Fantasy Prince of darkness (Magic, Outer world, action)

[0One above all]

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Update 5 posted in page 7

 

[abhi09]

Update 5

Victor- shut up tumko kya lagta hai ###city ka fight club koi amm fight club hai nahi, uske upper bahut se powerful logo ka haath hai, uss par ese hi hath nahi daal sakate hai, warna hamare tribe ko bhi bahut damage jelna hoga, ye kaam secret tarike se hona chaahiye...


Or sab kuch Sant ho gaya


Wolf tribe rank


Bronze rank

Silver rank

Gold rank ( council members)

Diamond rank or -Lord of tribe


Ab age chalate hai

Isee pahle ki hum story mae aage jaye toda wolf tribe ke bare mae jaan lete hai..

Wolf tribe duniya ki sabse powerful or old tribe mae se ek hai, is tribe ki specialty ye hai ki iske log bahut hi wafadar or powerful hote hai..

Ab baat karate hai ki ye tribe hai kitna purana to ye lagabhag 500 saal purana tribe hai pahle ye ek aaam kabila hua karta tha jab tak ki wo nahi peda hua, jisne wolf tribe ki niv dali or jo pahala ledar bana..
Kaha jata hai ki wo pahle apne kabile ka sardar tha fir ek puri chand (purnimq) ke din sikar karte time usko ek bahut hi purani gufa diki jisme ek rosni si aa rahi thi wo waha gaya or jab wo walis aaya to wo pahle wala insan nahi tha balki badal gaya tha, wo bahut hi jada powerful ho chuka tha, teji dimag, sungne ki sakti or bhi bahut kuch or usne fir wolf tribe ki niv rakh di..

Usne kuch niyam bhi banaya tha jiksa palan har wolf tribe ke logo ko karna tha, jese ki koi bhi ladka ya ladki tribe ke bahar sadi nahi kar sakate hai, or agar kisi ne kiya to uski tribe ki power low kar jati thi..

Council ke jo member the wo directly main tribe ya main family ke log hi ban sakate the jisme pure blood tha..

Ab aate hai rank par

Bronze rank (1-3 )

Specialty- agility and aura suppression stealth

Silver rank (1-2)

Ye do parts mae bata hua hai
1 - jo ki tribe ke Warrior hote hai
Specialty- ,speed, strength

2- jo ki bronze rank ko train karte hai unko kabil banate hai..

Gold rank

Specialty- power, sharp minds , political power, strength..

Ye council ke member hote hai hai jo main family se aate hai


Diamond rank

Lord of wolf tribe

Bloodlines power ( can control any tribe members mind and body) strength, speed, agility, power, mind..

Apko bata du ki tribe ka Lord wahi ban sakta hai jiska blood sabse pure ho or wo main family se aata ho..


Ab aage hai hum story par


Ek alisan ghar jaha ek bathroom mae ek ladka shower le raha hai or wo bahar aata hai, tayar hota hai tabhi uska mobile ring karta hai, screen par naam dekh ladke ke honto mae ek muskan aa jati hai or wo call pick karta hai , samne se ek admi bolta hai, jo ki tha hamara samrat (update 1 )

Samrat- kese ho beta


Ladka - good morning dad, main acha hu , app or maa kese ho sab badiya hai na waha par


Samrat- ha sab badiya hai beta, bas teri hi kami khalti hai.. Tu to janta hi hai teri maa ki jaan tujme basti hai, or ab wo jada din ye duri bardaast nahi kar sakti hai


Ladka - ha papa main janta hu, ab app mujko ye batoo ki kaam kya hai, kyuki main apko ache se janta hu , apne itni subha call kiya hai matlb kuch important baat hi hogi Wright papa..


Samrat- ha beta tumne bilkul sahi socha, baat kuch esi hai ki tumhari maa or main ye chahte hai ki tum apna college yahi complete karo wese bhi tumne whaa abhi admission to liya nahi hai...


Ladka - maa ye chahti hai tik hai papa , main ajj ki flight se India wapis aa raha hu..


Samrat - isne flight kyu beta, apne pass private plan to hai na..


Ladka- nahi papa app to janate hi ho mujko private plan pasand nahi hai..


Samrat- acha tik hai beta, main ek kaam karta hu ajj hi air India flight book kar deta hu..


Ladka - tik hai papa main apni packing suru karta hu jaldi hi milte hai bye..


Samrat- ok bye beta..

Or call cute hua, ladke ne apni packing suru kar di or raat ki flight se nikal gaya india ke liye, apko bata du ki London se new Delhi tak Anne ke liye lagabhag 8-10 ghante ka time lagta hai, ladka apni bussiness class mae batha hua tha kuch der time pass karta raha FIR soo gaya par is duniya kee liye kyuki apne ankhe band karane ke baad wo apni inner world mae ..jaa pahucha or fir usne apne world ke andar,age badha or ek gola kar chij dekhi,joko is tarah ki thi


Or is chij ka naam tha

"Sealed World Bead" (A hidden space inside the body used for energy, treasures, and growing powerful.)

Asal mae ye ek artefact thi jo ki emperor rank ki thi par ab iski rank bahut bad chuki thi, iske andar ek pura Univers hai jisme bahut sare alag alag world hai, jese hamari Galaxy mae sirf hamara earth akela nahi hai wese hi is sealed world bead mae bhi ek se jada planet the, or har kisi ki ek alag environment tha alag level tha par in sabhi ka master wo ladka tha kyuki is duniya ka jo law tha ( dai ya law) wo us ladke ke hisaab se tha Is world bead , FIR wo unme se ek world ke andar gaya jaha bade bade ghar the, pahad ,nadi jungle, or bahut si spices bhi thi(insan nahi thhe wo alag world ke log the) jo bhi ladke ko dekhta wo muskan ke saath uske saamne sir jhuka dete the, ladka agge gaya or ek or ek bahut bada mahal tha jisake samne ek bahut hi bada gardan bhi tha,jisme alag alag tarah ke flowers lage hue the,jisme kuch earth ke the or bahut bahar se the,or unsabhi mae koi pani daal raha tha jo ki ladka gaya or uske samne ek throne tha or uske pass mae ek ladki bathi hui thi jo ki kuch is taraha se dikh rahi thi..

Character Name- Selena
Power's- unknown?
Age - unkown?



Wo ek ladki thi, jiske sir par doo bade horn (sing) the, uske baal hawa main udh rahe the, or saath hi uske do wings bhi thi or uske chahara bahut hi Sant lag raha tha, wo kuch had tak el dragon ki tarah lag rahi thi par wo ek mix dragon thi (age pata chalega story mae) wo age aai uske face mae ek muskan thi or uski ankho mae ladke ke liye bahut hi jada respect dikh rahi thi, usne ek per ka ghutana jamin par tika diya or jhuk gai or apna sir bhi jhuka li or boli..


Ladki - apka sawagt hai master , apki banai is duniya mae.. Aaiye bataiye master apni jagha par

Ladka us throne par jaa kar bath gaya

Ladka - utho Selena mene tumko kitni baar bola hai, mere samane jhuka mat karo..


Selena - aur mene bhi apko kitni baar bola hai master ki mujko acha lagta hai apke samne jhukna..


Ladka - tik hai, jesi tumhari marji Selena baato kya chal raha hai hamari is duniya mae, mene jo bhi bate tumko boli thi pahle tumne sab kuch kiya na..


Selena- master apki kahi har baat mere liye patar ki lakir hai, apne jo bhi bola tha mene wo sab karwa diya hai.
Jesa apne bola mene har sabhi logo ko alag alag sect mae batwa diya or har ek sect ka ek lord bhi bana diya gaya hai, or sabhi sect mae un logo ki spices ke hisab se unko har jaruru chij bhi de di hai..


Ladka - bahut badhiya Selena tumne acha kaam kiya hai, aur ek baat hum ajj India mere ghar wapis jaa rahe ho..


Selena- matlb app apni maa ke pass jaa rahe ho master..


Ladka- ha bilkul Selena wese to is duniya ke hisab se sirf 12 saal hi bite hai par main janta hu ki lagabhag 1k saal bit chuke hai mere liye..


Selena- main janti hu master mae to apke saath tab se hu jab app is duniya mae aaye the..


Ladka- ha janta hu magar tumne mujko abhi tak mere pahle birthday ke din jo khun tumne bahya tha uske bare mae nahi bataya, chala ajj hamare pass bahut time hai batao mujko us din ke bare mae


Selena- Ji jarur master to us din


Next update action and blood

Awesome update

 

[0One above all]

only 3 reviews lol, that means I am wasting my time to this story , so bye friends

 

[0One above all]

Fantasy story is dead lol

 

[Naik]

Update 5

Victor- shut up tumko kya lagta hai ###city ka fight club koi amm fight club hai nahi, uske upper bahut se powerful logo ka haath hai, uss par ese hi hath nahi daal sakate hai, warna hamare tribe ko bhi bahut damage jelna hoga, ye kaam secret tarike se hona chaahiye...


Or sab kuch Sant ho gaya


Wolf tribe rank


Bronze rank

Silver rank

Gold rank ( council members)

Diamond rank or -Lord of tribe


Ab age chalate hai

Isee pahle ki hum story mae aage jaye toda wolf tribe ke bare mae jaan lete hai..

Wolf tribe duniya ki sabse powerful or old tribe mae se ek hai, is tribe ki specialty ye hai ki iske log bahut hi wafadar or powerful hote hai..

Ab baat karate hai ki ye tribe hai kitna purana to ye lagabhag 500 saal purana tribe hai pahle ye ek aaam kabila hua karta tha jab tak ki wo nahi peda hua, jisne wolf tribe ki niv dali or jo pahala ledar bana..
Kaha jata hai ki wo pahle apne kabile ka sardar tha fir ek puri chand (purnimq) ke din sikar karte time usko ek bahut hi purani gufa diki jisme ek rosni si aa rahi thi wo waha gaya or jab wo walis aaya to wo pahle wala insan nahi tha balki badal gaya tha, wo bahut hi jada powerful ho chuka tha, teji dimag, sungne ki sakti or bhi bahut kuch or usne fir wolf tribe ki niv rakh di..

Usne kuch niyam bhi banaya tha jiksa palan har wolf tribe ke logo ko karna tha, jese ki koi bhi ladka ya ladki tribe ke bahar sadi nahi kar sakate hai, or agar kisi ne kiya to uski tribe ki power low kar jati thi..

Council ke jo member the wo directly main tribe ya main family ke log hi ban sakate the jisme pure blood tha..

Ab aate hai rank par

Bronze rank (1-3 )

Specialty- agility and aura suppression stealth

Silver rank (1-2)

Ye do parts mae bata hua hai
1 - jo ki tribe ke Warrior hote hai
Specialty- ,speed, strength

2- jo ki bronze rank ko train karte hai unko kabil banate hai..

Gold rank

Specialty- power, sharp minds , political power, strength..

Ye council ke member hote hai hai jo main family se aate hai


Diamond rank

Lord of wolf tribe

Bloodlines power ( can control any tribe members mind and body) strength, speed, agility, power, mind..

Apko bata du ki tribe ka Lord wahi ban sakta hai jiska blood sabse pure ho or wo main family se aata ho..


Ab aage hai hum story par


Ek alisan ghar jaha ek bathroom mae ek ladka shower le raha hai or wo bahar aata hai, tayar hota hai tabhi uska mobile ring karta hai, screen par naam dekh ladke ke honto mae ek muskan aa jati hai or wo call pick karta hai , samne se ek admi bolta hai, jo ki tha hamara samrat (update 1 )

Samrat- kese ho beta


Ladka - good morning dad, main acha hu , app or maa kese ho sab badiya hai na waha par


Samrat- ha sab badiya hai beta, bas teri hi kami khalti hai.. Tu to janta hi hai teri maa ki jaan tujme basti hai, or ab wo jada din ye duri bardaast nahi kar sakti hai


Ladka - ha papa main janta hu, ab app mujko ye batoo ki kaam kya hai, kyuki main apko ache se janta hu , apne itni subha call kiya hai matlb kuch important baat hi hogi Wright papa..


Samrat- ha beta tumne bilkul sahi socha, baat kuch esi hai ki tumhari maa or main ye chahte hai ki tum apna college yahi complete karo wese bhi tumne whaa abhi admission to liya nahi hai...


Ladka - maa ye chahti hai tik hai papa , main ajj ki flight se India wapis aa raha hu..


Samrat - isne flight kyu beta, apne pass private plan to hai na..


Ladka- nahi papa app to janate hi ho mujko private plan pasand nahi hai..


Samrat- acha tik hai beta, main ek kaam karta hu ajj hi air India flight book kar deta hu..


Ladka - tik hai papa main apni packing suru karta hu jaldi hi milte hai bye..


Samrat- ok bye beta..

Or call cute hua, ladke ne apni packing suru kar di or raat ki flight se nikal gaya india ke liye, apko bata du ki London se new Delhi tak Anne ke liye lagabhag 8-10 ghante ka time lagta hai, ladka apni bussiness class mae batha hua tha kuch der time pass karta raha FIR soo gaya par is duniya kee liye kyuki apne ankhe band karane ke baad wo apni inner world mae ..jaa pahucha or fir usne apne world ke andar,age badha or ek gola kar chij dekhi,joko is tarah ki thi


Or is chij ka naam tha

"Sealed World Bead" (A hidden space inside the body used for energy, treasures, and growing powerful.)

Asal mae ye ek artefact thi jo ki emperor rank ki thi par ab iski rank bahut bad chuki thi, iske andar ek pura Univers hai jisme bahut sare alag alag world hai, jese hamari Galaxy mae sirf hamara earth akela nahi hai wese hi is sealed world bead mae bhi ek se jada planet the, or har kisi ki ek alag environment tha alag level tha par in sabhi ka master wo ladka tha kyuki is duniya ka jo law tha ( dai ya law) wo us ladke ke hisaab se tha Is world bead , FIR wo unme se ek world ke andar gaya jaha bade bade ghar the, pahad ,nadi jungle, or bahut si spices bhi thi(insan nahi thhe wo alag world ke log the) jo bhi ladke ko dekhta wo muskan ke saath uske saamne sir jhuka dete the, ladka agge gaya or ek or ek bahut bada mahal tha jisake samne ek bahut hi bada gardan bhi tha,jisme alag alag tarah ke flowers lage hue the,jisme kuch earth ke the or bahut bahar se the,or unsabhi mae koi pani daal raha tha jo ki ladka gaya or uske samne ek throne tha or uske pass mae ek ladki bathi hui thi jo ki kuch is taraha se dikh rahi thi..

Character Name- Selena
Power's- unknown?
Age - unkown?



Wo ek ladki thi, jiske sir par doo bade horn (sing) the, uske baal hawa main udh rahe the, or saath hi uske do wings bhi thi or uske chahara bahut hi Sant lag raha tha, wo kuch had tak el dragon ki tarah lag rahi thi par wo ek mix dragon thi (age pata chalega story mae) wo age aai uske face mae ek muskan thi or uski ankho mae ladke ke liye bahut hi jada respect dikh rahi thi, usne ek per ka ghutana jamin par tika diya or jhuk gai or apna sir bhi jhuka li or boli..


Ladki - apka sawagt hai master , apki banai is duniya mae.. Aaiye bataiye master apni jagha par

Ladka us throne par jaa kar bath gaya

Ladka - utho Selena mene tumko kitni baar bola hai, mere samane jhuka mat karo..


Selena - aur mene bhi apko kitni baar bola hai master ki mujko acha lagta hai apke samne jhukna..


Ladka - tik hai, jesi tumhari marji Selena baato kya chal raha hai hamari is duniya mae, mene jo bhi bate tumko boli thi pahle tumne sab kuch kiya na..


Selena- master apki kahi har baat mere liye patar ki lakir hai, apne jo bhi bola tha mene wo sab karwa diya hai.
Jesa apne bola mene har sabhi logo ko alag alag sect mae batwa diya or har ek sect ka ek lord bhi bana diya gaya hai, or sabhi sect mae un logo ki spices ke hisab se unko har jaruru chij bhi de di hai..


Ladka - bahut badhiya Selena tumne acha kaam kiya hai, aur ek baat hum ajj India mere ghar wapis jaa rahe ho..


Selena- matlb app apni maa ke pass jaa rahe ho master..


Ladka- ha bilkul Selena wese to is duniya ke hisab se sirf 12 saal hi bite hai par main janta hu ki lagabhag 1k saal bit chuke hai mere liye..


Selena- main janti hu master mae to apke saath tab se hu jab app is duniya mae aaye the..


Ladka- ha janta hu magar tumne mujko abhi tak mere pahle birthday ke din jo khun tumne bahya tha uske bare mae nahi bataya, chala ajj hamare pass bahut time hai batao mujko us din ke bare mae


Selena- Ji jarur master to us din


Next update action and blood

Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Tow Hero india wapas aa raha h
Dekhte h kia batati h Selena

 

[abhi09]

Matlab ye bhi story band ho gayi very

 

[adam12]

Really this story is closed

Fantasy story is dead lol

?

 

[adam12]

If you write only 1 and 2 and want get attention from readers . It's impossible. Firstly you need to have patience and atleast complete one story.

 

[kingkhankar]

If you write only 1 and 2 and want get attention from readers . It's impossible. Firstly you need to have patience and atleast complete one story.

This is what many writers do not understand or realize. Ek update likh do aur likes and comments kilo ke hisab se chahiye inhe.

 

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