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OK Listen Guys ! Ye Poll Kal Close Ho Jayega ! Uske baad Me Ek Important Question Karuga Poll Me ! Usme Mujhe Aapke Opinion Ki Jarurat Hai Kyunki Wo Fir Bahut Kuch Decide Karega ! Wese To Mujhe Pata Hai Ki Mujhe Kya Karna Hai But Fir Bhi Socha Chalo Ek Baar Aapse Bhi Puch Liya Jaaye ! Aapko Bhi Thoda Acha Lagega !
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Awesome update bhai...Update 15
[ Kritika Ki Aankho Me Aansu Aa Jate Hai . Wo Waha Se Rote Hue Bhaag Jaati Hai . Prem Jaakar Gate Bandh Kar Deta Hai .
Prem Fir se Us Photo Ki Taraf Dekhne Lagta Hai . Har Baar Ki Tarah Is Baar Bhi Us Photo Ko Dekh Prem Ka Saara Gussa Gaayab Ho Gaya . ]
{ P.S.~ Aaram Se Update Padho , Koyi Jaldi Nahi Hai . }
Ab Aage :
Agle 1 Ghante Me Shekhar Ka Ek Aadmi Prem Ko Pick Karne Aa Jata Hai . Woh Waha Se Use Runway Par Lekar Chala Jata Hai . Prem Waha Se Jet Me Baith Jata Hai Aur Jet Takoff Kar Leta Hai . Karib 1 Ghante Me Hi Prem Bangaluru Pahuch Jata Hai .
Jet Land Karne Ke Baad Prem Waha Se Baahar Aa Jata Hai Jaha Pehle Se Hi Uske Liye Car Aayi Huyi Thi Usko Pick Karne Ke Liye . Jet Ka Poilet Bhi Prem Ke Saath Hi Tha .
Prem : Aap Car Se Pahuchiye Hotel ! Thodi Der Ghum Fir Kar Waapas Chale Jayege !
Pilot : OK Sir !
Prem Pilot Ko Us Car Me Bitha Deta Hai Jo Prem Ko Lene Aayi Thi . Fir Prem Waha Se Ek Bag Ke Sath Paidal Hi Baahar Nikalta Hai Aur Apna Mobile Nikalta Hai Aur Selva Ko Call Karta Hai .
*On Call*
Prem : Selva !
Selva : Haa Prem !
Prem : Me Yaha XXXXXXXX Par Hu ! Jaldi Aaja !
Selva : Tum Bangalore Aa Bhi Gaye ?
Prem : Haa Bhai ! Tu Jaldi Aaja !
Selva : Me Aa Raha Hu !
Karib 25 Minute Mai Selva Waha Aa Jata Hai .
[ Character Introduction
Master Kshrujit Bey : [ Dead Now ] Sari Master arts Ki Kalaao Me Maahir Hai Yeh . Fitness Aesi Ki Inki Umra Inke Chehre Se Bilkul Bhi Pata Nahi Chal Paaye . Inhone hi Prem , Selva , Paridhi Aur Palak Ko Martial Arts Me Paarangat Kiya . Duniya Walo Ke Saamne Inka Ek Chota Sa Restaurant Hai Jise Inki Dono Potiya Aur Selva Sath Me Chalate Hai .
Paridhi Bey : [ Code Name Moonlight ] Age 26 . Maa Baap Bachpan Me Hi Gujar Chuke Hai . Bachpan Se Hi Apne Dada Ke Sath Rehti Hai . Hacking Me Master Hai . Aesa Koyi Firewall Nahi Bana Jise Ye Nahi Tod Paayi .
Palak Bey : [ Code Name Sunshine ] Age 26 . Paridhi Ki Twin Sister . Thoda Chulbuzi Mizaaz Hai . Paridhi Se Sirf 2 Minute Choti Hai Yeh . Sniper Me Master Hai .
Selva : [ Code Name Sodhi ] Age 25 . Ye Kshrujit Se Koyi Relation Me Nahi Hai Par Bachpan Se Usi Ke Sath Reh Raha Hai . Na Hi Isko Jyada Bolna Pasand Hai Aur Na Hi Isko Kisi Moh Maaya Me Dilchaspi Hai . Brahmachaari Type Ka Hai .
Inka Ghar Bhi Bada Atrangi Hai . Jitna Ghar Inka Jameen ke Upar Hai Usse Kayi Zyada Bada Zameen Ke Andar Hai . Ek Tarah Se Underground Keh Sakte Hai . Ye Ghar Bangaluru Ke Outskirt Me Hai .
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Selva Prem Ke Pass Aa Jata Hai . Prem Selva Se Gale Milta Hai .
Prem : Ye Sab Kese Hua ?
Selva : Ghar Chalkar Baat Karte Hai !
Prem : Nahi ! Pehle Mujhe Bata Ye Sab Kese Hua ?
Selva : Chennai Se Ek Letter Aaya Tha Master Ko ! Kisiko Nahi Pata Usme Kya Likha Tha ! Shayad Unke Dost Ka Tha ! Me Aur Master Dono Chennai Jaate Hai ! Waha Unke Kayi Dost Mile Hume ! Sabkuch Bahut Acha Chal Raha Tha ! Pehli Baar Mene Master Ko Itna Khush Dekha Tha ! Ek Din Me To Master Ke Friend Ke Ghar Par Hi Tha Par Tab Wo Unke Friend Ke Sath Baahar Gaye Hue . Wo Aakhri Baar Tha Jab Mene Master Ko Dekha Tha . Uske Baad.…..
Prem : Mene Wo Video Dekhi ! Pure Internet Par Wo Clip Viral Ho Rahi Hai ! Master Ke Kapde..
Selva : Haa Us Din Master Ne Meri Lungi Pehni Huyi Thi ! Chale Ab
Prem : Haa !
*Thodi Der Baad*
Prem Aur Selva Dono Ghar Par Aa Jate Hai .
Prem : Selva ! What i Think is Ki Kahi Na Kahi Ye Matter Wo Vetrimaan Se Connect To Nahi Hai ?
Selva : Ho Bhi Sakta Hai Par Usko Huye To 2 Saal Se Bhi Zyada Ka Waqt Ho Gaya Hai ! Aur Wo Matter Mera Tha ! Usme Master To Hamare Saath Bhi Nahi Aaye The !
Prem : Hmmm ! Correct !
Prem aur Selva Dono Andar Aa Jate Hai .
Selva : Me Niche Jaakar Aata Hu !
Prem : Thik Hai !
Selva Waha Se Chala Jata Hai . Prem Andar Chala Jata Hai . Paridhi Bhi Wahi Hoti Hai . Prem Ko Dekhte Hi Woh Prem Ke Pass Aati Hai Aur Uske Gale Lag Jaati Hai .
Prem : Tum Theek To Ho Na !
Paridhi : ( Tears )
Prem : Everything Will Be Fine !
Paridhi Ke Aansu Rukne Ka Name Nahi Le Rahe The . Prem Paridhi Ko Couch Par Bitha Deta Hai .
Prem : Paridhi ! You Have to be Strong ! Agar Tum Hi Kamzor Pad Gayi To Palak Ko Kese Sambhalege !
Paridhi : ( Cry ) Mujhe Nahi Pata Prem ! Mujhe Kuch Bhi Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Mai Kya Karu !
Prem : Paridhi ! Everything Will Be Gonna Okay !
Dheere Dheere Pal Yuhi Beetne Lagta Hai . Paridhi Ke Aansu Bhi Rukne Lagte Hai . Thodi Der Baad Paridhi Apne Aansu Pochne Lagti Hai .
Prem Paridhi Ke Liye Paani Lekar Aata Hai .
Paridhi : Tum Palak Se Mil Lo !
Prem : Haan !
Paridhi : Naa To Woh Kuch Bol Rahi Hai Na Kuch Kar Rahi Hai ! Uski Aankho Se Ek Aansu Nahi Gira Ab Tak ! Wo Sabkuch Apne Andar Hi Samaye Baithi Hai !
Prem : ( Nods ) Hmmm !
Paridhi : Tum Jaldi Aa Gaye ! Mujhe Laga Tha Tum Kal Tak Aaoge !
Prem : Mujhse Raha Nahi Gaya ! Antim Sanskaar Kar Diya ?
Paridhi : Haan ! Arthi Visarjan Karna Hai Ab !
Prem : Hmmm !
Prem Waha Se Khada Ho Jata Hai Aur Upar Chala Jata Hai . Prem Palak Ke Room Ke Baahar Aa Jata Hai .
Gate Khula Hua Hi Tha . Prem Knock Karta Hai But Koyi Response Nahi Aata . Prem Room Ke Andar Chala Jata Hai Jaha Palak Bed Par Baithi Huyi Thi .
Prem Chupchaap Jaakar Uske Pass Baith Jata Hai. Pure Room Me Pin Drop Silence Tha .
Prem : Palak !
Palak : ( No Response)
Prem : Palak ! Me Sirf 18 Saal Ka Tha ! Mere Birthday Ki Raat Thi Jab Mere Aankho Ke Saamne Mere Papa Ki Hatya Hui ! ( Tears ) Mai….Mai Kuch Nahi Kar Saka ! Me Waha Tadapta Raha….Chilata Raha Par Meri Waha Aawaz Kisiko Nahi Sunayi Di ! Chaaro Taraf Humare Dushman Hi Dushman The ! Bich Me Mere Papa Akele ! Mai…..Mai Bas Kuch Na Kar Saka…. Kuch Bhi Nahi ! Me Bas Tadapta Hi Reh Gaya ! Mera Pura Pariwaar Tabaah Ho Gaya Hai !
Palak Prem Ke Taraf Dekhti Hai . Prem Apne Aansu Ko Pochne Lagta Hai .
Palak : Chale Gaye Woh Prem ……. Woh Chale Gaye ! ( Tears ) Me Kuch Nahi Kar Paayi !
Palak : ( Cries ) Abhi To Mujhe Unpar Gussa Hona Tha……Naraaz Hona Tha….. Aakhir Kyu Mujhe Chhod Ke Chale Gaye…….Aakhir Kyu….Kyu Chhod Kar Chale Gaye Woh Mujhe !!!
Palak Fut Fut Kar Rone Lagti Hai . Prem Palak Ka Sar Apne Kandhe Par Rakh Deta Hai .
Kshrujit Hi Paridhi Aur Palak Dono Ke Liye Maa Baap Tha Ya Yu Kahe Ki Dono Se Badh Kar Tha . Kshrujit Ne Dono Ko Har Cheez Sikhayi . Agar Ghar Ka Kaam Sikhaya To Fir Fighter Bhi Banaya . Dono Ko Itna Mazboot Banaya Ki Koyi Unka Baal Bhi Waaka Nahi Kar Paaye .
Palak Ke Aansu Uske Andar Ke Dard Ko Saaf Bayaan Kar Rahe The Jo Ki Rukne Ka Name Nahi Le Rahe The . Prem Bhi Palak Ko Chup Nahi Kar Wata Hai . Wo Chahta Tha Ki Palak Filhaal Apne Andar Ka Sara Dard Apne Aansuo Ke Saath Nikal De .
Kayi Der Tak Aansuo Ki Dharaaye Behti Rehti Hai . Prem Ache Se Samajh Paa Raha Tha Ki Palak Par Kya Beet Rahi Hai .
Karib Aadhe Ghante Tak Prem Palak Ke Sar Par Haath Ferte Hue Use Shaant Karwata Hai . Palak Apne Aap Ko Sambhalti Hai . Uski Aankhe Laal Ho Chuki Thi Aur Aansu Sukh Chuke The .
Palak : Prem !
Prem : Haan ! Kuch Chahiye ?
Palak : ( Gusse Me ) Haan ! Prem ! Me Apne Hatho Se Usko Maarna Chahti Hu……Jisne Ye Sab Kiya !
Prem : Definitely ! I Promise ! Tum Apne Hatho Se Usko Maarogi Jo Iske Piche Hai ! But Usse Pehle Tumhe Apna Bhi Dhyaan Rakhna Hoga ! Mujhe Mere Agent Sunshine Ki Jarurat Hai Iske Liye ! Hmm ! Sabse Pehle Hum Dinner Karege ! Uske Baad Me Plan Kar Kal Tak Humara Agla Kadam Batauga ! Theek Hai ?
Palak : ( Nods In Agreement )
Prem : Palak ! Believe Me ! Jese Pichli Baar Hum Sab Ne Ek Team Ki Tarah Selva Ka Badla Liya Tha , Wese Hi Is Baar Bhi Hum Usko Nahi Chhodege Jisne Ye Kiya ! Believe Me !
Palak : ( Nods in Agreement )
Prem : Wash Your Face And Come With Me !
*Kuch Ghanto Baad *
Time : Around 1 AM
Prem Ek Room Me Soya Hua Tha Wahi Dusre Room Mai Palak aur Paridhi Saath Me Soye Hue The . Selva Niche Basement Me Soya Hua Tha Jaha Kayi Room The .
Prem Nind Se Uthta Hai Aur Washroom Me Jata Hai . 2 Min Baad Prem Washroom Se Baahar Nikalta Hai . Prem Fir Waha Se Apne Room Se Baahar Nikal Jata Hai Aur Terrace Par Thodi Der Hawaa Khaane Chala Jata Hai .
Terrace Par Aate Hi Prem Apni Cigarette Nikalta Hai Aur Jalakar Fukne Lagta Hai .
Prem : ( Mann Me ) Ghar Mai To Sab So Gaye Hoge Abhi !
Prem Mobile Nikalta Hai Aur Ellisa Ko Call Karta Hai
[ English Conversation Translated into Hinglish ]
*On Call*
Prem : Hello ! Elli !
Ellisa : Hi Prem ! Achanak is Time Par Call Kiya ! Abhi To India Me Raat Hogi Na ! Tum Kahi US Waapas To Nahi Aaoge ?
Prem : Nahi ! Nahi ! Wo To Bas Aese Hi !
Ellisa : Batao Na ! Ruko Mai Video Call Par Aati Hu!
Prem : Aree !!
*Video Call Accepts*
Ellisa : Mujhe Tumhara Face Thik Se Dikhayi Nahi De Raha !
Prem : Raat Ka Samay Hai Aur Me Terrace Par Hu ! Kese Dikhayi Dega ! Tum Batao ! Kaha Ho ?
Ellisa : Me Filhaal To Ghar Par Hu ! Abhi Ek Speech Ki Taiyari Kar Rahi Hu ! Baad Me Ek Event Par Jana Hai So…
Prem : Kesa Event !
Ellisa : Meri Company Ka Event Hai ! Naye Chair Person Ko To Speech Deni Hi Padegi Na !
Prem : ChairPerson ? Tumne Tumhari Dad Ki Company Join Karli ? Par Tum To Pehle Dusri Jagah Job Karne Wali Thi Na ? Fir Uske Baad Apni Company Join Karne Wali Thi ! Sidha Hi Chairperson !
Ellisa : Wo Dad Ko Bich Me Heartattack Aaya Tha ! Uske Baad Se Hi Mene Unki Jagah Leli Company Me !
Prem : Kese Hai Ab Woh ?
Ellisa : Ab Thik Hai ! Bed Rest Par Hai !
Prem : Dhyaan Rakhna ! And All The Best For The Speech ! Miss Ellisa Amanda !
Ellisa : ( Smiles ) Thank You MR. PREM MEHRA !
Prem : ( Smiles ) Welcome Gorgeous ! Chalo Bye !
Ellisa : Bye ! Love You So Much !
Prem : ( Smiles ) Love You Too !
*CALL CUTS*
Prem : ( Mann Me ) Elli Se Baat Karne Ke Baad Mood Ek Dum Light Ho Jata Hai !
Prem Ke Chehre Par Smile Thi Aur Wo Terrace Ke Edge Par Khada Tha . Prem Ki Nazar Kisi Cheez Par Padti Hai .
Prem : ( Mann Me ) OHHH FUCKKKKK !!!! CHAL PREM CHAL !!!!
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Aaj Ke Liye Itna Hi Guys . Like Karna Aur Account Me Log in Kar Apna Review Dena Mat Bhulna . Mujhe Pata Hai Update Late aa Rahe Hai Aur Size Bhi Aapko Badi chahiye But Filhaal Me Thoda Fasa Hua Hu Personal Life Me . Sab Kuch Theek Hone Me Bhi Samay lagega . Pata Nahi Kab Tak But Lagega .
Next Update on 5 May , 2024 . Be Happy and Take Care . Cheers
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Btw check out the poll guys !! 
Wese Poll Ka Story Par Kuch Farq Padega Nahi But Mai Sirf Jaanna Chahta Hu Ki Pehle 2 Choice Me Aapko Kya Pasand Hai . Jisko Dono Hi Nahi Pasand Uske Liye 3rd and 4th option bhi Hai !!
Wese Poll Ka Story Par Kuch Farq Padega Nahi But Mai Sirf Jaanna Chahta Hu Ki Pehle 2 Choice Me Aapko Kya Pasand Hai . Jisko Dono Hi Nahi Pasand Uske Liye 3rd and 4th option bhi Hai !!