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Fantasy Priya ki Jawaani

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Resuming my story

Agle din college ke baad Priya aur Payal ghar par baatein kar rahe the

Payal: Priya aaj kya hua

Priya: Batati hu baba…mujhe dekh kar sab mazdoor ruk kar mujhe dekhne lage, meri saanse bahut tezi se chal rahi thi….sab ke sab kale sand jaise dikhte hai…phir aap ke baat yaad ayi, main kamar matkate hue wahan se gazar gayi, to peeche se ek ne seetee mari aur ek ne ganda comment kiya….main wahan se chali gayi…

Payal: wahhhhh priya…kya comment kiya

Priya: Didi bahut gandi comment thi

Payal: Bata na, mujhe se kya Sharma rahi hai

Priya: kissine comment kiya jab me ja rahi thi ke kya mast gaand hai

Payal: Kya galat kaha, tu hai hi itni sundar….aur tujhe kaisa laga sunkar

Priya: Didi pata nahin, gussa bhi aya….aur…

Payal: Aur? Pasand bhi aya? Hai na?

Priya: (sharmate huye) haan didi

Payal: Are is gussa karne wali kya baat hai…kissi bhi ladki ko apni tareef sunna accha hi lagta hai…aur sach batao to teri gaand sach me bahut sexy hai

Priya: didiii aap bhi….

Payal: Kal ek kaam karna, jab wo mazdoor log koi comment pass ki to palat kar unhe smile de dena….unhe accha lagega…

Priya: Kyun didi…

Payal: Wo becharon ka bhi soch, sara din mehnat karte hai do waqt ke roti ke liye. Bechare. Unke biwiyan bhi shayad gaon rehte hai aur mahinon mulakat nahin hote unse. Unke jeevan thodi khushi de dogi to acchi baat hai na….bechare

Priya: (Sharmate hue) koshish karungi…

Payal: Apna sezy gaand thoda aur matkana…un becharon ke liye

Priya: (sharmate huye) cheeee didiiii

Agle din college se lautne ke baad priya aur payal roz ke tarah saath baithe gappe lada rahi thi

Priya: Aaj wo mazdoor mere aane ki intezzr kar rahe the. Sab apne gande daat nikaal kar muskura rahe the jaise main koi filmon ki heroine hu. Mujhe bahut darr lag rahi thi. Jaise main unke paas se guzar rahi thi, ek mazdoor ne phir se comment kiya kya mast gaand hai saali ki….mujhe bahut sharam aa rahi thi aur main wahan se jaldi nikal gayi…

Payal: Hmmmm. Tumhe kaise lag raha tha tab

Priya: Kya matlab, samjhi nahin, didi?

Payal: Jab wo mazdoor tujhe gandi comment diye….

Priya: Didi, bahut dari hui thi… gussa bhi aya par….

Payal: Par….accha bhi laga na….sach bol hain na

Priya: (Sharma gayi)

Payal: Bechare mazdoor, unhe aisi khushi kahan milta hai, bas filmon dekhkar parde par heroine ko dekhkar kaam chala lete hai. Tumhare jaise sexy ladki ke saath flirting ki to unhe thodi khushi milli hogi. Aur shayad bhagwaan tumhe is liye itni khubsurat banaya hai….jisse tum aisi logon ko khushiyaan de sako…

Priya: Haan didi. Wo mazdoor bhale hi badsurat hai aur umar jyaada hai, phir bhi na jaane kyun mere sharir mein ek ajeeb si current hui thi…. aisa kyun didi?

Payal: Bhagwaan ne tumhe is liye itni sundarta di hai, tum in jaise logon ki dukh thodi kam kar soko…samjhi…

Priya: nahin samjhi didi

Payal: Pagli…is ka matlab hai tujhe aise mard zyaada pasand hai. Kya tujhe aisi current tere hum umar ke ladkon se hui thi kabhi?

Priya: Nahin didi

Payal: Kal koi tight kameez pehan lena aur dupatta mat pehenna…who bhi dekhe meri saheli kitni jawaan ho gayi hai….tumhari yeh bade bade chaati dekh kar tere sare mazdoor ashiq saare heroine bhool jayege

Priya: Nahin didi, mujhe sharam ayegi. Bina dupatta ke college nahin ja sakti…

Payal: Are college se nikalte samay utaar dena aur bag mein dal dena dupatta…(haste huye)

Priya: (sharma gayi)

Fir agle din shaam kp Priya aur Payal dono mil kar baatein kar rahe the

Payal: To meri pyari saheli, aaj kaise din guzri….

Priya: Haan aaj bhi who log meri aane ka intezaar kar rahe the. Jab unke nazr meri chaati peg aye sab ka muh khulla ke khulla reh gaya. Mujhe bhi bahut sharam aa rahi thi. Main jaldi chalne ke wajah se meri chaati bhi hil rahe the, aur saare mazdoor log mujhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahe the….jaise ki main koi film ki heroine hu aur red carpet par chal rahi hu. Sab dekh rahe the. Jaise hi unke paas se guzar rahi thi to ek mazdoor ne comment ki is saali ki gaand to main zaroor marunga…doosre ne kaha main to is chamiya ke dono mumme chodunga….main chup chaap wahan se chali gayi…

Payal: oohhhh maine kahan tha na teri jawaani ke jalwe dekhenge to sab heroine bhool jayenge….kitne mazdoor the wahan?

Priya: aaj 3 mazdoor the…

Payal: Hmmm 3-3 saand?

Priya: Haan didi, sab ke sab kale aur gande saand jaise hi hai, ek ke to baal bhi safed hai….lekin ek baat hai?

Payal: Bol na Priya

Priya: itne burey bhi nahin hai wo teeno….(sharmayi)

Payal: Haan Priya samajhti hu, tere college ladke to abhi bacche hai. Tere un mazdoor ashiq hi sacche mard hai. Aur tujhe aise hi mardon se khushi millegi. College ke ladkon ko aur koi ladkiyan mil jayegi lekin in becharon ko teri jaisi sexy ladki kahan millegi.

Priya: Lekin didi kya yeh galat nahin hai? Ek acchi ghar ki jawan ladki aise gande buddhon ko pasand kare?

Payal: Jis se kissi ko Khushi milti hai wo galat kaise ho sakta hai? Tu hi bata wo teenon mazdoor khush the na? Aur tujhe bhi to unke flirting pasand ayi thi na???

Payal: Wo Kallu ko hi dekh lo, hamara complex ki sweeper, bechara wo kitna kaam karta hai din bhar. Koi usse theek se baat bhi nahin karta, bechara hai…

Priya: kaun didi?

Payal: Kallu? Usse tum shayad milli nahin wo aaj hi lauta hai gaon se….chutti par tha

Payal: Kabhi usse milli to smile de dena, bechare ko accha lagega….

Priya: Ji Didi…

Payal: Tujhe bhi accha legega…wo bilkul tere pasand ka hai, kaala ganda aur umar wala….

Priya: kyaa didi, aap bhi…..maine kab aise kahan tha…

Payal: Kyun wo tere 3 mazdoor ashik pasand nahin hai kya…. Kallu bhi waise hi hai…hahahaha

Priya: Didi main ja rahi hu, aap bahut gande hai…(Sharmate hui)

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Raj Yadav

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Resuming my story

Agle din college ke baad Priya aur Payal ghar par baatein kar rahe the

Payal: Priya aaj kya hua

Priya: Batati hu baba…mujhe dekh kar sab mazdoor ruk kar mujhe dekhne lage, meri saanse bahut tezi se chal rahi thi….sab ke sab kale sand jaise dikhte hai…phir aap ke baat yaad ayi, main kamar matkate hue wahan se gazar gayi, to peeche se ek ne seetee mari aur ek ne ganda comment kiya….main wahan se chali gayi…

Payal: wahhhhh priya…kya comment kiya

Priya: Didi bahut gandi comment thi

Payal: Bata na, mujhe se kya Sharma rahi hai

Priya: kissine comment kiya jab me ja rahi thi ke kya mast gaand hai

Payal: Kya galat kaha, tu hai hi itni sundar….aur tujhe kaisa laga sunkar

Priya: Didi pata nahin, gussa bhi aya….aur…

Payal: Aur? Pasand bhi aya? Hai na?

Priya: (sharmate huye) haan didi

Payal: Are is gussa karne wali kya baat hai…kissi bhi ladki ko apni tareef sunna accha hi lagta hai…aur sach batao to teri gaand sach me bahut sexy hai

Priya: didiii aap bhi….

Payal: Kal ek kaam karna, jab wo mazdoor log koi comment pass ki to palat kar unhe smile de dena….unhe accha lagega…

Priya: Kyun didi…

Payal: Wo becharon ka bhi soch, sara din mehnat karte hai do waqt ke roti ke liye. Bechare. Unke biwiyan bhi shayad gaon rehte hai aur mahinon mulakat nahin hote unse. Unke jeevan thodi khushi de dogi to acchi baat hai na….bechare

Priya: (Sharmate hue) koshish karungi…

Payal: Apna sezy gaand thoda aur matkana…un becharon ke liye

Priya: (sharmate huye) cheeee didiiii

Agle din college se lautne ke baad priya aur payal roz ke tarah saath baithe gappe lada rahi thi

Priya: Aaj wo mazdoor mere aane ki intezzr kar rahe the. Sab apne gande daat nikaal kar muskura rahe the jaise main koi filmon ki heroine hu. Mujhe bahut darr lag rahi thi. Jaise main unke paas se guzar rahi thi, ek mazdoor ne phir se comment kiya kya mast gaand hai saali ki….mujhe bahut sharam aa rahi thi aur main wahan se jaldi nikal gayi…

Payal: Hmmmm. Tumhe kaise lag raha tha tab

Priya: Kya matlab, samjhi nahin, didi?

Payal: Jab wo mazdoor tujhe gandi comment diye….

Priya: Didi, bahut dari hui thi… gussa bhi aya par….

Payal: Par….accha bhi laga na….sach bol hain na

Priya: (Sharma gayi)

Payal: Bechare mazdoor, unhe aisi khushi kahan milta hai, bas filmon dekhkar parde par heroine ko dekhkar kaam chala lete hai. Tumhare jaise sexy ladki ke saath flirting ki to unhe thodi khushi milli hogi. Aur shayad bhagwaan tumhe is liye itni khubsurat banaya hai….jisse tum aisi logon ko khushiyaan de sako…

Priya: Haan didi. Wo mazdoor bhale hi badsurat hai aur umar jyaada hai, phir bhi na jaane kyun mere sharir mein ek ajeeb si current hui thi…. aisa kyun didi?

Payal: Bhagwaan ne tumhe is liye itni sundarta di hai, tum in jaise logon ki dukh thodi kam kar soko…samjhi…

Priya: nahin samjhi didi

Payal: Pagli…is ka matlab hai tujhe aise mard zyaada pasand hai. Kya tujhe aisi current tere hum umar ke ladkon se hui thi kabhi?

Priya: Nahin didi

Payal: Kal koi tight kameez pehan lena aur dupatta mat pehenna…who bhi dekhe meri saheli kitni jawaan ho gayi hai….tumhari yeh bade bade chaati dekh kar tere sare mazdoor ashiq saare heroine bhool jayege

Priya: Nahin didi, mujhe sharam ayegi. Bina dupatta ke college nahin ja sakti…

Payal: Are college se nikalte samay utaar dena aur bag mein dal dena dupatta…(haste huye)

Priya: (sharma gayi)

Fir agle din shaam kp Priya aur Payal dono mil kar baatein kar rahe the

Payal: To meri pyari saheli, aaj kaise din guzri….

Priya: Haan aaj bhi who log meri aane ka intezaar kar rahe the. Jab unke nazr meri chaati peg aye sab ka muh khulla ke khulla reh gaya. Mujhe bhi bahut sharam aa rahi thi. Main jaldi chalne ke wajah se meri chaati bhi hil rahe the, aur saare mazdoor log mujhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahe the….jaise ki main koi film ki heroine hu aur red carpet par chal rahi hu. Sab dekh rahe the. Jaise hi unke paas se guzar rahi thi to ek mazdoor ne comment ki is saali ki gaand to main zaroor marunga…doosre ne kaha main to is chamiya ke dono mumme chodunga….main chup chaap wahan se chali gayi…

Payal: oohhhh maine kahan tha na teri jawaani ke jalwe dekhenge to sab heroine bhool jayenge….kitne mazdoor the wahan?

Priya: aaj 3 mazdoor the…

Payal: Hmmm 3-3 saand?

Priya: Haan didi, sab ke sab kale aur gande saand jaise hi hai, ek ke to baal bhi safed hai….lekin ek baat hai?

Payal: Bol na Priya

Priya: itne burey bhi nahin hai wo teeno….(sharmayi)

Payal: Haan Priya samajhti hu, tere college ladke to abhi bacche hai. Tere un mazdoor ashiq hi sacche mard hai. Aur tujhe aise hi mardon se khushi millegi. College ke ladkon ko aur koi ladkiyan mil jayegi lekin in becharon ko teri jaisi sexy ladki kahan millegi.

Priya: Lekin didi kya yeh galat nahin hai? Ek acchi ghar ki jawan ladki aise gande buddhon ko pasand kare?

Payal: Jis se kissi ko Khushi milti hai wo galat kaise ho sakta hai? Tu hi bata wo teenon mazdoor khush the na? Aur tujhe bhi to unke flirting pasand ayi thi na???

Payal: Wo Kallu ko hi dekh lo, hamara complex ki sweeper, bechara wo kitna kaam karta hai din bhar. Koi usse theek se baat bhi nahin karta, bechara hai…

Priya: kaun didi?

Payal: Kallu? Usse tum shayad milli nahin wo aaj hi lauta hai gaon se….chutti par tha

Payal: Kabhi usse milli to smile de dena, bechare ko accha lagega….

Priya: Ji Didi…

Payal: Tujhe bhi accha legega…wo bilkul tere pasand ka hai, kaala ganda aur umar wala….

Priya: kyaa didi, aap bhi…..maine kab aise kahan tha…

Payal: Kyun wo tere 3 mazdoor ashik pasand nahin hai kya…. Kallu bhi waise hi hai…hahahaha

Priya: Didi main ja rahi hu, aap bahut gande hai…(Sharmate hui)

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Hi Friends....
Hope you like this story....

PRIYA KI JAWAANI

Yeh kahaani Priya Yadav ki hai, ek 18 saal ki middle class ladki. Priya ek bahut khubsurat ladki, ekdum gori. Gadrayi shareer thi 36D-30-38. Jab bhi wo college jati thi sab ladkon Priya ki kaatil jawaan badan ko ghurte rehte the. Buddhe login ke muh se bhi laal tapakte the Priya ko dekhkar. Priya is baat se bekhabar thi .

Priya ke family char log hai, pitaji – Deepak Yadav umar 46 ek sarkari office mein clerk hai. Maa – Anjali Yadav umar 41 ek housewife, Chota bhai jo abhi school 6th class me hai. Priya padhai me bahut hoshiyar hai aur hamesha class me awwal number se pass hoti thi. Dono maa pita chahte the ke Priya padh likh kar naam kamaye.

Aaj Priya ke ghar par khushi ka mahol tha kyun ke aaj 12th ke results declare ho gaye the aur Priya bahut acche number se pass ho gayi thi. Sara family restaurant gaye celebrate karne aur sab bahut khush the.

Papa: To ab kya plan hai Priya Beti?

Priya: Papa, Mujhe Doctor banna hai, Medical college me admission try karungi.

Ma: Lekin Medical college me to admission milna bahut mushkil hai na?

Priya: Haan Maa. Phir koshish karungi, kahin na kahin admission zaroor mil jayegi.

Papa: Very good beti. I like your confidence. Kal hi hum jayege college ke admissions ke liye, meri bhi ek officer se pehchaan hai, shayad wo hume madad kar de.

Priya: Haan aap please try kijiye na, shayad pehchaan se meri admission ho jaye.

Papa: Haan beti, Kal sabah phone karta hu.

Ma: Priya beti, bahut mann lagakar padhna. Bhagwaan yehi prathana karti hu ki

Priya: Papa mujhe ice cream chahiye

Chota bhai: Mujhe bhi mujhe bhi!

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Agle din, Deepak Yadav ne unke pehchaan ke office ko phone kiya aur apne beti ki admission ki baat bataya. Us officer ne bataya ki wo admission 100% kara sakta hai lekin wo college thodi dur hai. To Deepak bola ki wo apni family se discuss karke kal dubara phone karenge. Deepak ab soch me pad gaya, ab kya hoga, kyun jis college me admission mil rahi thi wahan roz travel karna possible nahin tha. Aur baaki college me cutoffs bahut high the.

Papa: Ab kya kare?

Ma: Priya beti admissions to mushkil lag raha hai…

Priya bahut dukhi ho jaati hai

Priya: Papa mujhe Bsc nahin karni hai…bachpan se sapna tha ki main ek din doctor bahungi.

Papa: To phir kya kare, jis college me admission pakka hai wo to bahut dur hai hamare ghar se.

Ma: Nahin nahin agar roz 5 ghante safar me nikal jayegi to padhai kab karegi aur beemar bhi pad jayegi. Nahin jane dungi itni dur.

Papa: Lekin koi option bhi to nahin hai

Priya: Please main manage kar lungi. 5 ghante hi to traveling hai roz ki

Ma: Priya beti tu BSc hi kar le

Priya: Nahin maaaaa please

Papa: ek kaam kar sakte hai.

Priya: Kya Papa?

Papa: College ke paas ek ghar kiraye par le sakte hai, wahan akeli reh paoungi?

Priya: Haan papa

Maa: Priya ke papa aapka dimaag to kharab nahin ho gaya, jawaan beti ko akele rehne doge?

Priya: Maaaaa main manage kar lungi….

Papa: Haan yehi theek rahega, Sunday aur chuttiyon me ghar aa jayegi. Aur hum bhi kabhi kabhi wahan jaya karege. Kyun?

Priya: Haan papa you the best!

Priya bahut khush ho gayi kyun ke doctor banne ka khwaab ab poora hote dikh raha tha. Maa bhi maan gayi kuch der baad. Agle din us officer ka recommendation letter lekar hum us medical college gaye aur admission ho gaya. 10 dino me college shuru hone wali thi. Phir ghar dhundne me lag gaye, bahut mushkil se ek chota sa 1BHK mil gaya.

College shuru hone ke 2 din pehle Priya us nayi kiraye ke ghar par shift ho gayi. Ghar ke zaroori cheese kharidne me jut gaye. Building complex 4 building kit hi, har building 4 majlon ki. Priya top floor me rehne ayi thi. Hai floor par do ghar the, ek 1BHK aur doosra 2BHK.

Jab sab ghar taiyari kar rahe the tab doorbell bajti hai

Papa darwaza kholta hai, ek 35 saal ki mahila thi door par.

Papa: Ji?

Mahila: Namaste

Papa: Namaste

Mahila: Aap log aaj shift huye hai?

Papa: Haan. Aap kaun?

Mahila: Main Payal Dubey hu, main aap logon ki padosi hu. Aap logon ke liye chai le ayi hu.

Papa: Thank your Payal ji, please andar aa jayeye

Ghar par ate hi papa sab se introduction kar deta hai

Papa: Yeh meri patni Anjali hai, yeh meri beti Priya hai aur wo mera chota beta hai. Main Deepak Yadav hu. Please baithiye na.

Payal ek 35 saal mahila hai jo apne pati ke saath rehte hai. Unka pati ka naam Dharamvir Dubey hai. Unko koi santaan nahin hai.

Sab baith kar chai pi rahe the.

Payal: Accha hua aap log aa gaye hai, yeh flat kafi dinon se khali pada tha. Ab aap logon ki company bhi mil jayegi.

Anjali: Nahin hum sab shift nahin ho rahe hai, bas Priya yahan akeli rahengi.

Papa: Haan Payal ji, Priya ko yahan Medical college me admission milli hai aur hamara ghar bahut dur hai.

Payal: Oh congratulations Priya

Priya: Thank you didi

Payal: Aap log bilkul chinta mat kijiye, main Priya ki khyal rakhungi. Kissi baat ki kami hone nahin dungi.

Papa: Aap ka bahut meharbaani hogi. Priya beti pehli baar akeli rahegi aur hume bahut chinta ho rahi thi ki kaise akeli rahengi. Ab chinta ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.

Payal: Priya beti kuch bhi zaroorat ho to bata dena aur aaj raat hamare ghar par khana kha lena. Ok?

Priya: Ji didi

Phir apne ghar chali gayi. Aur sab khush ho jaate hai ab chinta kam ho gayi hai. Shaam ko Papa, Maa aur bhai apne ghar laut jaate hai. Priya ghar ki cheeze theek karne me lag gayi. Shaam ko Payal didi ke par unke pati se milli aur teenon saath me khaana khaye. Drawing room me baith kar thodi gappe mar kar, priya apne ghar laut ayi.
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Raj Yadav

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Agle din Payal ke pati office jaane ke baad, priya ki door bell bajayi.


Payal: Good Morning, raat kaise guzri?


Priya: Good Morning. Theek thi. Papa Mummy ko miss kar rahi thi.


Payal: Ghar par aa jao. Chai ready hai


Dono baithkar chai pee rahe the aur yahan wahan ke gappe mar rahe the.


Payal: College kab shuru ho rahi hai?


Priya: Kal se


Payal: Best of luck.


Dono me friendship ho gayi ab, saara din Priya payal ke ghar par hi batayi, saath me khana banaye, TV dekhe, gappe mare….pati aane ke pehle Priya laut ayi apne ghar.


Agle Priya college gayi subah 9.30 se dophar 4 baje tak classes thi. 4.15 Priya Ghar laut gayi. Phir Priya change karke Payal ke ghar par gayi aur phir gupshup karne lage dono. Pati aate hi Priya ghar laut jaati. Yehi silsila roz chalta tha, aur Saturday shaam Priya papa mummy ke ghar chale jaate the aur Sunday Shaam ko laut aati thi. Sab khush the.


Ek din Priya college ja rahi thi, tab Payal se darwaze par mulakat ho gayi


Priya: Good Morning didi


Payal: Good Morning priya, college ja rahi ho?


Priya: Haan didi


Payal: Kya baat aaj koi special day hai kya, aaj bahut sundar lag rahi ho


Priya: (sharmate huye) Nahin didi bas aise hi, thodo samay tha is liye thodi si make up ki hu.


Payal: Bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho aaj


Priya: Thank you (muskurate huye)


Payal: Aaj to college ke ladkon ki koi khair nahin, sab ka hosh ud jayega…


Priya: Sharmati hai


Payal: Haan saath me professoron ki bhi hosh ud jayegi….(haste huye)


Priya: Didi aap bhi na….


Payal: Roz make up kiya karo, bahut aachi dikh rahi ho…sach mein


Priya: Thank you didi, aap ko shaam me milti hu, bye.


College ke baad, Priya ghar pahuch kar change ki aur payal ke ghar gayi.


Dono chai peete hui baate kar rahe hai


Payal: To phir aaj kitne ladkon ko deewana bana diya tumne


Priya: Didi aap bhi na har waqt mazaaq karte rehte hai


Payal: Batana kya hua aaj college me


Priya: Haan sab ladke mujhe hi ghar rahe the, ek do ladke mujhe approach bhi intro dene.


Payal: To tune kya kiya


Priya: Kuch nahin, classroom me bhaag gayi


Payal : Good girl. Tum aaj sach me koi apsara lag rahi thi. Tum roz makeup


Karke hi jaana college…


Priya: Ok didi, koshish karungi


Payal: Aur sunao


Priya: Aaj ek aur baat hui, main aaj college short cut se gayi. Wahan par construction kaam ho raha na, wahan se gayi….


Payal: haan phir kya hua?


Priya: Wahan 4-5 mazdoor kaam kar rahe the, mujhe dekhkar sab apne kaam rok kar mujhe ghur rahe the


Payal: Ab log ghurege hi, itni khubsoorat jo dikh rahi tum aaj


Priya: Didi, kya sach me itni khubsurat hu?


Payal: Haan Priya, Bhagwaan ne itni khubsurat banayi hai tujhe aur tu hai ke hamesha simple bani firti ho….


Priya: Theek hai didi, kal fir se make up karungi


Payal: Very good priya. Aur haan kal phir usi short cut se jaana college


Priya: Kyun didi?


Payal: Kyun tujhe pasand nahin aya jab wo mazdoor log teri khoobsurti ko dekh rahe the?


Priya: haan didi, lekin sab to kale aur gande the aur sab ke umar bhi 45-50 ke aas paas


Payal: To kya hua, hai sab mard hi na. Tu phir wahan jaana kal, tujhe bahut mazaa ayegi….aur haan thodi kamar aur matakake jaane….haste huye….


Priya: didi aap bhi na bahut badmaash hai…haste huye
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.



To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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