Fantasy Prince the devil or hero

[Abbasi]

Waaiting for update ...........

 

[Black water]

Waiting

 

[tpk]

waiting for new update

 

[Akil]

Intazaar

 

[Asif khan]

Kahi ye story close to ni ho gai

 

[Prince aman]

sorry guys exam ka karan busy hoo exam khtam hota hi update donga

 

[Prince aman]

Bhai "PLANET" hota hai Plante nahi.
Tune poori story me galat likha hai.
Bahut spelling mistake hai.
Flow bigad jata hai to maza nahi aata.
Character ke naam ke aage - ye wala symbol laga padhne me maza aayega.
Flow bhi sahi banega.
Post karne se phele khud apne update ko 2 baar padho phir post karo.
Khud ko mistakes bhi pata chal jayegi to sudhar sakte ho in sab ko.
Aur haan gender sahi rakh.
Abhi tak to 1/3 rd hi padha hai lekin ab se likhte time dhyan rakhna.

tys bhai for your suggestion or mistake jo ho gya hai wo aaga hi sudar karna ki koshish jaari hai

 

[Prince aman]

bahi kahni hero ko chudane ki he aur hero ko powers bhi milna he to ofcourse app koi twist na dalo to sowrd ki raj kumari he hero ko chudane jaye gi and apne khaha ki hero kailash jaye ga aur parvati maa se milegaya matlab kya hero ki traning ke liye beja jjaa raha he ya hero ko rankaal namk villan se takat ke liye ye to prince aman koi he pata
and nice update
waiting for next..................................

bhai kalish jayaga lekin kaisa or kyu ya sb exam khtam hona ka baad likionga till wait

 

[Prince aman]

Very nice update ...........
Keep it up bro ............
Aur ye kia har palnet pe kisi 1 ki hi power kam krti hai why .........
Ab fighting ka kia result nikalta hai .........
Waiting for next update ..............

bhai iska raaz bhi jald kholga

 

[Prince aman]

Sorry Sir Ji...
Aaj kal Real life mein Busy hone ke karan Aapki story nahi read kar pa raha...
But Jub bhi free hounga Wapas jarur laut kar aaunga...

Thanks sir ji For beautiful story..!!

bhai exam ka karan main bhi busy hoo