hour Later*

Prem Apne Haatho Me Cold Coffee Liye Hotel Me Amanda Ke Saath Baitha Hua Tha.

[ English Conversation Translated into Hinglish ]

Prem : To Ab Mujhe Detail Me Batao ! Ye Celestial Island Kya Hai ??

Amanda : Celestial Island Billionairs Ke Liye Hai Jaha Har Saal October Me Unke Liye Pleasure Ki Cheeze Hoti Hai ! Waha Unke Liye Dusre Insaano Ko Zinda Kaata Jaata Hai , Ladkiyo Ki Dhajjiya Udaayi Jaati Hai ! Waha Insaan Ko Zinda Jala Dete Hai ! Jo Log Bhi Pass Kharidkar Aate Hai , Unko Bada Mazza Aata Hai ! Aesa Samajhlo Ki Jo Log Waha Bandhi Bankar Lejaye Jaate Hai Wo Ameer Logo Ki Haath Ki Cutputliya Ban Jaate Hai ! Wo Bolege Beth , To Bethna Padega ! Wo Bolege Mar , To Marna Padega !

Prem : Oh ! To Ab Me Apne Friends Ko….

Amanda : Nahi Bacha Paoge ! Ek Baar Waha Jisko Pakad Kar Leke Chale Jaate Hai , Wo Waapas Kabhi Zinda Nahi Laut Ta ! Tum Kuch Bhi Karlo , Hum Unhe Nahi Bacha Sakte !

Prem : Kyaa ??????? I Mean Agar Hum Unko Waha se Bhaga De Yaa Fir Hum Unpar Attack Karde To ?

Amanda : Not Possible ! Waha Un Logo Ke Pass Advanced Weapons Hai , Unse Hum Bhid Hi Nahi Sakte ! Aur Unka Waha se Bhagane Ke Baare Me To Soch Hi Nahi Sakte !

Prem : Yeh Har Saal October Me Hi Hota Hai ?

Amanda : Haan !

Prem : Ye Sab Organize Kon Karata Hai ?

Amanda : Wese To Bahut Log Hai Jo Milkar Karwate Hai ! Par Un Sab Me se Jo Main Hai Woh Hai The Devil of UK ! Mr. Cooper Capsey !

Prem : Cooper Capsey ! Ye Name Kahi Suna Hua Hai ! The Devil of UK ???

Amanda : Haan ! The Devil of UK Kehte Hai Usko !

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Iska Name Kaha Suna Tha Mene ? Haan Yaad Aaya !

Amanda : Mujhe Nahi Lagta Hum Celestial Park Jaakar Kuch Kar Sakege !

Prem : Ek to Ye Island Hai To Island Bolo !

Amanda : Hai Island Par Isko Celestial Park Hi Bolte Hai !

Prem : OK ! Wese Mere Pass Ek Plan Hai !

Amanda : Kesa Plan ?

Prem : Bas Kisise Kuch Request Karni Hai !

Amanda : Haa Waise Waha Ka Bhi Ek Dress Code Hai ?

Prem : Dress Code ! Nice !

Amanda : Dress Code Ye Hai Ki Koyi Kapde Allowed Nahi Hai ! Totally Nude !

Prem : Nice ! Ab Yaha se Mai Massachusetts Jaauga !

Amanda : Massachusetts ! Kyu ?

Prem : Me Tumhare Private Jet se Jaa Raha Hu ! Ho Sakta Hai Ki Tumhe Yaha se Sidha Celestial Park Jaana Pade ! So Tum Apne Dusre Jet Ko Yaha Mangwa Lena !

Amanda : OK !

Prem : So How's all Going in Mexico ??

Amanda : All Good ! Me Tumhe Monthly Accounts Ki Report Send Kar Dugi !

Prem : Good ! Wese Aajkal Tum Aur Bhi Zyada Hot Hoti Jaa Rahi Ho !

Amanda : ( Smiles ) Roj Yoga Kar Rahi Hu !

Prem : Nice !

Amanda : Tum Ab Achanak se Thoda Relax Lag Rahe Ho ! Lagta Hai Tumhare Dimaag Me Koyi Acha sa Plan Aaya Hai Jisko Lekar Tum Sure Ho Ki Work Karega !

Prem : Let's Hope So ! But Wait There is Some Change in The Plan ! Me Massachusetts Nahi Jaa Raha Hu !

Amanda : Par Abhi To Tumne Bola Ki Tum Jaa Rahe Ho !

Prem : Par Ab Nahi Jaa Raha ! Me Try Karta Hu Call Karge Sabkuch Sort Ho Jaaye Pehle , Agar Nahi Hota To Fir Jauga Massachusetts !

Amanda : OK !

Prem : Give Me Some Privacy !

Amanda : OK ! Me Nat Ke Suite Me Jaati Hu !

Prem : Nice !

Amanda : Aur Tum Zara Apna Dimaag Shaant Rakho ! Pehle Bola Ki Celestial Park Chalo , Uske Baad Bola Massachusetts Chalo aur Uske Baad Dono Jagah Cancel !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Thanks For The Advice ! Gate Us Taraf Hai !

Amanda us Room se Chali Jaati Hai . Prem Apna Mobile Nikalta Hai aur Kate Ko Call Karta Hai .

*On Call*

[ English Conversation Translated into Hinglish ]

Prem : ( Smiles ) Hello Babygirl !

Kate : ( Smiles ) Hello Cutiepie ! Aakhir Yaad Aa Hi Gayi Tumhe Meri !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Tumhe Thodi Na Bhul Sakta Hu Mai !

Kate : Mujhe Laga Kahi Bhul Hi To Nahi Gaye !



Prem : Acha Listen ! Mujhe Tumhari Ek Madad Chahiye !

Kate : ( Smiles ) Tabhi Me Sochy Ki Ye Babygirl Kyu Bol Rahe Ho ? Wese Itna Buttering Kiske Liye ?

Prem : Mere 4 Friends Kidnap Ho Gaye aur Wo Sidha Celestial Park Aka Celestial Island Par Pahucha Diye Gaye Hai !

Kate : Oh ! Now I Got It ! Celestial Park ! Mujhe Pata Hai Iske Baare Me ! My Father Runs It !

Prem : Isliye Mujhe Tumhari Madad Chahiye Isme !

Kate : Sorry Prem But Tumhe To Pata Hai , Me Apne Pita Ke Saath Zyada Ache Terms Par Nahi Hu ! Isliye Apni Family se Alag Akeli Rehti Hu !

Prem : Please Kate ! Please!

Kate : OK !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Nice ! Call Your Father ! Me Tumhe Un Chaaro Ki Picture Send Karta Hu !

Kate : Wait ! Mera Pita se Aese Baat Nahi Ho Paayegi ! Unse Sidha Jaakar Milna Hi Padega !

Prem : OK To Jao !

Kate : is Month Me To Wo Celestial Park Me Hoge ! Wahi Jaana Hoga ! Me Waha Jaati Hu Through Chopper ! I Would Suggest Tum Bhi Waha aa Jao !

Prem : Yeah ! OK ! Tunhare Pass Waha Ke Passes…..

Kate : Mujhe Uski Zarurat Nahi ! Me Kate Cooper Hu !

Prem : Nice ! Me Abhi Yaha se Celestial Park Ke Liye Nikalta Hu ! Wese Tum Sure Ho na Tumhare Dad Wahi Hoge !

Kate : 101% !

Prem : Good ! Bye !

*Call Cuts*

Prem : ( Mann Me ) I Hope Wo Log Safe Hoge !

Prem Nat Ko Call Kar Waapas Amanda Ko Is Room Me Bula Leta Hai . Jald Hi Amanda Prem Ke Pass aa Jati Hai .

Amanda : Ho Gayi Private Baat !

Prem : Yeah ! Hum Abhi Celestial Park Ke Liye Nikal Rahe Hai !

Amanda : Sure ?

Prem : 101 % ! Aur Tum Ek Mobile Lelo !

Amanda : Tumhe Pata Hai na….

Prem : I Know ! Par Sirf Celestial Park Ke Liye Hi !

Amanda : OK !

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*13 Hours Later*

Prem aur Amanda Celestial Park Pahuch Chuke The . Jet Ke Andar Hi Amanda Ke Kehne Par Prem Aur Amanda Dono Nange Ho Chuke The . Island Par Land Hote Hi Waha Kuch Log Guns Ke Saath Un Dono Ke Pass Aa Jaate Hai .

Prem Ke Liye Ye Naya Tha Par Amanda Ye Sabhi Protocols Jaanti Thi . Wo Log Aakar Dono Ke Pass Check Karte Hai aur Dono Ko Greet Karte Hai .

Amanda Prem Ko Celestial Park Ke Andar Lekar Jaane Lagti Hai .

Prem : Mujhe Jetlag Ho Raha Hai Bahut Bura Waala ! Waha se Nikla Tha Tabhi Andhera Tha Aur Yaha Bhi Land Kiye To Andhera Hi Hai !

Amanda : Mujhe To Ab Aadat Ho Chuki Hai ! Me To Retire Hone Ki Soch Rahi Hu !

Prem : Tum Abhi 30 Saal Ki Bhi Nahi Huyi Ho ! Itni Jaldi Retire Ho Jaugi To Saara Kaam Kon Sambhalega !

Amanda : Tum Bas Files Hi Dekhte Raho aur Orders Dete Raho , Onground Mat Jao ! Hein ?

Prem : Let's Change The Topic ! Mujhe Thoda Ajeeb Lag Raha Hai Aese Nange Yaha Khade Hone Me !

Amanda : Kyu ? Me Pehli Baar Thodi Hi Tumhe Nanga Dekh Rahi Hu !

Prem : Par Me Roz Ek Island Par Nanga Nahi Ghumta Hu !

Amanda : Baaki Sabko Bhi Nanga Dekhkar Normal Lagega Tumhe !

Prem : Dekhte Hai !

Prem Ne Apne Haath Me Hi Mobile Ko Pakad Rakha Tha . Uske Ek Haath Me Pass Tha Aur Dusre Haath Me Mobile .

Prem Mobile se Kate Ko Call Karta Hai .

*On Call*

[ English Conversation Translated into Hinglish ]

Prem : Haa Kate ! Kaha Ho ??

Kate : Celestial Park !

Prem : Me Bhi Yaha Pahuch Chuka Hu !

Kate : Volatile Hub Me Aajao !

Prem : Ab Yeh Kaha Hai !

Kate : Kisise Bhi Waha Puchlo ! Wo Bata Dega ! Me Baahar Hi Mil Jaugi Tumhe !

Prem : Nice !

*Call Cuts*

Prem : Yeh Volatile Hub Kaha Hai ?

Amanda : Mujhe Pata Hai Par Waha Entry Allowed Nahi Hai !

Prem : Uski Tension Mat Lo ! Waha Chalo !

Amanda : Sure !

Prem Amanda Ke Saath Jaane Lagta Hai . Wahi Prem Ki Nazar Ek Aadmi Par Padti Hai Jo Khuleaam Ek Ladki Ke Upar Apna Mutra-Visarjan Kar Raha Tha .

Prem : Zindagi Ho To Aesi Ho !

Amanda Prem Ki Nazar Ka Picha Karti Hai .

Amanda : ( Smiles ) Yaha se Jaane Ke Baad Hum Bhi Karege !

Kuch Hi Der Baad Prem aur Amanda Volatile Hub Ke Baahar Pahuch Jaate Hai .



Baahar Hi Kate Mil Jaati Hai. Kate Prem Ke Pass Aakar Uske Gale Lag Jaati Hai aur Usko Lip Par Kiss Karti Hai . Kate Puri Tarah se Nude Nahi Thi . Usne Bikney Pehni Huyi Thi .

[ English Conversation Translated into Hinglish ]

Kate : ( Smiles ) Tum Mujhe Nange Hi Jyada Ache Lagte Ho ! Tumhara Dick Bhi Bahut Zyada Hard Ho Raha Hai ! Wese Andar Bed Bhi Hai !

Prem : Tum Puri Tarah se Nude Nahi Ho ! Ye Dresscode Tum Par Laagu Nahi Hota !

Kate : Nope ! Me Volatile Hub Ki Member Hu ! But Mera Dress Code Yahi Hai ! Bikney !

Amanda : Kate ! Hi !

Kate : Hi ! Amanda ! Right ! Bahut Time Ho Gaya Mile Hue !

Amanda : Yeah ! Me Kese Bhul Gayi Ki Cooper Capsey Ki Daughter Kate Capsey Hai

Kate : Right ! Wese Andar Dad Bhi Hai !

Prem : Tum Mili ?

Kate : Ofcourse ! Dad se Mili ! Apni Dono Sisters se Mili !

Prem : To Chale ?

Kate : Sure Hotty ! But Amanda Sorry But Tumhe Yahi Wait Karna Hoga ! Sirf 1 Guest Hi Allowed Hai

Amanda : Koyi Baat Nahi ! Me Bhi Thoda Ghum Kar Aati Hu Island Par !

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Aaj Ke Liye Bas Itna Hi , Like Karna aur Review Dena Na Bhule . Milte Hai Jald Hi , Tab Tak Ke Liye Cheers

 

[kris123h]

Can you please introduce dolly form last update

 

[Samar_Singh]

Airplane se Jaa Sakte Hai But Fir is Ladki Ka Passport Kaha se Layege ! Isliye Chopper se Jald Hi Mumbai Pahuch Jaayege ,

Nice update....

Lekin ye Jaipur to Mumbai ke liye kab se passport mangne lage

 

[Blackstar]

Can you please introduce dolly form last update

Jald Hi Prem Ka Pura Flashback Show Karuga , Usme Sab Kuch Aa Jayega !

 

[Blackstar]

Nice update....

Lekin ye Jaipur to Mumbai ke liye kab se passport mangne lage

Shitt ! Jab Me Update Likh Raha Tha Tab Mere Dimaag Me Kuch Aur Hi Chal Raha Tha ! Me Jet se US Lejane Ki Soch Raha Tha aur is Beech Sab Kuch Gadbad Kardi ! Finally Someone Noticed , Thanks Bhai !

 

[Samar_Singh]

Shitt ! Jab Me Update Likh Raha Tha Tab Mere Dimaag Me Kuch Aur Hi Chal Raha Tha ! Me Jet se US Lejane Ki Soch Raha Tha aur is Beech Sab Kuch Gadbad Kardi ! Finally Someone Noticed , Thanks Bhai !

Sometimes it happens.....

23 par chhodi thi ye story bich me, usse aage padhi to yahi baat khatki.

Baki jyadatar log sirf main plot ko follow karte hai aur minor details ko jyada dhyan nahi dete to notice nahi karte.

 

[Samar_Singh]

Update 28

Bitch Returns ?????

[ Pratibha : ( Blushes ) I Mean ! Jab Woh Mujhe Reunion Par Waapas Dikha Tha , Tab Me Thoda Awestruck Ho Gayi Thi ! Mujhe Laga Nahi Tha Mai Prem Ko Waapas Dekhugi !

Neelam : Anyways ! I Hope Tum Dono Saath Aa Jao ! Tujhse Se Jyada Me Prem Ke Liye Khush Hogi ! ]

Ab Aage :

Prem Filhaal Ek Room Me Khada Hua Tha , Uske Saath Hi Paridhi , Palak , Selva Aur Vrinda Bhi us Room Me Maujood The .

Prem Mamta Ko Andar Lekar Aa Chuka Tha aur Sabse Milwakar Usko Ek Room Me Bitha Kar is Room Me Aa Jata Hai .

Teeno Ke Mann Me Sawaal The Jo Unke Chehre Par Saaf Jhalak Rahe The .

Palak : Kon Hai Yeh ?

Prem : Bataya To Tha Abhi Baahar ! Mamta ! Kuch Din Ab Yeh Yahi Rahegi !

Paridhi : Wo Tumhe Swami Kyu Keh Rahi Thi ? Tumne Name Change Kar Diya ?

Prem : Mene Koyi Name Change Nahi Kiya ! Mera Name Prem Rajveer Mehra Hi Tha , Hai Aur Rahega ! Ab Tum Log Puri Baat Suno Meri !

Vrinda : Me Batati Hu !

Vrinda Saari Baat Teeno Ko Batati Hai . Yahi Ki Kis Haalat Me Prem Ki Mamta Se Shaadi Huyi.

Prem : Filhaal Me Waapas Rajasthan Jaa Raha Hu ! Uske Baad Aakar isko Divorce De Duga aur Waapas Chod Kar Aa Jauga ! Tab Tak Bas Wo Tumhare Saath Rahegi !

Palak : Prem Mujhe Tumse Kuch Jaruri Baat Karni Hai ! Hum Kab Tak Yahi Haath Par Haath Dhare Baithe Rahege ???

Prem : Paridhi ! Mene Kisi Se Contact Kiya Hai ! Uske India Aane Ke Baad Hi Hum Koyi Dusra Step Le Sakte Hai !

Palak : Aakhir Kaun Hai Woh ?

Prem : Wo Tumhe Jald Hi Pata Chal Jayega ! Aur Tum Log Apne Haath Paav Thande Mat Padne Dena ! Humesha Satark Rehna ! Is Mension se Jyada Baahar Mat Nikalna !

Selva : Wese Tum Kya Abhi Waapas Jaa Rahe Ho ???

Prem : Abhi Raat Jyada Beet Chuki Hai !

Vrinda : Ab Sab So Jaate Hai ! Prem Tum Jao Mamta Ke Pass !

Palak : KYU ????

Vrinda : ( Smiles ) Mamta Ke Liye To Wo Uska Pati Hai Na ! Wo To Chahegi Na Uska Pati Uske Saath Soye Raat Ko !

Paridhi : ( Smiles )

Prem : Bas Kuch Din Ki Mehmaan Hai Woh !

Prem Waha se Upar Ek Room Me Aa Jata Hai Jaha Mamta Thi . Prem Room Me Aakar Gate Band Kar Deta Hai .

Prem : Sab Kuch Badhiya ! Koyi Dikkat To Nahi?

Mamta : ( Niche Dekhte Hue ) Ji Nahi !

Prem : Good !

Mamta : Aap Bura Na Mane To Aapse Ek Baat Puchu ?

Prem : Jaroor ! Jo Puchna Hai Pucho !

Mamta : Ye Aapka Ghar Hai ?

Prem : Bilkul ! Ye Ghar Mera Hai ! Abhi Tum Jisse Mili Wo Sabhi Mere Dost Hai !

Mamta : Aapka Pariwaar ??

Prem : Hmm ! Samajh Gaya ! Chalo Me Tumhe Apne Bare Me Batata Hu ! Mere Maa aur Papa Bahut Pehle Hi Is Duniya se Chale Gaye ! Me Filhaal Ek Company Me Job Karta Hu ! Ye Sabhi Log Bhi Yahi Rehte Hai ! Aur Kuch ?

Mamta : Ji Nahi !

Prem : Good ! Ab So Jao Bina Zyada Soche !

Mamta : Ji Swami !

Prem : Acha Meri Baat Suno ! Me Kal Kuch Kaam se Jaa Raha Hu ! Ek Hafte Baad Hi Aa Pauga ! Theek Hai !

Mamta : Ji Swami !

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Kuch Zyada Hi Submissive Hai !

*Next Day*

Prem Subah Jaldi 4 Baje Uth Jaata Hai . Prem Bed se Khada Hokar Washroom Me Chala Jata Hai aur Fresh Hokar Baahar aa Jata Hai . Fir Wo Bathroom Me Jaakar Shower Le Leta Hai aur Baahar Aa Kar Room Ke Baahar Chala Jata Hai .

Prem Niche aa Jata Hai Hall Me . Hall Me Hi Use Paridhi Mil Jaati Hai .

Paridhi : Good Morning !

Prem : Morning ! Uth Gayi Jaldi ! Good !

Paridhi : Ye To Daily Habit Hai !

Prem : Nice !

Paridhi : Mai Coffee Banakar Laati Hu My Dear Married Boyfriend !

Prem : ( Smiles ) Yeah ! Wese Tum Bahut Beautiful Lag Rahi !

Paridhi : ( Smiles ) Thanks !

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Location : Unknown Location

Subah Ki Pehli Kiran Nikal Chuki Thi . Khidki Me se Surya Ki Kiran Sidha Ek Aurat Le Chehre Par Padti Hai .

Kuch Hi Pal Me Uski Neend Khul Jaati Hai aur Wo Uth Kar Baith Jaati Hai . Wo Kaal-Kothri Me Baithi Huyi Thi . Usme Hone Ke Bawjood Bhi Uske Hath Bandhe Hue The .

Pure Din Uske Haath Bandhe Hue Rehte The Siwaye Tab Jab Ek Daasi Aakar Usko Gusalkhane Me Lekar Jaaye .

Kuch Hi Der Me Kaal Kothri Ka Gate Khulta Hai aur Usme Ek Daasi Aati Hai .

Prerna: Aaj Itni Jaldi Kyu Aa Gayi ?

Daasi : Bas Aese Hi ! Mujhe Aapse Kuch Baat Karni Hai !

Prerna : Kaho !

Daasi : Aap Kab Tak Aese Hi Yaha Pratiksha Karti Rahegi ? Kitne Varsh Bit Chuke Hai !

Prerna : Mujhe Pura Vishwaas Hai Mere Pati Jarur Aayege !

Daasi : Me Roj Prathna Karti Hu Ki Wo Jarur Aaye ! Wese Aapne Kabhi Apne Pariwaar Ke Bare Me Nahi Bataya ?

Prerna : ( Smiles ) Mera Pariwaar ! Mere Pariwaar Me Mere Pati Hai , Mera Ek Beta aur Ek Beti Hai !

Daasi : Wo To Ab Bahut Bade Ho Gaye Hoge !

Prerna : Haan ! Jab Aakhri Baar Dekha Tha Tab Mera Beta Karib 2-3 Saal Ka Tha aur Meri Beti 6-7 Mahino Ki !

Daasi : Agar Aap Unse Kabhi Mili To Aap Pehchan Paayegi ?

Prerna : Mere Bete Ki Aankhe Bilkul Mujhpar Gayi Hai ! Dekhte Hi Pehchaan Lugi !

Daasi : Aapke Baccho Ka Name Kya Hai ?

Prerna : ( Smiles ) Mera Bete Ka Name SHUBHAM aur Beti Ka Name PIHU Hai !

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Sabhi Log Uth Chuke The . Prem Filhaal Apne Room Me Tha Jaha Mamta Bhi Thi . Prem Waapas Jaane Ke Liye Ready Ho Gaya Tha . Usne Sabhi Preparation Pehle Hi Karli Thi .

Prem : Apna Dhyaan Rakhna ! Jo Bhi Chahiye Ho Bina Jhijhak Ke Kisi Se Bhi Maang Lena !

Mamta : Ji !

Prem : Good ! Ab Me Chalta Hu ! Kuch Din Baad Milege Ab !

Prem Waha se Niche aa Jata Hai . Prem Ke Piche Piche Mamta Bhi Uske Saath Aa Jati Hai . Vrinda Bhi Ready Ho Kar Niche Hi Khadi Thi .

Vrinda : Chale !

Prem : Sure !

Paridhi : Dhyaan Rakhna Apna !

Prem : You Too ! Take Care of Everyone Including New Lady ! Make Sure She Doesn't Feel Lonely !

Paridhi : Sure !

Prem Kya Bolta Hai Woh Mamta Ko Kuch Bhi Samajh Nahi Aata .

Prem aur Mamta Waha se Baahar Aa Jate Hai. Vrinda Ne Pehle Hi Cab Book Karwali Thi. Prem aur Vrinda Waha Se Cab Me Baith Jaate Hai .

*2.5 Hour Later*

Prem aur Vrinda Jaipur Chopper se Pahuch Jaate Hai . Vrinda aur Prem Waha se Vrinda Ki Car Me Baith Jaate Hai .

Prem Car Drive Karne Lagta Hai aur Devgarh Ke Liye Nikal Jaata Hai .

Vrinda : Jaldi Chalana !

Prem : Ofcourse !

Vrinda : Wese Tumhe To Pata Hi Nahi Hoga Ki Konsi Ceremony Kab Hai ?

Prem : Ye To Pata Hai Ki Shaam Ko Sangeet Ceremony Hai !

Vrinda : Good ! By The Way My Body is Craving Now !

Prem : Kisi Restaurant Par Le Leta Hu !

Vrinda : Bhookh Nahi Lag Rahi Hai Mujhe ! Me Dusri Craving Ke Bare Me Baat Kar Rahi Hu !

Prem : I See !

Vrinda : Kya I See ?? Aaj Ke Aaj Chahiye Mujhe !

Prem : ( Smiles ) OK Dii !

Vrinda : Aur Abse Tum Mujhe Dii Nahi Kahoge Jab Hum Akele Ho !

Prem : Aadat Ho Chuki Hai !

Vrinda : To Badalo Ab Aadat !

Prem : Nice ! Aree Haan ! Wo Diyu Ka Kya Hua ? Usne Kisiko Kuch Bataya To Nahi ? Warna Fir Prepared Hokar Jaate Hai !

Vrinda : Me Jab Tak Waha Thi Tab Tak To Kisiko Nahi Bataya Tha Aur Mujhe Nahi Lagta Wo Kisiko Kuch Batayegi !

Prem : Nice ! But Still Gate Lock Kar Dena Chahiye Tha Hume ! Diyu To Chalo Meri Behen Hai , Wo Kisiko Kuch Nahi Batayegi ! Mujhe Uspar Thoda Bharosa Hai !

Vrinda : Bas Thoda Bharosa ?

Prem : Jyada Bharosa Sa To Mai Apne Aap Par Bhi Nahi Karta ! But I Trust You More Than Anybody ! Ek Aap Aur Dusra Aman !

Vrinda : Thanks !

Prem : Uske Baad Mujhe Sabse Jyada Trust Meri Mom , Diyu aur Prerna Par Hai ! Uske Baad Ellisa and Kate Par Hai ! Uske Baad Jitne Bhi Log Hai Wo Sabhi Same Bracket Me Aate Hai !

Vrinda : Mujhe Laga Tum Paridhi , Palak aur Selva Ka Name Bhi Loge !

Prem : Yeah ! Wo Bhi Hai Wese To ! Par Dii Insaan Ko Badalne Me Kabhi Der Nahi Lagti !

Vrinda : Kya Dii ?? Abhi To Bola No Dii ! Only Vrinda ! Bolo Vrinda !

Prem : ( Smiles ) OK ! Vrinda Darling !

Vrinda : ( Smiles ) Better !

Prem : Nice !

Vrinda : Wese Me Aese Hi Soch Rahi Thi ! Tum U.S. Gaye aur Kisi Ke Liye Bhi Koyi Gift Nahi Laaye !

Prem : Bhul Gaya Tha ! Aap Bhi Kya Purani Baate Lekar Baith Gayi !

Vrinda : As You Say !

Prem : Nice !

Kuch Hi Ghante Baad Dono Devgarh Pahuch Jaate Hai .

Vrinda : Kaha The Ye Puchege To Kya Kahoge ?

Prem : Sabhi Log Busy Hoge Shaadi Ki Rasmo Me !

Dono Mahal Pahuch Jaate Hai . Prem Car Ko Park Kar Leta Hai aur Dono Sath Me Andar Jaate Hai .

Ghar Ke Sabhi Log Wahi The . Saare Mehmaan Wahi The . Bade Se Hall Me Kayi Sare Log The . Kayi Mehmaan Aur Servants The .

Main Gate se Kayi Mehmaan Aa Rahe The Jiski Wajah se Kisi Ki Khaas Nazar Nahi Jaati Prem aur Vrinda Par .

" Bhaiyaaa !!!! "

Prem aur Vrinda Aage Jaa Hi Rahe The Tabhi Piche Se Aawaz Sun Wo Ruk Kar Piche Mud Jaate Hai .

Prem : Diyu ! All Good !

Diya Aakar Prem Ko Hug Kar Leti Hai .

Prem : ( Diya Ko Alag Karte Hue ) All Good !

Diya : ( Gusse Me ) PEHLE AAP YE BATAIYE KI AAP KAHA GAYE THE ?????

Prem : ( Mann Me ) Iski Volume To Kuch Jyada Hi Badh Rahi Hai Aaj Kal !

Prem : Wo Elon Musk Ke Pass Gaya Tha , Party Rakhi Thi Usne , Joe Biden Ke Resignation Dene Par !

Diya : BATAIYE NA !!!

Prem : Kaam Se Gaya Tha Diyu !

Diya : Kesa Kaam ???

Prem : ( Rant ) Hota Hai Kaam ! Sab Cheeze Batane Ke Liye Nahi Hoti ! I Have My Own Life !

Diya : ( Gusse Me ) Par Batakar To Jaa Sakte The ???

Prem : Agli Baar Bata Kar Jauga Diyu ! Relax !

Diya : Hmph !! OK ! Ab Aap Jaakar Ready Ho Jaiye , Traditional Dress Pehen Lijiye ! Me Select Kar Ke Du Aapko ?

Prem : Nahi Chalega ! Wo Mai Karluga !

Diya: Aap Jaakar Mom Se Mil Lena!

Prem : Haan ! Sare Log Hai Kaha ?

Diya : Kuch Log Yahi Wahi Hoge ! Aur Kuch Log Dance Practice Kar Rahe Hai ! Aaj Sangeet Hai Na !

Prem : Nice !

Prem aur Vrinda Waha se Chale Jate Hai . Prem Apne Room Me Aa Jata Hai aur Gate Lock Kar Deta Hai . Prem Apne Bade se Bag Ke Pass Jaata Hai Aur Use Kholta Hai .

Prem Usme se Sare 1 Debit Card aur 1 Credit Card Nikal Kar Table Par Rakh Deta Hai Aur Usme Se Kapde Nikalkar Bag Ko Waapas Bandh Karke Rakh Deta Hai .

Prem Fir Apne Kapde Change Kar Deta Hai . Kapde Change Karne Ke Baad Prem Apne Baal Bana Leta Hai Aur Apna Precious Perfume Laga Leta Hai .

Prem : ( Smiles ) Yeah My Boy Prem Rajveer Mehra ! Looking Dope !

Prem Table Par Pade Credit Card aur Debit Card Ko Apni Pocket Me Rakh Reta Hai aur Apne Room Se Baahar aa Jata Hai aur Niche Hall Me Aa Jata Hai .

Niche Hall Me Aate Hi Prem Ko Indravardhan Mil Jaata Hai .

Prem : Nanu !

Indravardhan : Aa Gaye Aap !

Prem : Ji !

Indravardhan : Kaha Gaye The ?

Prem : Kuch Kaam se Gaya Tha ! Jese Hi Khatam Hua Yaha Aa Gaya !

Indravardhan : Hmm ! Hume Aapse Kuch Zaruri Baat Karni Hai !

Prem : Hume Bhi ! Wo Jab Hum Jaipur se Devgarh Aa Rahe The Tab…

Indravardhan : Pata Chala Hume Uske Baare Me ! Aap Nischint Rahiye Police Ki Koyi Problem Nahi Hogi ! Parantu Abse Har Waqt Jab Bhi Mahal se Baahar Jaaye , Bodyguards Saath Me Lekar Jana !

Prem : Ji !

Indravardhan : Aapke Itra Ki Khushboo Waaqai Laajawab Hai !

Prem : Thank You ! Hum Mom Se Mil Kar Aate Hai !

Prem Waha se Sandhya Ke Room Ki Taraf Badhta Hai . Prem Room Ke Andar Aa Jata Hai Par Waha Sandhya Nahi Thi .

Prem Fir Waha se 3rd Floor Par Aa Jata Hai Sandhya Ko Dhundhne Par Waha Bhi Usko Sandhya Nahi Dikhti . Waha Sare Relatives and Guest Ke Room The .

Prem Waapas Aa Raha Tha Tab Uski Nazar Ek Window Par Padti Hai . Window Ke Andar Usko Ek Ladki Dikhti Hai .

Prem : Is Ladki Ko Kahi To Dekha Hai Mene ! Kahi To Dekha Hai !

Prem Niche Hall Me Aa Jata Hai .

Prem : Kaha Dekha Tha ? Fuckkkk Pari !!! Ye Yaha Kese ???????? Socha Nahi Tha Ye Bhi Koyi Relative Ya Guest Hogi ! Ek Second ! I Just Hope Wo Yaha Nahi Ho !

Prem Waha se Hall Me Aa Jata Hai . Hall Me Use Waapas Diya Mil Jaati Hai .

Diya : Bhaiya !

Prem : Haan !

Diya : Kesi Lag Rahi Hu Mai ?

Prem : Nice ! Mom Ko Dekha Kya ??

Diya : Haa Woh To Terrace Par Hai ! Sabhi Bade Log Upar Terrace Par Hi Hai !

Prem : OK !

Diya : Aapne Lunch Kiya ?

Prem : Baad Me Karta Hu !

Diya : Chaliye Dono Saath Me Karte Hai !

Prem : Prerna Kaha Hai ?

Diya : Wo Dance Practice Kar Rahe Hai !

Prem : Nice !

Diya : Bhaiya Aap Din Me Kitni Baar 'Nice' Bolte Hai ?

Prem : Diyu !! Chal Ab ! Lunch Karke Aate Hai ! Vrinda Dii Ko Bhi Bula Lena !

Diya : Vrinda Dii Apne Aap Aa Jayegi ! Hum Dono Chalte Hai ! Baahar Buffet Laga Hua Hai Garden Mai !

Prem : Tu Nahi Bula Rahi Hai To Mai Vrinda Dii Ko Call Kar Deta Hu ! Unhone Bhi Lunch Nahi Kiya !

Prem Apni Pocket Me se Mobile Nikalta Hai Aur Vrinda Ko Call Dial Karta Hai .

' The Number You are Calling is Currently Switched off '

Prem : Ye Dii Bhi Charge Nahi Karti !

Prem Mudta Hai Aur First Floor Par Jaane Ke Liye Badhta Hai . Tabhi Uski Nazar First Floor Ki Balcony Par Padti Hai .

Prem : ( Mann Me ) FCKKKK !!!! KULGAURAVI !!!!!!


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