Incest Prem : Hunter or Prey ?

[Blackstar]

Latest Update ~ Update 48

story is currently on a short break because writer is renovating his house and can't been able to sneak out some time to cook here !

 

[kris123h]

Well the story is great

 

[mistyvixen]

How's Going ? Everything Good ? Share Kar Sakte Ho Agar Kuch Bura Jaa Raha Hai....Wese Bhi Sab Anonymous Hi Hai ! Btw How's The Story Going ?? Ache Mode Par Chal Rahi Hai Yaa Kharaab ? Kharaab Lag Rahi Hai To Khaamiya Jarur Bataye aur Achi Lag Rahi Hai To Aapko Kya Pasand Aa Raha Hai Aur Mai Kya Behtar Kar Sakta Hoon Woh Jarur Bataye ! Cheers

Story looks good but Ranveer Kapoor
I seriously don't like him...khair ache story miss nhi kar skte!

 

[mistyvixen]

Bhai every thing is ok but story ka main caracter bahut jyada uljhan hua lagta hai jaise ki flash back me padha ki hero apne dad ki tarah family se bahut pyar karta hai par kisi bhi caracter ke sath vo sach nahi kehta bhai maa hai hero ki use tak nahi pata bass ye samajh nahi ata

Ayush sir story kaise hai...mazedaar hai kya?
Aapne bahut story padh rkhe hai

 

[ayush01111]

Ayush sir story kaise hai...mazedaar hai kya?
Aapne bahut story padh rkhe hai

Abhi tak to mazedar hai par main caracter ko mai samajh nahi paya hu bahut confusing hai story ka base jabardasti hai story bhi kahi had tak ab samajh aarahi hai bas kuch caracters me local mafia and international mafia ka involment dikhaya hai bhi ne ek nazar me aisa lagta hai hero ek Pokemon caracter tha ditto waise hai jaise opponents waise vo

 

[mistyvixen]

Abhi tak to mazedar hai par main caracter ko mai samajh nahi paya hu bahut confusing hai story ka base jabardasti hai story bhi kahi had tak ab samajh aarahi hai bas kuch caracters me local mafia and international mafia ka involment dikhaya hai bhi ne ek nazar me aisa lagta hai hero ek Pokemon caracter tha ditto waise hai jaise opponents waise vo

Damn. Ek aur confusing story...khair dhayan se padhna padhega...mafia?
Badhiya hai maza aayega.

Pokemon shyad tum Ash ke baat kar rhe ho? Aage kuch updates padh ke dekhti hoon khud

 

[ayush01111]

Damn. Ek aur confusing story...khair dhayan se padhna padhega...mafia?
Badhiya hai maza aayega.

Pokemon shyad tum Ash ke baat kar rhe ho? Aage kuch updates padh ke dekhti hoon khud

Yes that ash only

 

[Blackstar]

Bhai every thing is ok but story ka main caracter bahut jyada uljhan hua lagta hai jaise ki flash back me padha ki hero apne dad ki tarah family se bahut pyar karta hai par kisi bhi caracter ke sath vo sach nahi kehta bhai maa hai hero ki use tak nahi pata bass ye samajh nahi ata

Abhi To Uljhan Start Huyi Bhi Nahi Hai ! Abhi To Bahut Haalat Kharaab Hogi Main Character Ki Bhi . Slogan Bhi Mene Isliye Rakha Hai

" Laude Sabke Lagege , Par Lagega Uske Hi Jo Khada Rahega "

Wo Apne Pariwaar se Pyaar To Bahut Karta Hai Par Sach Nahi Bolta ! Ye Cheez To Iske Genes Me Hi Hai !

 

[Blackstar]

Well the story is great

Tell Me Something I don't know

( What You Liked About it ?? )

 

[Blackstar]

Story looks good but Ranveer Kapoor
I seriously don't like him...khair ache story miss nhi kar skte!

Actually He Was The First Choice But Last Moment Par Ranbir Consider Kar Liya ! I'm not so good at this

 

[mistyvixen]

Actually He Was The First Choice But Last Moment Par Ranbir Consider Kar Liya ! I'm not so good at this

He's actually better...Ranbir just have that playboy image

Aap bhi nhi chaoge ke aapka hero ek playboy ho?