Romance Psycho Lovers

[RagVi Singh]

Thnks admin for making this thread sticky for seven days

Next update today night

 

[TheBlackBlood]

EPISODE 9-Inheritance of Silence ​

Ek aur case...
Ek aur murder..
Ek aur victim..
Ek aur investigation

Isi liye to ye arnav end me khud victim ban gayla hai..

Well, is update me ek baat ye clear hui ki koi third person anamika ki story se inspire ho kar ye sab kar raha hai...but pattern/style aisa hai ki apne khilaf koi clue nahi chhod raha..intersting

Narration/dialogue ki zarurat nahi thi kyoki silence ne already...ya ye kahe usse better sab kuch feel karwa diya...what a wonderful creation

Arnav ka ek baar fir se anamika darling se saamna hua but same situation rahi jaisi first mulakaat par thi. Wahi attitude, wahi control, wahi behaviour..jisne ek baar fir se arnav ko thoda vichlit kiya. Dono ke bich ki conversation best thi

Press walo chillate raho laudo...apan ki Anamika darling ko ghanta fark nahi padne wala....

Ab apan ye jaanne ke liye curious hai ki kaun hai wo jhathuha jo apan ki darling ko badnam karne par tula hai

Overall, update was amazing as always. Brilliant writing...keep it up dear

 

[RagVi Singh]

‎Aa usual episode ko padhte waqt mujhe bilkul aisa laga jaise main sirf story nahi padh raha hu balki crime scene ke beech me khada hoon. Starting se hi jo silence ka use hai na—wo bahut heavy padta hai. koi Awaaz nahi, koi fight nahi, chaos nahi… bas ek thandi, calculated shanti. Ye shanti hi is episode ka sabse bada weapon hai.

Tumne jo silence aur order ko notice kiya, wahi is episode ka core tha. Ye update intentionally loud nahi likha mene—kyunki yahan chaos nahi, control ka pressure kaam kar raha hai.

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‎Arnav ka crime scene entry bahut subtly likha hai tumne . Disinfectant ki smell, thandi tiles, narrow staircase—ye sab details dimaag mein ek clear picture bana deti hain. Victim ka posture, shallow but calculated wrist cuts, aur room ka perfectly undisturbed hona… yahin pe ham samajh jaate hai ki ye normal suicide to bilkul nahi hai. Ye order scary hai.
‎Mirror par likhi line —
‎“She didn’t teach me to survive.
‎She taught me to disappear.”
‎ Kyunki yahin se ye episode crime se nikal ke psychology mein ghus jaata hai. Aur jab Arnav realize karta hai ki ye line Anamika ki writing ka hissa nahi hai, tab story ek level upar chali jaati hai. Matlab koi aur hai jo language samajhta hai, par source nahi hai.

‎Voicemail scene episode ka strongest point laga mujhe.
‎“Pain is inherited” — ye line sirf ek clue nahi, ek threat jaisi lagti hai. Ismein ideology hai, manipulation hai, aur emotional control hai. Hame bhi wahi suffocation feel hoti hai jo Arnav ko hoti hai.
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Mirror wali line aur voicemail sirf clues nahi hain, balki ek presence ka signal hain. Naam ya face se pehle, yahan soch ka entry point dikhaya jisse story me suspense ke sath thrill bana rhe

‎Press meet wala portion short hai, par powerful hai. Anamika ka calm, uske sharp replies on point hai. Wo guilty nahi lagti, par completely detached bhi nahi. Bas… controlled.
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Short intentionally rkha becouse otherwise boring ho jata

‎Arnav aur Anamika ka corridor confrontation mujhe kaafi layered laga. Dono ek dusre ko read kar rahe hain, par koi bhi apne cards fully reveal nahi karta.

This gonna more frequent in future

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‎Lab scene mein jab Arnav parallel data open karta hai, tab hame ye clear ho jaata hai ki ye coincidence nahi hai. Ye planned hai. Curated. Aur fir unknown number ka message… honestly, yahin se story pure psychological thriller mode mein chali jaati hai. “I don’t touch people. I place ideas.” — ye line disturbing hai, kyunki ye hamari story ke villain ko invisible bana deti hai.

Jaldi hi Arnav vs villian face off hoga

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‎Ending mein Anamika ka balcony scene quietly haunting hai. Uska dar nahi lagna, balki observed feel karna — that’s such a strong emotional note to end on. Kisi writer ke liye dekha jaana sabse badi vulnerability hoti hai, aur yahan wahi use ki ja rahi hai.
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She is also disturb n her side explore in next episode

‎Update slow hai, par dull bilkul nahi. Is update me hame jawab kam milte hai but sawal bahut hai—aur wahi iski strength hai. Silence, inheritance, ideas aur influence… sab kuch dheere-dheere creep karta hai.
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Yes I know pace slow ho gya hai but yeh episode next step hai story ka n yaha se villian arc start hoga

‎As a reader me genuinely curious ho gaya hoon ke aakhir ye tisra banda kon hai, Ye to out of syllabus aa gaya.....
‎aur kya kahani ab crime se zyada control ke baare mein ho chuki hai?
‎Agla update jaldi post karna...
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Jo “third person” out-of-syllabus lag raha hai, wo accidental nahi hai. Ye kahani ka hissa kam aur direction dene wali force zyada hai.

Thnks a lot for ur valuable support n review
Keep supporting & stay tuned

 

[RagVi Singh]

EPISODE 9-Inheritance of Silence ​

Ek aur case...
Ek aur murder..
Ek aur victim..
Ek aur investigation

Isi liye to ye arnav end me khud victim ban gayla hai..

Kyu bechare Arnav ko victim banane pr tule hi

Well, is update me ek baat ye clear hui ki koi third person anamika ki story se inspire ho kar ye sab kar raha hai...but pattern/style aisa hai ki apne khilaf koi clue nahi chhod raha..intersting

May be or may be not. Yhi toh main point hai kon kisko copy kr rha hai

Narration/dialogue ki zarurat nahi thi kyoki silence ne already...ya ye kahe usse better sab kuch feel karwa diya...what a wonderful creation

Jab silence hi work kr rhi hai toh kyu dialogue bazi Krna btwn story ke according situation ka use kr rhi hu bs

Arnav ka ek baar fir se anamika darling se saamna hua but same situation rahi jaisi first mulakaat par thi. Wahi attitude, wahi control, wahi behaviour..jisne ek baar fir se arnav ko thoda vichlit kiya. Dono ke bich ki conversation best thi

Lgta hai arnav ka zone strong Krna padega warna u need toh usse normal hi le lena hai

Press walo chillate raho laudo...apan ki Anamika darling ko ghanta fark nahi padne wala....

Hehehe isliye hi her episode me press scene sakti hu

Ab apan ye jaanne ke liye curious hai ki kaun hai wo jhathuha jo apan ki darling ko badnam karne par tula hai

Mene simple aapko clue de diya hai guess kro

Overall, update was amazing as always. Brilliant writing...keep it up dear

Thanks a lot
Keep supporting
Next episode soon

 

[vihan27]

Tumne jo silence aur order ko notice kiya, wahi is episode ka core tha. Ye update intentionally loud nahi likha mene—kyunki yahan chaos nahi, control ka pressure kaam kar raha hai.

Mirror wali line aur voicemail sirf clues nahi hain, balki ek presence ka signal hain. Naam ya face se pehle, yahan soch ka entry point dikhaya jisse story me suspense ke sath thrill bana rhe

Short intentionally rkha becouse otherwise boring ho jata

This gonna more frequent in future

Jaldi hi Arnav vs villian face off hoga

She is also disturb n her side explore in next episode

Yes I know pace slow ho gya hai but yeh episode next step hai story ka n yaha se villian arc start hoga

Jo “third person” out-of-syllabus lag raha hai, wo accidental nahi hai. Ye kahani ka hissa kam aur direction dene wali force zyada hai.

Thnks a lot for ur valuable support n review
Keep supporting & stay tuned

Always

 

[Raj_sharma]

Keep supporting
Next episode soon

राघू

 

[RagVi Singh]

राघू

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Update kidhar hai

 

[RagVi Singh]

Update kidhar hai

राघू

On Wednesday as now little busy

 

[Raj_sharma]

On Wednesday as now little busy

Mere sath bhi raha kar kabhi, kaha busy rahti

 

[RagVi Singh]

Mere sath bhi raha kar kabhi, kaha busy rahti

Tumhe ab kaam nhi hai kya