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Fantasy Prince the devil or hero

Should i start this story


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Black water

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Nice
 

Asif khan

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Zabardast awesome interesting update

To ye Raaj tha ,lakin apna hero ko marna ho ga why?
Waiting for next
 
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Akil

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Toh abhay ki maut uski rihaai ki wajah banegi par yeh hoga kaise aur rankaal ko abhay kaise rokega yeh bhi dekhte hain aur i think ki abhay ki maut jis time hogi us time sirf uski maut hi na ho shaayad use saath mein uski yaaddasht bhi mil jaye kuch had tak....
 
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Vickey1211

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Update 41
Bagvaan Vishnu –Rankaal andkaar ka wo roop hai jo kabhi khatam nahi ho sakta jo humsa bhi para hai jaisa sansaar main satya hai vaisa hi astya ka dosra roop hai rankaal

Narad –lekin prabu aap bhi uska ant na kar piya asa kaisa ho sakta hai

Mahadev iska bhi ek karan hai kynuki jis andhkar sa uska janam hua hai us andhkar sa wo mara ja sakta hai

Mata laxmi to uska janam kaisa hua tha

Bagvaan vishnu- iska samband bhi aapsa hai devi

Mata laxmi-mujsa ya kaisa bala or aap kehna kya chata hai

Bagvaan Vishnu aapko yaad hoga ek baar main nidra ki awasta main so raha tha

Tb apna muja jagna ka liya moor pank sa mera kaan main dalkar muja jagna ki koshish ki thi

Mata laxmi- kuch soch kar haa prabu lekin us ghatna sa iska kya samaband

Bagvaan Vishnu –samband hai devi jb apna wo moor pank mera kaan main dalkar bahar nikala tb usmain sa ek kan bahr nikil kar is bharmand ka chakr katna lag or khud ko ek swroop dena laga jo jo lok usna guma un loko main usna apna ansh or kuch shiktya chupa di or wo har lok par apna adipaty sdipat kar apna ansh sa nya duniya ka nirman karna laga jisa tum danav or daity kehta hoo

Mata to phir apna usa mara kyu nahi

Vishnu bagwaan –kyunki hum usa mar nahi sakta tha isliya maina or mahadev na usa as plante main kaid kar liya jaha sa na koi aa sakta hai na koi ja sakta hai lekin iska bhi ek raaz hai

Or wo ya hai jb koi bahut badi shakti khatm hoti hai tabhi usa uski shakti milagi or wo azad ho sakta hai kyunki yahi rasta hai us lok sa azad hona ka liya

Waha sirf wahi sakti aa ja sakti hai jo achi or buri dono hoo swayam mahadev or main bhi wah nahi ja sakta

Devraj –par prabu is lok main as koi shakti to hai nahi jiska ant hona wala hai jiska karan wo azad ho

Mata parvati-hai devraj indra mera putra smraat abhay

Devraj indra na jb ya naam suna to wo dar gya or man main ya kaisa ho sakta hai wo to mar gya tha or darta darta unhona pocha hi liya lekin mata wo to mar chukka hai phir asa kaisa sambab hai

Mata kyunki uska pnarjanam ho chukka hai or ab wo 18 saal ka bhi ho gya hai

Mahadev or jb uski mout hogi tabhi wo Rankaal bhi azaad hoga usna apna naam khud hi rakha tha

Narad prabu iska matlab samraat abhay jld hi kailash main ayanga

Bagvaan shiv-haa narad hoo bhi sakta hai lekin tumhari mata apna putr sa milkar aa bhi gyi hai

Mata parvati na jaisa hi ya suna wo boli haa prabu aapsa koon si baat chupi hai

Ab chalta hai hospital main

Jb ya sb baata khtam hua main utkar hospital ka bahar jana laga maa na muja rokna ki koshish ki par main nahi ruka disha mera picha picha hi aa rahi thi

Main waha sa nikil kar ek park main baith gya jaha is waqt park khali hi tha disha bhi mera pass akar baita gyi

Disha –bhai jo ho gya usa ab badla to nahi ja sakta

Main lekin aj meri hi wajah sa gudiya ki jaan khatra main hai or kal shayd tumhari bhi ho or isliya main chahta hoo ab sa tum mujsa door hi raha karo

Disha asa aap soch bhi kaisa sakta hai bhai main aapko ab kahi bhi nahi jana dongi or na hi aapsa khud ko door hona dongi agr asa hua to aap mera maara hua muh dekhanga

Jaisa hi disha na ya kaha muja gussa aa gya or maina usa thappad mar diya or bolo kya main tujsa payaar nahi karta lekin teri zindgi sa jayaad mera liya kuch bhi important nahi hai or ab to main sb jaan gya hoo or ab tuja khatra main nahi dal sakta

Disha par bhai asa ab nahi ho sakta ab main aapko nahi chodkar jayaongi

Abhi hum baata hi kar raha tha ki park main vikram or pramveer prakat hua wo humri tarfa hi aa raha tha wo bhi bahut kushi main lekin abhi tk unhone muja nahi dehka tha

Jb wo humra pass pounch or jaisa hi unhone muja zinda dehka unki to saansa hi rok gya

Vikarm- mujsa ya kaisa ho sakta hai maina or pram na tumha maar diya tha ya kaisa maya hai

Main –jb maina un dono ko dehka mera gussa achanak bad gya main bolo wo to mera ek manter sat um itna kush ho gya or muja mara samaj yaha mera pass merna chala aya

Pram –maraga ab tu or teri behan bangi humri rakhel

Bs itni hi pram na bolo tha ki mujhe bahut gussa aa raha tha us par.mai vaha se full speed me uske pass Jake uske muh par ek jor ka lath Marta hu

to wo bahut jor se use lagti hai.to wo bahut dur jake gir jata hai
Kuch hi der me wo phir se mere samne ata hai ab wo muj par aag ke gole phenkta hai to mai uska jawab pani ke gole se de raha tha
uska aag ke gole ka mujh par koi asar nahi ho raha tha ye dekh kar wo aag babula ho gaya to usne is baar kuch naya karne ka socha

jbki vikram bhi ya sb dehka gussa main aa gya tha usna picha sa ek talwaar sa muj par hamla karna chaha lekin wo kamyab na ho saka kyunki disha na us apna spell sa kuch der ka liya rok diya or speed sa uska pass akar ek laat uska muh par mari jisa wo sehan na kar piya or dard sa door jakar gira

jbki pram na ab mujh par ek laal ray dalta hai.us laal ray se mujhe bahut pida ho rahi thi par mai use sahan karte huye vahi laal ray uspar hi daal deta hOO
To wo us laal ray ko Sahan nahi kar pata aur vahi niche gir jata hai
ab mai uske pass jakar uske chati pe baith jata hu aur Jor Jor se mukke uske chest par Marne lagta hu jissa wo kafi gyal ho gya tha wo mere waar Sahan nahi kar pa raha tha to agli baar mai uski gardan pakadta hu aur uska gala dabane lagta hu Wo vahi pe chatpatane lagta hai
jbki disha na bhi vikram ki halat khasta kar di thi jiski wajah sa wo kafi gyal ho gya tha jbki disha ko bhi choti moti chota ay thi (aaga kya hoga uska lia padta raha prince the devil or hero )
Nice update bhai
 
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